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Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

This is fantastic! Brutally honest Bella is quite hilarious! lol

Author's Response:

I love this Bella :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Absolutely love this! ;)

Author's Response:

*Blushes* thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

I hope Bella starts to stick up for herself, Edward, and their relationship soon. That was the perfect time for her to talk to her parents.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

Wasnt it her second date??  She did go on a crappy date with Ben to prom..



Author's Response:

I wouldn't count that as a "date".  I mean, I had to practically ask myself to prom both times (I had one guy who asked me over Facebook after I asked how decorating was going, and the other, I just asked what he was doing for prom...but we had known each other since 1st grade, a little awkward), but I don't consider those dates.  Does that make sense?

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

They where having so much fun and then



Author's Response:

;)  Yep!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Perfect!!:)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  :D

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

So great to see you back have a great Christmas can't wait to read more



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope to have an update while I am off for Christmas!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

This is so great! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks! :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Awesome! :)

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

Time for a tat! ;)

Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

This is fantastic! :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 2:07 AM Title: Prologue

This is gonna be great!!! My first thought to the rude insensitive woman..."not that it is any of your business, but I am twenty three and a college graduate and my husband and I are happily married! Now, why don't you fuck off!" lol Yes, that is what I would have said! ;) I can't wait to read more!! :D

Author's Response:

Oh yeah, she was defintely rude.  Bella tries to keep her potty mouth for Edward...in their bedroom (after they were married) ;)

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

I love your story and I look forward to it every update . 



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  You don't know what it means to "hear" you say that :)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

After Charlie told this little tale from her birth, I have a feeling Bella might change some of her thoughts. Because it seems impossible not to be affected by it....

The breakfast date was very cute.

Have a good holiday time;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I agree, but will Bella?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2015 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!

:)



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

Congrats on the job & it is no joke teaching is exhausting!  I am looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Hope you enjoyed the chapter!  

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

Putt putt is a great date especially since she had never done it!  He could snuggle up behind her when she needed help. ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Yes, I had the same thought ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

I just laughed so hard over chuckee cheese! 



Author's Response:

I saw that somewhere for "Worst First Date Stories", and thought it was PERFECT for Riley!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Laurent & Tanya are so much better than the originals! No wonder the kids are such cuties!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks!  I thought that by having Tanya married (and having children with) Laurent would help Bella's mom start to see that judging has no place in life.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

So many great things in this chapter! Edward can't read minds.  Such a cute comment!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Nothing like an older rougher Edward to add a splash of heat to Bella's innocent side!  Love this story already!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I love an Older Edward :D

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

:-)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

So glad to see your post I have a cousin that is a high school sience teacher she never stops working shaping young minds is hard work.  will be waiting for more thanks so much



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I appreciate the kind words.  It helps when the kids give me a hard time :)

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

Can't wait for the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I am not sure when that will be, but I hope you'll stick around.  Edward will be making an appearance :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2015 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?

Hey,

I just started your story recently and really enjoyed every word of it that much that I wanted to see whats next more than taking the time to review before. From your summary I didnt expect to find an Isabella that had taken an oath to stay "pure" until her wedding night. I'm sure that would be a reason to run for a few readers, because we love our lemony goodness; )

I think a good story doesnt need to have those at each chapter though, because a true plot is much more satisfying when its highlighted due to some smut and not dominated by it! And a lmon can be much more than just intercourse; )

Your characters are so cute, I'm not sure which I like the best. 

Thank you for taking away from your free time to write this story for me and everyone else here

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for all of your kind words!  I really felt like we needed to built their relationship before diving into the lemons.  Besides, when the lemons do finally happen (and they will...eventually), you'll appreciate them more.  I know how you feel about not being able to choose which character is the best, because I feel the same way.  But, if I had to choose, I really like this Edward (hehe).  Hope you'll continue to like what I write (when I can, that is).  :)

Reviewer: Plainjane25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

a walk to remember



Author's Response:

:D  Congratulations! That's one of my favorite movies :D

Reviewer: Mary Alice Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

This story is so sweet! I surely do hope that she holds to her beliefs. Looking forward to the next one. :)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  You'll see!

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

i love all of the characters you have chosen so far. pierced and tatted edward is always so sexy. fanfiction would be soooo boring and limited if the characters remain the same as the originals...that is the whole point of fanfiction is to allow the fans to broaden the spectrum to use these characters as they see fit with the fics... so whoever said that has no clue what they are talking about.

this isnt the first time i have seen rossum used to portray bella. took me some time to "see" her as bella since there are different pictures/looks of stewart used in these fics, but did think that she (stewart) lacked the "big brown doe-eyes" used to describe bella, which rossum has.

i love everything you have done with the characters so far. i always hated the depressed, quiet, poor, "plain" bella with self esteem issues who always allowed others to walk all over her. i love how carefree, outgoing and somewhat confident this bella is without being too aggressive.

keep up the good work!

