Date: 07 Oct 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 32
lol, b's interfering seems to be working
Date: 07 Oct 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
He is seeing Alice in a whole new way :)
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 32
They are melting. It won't be much longer.
Date: 07 Oct 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 32
Well well well. They have growing feelings for each other.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 31
Maybe Isabella's plan will work!
Date: 06 Oct 2015 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 31
a good moment for J & A.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bella is so smart lol
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 31
Well, Alice did end up needing Jasper's assistance andvwithout Bella being involved 😉
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 31
Il ressemble à cela fonctionne, à bavarder vouloir protéger Alice!
Date: 05 Oct 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 31
And feelings start to emerge. Lol
Date: 05 Oct 2015 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 30
Edward is soooo whooped when it comes to Bella.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 30
Je adore cette Édouard, il est vraiment complet et il veut plaire à sa femme.
Je espère que son plan est d'aller travailler.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
She is to cute and he loves her so he will do anything for her
Date: 30 Sep 2015 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 29
Jasper does need to stop being so prickly. He would be happier.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think they like each other too. Lol
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 28
Very interesting theory.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 27
Glad he did not punish Tiffany.
Date: 28 Sep 2015 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was so sweet.
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter, of course Jasper likes Alice
Date: 28 Sep 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
sweeter cfhapter at least this one they are better with each other.
Date: 27 Sep 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope Alice is right but I think there is still someone out there that wants to hurt her.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think there is still a threat.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
So Edward has changed. Good idea to just tell everyone, but I can see his worry. Sweet moment at the end.
Date: 27 Sep 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
I am so happy he didnt punish Tiffany she is a good friend to Bella. How is the clan going to react to her being pregers?
Date: 27 Sep 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
punish and so much upheavel. How about finding common ground with the servents to aid Bella and still follow Edward.
Date: 25 Sep 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Bella needs to stop getting people in trouble.
Date: 25 Sep 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't think he should punish her. Because it shows how loyal she is to his wife also. He needs loyal servants around his wife especially since she is carrying his child.
Date: 25 Sep 2015 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 26
He should be very happy that Tiffany is loyal to Bella.
Date: 23 Sep 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
they do not have a good marriage.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG OMG OMG! YES!!! ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! Whoop! Whoop! Man, this story. I checked yesterday, and i almost wasn't going to check today but i did and i got it, and i just can't breathe right now! OMG! Lol though. Edwards scared of Bella wrapping him around her finger, but Ed's got some persuasion skills too!
Date: 22 Sep 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward really is a softy when it comes to Bella.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 24
Bella better talk fast to clear this up.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can understand why Edward is upset with Bella. But Bella is also right? Edward would not have let her go to Alice.
Date: 22 Sep 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella saved Alice but she lost trust of her husband
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh no, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2015 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh snap. She's in trouble now!
Date: 18 Sep 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh no, Bella is in so much trouble with Edward. I am just glad that she got to Alice before Jasper threw her out.
Date: 18 Sep 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 24
Now if she will be able to get him to lisen to her Im sure he is beyond pissed
Date: 18 Sep 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 24
Always glad to see a new chapter. Great story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sweet Jesus. Everytime you update, little butterflies eat away at my ice heart. I LOVE THIS STORY! The accent, the irish, lord husband Edward. And the totally endearing, awkward love that he sometimes shows when he's not being too big of an alpha male ass. (blows kiss) I can't wait for the next update!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
Sorry but your Bella is a dumb naïve bitch. She is putting herself, her child and her husband at risk all because she can't see the evil in people. Hasn't she learned by now to trust her husband's and Jasper's instincts about people? *shakes head* anything that happens she brought on herself.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
oh my against him again... sigh
Date: 16 Sep 2015 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad Bella found out. Hope nothing happens to her on her way to the cottage. And she is right, Edward is going to be furious.
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
oh Isabella is going to get herself in trouble once again.
