Date: 16 Jul 2015 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
Please the 18th! Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's updated!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
I know I've read this on ff.net, but I really love the pics you added in. Looking forward to more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you SO much!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2015 5:36 PM Title: Prologue
I almost couldn't remember my password lol Haven't been here in ages. Anyways, great start :)
Author's Response:
Hahahaha! Thanks!
Date: 16 Jul 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
Sooner is better.
Tgis is off to a great start.
Author's Response:
Thank you! It's updated!
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
I understand that this is a work of fiction but homosexuality is addressed in the Bible. You did say you were trying to be realistic. (which is my reason for posting)
Genesis 19:1-13; Leviticus 18:22; 20:13; Romans 1:26-27; 1 Corinthians 6:9
Sin is sin and we all do it but please know God is not pleased with any of it and will judge sin the same.
1 Corinthians 6:11; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Philippians 4:13
Im not trying to force you to believe in anything you don't want to and I won't be offended if you choose not to change" the Bible NEVER said anything about gays". I just wanted you to know that Gods Word does touch on homosexuality but does not make it a higher or lower offense of sin.
I like your story and can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review. I guess I should change it slightly.
Date: 15 Jul 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
please post july 18th please :D
Author's Response:
:) Hope you liked the chapter (and the pictures, too)!
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
Saturday please!!!
Author's Response:
Hope you liked the chapter and pictures :)
Date: 15 Jul 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
Post soon
Author's Response:
Saturday will be here before you know it! Hope you liked the pictures and chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2015 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
July 18 please. I'm really enjoying this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you liked the pictures in this chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 15 Jul 2015 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
Love it so far and can't wait for more!!! Hope you can update again soon. Thank you for sharing this.
Author's Response:
You're welcome! Thank YOU for reviewing! Hope you liked the chapter and pictures :)
Date: 15 Jul 2015 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
please please july 18 great story can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you liked the chapter and pictures :)
Date: 10 Jul 2015 6:32 PM Title: Prologue
liking it so far, can't wait for more!!!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hope you'll like Chapter 1 when it posts.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2015 5:53 AM Title: Prologue
OK my friend... you got my attention. Can't wait to read more!
Xoxo
Krazi
Author's Response:
Thanks! Chapter 1 will have us going back in time to meet Bella :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:08 AM Title: Prologue
Great start, I'm interested.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 3:13 PM Title: Prologue
I am intriqued...
I tell the lady in the waiting room that I was 13 and it was my father/uncle/grandpa's kid!! Freak her the f-out!!
LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, I am sure that would have freaked her out. When I was 22, and had just graduated from college, a woman overheard a conversation I was having with a friend about not being able to find a job yet, and she interrupted, and said, "Oh, are you 15?" I said, "No, ma'am, I'm 22, and just graduated from college with a degree in Education." She quickly walked away after that. Funny, but embarassing at the same time.
Date: 08 Jul 2015 1:35 PM Title: Prologue
Loved it. I can't wait to read more. I am so excited for the story and the pictures that you have for it. Keep up the hard work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It really means a lot! I hope you'll continue to like it :)
Date: 08 Jul 2015 12:15 PM Title: Prologue
Can't wait
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Hope you'll continue to like it :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 8:57 AM Title: Prologue
Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Chapter 1 will be up soon :)
Date: 08 Jul 2015 5:31 AM Title: Prologue
This sounds good.Real good.I can't wait for more!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Positive reviews like this are making today (my birthday) a wonderful day!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2015 4:06 AM Title: Prologue
Love the beginning!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you'll like the rest of the story, too :)