Date: 09 Sep 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Phenomenal story!!!
I was expecting some erotic fluff story, but WOW!! I got that plus SO MUCH MORE!!!
It had erotica, fluff, drama, mystery, shock...u name it!!
I hope u write more stories like this!! :)
Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 16
I hope they put Demetri and his crazy cronies away for life so Edward and Bella can be together forever!!! Thanks for your story. It is really awesome!
Date: 17 May 2011 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
thanks for the story... liked it
Date: 17 May 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 25
poor ed.... glad he got clean and then helped bella
Date: 17 May 2011 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 24
good he is guilty i was worried
Date: 17 May 2011 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
again glad to see things looking up
Date: 17 May 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow her recovery is happening fast.
Date: 17 May 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
poor bells i don't feel sorry for rose.. bitch!
Date: 17 May 2011 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
rose you bitch... it is all your fault anyway!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18
happy happy joy joy!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 17
okay they "saved" her and now all the fallout is left.
Date: 17 May 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
yeah they know where she is how are they going to get her back?
Date: 17 May 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
yeah she is a coke head wonderful...
Date: 17 May 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ed is going to go ballastic!!! not good i can't believe she went with him...
Date: 17 May 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
not cool not cool dont hurt bella!!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
not cool not cool at all
Date: 17 May 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
not good not good at all... where is ed?
Date: 17 May 2011 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 10
not good why do i have a feeling that this is going to go down bad and Ed has past history with him....
Date: 17 May 2011 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
this is all going to be sooo f-ed up. i am worried about rose. you know they aren't going to stay F buddies. not in the cards
Date: 17 May 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
ookay... i guess the staying away isn't going to work.... get her off the drugs ed!!
Date: 17 May 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 7
yeah ed call her on it!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
not good if she is doing drugs at school so she can be brave enough to see him... i am worried about her.
Date: 17 May 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
not good and that was fast so much for being a mature "adult" ed and resisting her....
Date: 17 May 2011 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
ohhh ed you are screwed!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
TROUBLE.... this is not good and the girls are coke heads!! joy!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
jailbait jailbait,... you are soooo F-ed Edward!!!!
Date: 17 May 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
oh boy i keep hearing jailbait jailbait!!
Date: 04 Mar 2011 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
great little story, I really enjoyed it
Date: 04 Mar 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 22
"I ridded myself of my jeans..." it is rid no ridded
"her bear and luscious breasts..." her bare and luscious breasts
"Our little seductress remerges... no such word either emerges or re-emerges
I will still give you a 10 for story
Date: 04 Mar 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
see already getting better with lemons
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
no, actually is trying to do the right thing
Date: 04 Mar 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 5
pretty tame lemon, no mention of condom or discussion of the pill...oops
I am sure you will get better afterall it was your cherry
Date: 04 Mar 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
I had a teacher in my senior year that I instantly was in lust with and boy did he turn out to be great in bed!!!
Date: 16 Jan 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! I love the attitudes of each character and your descriptions of everyone. There are a few grammatical errors per chapter, so I'd suggest editing a bit?
Date: 24 Dec 2010 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW. I think that was so hot.. I do think Edward gave in to soon, but so what it was Amazing.
E/k
Date: 24 Dec 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is great... I'm still smiling.
E/k
Date: 07 Nov 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
hurray to happily ever afters!
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
Amaziiiinggg. I love this edward
Date: 30 Sep 2010 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was AMAZING, I lovee this story!!
Date: 31 Aug 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter, loved how everything is moving along, and how everything seems to be coming together. I can't wait to see what happens with the trial.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
loving how the realtionships are slowly healing, not to mention Bella herself. But I still can't help but wonder what Edward 's secret is, especially since he knew about the rehab facility.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad Bella has got most of it out in the open, and what isn't soon will be. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looks like Bella might pull through after all. But I can't wait to find out what happens with Emmett and Charlies reactions to her and Edward's relationship once the dust has settled. And I can't wait to find out what has Roses nose so far out of joint.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
glad that everything is out in the open now, and that Edward is there to help Bella, but I wonder what secret he is still hiding from her, about his past with drugs.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
Awesome lovers reunion, but I get the feeling this particualr family reunion isn't going to go as well. I can't wait to see what happens when the truth or the shit hits the fan
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok Bella is safe, and Charlie and Edward have a sort of understnding going on. Although I can't see Edward staying away from her long term. I also hope the cocaine won't come between them
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward must have real big ones to go to charlie like that. Excellent, glad they have found Bella, I just hope they are able to heklp her in time.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
oh boy, glad Edward is more or less OK, But I am not sure how Bella is going to make it through this one, especially since she is using again.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 14
I loved Emmett and Jaspers reactions to Bella and Edwards relationship, and I can't wait to see how they react to Bella's unwanted current relationship. Or when they finally get a hold of Edward.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
talk about intense, nearly slipping with Carlisle and now Emmie bear is on the way into the mess. I can't wait to see what happens next, and I am really glad that Edward is alive, even if he is in ICU. But, I have to wonder if Carlisle and Emmmett will figure out the extent of Edward and Bella's relationship.