Date: 16 Sep 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
Edward is going to lose his shit when he finds out but Bella feels she need to protect just like he does
Date: 16 Sep 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
hope she doesn't get into trouble seeing as someone is still trying to hurt her
Date: 15 Sep 2015 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
I think it is that Lindsey in the kitchen. I don't trust her. I wish Bella would walk in on her husband acting like a bully.
Date: 15 Sep 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
I missed this chapter some how. Hope Bella comes to Alice's recuse.
Date: 15 Sep 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Poor Alice. All she was doing was what Bella asked her to do. I hope Bella finds.out before it is to late.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
yeah Isabella is not going to like this.
Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
well Alice went about that in the wrong way.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
First off, Edward should tell Bella what had happened before anyone else does. Second off, Alice deserves every damned thing he said. You don't go badmouthing the hand that feeds you. Stupid bint.
Date: 14 Sep 2015 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward wants no harm to come to Bella but I think Alice is trying to protect her.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
He's going to be in so much trouble
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 22
wondering why her badmouthing b would bring her closer with the other women
Date: 14 Sep 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
oh my Alice once again in the throws of a mess.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oohhhh Bella you poor naïve girl. *shakes head* Ye should'a listened to Jasper and Edward about the bitch.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
I think Alice is just doing what Isabella asked her to do
Date: 13 Sep 2015 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 21
So glad you are back to this one I missed it so . Alice is in so much trouble why is she being mean to Bella or is she covering up for Bella
Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
wonder what alice is up to
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow so Alice wasn't being trustworthy. Poor Bella.
Date: 05 Sep 2015 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please Update it soon!!
Date: 23 Aug 2015 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 20
Good story always happy to see a new chapter. Thanks.
Date: 17 Aug 2015 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great last two chapters please update soon!
Date: 15 Aug 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
certainly many of the edward/bella fanfics are "epic love stories" and like many others, i do enjoy them much. however, they are not the only genra i enjoy. i have just stated my observation of this story , right or wrong as my opinion.
i have not read/seen much affections between edward and bella. yes, they do like each other and edward certainly feels protective of bella, his wife but the interactions between them appear to lack the deep connection of love for each other. that is why i was surprised of their declared "i love you's." i am rooting for them however to be deeply in love with each other.
i have enjoyed some of your other stories. it surprises me that you would automatically assume that i am looking only for great epic love stories based on my previous comment which it appears you have received as a negative criticism which was not my intention. i was merely giving my opinion of the story based on what i have read without prejudice. i think you have a wonderful talent and encourage you to continue with your success but please, don't presume to know what may or may not be for me. thank you.
Date: 15 Aug 2015 7:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
Alice is a good friend
Date: 15 Aug 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
Smart thinking of Bella get Alice to listen to the gossip.
Date: 15 Aug 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
hoping she can trust alice
Date: 15 Aug 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 20
I hope Alice is telling the truth.
Date: 15 Aug 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
bless her kind heart she is always in trouble with her husband. She needs to ask permission to go to the bathroom. He is never happy with her. Except in bed.
Date: 14 Aug 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh no. Who has told? Can't wait for an update.
Date: 14 Aug 2015 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love this ff! Update often! :D can not wait to Get more ExB!
Date: 14 Aug 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
bella is a stubborn, foolish, spoiled woman.
she may be kind but has been very ill mannered
against the laird whose words are the law, esp since
she doesnt know their ways of life.
also, this doesnt seem like an epic love story. they appear to
be attracted to each other and care for one another, but love?
not so much...yet, they have declared themselves...just don't
buy it with their behavior and their words.
Author's Response:
It was never my intention to write an epic story. Sounds like maybe this one isn't for you ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Aug 2015 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
Isabella and Jasper are like brother & sister. it seems like he loves tattling on her to Edward.
Date: 12 Aug 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
I hope Bella can trust Alice and the priest too. What happened to all your reviews? I know I have reviewed all your chapters and I do not see any of mine.