[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love this story .
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:) Thank you so much!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so sorry to hear about your father... Thoughts and prayers to you and your family. I was excited to see an update but not at the cost of someone's health. Spend time with him and make even more lasting memories...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Updated.
Date: 26 Nov 2016 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great story :D
Loved this chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 26 Nov 2016 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
:) :) :)
Date: 07 Nov 2016 3:00 AM Title: Prologue
U did great!! And should write more ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! Just updated :)
Date: 03 Nov 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
So in love WOW
Author's Response:
Thanks :)
Date: 01 Nov 2016 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
really great........post more chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am trying! So busy, but I am writing when I can.
Date: 28 Oct 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Hot and bothered. Great lemons.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was nervous to post them, as they were my first.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2016 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Great story
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2016 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
awww good job
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you'll continue reading!
Date: 24 Oct 2016 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Perfect! I love the married couple and they're sexy times :)
thank u
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I was nervous/scared to post since they were my first.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Love it! Great job.
Date: 24 Oct 2016 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
First lemons or not, that was hot stuff! Their married life is just as romantic as I thought it would be. That newlywed stage is so much fun!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I was so scared, since it was my first time writing them!
Date: 23 Oct 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Love it
Date: 23 Oct 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
It was a great chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head
I apologize for all of the ignorant azzholes that authors encounter.
That being said, doesn't anyone understand constructive criticism? OR just don't read something they don't like!!!!!
I hope this doesn't deter you.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your words! It won't deter me; I have strong writer friends who have kept encouraging me (aka the writers I beta for), like I did to them when they had hater reviews.
Date: 23 Oct 2016 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D
Date: 23 Oct 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Love this story. It is so sweet. I like Bella's innocence and how you portray her character.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you continue reading!
Date: 23 Oct 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Wonderful chapter and great lemons.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Date: 23 Oct 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
Fantastic!!
Date: 23 Oct 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
thanks so much for coming back and posting this amazing chapter and great pictures ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you! I was busy, but I am back now!
Date: 23 Oct 2016 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 20: A Look into Married Life
:) :) :) :)
Date: 06 Oct 2016 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
You are such an amazing writer. Love this story so much. Can't wait for updates 😃
Author's Response:
Aw, you're so sweet! Thank you so much :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2016 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 13: Emotions Run High
Woah... first fights are brutal!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
Yep! Emotions did run high that day!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2016 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Whole World Stops
Awww... that was so sweet! They had the perfect Valentines... Not gonna lie, I thought he was gonna ask her to marry him. Lol... Loved it!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
;) Nope, not yet! But, he will!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2016 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 11: What Happens Next?
Hey... you cheated me out of Christmas! :-( But I over the chapter anyway!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
;) Hehe. Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2016 12:25 AM Title: Our First Christmas
Wow... ok that house is freaking O- Mazing!!!! Loving all the Masen's right now, although.. I hope Carlisle warms up to everybody. And hope Rene behaves herself.. lol... well, I'm off to the next one! FYI... those I love you's made me melt. Edward couldn't have planned it more perfectly!
Krazi
Xoxo
Author's Response:
I know, right? Their house is like a dream house of mine! I wish ;) Cannot wait to see what you think of the other chapters!
Date: 06 Sep 2016 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
Loved it.
Author's Response:
:D Thank you :)
Date: 06 Sep 2016 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
Loved it can't wait for more 💕
Author's Response:
:D Thank you :)
Date: 04 Sep 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
Loved all the detail of this chapter. The pictures were wonderful. Keep up the excellent work.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am so happy to hear that :) I love the pictures!
Date: 04 Sep 2016 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
A perfect chapter
Date: 04 Sep 2016 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
It could not have been any more perfect loved it. I also love all the pics thanks.
