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Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Damn...you evil, evil woman!!  lol



Author's Response:

I have enjoyed every one of your reviews.  And yes I am a very evil woman.  The torture scenes should have proved that.  Two chapters of the next in the series are posted and I will be posting once a week. 

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2016 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

Sean and Elizabeth are now together.  Bella is pregnant.  Roberto is one slippery snake who needs to be captered and dealt with, and Vegas is going to be angsty because something is bound to happen.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 21

Everything is falling into place for Coven, but nothing is always perfect.  I wonder what is going to happen...

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Lisa's funeral was beautifully described, and I loved all of the special touches.  Elizabeth's reading was beautiful, too.

So, Jessica is hiding out in Forks and literally ran into Chief Swan.  Hmmm...

Oh, I forgot to mention earlier that Aro was using the last name Cygnet, meaning Swan. Go figure.  What a douche.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

Whew...Aro's demise was tough to read, but he deserved it with all the horribly cruel and cold things he did to others.  What got to me was the scalping and sulfur poured on his head.  The rest of it didn't bother me as much.  Does that make me a cold person?  Aro was evil defined, and now is dead.  Michael was just a stupid idiot.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

It doesn't matter who gets to Aro first because he is one dead mofo, one way or another.

Sean and Elizabeth...lol  It was bound to happen!  Isn't her father going to be surprised?!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 13

LOL!  As soon as Elizabeth's last name was revealed it all fell into place with me.  The families are going to be so tightly entwined!  And Aro is gonna die very painfully!!  But how sad for the family when they find Lisa's body in the suitcase.  That will be so awful! All of the men are going to fight on who will put the final bullet in Aro's head! Maybe they should all do it together, as one.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 12

With the engagement of Maggie to Alec, the west coast and east coast will be united as well.  This is going to be one helluva strong group, and scary as hell for those who go up against them.

Then we have Elizabeth and Sean...lol

Aro, Aro...you idiot.  He wrongly thought he was slipping in and out, being secretive which made him make mistakes.  I can't wait until he's caught.  But then when the suitcase is found all hell is going to break loose.  This is going to be very hard on Bella and the whole family when Lisa's father is told what happened.  Surely he will want in on the painfest that will befall Aro.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11

Aro is so disgusting and evil!  I can't wait until he is found and dealt with, in any way seen fit.  Nothing will be painful enough for spawn.

I hope Sean isn't going to be too furious about Alec, but we shall see!

I bet Lisa's father is in "pain management" since he is from Chicago...

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow...Jacob was really a nutso mental case!  If he had lived he would have been bad news where Bella was concerned. 

Al and Mags...if they only knew.  lol

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

A lot happened in this chapter! 

Crazy whiny Jacob will be gone none too soon! 

I had to laugh when they were all at dinner and Bella told everyone that Edward was making her use her own credit card instead of getting Carlisle's, and then he gave it to her!  lol

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2016 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

LOL  I have to laugh at Jacob being so cocky and Edward taking him down a few notches. 

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you!    READ YOU SOON a86;

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved it when Bella took Edward's gun and shot it off to get everyones attention at the reception!  LOL  That was priceless.  And then she put Jacob quickly in his place.  The douchebag is going to be swimming with the fishies if he isn't careful.  And Jasper needs to find Aro really fast!  I love Bella's wedding gown and her Donna gown...so gorgeous!  And then sweet Alec.  Bella reached him without even trying.  Hopefully he will not be harmed.

Reviewer: asam75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2016 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

I will never understand the point of security if you refuse to use them.  He shouldn't have had to "get" Seth.  Seth should have been there with his eyles on them.

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 23

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 18

Great chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Elizabeth!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2016 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: S J C Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 23

No......, you've left me hanging!  Please let everyone be safe and for Edward to take revenge once he's better. I need this to have a HEA x

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG please keep them safe!!

Reviewer: kwnblack Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

The story is amazing !!! I cant wait for the sequel ! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 23

Omg you are all soooo evil leaving it there.  Thanks for writing and sharing. Hope part three starts soon.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 22

Hey for Sean and Elisabeth.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2016 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

Tattoos sound cool.glad Sean is doing well too

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it!

Reviewer: andyo123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love your writing! i've read bound to the family (loved it) and I started this story. but I see there's going to be a third in the series (yes i peeked ahead) and I absolutely made myself stop reading Bound and Dangerous. I am addicted to these stories and am an impatient person, so I have to wait until you have the third at least half way done until i

I start again or I'll go crazy waiting to see what happens! 

                                    Andyo

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 5

Awesome!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Bella is amazing!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Amazing chapter!

Reviewer: christinamb78 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 23

Cant wait for the 3rd installment its going to he good

Reviewer: Mrsakey Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 23

No pulse!?!? Gah can't wait!!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope Aro burns in hell reliving his torture for eternity!  That was so awesome!  

Reviewer: jcnf1990 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my god!!! I love this story and I can't believe that happened!! :0

I'm new in this website, I used to follow you on fanfiction. How do I request to follow this story to know when the next installment is updated? 



Author's Response:

There is a box where you can follow the author.  Thanks for the wonderful review.  I will be posting soon the next installment.

 

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh no!! I wasn't exspecting that. Poor Bella will think Edward is dead after she's taken. I imagine Sean and Edward will make this guy suffer. I hope we see the third installment soon.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 23

This story is so well written. The storyline is so interesting that I eagerly await each new chapter. A new chapter is cause for a happy dance.

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

Thank you for an entertaining story.

Reviewer: Melba Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it when is the next one

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow !  Really  good  chapter  and ending !   Didn't  expect that  about  Edward .   Thank God  for  sequels ! 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 23

Aw shit.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad to see some about the girls.