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love Emmy as Bella (well, since I look a little like canon Bella in the novels, I see myself as Bella, but I don't think I'm as pretty/hot as Emmy).  Thank you so much for your kind words!  I hope you will continue to love it as I write more!

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

I gave the recipe to my daughter. She said it looks like a lot of work. Is it? When I finally get her to make them I'll let you know how they came out.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  It's really not a lot of work (well, unwrapping those caramels takes a while, but other than that, it doesn't take long at all!).  I cannot wait to hear how you like them!

Reviewer: Jenablur Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2015 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

I really can't wait to read more of this!  I love anything tattward!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Me, too!  That's why I wanted to write one!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

Love it



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

Wow! Loved their first date =) Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Hope it wasn't too cheesy.

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Sorry for being late. My life is a mess atm. Anyways, loved the chapter =) And thank you for the yummy bar reciepe. =)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am sorry, but I hope it's getting better (take it day by day, just like I am).  You're welcome!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

That was a fun first date cant wait for the next one



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

It was a great date...waiting for more!

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'll try as soon as I can :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Aww... E&B sharing yummy bars. Too cute! I can'twait to see where they go on their first date. Riley is a hoot. Haha... Chuck E Cheese... that was priceless! I was cracking up!!!

Krazi

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Riley cracks me up, too!  I wish I had a gay best friend like him ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

OMG... I loved it! And yes, I most definitely want the recipe for Yummy Bars. I think B is gonna love spoiling E with her sweet treats and her home cooking. Loved your choice for Tanya, Laurent, and the kids. Hmm.. can't wait to see what these two get into next. And congrats again on your new job!!!

 

Krazi

Xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  I will email you the recipe, just in case you didn't already see it in the next chapter ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

Yay... Bella's getting a tattoo, and it sounds super cute. Those bars sound yummy and just thinking about them is making me hungry.  Hahaha... off to read more!

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

OMG... lol.. I just loved meeting the sexy Edward Cullen. Can't wait to see what tat Bella gets. Now for the dirty part. I'd like to address the stupid, idiotic, COWARD who posted this garbage. ("Or maybe they didn't like you f***ing changing characters from the original ones in the story instead of being a f***ing homophobe you assuming psychotic bigot. Way to throw labels around you f***ing a**hole. I didn't even make that comment and I no longer will EVER read your stories. You should be f***ing ashamed of yourself for assuming the worst of someone. Most people who are involved in fanfiction are heavily attached to the characters staying original. Congratulations on being a complete assuming asshole.) First of all, if people wanted the characters to stay original, they wouldn't be reading fanfiction, Secondly, as writers, WE CAN NOT WRITE WHAT'S IN OTHER PEOPLE'S HEADS! I would love to see your extremely rude and judgemental self write something. Wonder who would read your stuff. Constructive criticism is one thing, but being spiteful, rude and down right mean is a horse of an entirely different color. Let's try to be mindful and RESPECTFUL of the authors that have the guts to put themselves out there. Rant over!!! ;-) Now I'm off to read more of this awesome story!

 

Krazi

Xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much Krazi!  It makes me feel so much better knowing that others have my back :)  I am glad you liked sexy Edward ;)

Reviewer: ELMOZ WIFE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 1:03 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Really good story line



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

This was a great chapter looking forward to your next post. And good luck with school starting



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Great chapter and thank you for the recipe!



Author's Response:

You are quite welcome :)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

:-)

Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: Sunnishine Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

From a teacher with 20 years experience.....for now just concentrate on the have to....the stuff that must get done. Make a list of what needs to be done for 2 or 3 days then prioritize it....number from 1 to whatever. Then tackle the list for today. Next day you readjust the list based on the previous day because changes will happen, don't let that stress you. Also don't tackle mare than you can handle, start slow and work up to the fancy ideas or plans. Stick to easy to do stuff and once you are comfortable then add new stuff.

In addition, don't be afraid to use others ideas or plans. There is tons of stuff online. Just make it your own. Work smarter not harder.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  My principal and master teacher told me to take it one day at a time.  Just get done what NEEDS to get done today, and then repeat.  I also have a friend (also a teacher at the school I teach at) that said "leave school at school", don't take home what can be done at school, and try to leave (for your sanity) by a certain time every day (for her, that is 4:30).  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

:)



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

I think he likes her goodies lol



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Oh shit please don't abandon this...it's so good!

Author's Response:

I won't abandon this!  I've already outlined the next 24 chapters...just have to find time to write them, that's all :)

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!

Hang in there & good luck with school. Looking forward to updates when you can.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Ignore the trolls. Not a one of them has the talent or the cojones to write a story. They do it on purpose to get a rise out of authors who do. Kudos for having the balls to continue. I, for one am enjoying your story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Great chapter! Your yummy bars would be a hit with my boys, please post the recipe.



Author's Response:

The recipe is in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Wow! I guess he really doesn't have to work



Author's Response:

NO!  But, I am so glad he wants to, and not be the stereotypical "trust fund baby".

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

Love this! 