Date: 03 Sep 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
:)
Date: 03 Sep 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
I taught a gifted class one sommer. The things I planed to take an hour took thekids about 15 minutes to complete. Plan for much more than you think they will do and perhaps you will have anough. The kids in my class were only 7 to 10 years old too. Good luck with your class of gifted. You will learn more than they will.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am actually taking a class to become certified to teach Gifted and Talented students. Currently, I have 5 students out of 37 that are certified gifted.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2016 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
AWESOME!!! chapter ;) loved all the pictures ;) thank you ;) i've never heard of 'sugaring' before i'll have to look it up ;) looking forward to more soon ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am so glad you liked it! I actually found "sugaring" while looking up alternatives to waxing ;) The things we do for writing, hehe. I hope to have another chapter up soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2016 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
:)
Date: 03 Sep 2016 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 19: His Good Angel
Whoever did the first night, did it beautifully! Their wedding was just perfect and all I thought it would be! I look forward to their life together!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It was an author named LailaB, who wrote "Faithfully" (a Twi fic with an older tattward...it actually inspired me to write my own), and is currently writing "The Mating Bond" and "The Bunny Ranch", all three are on both TWCS and Fanfiction.net. The next chapter will be a look into their life. :D
Date: 04 Aug 2016 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
Love the house WOW
Author's Response:
I loved the house, too! I loved the original house I found in Joliet, too (not the one in the chapter), but fell in love with this one more :D
Date: 02 Aug 2016 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
Sweet :D
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 01 Aug 2016 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
thanks for the update i loved it including the pictures ;) so bella is 21 now? looking forward to more soon ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading! Yes, Bella is now 21 ;). I am in the process of writing the wedding chapter as I type!
Date: 01 Aug 2016 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
Fun update.
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
Date: 31 Jul 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
Loved it can't wait for mored84;a039;
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
ok first I love this story, but now you have stated at this point you are 1 year in with 17 chapters, I have to ask how many chapters will there be>
Author's Response:
If I finish what I have planned (which will take them past the honeymoon, into the prologue, and beyond), this story will have a total of 30 chapters. It won't end with the wedding/wedding night.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!
gosh a rich tattooed pierced Edward ...can't get better than that
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hope you will continue reading and reviewing :D
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
Awesome chapter! I hope I can sleep like a cupcake tonight lol Looking forward to the wedding :)
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
great start
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :D Hope you'll continue to read and review :D
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
:)
Date: 30 Jul 2016 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
I love this!! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 30 Jul 2016 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 18: I Slept Like a Cupcake...Wait...WHAT?!
A most unusual, but delightful batchelorette party! Riley talking in his sleep was a hoot!
Author's Response:
Oh, yes. What did you expect from a bachelorette party planned by Riley, lol Thanks!
Date: 26 Jul 2016 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
Love it and her dress is beautiful!
Author's Response:
Thank you :D
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2016 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
I love the dress! This was an awesome chapter! Loved it! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Updated today :)
Date: 23 Jul 2016 4:59 AM Title: Prologue
giggles its ok some parts are ok but some are a bit gangy esp around the prison. np and before anyone is just like pfft she dun like joliet ...i do i was born there actually and stayed there a whole 3 weeks lol.
awesome story though whoot whoot
Author's Response:
THANK YOU again! I actually think I can work my way around the Joliet situation in the next chapter! Just wait ;)
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
That really is the perfect dress! Their planning is going along so smoothly, it's almost scary! I guess it helps to be alike in your thinking!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love the dress, too!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
thanks for posting another great chapter ;) i noticed there was no mention of her birthday though i know you can't include everything so don't fret ;) thanks for the reply for my last review ;) so the fall semester holiday is thanksgiving right? ( i'm british) ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! Yes, I didn't include her birthday, but that's okay, like you said. Yes, Fall Semester in college (and everywhere else) usually goes from late August to early-mid December, and Thanksgiving falls at the end of November.
Date: 22 Jul 2016 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
How could things be any more perfect. Love the dress
Author's Response:
:D Thank you! I worked hard finding just the right one for them!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
gated comunity cough cough naperville cough cough burr ridge cough cough not jolet cough cough giggles love the story not sure if your from illinois or not so not trying to offend you or anything not sure that they would live in jolet some areas are very nice there granted but some areas are ummmm weeellllll errr statesville prison. rolling meadows is nice too or shaumburg....giggles ok yeah Naperville was mentioned first only cause I grew up there giggles. but love love love the story oooh 2 more possibilites poped into min geneva and st charles... ok yeah ill stop throwing towns at you giggles.
Author's Response:
OH WOW! I had no idea. I just searched houses near Chicago, and assumed Joliet was great. I'll change that in the next chapter :D Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
Aww yay I'm glad they are on the same page. Can't wait to read what happens next.
melissa
Author's Response:
:D Thank you!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
A big time Waco native thing is George's bar! I love that place! The Big O Margaritas ate 16 ounces and just $5. They aren't made lightly either. The onion rings are devine! Big George's fan!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! While I appreciate your location input, I already have a place in mind that I think you'll love!