Reviewer: TinksTwiHeart Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG.....I has no words.....anxiously waiting on the new installment

Reviewer: clozano Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 23

i love this story but am worried about not getting updates...i would get an email which each update but for some reason with the last two updates i was not notified...



Author's Response:

TWCS had issues with Hotmail, outlook over the pass few days, but they have since gotten it worked out.  Hopefully from now on you will be getting your updates.  If you are on facebook, I do post the updates in my group and you are welcome to join.  https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/

 

Reviewer: Casey565 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

Was looking forward to this coming to a conclusion. Kind of disappointed to see it end this way. I hope this 'kidnapping" doesn't last long. Long separations kill a story.

Reviewer: sandezzy_ Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Amazing!! can't wait for the third installment!! love ya and keep up the good work

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 23

WHEN ARE YOU UPDATING???  OH MY!! 



Author's Response:

I will start posting soon the next installment.  All questions will be answered and more.  Let's just say it is going to be one hell of a ride.

Reviewer: scgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

ARGHHHH you left it there?  I hope you plan on writing really fast.  I am really hoping you are into HEA's if not, please tell me. I cannot stand stories where one of them dies. I have loved these stories and want to read more but cannot take it when Edward and or Bella dies.  



Author's Response:

I am planning and writing and will be posting as soon as I can.  I am a firm believer in HEA.  The strength of their love will always be the strongest in the world, fighting every thing that tries to stand in its way.

Reviewer: RobLady2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my fucking GAWD! Are you kidding me? Please don't let Edward die! Bella and the baby need him! Who the hell did this, and how did they get by all the security? Was it an inside job? Oh, holy hell!

Author's Response:

I am a firm believer in HEA.  All the questions will be answered and more.

Reviewer: frizzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!!! I think my heart just stopped.



Author's Response:

Oh my.  I am sure the first chapter will jump start it. 

Reviewer: anothertwilighter Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 23

So many bodyguards and securities......that was to easy. Maybe there was a mole? Way to easy....

Reviewer: Mireads Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

All I have to say is damn it.

Reviewer: hey333777 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 23

Omg! I think my heart just stopped!!!!! I CANNOT wait for the next installment.

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!! Please update soon... Canno wait for the new story

Reviewer: bboteler0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 23

I have loved these stories.  I can't wait for the next story.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 23

I like this fiction! But this end is really horrible for the readers. Pity, do not keep waiting us too long.

Thank you, kisses.

Reviewer: Sylvia Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great story and boy you had me terrified that this was the end! I was sweating! Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us in the next installment.

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!  

Reviewer: Vtweetymccn Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

Edward can be saved. I have saved a patient that was shot 15 times in the chest. I can be done. Can't wait for Bound & United.

But with Elizabeth putting the pregnancy test in her bag betcha Sean thinks she is pregnant.

KEEP WRITING!!!🐰🚒🚑

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 23

HOLYSHIT!! NO FRIGGEN WAY!!! OMG! OMG!! I am gonna freak out until the next update! :(

Reviewer: eschoenh Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

Oh my goodness. I'm going to cry. I can't believe you ended it there.

Reviewer: ladytink Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I can't wait to read more! What a cliff hanger.

Reviewer: debjeanwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 23

Please don't let Edward.be dead and let Bella & Elizabeth be OK...... Grest trilogy I love it......

Reviewer: reneesmay Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

i have been reading these storys from the beging and i love them i look forward to every time i get a notafaction that another chapter is ready and i cant wait to see what you do in the next instalment of this story but i will admit that i am upset with the cliff hanger you left us with i just hope that you wont leve us hanging for very long so please post the new story soon :-(

 



Author's Response:

I promise the next installment will be posting soon.

 

Reviewer: Ksamuraix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

Awesome!! Can't wait for the third installment:)

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

In case you didn't know I actually love you and this story

Reviewer: torisurfergirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2016 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

I hate you. Who leaves a story tbc here?! Aghhhh

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

I think I might have a heart attack before you post the next series!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

What a cliff hanger, love it.  Can not wait for the third installment.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 23

Damn you can not leave it there, I need to know what happens next...they probably didn't know which woman to take so they took both...Know bella will be scared for her husband and unborn child that edward doesn't know about

Reviewer: Kat67 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG I LOVED this !!!  PLEASE don't let Edward be dead !!!!  Can't wait for the third installment.  You are a fabulous writer !!!!  Excellent job !!!

Reviewer: shaztastic Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

Omg what an ending look forward to next part of the series I'm loving this so much xx

Reviewer: Skybee90 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

I been reading this story's for while now love them all 

but the ending here my god no 

I hope is not dead 

love your story's can not wish until next one is up 

keep it up 

you are a great writer 

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

Agh! Kill me a mother effer......she better! 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMGosh! ! ! ! ! !  I hope you start the new one soon.  I am speechless. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loving this 

Reviewer: Kreitlow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 23

Can't wait for the next story. I'm so hooked 

Reviewer: PBellamy74 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

OMG!!!! Please update the new story soon! !!!!!!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love it

Reviewer: PoseyRosey Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 23

Wow! Talk about leave us hanging lol. That was excellent, wouldn't like to be the kidnappers when Edward and Sean catch up to them. Can't wait for the new instalment to begin

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 23

Okay, that was just mean!!!!

Reviewer: pink cactus2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness!!!  Excellent writing.  I cannot wait for the third installment!

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 23

I have total faith in you.

Reviewer: bennett Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

Ready for more.  Thanks

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2016 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 23

Umm holy shit need the next

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