Reviewer: vggnns Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Love the story. This seems like a very playful Edward and Bella. And of course I would love the recipe for the yummy bars!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The recipe is in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Yummy bars around good. Love the tattoo



Author's Response:

THank you so much!  The recipe is in the AN for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

She can't contain herself lol

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

He has been bit by the love bug lol. I don't like haters if they don't like it easy don't read please don't let assholes upset you



Author's Response:

;)  Thank you!



Author's Response:

;)  Thank you!



Author's Response:

;)  Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

She has good friend s

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Loved this chapter!! And I love the pics you included :) The tatt is awesome! And those yummy bars! Oh M Gee! Lol. I need !! Congrats in your new teaching job!! Ok, now get to writing, I need more lol 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I am so excited!  The recipe is in the AN for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

He made a great first impression



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I thought so, too!

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 9:19 PM Title: Prologue

I love the story so far and cant wait to read more, I love an edward Bella story where he is tattooed and pierced, and for any of those people that have a go at you for changing the characters from their original character, they obviously have not read many Bella and Edward Stories, I have read alot and they are always different in every story, so keep writing the way you are as it is an awesome story already.  Plus I love the pics you put in especially of Edward



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  Makes me feel a lot better after a somewhat bad day of teaching!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 7:53 PM Title: Prologue

Sounds great



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

I Love your story can 't wait for more to read. Love to have the recipe for your Yummy Bars . 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  The recipe is in the AN for the next chapter :)

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Nice story. Very interested I  the yummy bar recipe



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The recipe is in the AN for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Lady Luciole Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Congratulations for your full-time teaching job... and this excellent chapter. I love the tattoo. Thanks for the pictures : it really helps to better understand everything!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I love the pictures, too!  They really do help you see what's in my head ;)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Yes, please! Can I have the recipe?

Author's Response:

I'll be sure to post it at the beginning of the next chapter, okay?  Thanks for the review :)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

:-)

Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

:-)

Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

She has to get it somewhere her clothes will hide it most of the time.

Author's Response:

Yes.  She will :)

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

Edward has got to be the tattoo artist she ends up going to, right? I'm right, huh? 😆

Author's Response:

;)  Hehe.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:34 PM Title: Prologue

:-)

Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

:)



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!

The tattoo is beautiful I love it! More plz!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  More soon, I promise :)

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2015 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

:) :) :) :) :) :)



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

Glad we get to see the tattoo.....and can't wait to read how Edward does while seeing part of her body and trying to focus on working.....lol



Author's Response:

;) :D  Thank you!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

:)



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

:D  Thank you!

Reviewer: bgkeel22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

I love this story. And my personal opinion is that it's fanfiction and you can use the names and relationships anyway you like. You can't please everyone and you aren't making childish people read. Can't wait for the next chapter!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I agree.  It's called fan FICTION, meaning that it's not going to be like it was in the original story.  Anyway, new chapter tomorrow :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  New chapter tomorrow :)

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Really loved reading Edward's POV. And omg! Jasper is hot! Lol Can't say this enough but I love the pics. Can't wait for more ! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Yes, this Jasper is hot ;)  

Reviewer: IBelongToAVampire Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

Awesome chapter! I love how you include the pictures. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I feel as though the pictures help the reader see the story through my eyes (well, it actually plays out like a movie in my head, but you know what I mean).

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Thanks for this one time EPOV because it helped to get a feel for him and learn his story.....the pictures of the guys are HOT!!!!

now I'm wondering what Bella has picked to get tattooed and where.......I hope it's somewhere that drives Edward even more crazy .....lol



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I loved the pictures, too!  When Bella does get the tattoo, I have a picture of where it is, and what it is ;)

Reviewer: Natsar Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

Don't let the hater get you down. I love this story and can't wait for an update! I really liked seeing Edward's point of view. Hope the next update will be longer... hint, hint. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

:)



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:D

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head

:) :)



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:D

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

Boo... how can u just leave me hanging!! 😡 Guess i'll go work on MG own story while I wait. LOL... Enjoy your trip!

 

Krazi

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Hahahaha!!  Glad you like it!  I cannot wait to read your stories ;)

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

Aww... Emmett died... how sad, but I'm loving Alistair and Riley already. Can't wait foe some interaction with Masen! That manip is HOT!! Loved it!

 

Krazi

xoxo 



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  We will officially meet Edward SOON!  I promise!

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

Have a great trip... Looking forward to their meeting



Author's Response:

It'll be SOON!  I promise!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?

:) 



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Thank you :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

:) 



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:D

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Date: 18 Jul 2015 12:11 PM Title: Prologue

:) 



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:D

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

The sooner the better so I vote Sat. :)

i love it so far and I love all the pictures you post with the story.....looking forward to more....



Author's Response:

Thank you SO much!  The pictures help me, too!  When I write/read, it plays like a movie in my head.  So, any visual to help the readers "see" that "movie" is great!

Reviewer: Robda Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background

July 18 is better, story sounds good and I like the pics for visual effect when reading but I can't picture Rossum as Bella so I will stick to the original one in my head.



Author's Response:

I am so happy you liked it!  That's okay!  I love visual effects, too!  

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