Date: 22 Jul 2016 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 17: Commitments
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
I am so happy for them. I bet after they get married she will get more intimate piercings
Author's Response:
Thank you! :D
Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 6: Chuck E. Cheese...REALLY?!
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: I Didn't Know That!
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 3: Can't Get Her Out of My Head
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 2: Stalking Your Crush is Okay, Right?
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: Bella's Background
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Date: 17 Jul 2016 5:20 PM Title: Prologue
wow, quite an age difference
Date: 14 Jul 2016 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Happy belated birthday;)
The new piercing was cute idea, anf I like how they're planning the wedding as a couple
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
This chapter brings me back to the day I got my belly button pierced. I went with my friend Crystal. I remember being sooo nervous. Great memories. Lol Happy 1 year Anniversary and I hope you had a great birthday. I'm excited for the wedding. Awesome chapter!! Looking forward to the next. I'll drop by on FF.net and leave some reviews there too tomorrow. Laters xx
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2016 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 15: Fireworks aren’t the only exciting part of July 4th
OMG!!! I loved the proposal! My favorite chapter so far. d84;a039;d84;a039;d84;a039;
Date: 10 Jul 2016 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Loved it can't wait for more d84;a039;
Date: 09 Jul 2016 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Keep them coming, they are great
Date: 09 Jul 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Happy Birthday and Anniversary. It is going to be a great adventure of a wedding
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
😍😍😍😍😍
Date: 09 Jul 2016 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
They're so cute! Really lovely! The date is unique and I love Edwards idea :)
thanks for the chap
Date: 08 Jul 2016 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Happy Birthday ! Thank you for your chapter gift... the bonus lenght is really great!
I'm sooo happy for the wedding : the proposal was totally them. Good job !
Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
It's really nice that Bella hs all this help planning the wedding. It would be quite a chore to tackle on one's own! I think Colorado Springs on Feb. 29th is a great idea also!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much :D
Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 15: Fireworks aren’t the only exciting part of July 4th
What a romantic way to propose! The ring is gorgeous and I just know they are going to be so happy! Riley sure is thrilled!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 14: Green Monster Birthday Boy
What a wonderful way to spend the summer, and to celebrate Edward's birthday! Loved the shoes!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
My daughter got married on Feb. 29. Great day for a wedding!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
firstly happy birthday ;) my daughter will be 25 in 5 days ;) anyway great chapter and i think it was the longest chapter to date ;) i was a bit confused about the time line until the end though i guess it is september and before her birthday? looking forward to more soon ;D
Author's Response:
Based on the timeline I created, I think it's late August in the story ;)
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
:)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Excellent chapter! I look forward to the wedding!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
I love it!! :)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Enjoyed! Happy birthday!
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
happy bday :)
Date: 08 Jul 2016 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16: Wedding Plans
Happy Birthday! I hope you had a wonderful day :D
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2016 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: Green Monster Birthday Boy
Awesome chapter! I loved Edward's birthday
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I loved it, too!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 13: Emotions Run High
It's good to get back to this story. I'm slowly catching up and hopefully I'll be writing again too. Anyways, as usual, great chapter. Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I am glad to have you back :D
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 15: Fireworks aren’t the only exciting part of July 4th
OH they are getting married. Bring on the wedding and of course the wedding night.
Author's Response:
Of course! It's coming, but it won't be the end of the story ;)
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 14: Green Monster Birthday Boy
Cool shoes and wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I loved them :D
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 13: Emotions Run High
Damn, mad Edward is HOT. I am glad they are okay.
Author's Response:
I know, right?!
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Whole World Stops
Keep sprinkling the fairy dust, because dreams do come true.
Author's Response:
Thanks :D
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: What Happens Next?
Damn I love the earrings. Keep up with the great chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I loved the earrings, too! Edward is incredible!
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:41 PM Title: Our First Christmas
OHHHH I Love you. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
:D
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: SURPRISE!
Damn ruin a great moment will ya parents.
Author's Response:
Seriously!
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 8: Why is this any of YOUR Business?
Loved how she stood up for herself. Great job.
Author's Response:
Me, too! Thank you :D
Date: 30 Jun 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 7: I Might Be Bad at It
Well rename her Lucy...because she got some explaining to do. Great kiss.
Author's Response:
;D