Date: 30 Aug 2010 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Liked the twist of Ben only being the middle man, and the guy in charge using Rosalie to get to Bella. I can't wait to see what happens with an over protective Edward and Emmett around. I also can't wait to see how everyone reacts to Edward's beating and the news he brings about Bella's safety.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh boy, i think it's about to hit the fan, can't wait
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
Osrry for Rose and Emmett, but I am glad that Bella nad Edward got their feeling for each other into the open (more or less). And I can't wait to find out more about the Ben twist.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
A lot of thinking to do but at least she is considering it. And has Rosalie on board as well, I really hope things work out for them all, But I get the feeling it could be a long and hard road.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
loved the confrontation and the lemons, a very well written and entertaining story. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
glad that Bella and Edward have started to sort a few things out, and that Edward has cottoned onto Bella's habit. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
still loving Edwards inner voice, But I really hope that Alice, Jasper and Edward are able to sort things out with Bella, before she starts walking down Rosalies path.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Glad we got the Edward and Bella lemon, but I wonder how they will handle the attraction between them long term. I also can't wait to see what happens with Roaselie's new school habbit, and I really hope she doesn't pull Bella and Alice in with her.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loving the internal dialogue, JD has nothing on your Edward, and I can't wait to see what happens when Bella really gears up her seduction plans. I am really enjoying this entertaining story, but I can sense some drama on the way.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
I am going to love the over protective Emmett, not to mention Rosalie and Alice's advice, But I can't wait to see Edward's reaction to Bella's display. I hope Bella manages to keep an eye on Rosalie, and I really really hope that she doesn't get caught up in the week day addiction.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
love the "you teacher. She student" very entertaining. I can't wait to see how this story and relationshipunravel.
Date: 29 Aug 2010 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story so far. I love stories where Bella and the gang are just a little bit naughty, no to mention how original it is to have Edward as the older one, and everyone else younger than him. I can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 04 Jul 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
My heart is breaking for Bella! But more so for Edward and Charlie. For them to see her this broken is heartwrenching
Date: 04 Jul 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loving this story!! Nothing can ever seem to be easy for these two. I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 19 May 2010 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 25
I really enjoyed the story, thanks for wrapping it up. I hate when people leave stories midway, thanks for the closure & for writing;~))
<3 <3 <3
Date: 19 May 2010 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yes, I liked it. I like the pace you set to this story. It moves along, a lot happens.
So, I'm wondering is Bella back at school, as you mention Garrett still being her teacher. And how is she finishing school, is she just going to test out?
Thanks for writing;~)
Date: 18 May 2010 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh, it was bad, in the best sense of the word;))
Date: 08 May 2010 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Who needs lemons right now, you've put so much jizz into the first two chaps to make anyone anticipate. I love the snarky attitude of the "breakfast club" can't wait for more!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I do like it when stories end with a happy ending. I've just spent all day reading this and thoroughly enjoyed it. Some parts of it almost had me crying, but then there were a lot of really funny moments in there as well. Brilliant story!
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 14
I love the conversation when Emmett finds out about Edward and Bella. I was laughing so hard, it was great! And the last line is fantastic as well. Now I've gotta keep reading to see what happens!
Date: 10 Apr 2010 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I'm so in love with this story I may just read it again! Why not? I can always re-sit my Uni exams, right? Good job! Can't wait to read your other stories!
Date: 09 Apr 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Sweet story, thank you
Date: 08 Apr 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
I totally ignored my family today so that I could read this whole story from beginning to finish..they're mad, but I'll make it up to them later. Great story, I just couldn't stop until I read every chapter!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 26-Epilogue
that was awesome
Date: 30 Mar 2010 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
push push lol great chapter ;)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
uh oh he is going to be in deep crap