Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter! Bella and Edward are so sweet together!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
enjoyed the chapter!!!
Date: 31 Mar 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
wow...the last couple of chapters have been very cute of them getting to know eachother and spending time together. but are they ever going to go for the next step in their relationship? it usually doesn't take so long for older couples to go to the next level...it seems like they are playing it tooo safe.
Author's Response:
Well they really don't have the time to take it to the next step. The schedule of the show and stuff leaves them too busy. The cute stuff is stuff that they manage to do. Of course once the show is over... ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 18
omg please tell me that maybe you could have her go back to seattle and open her studio and maybe clothing line and they can be together i relly want a happy ending for them please keep me posted for next chapter vze13yama@verizon.net
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
It will be interesting to see how this turns out. Things definately won't be easy.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 18
enjoyed the chapter!!!
Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Uh oh! Someone's in trouble.
Thanks for sharing your story (and the quick updates!)
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
why is he being so evasive she loves him he should include her since they are becoming a couple please tell me things will be okay for them i await your next chapter let me know at sextonhouse@verizon.net
Date: 26 Mar 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17
I can kind of understand why Bella got an attituse because Edward could have handled the situation a little better, but she could have waited until he discussed things with Alice and Jasper before wanted answers.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
enjoying the story so far...keep up the good work!!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ooh! Update soon! :)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
I like how she was shocked OH my what is going to happen drama drama
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
We had a similar situation to the one like in yr story in UK's Strictly Ballroom, the dancer, Bryan, fell for his star Ali. The press was on to them, but, they waited until after the show to admit, they were dating :)
Author's Response:
Stuff like that happens! It has happened here numerous times on DWTS. :)
Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 15
I didn't know if I would like this story at first, but I am hooked. Can't wait to see what is next.
Author's Response:
Awwwh. Thank you!
More coming soon. :)
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
I knew it couldn't stay drama free forever.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
I enjoyed the chapter and the way their relationship is developing. I think Nicole was awesome last night. Not a fan of TPCD but she was good.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I thought she did very well too. I like her and Evan, Erin, Chad and even Pamela lol.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 14
So what are others thinking about there relationship like Jaz and Alice or his whole family???? I forgot it was on I was reading storys like plus one and buitiful broken I need to remember and dvr it.
Author's Response:
You'll know soon (enough) what Edward's family thinks. :)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
Another great chapter. yes I am a fan of DWTS, a great kickoff episode. So far I like Nichole from the Pussycat Dolls and Erin Andrews (sorry gotta support the home town girl) and for the guys I like Even.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I like Nicole too, and I also like Pamela, Evan, Erin and Chad.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 13
They are having fun hope all of the publicity will not stop that or will it get her in trouble if they find out that they are getting involved. I hope not.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
I guess it was only a matter of time. Who could resist kissing those lips?
Date: 23 Mar 2010 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
uuuuuuuuuuuu someone got busted!!!!!!!!
nice chapter , thank god they finally admitted what they felt for each other
Date: 18 Mar 2010 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
How could you not get all caught up after doing the Rumba? Especially doing it with Edward.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG about time i was getting so frustated for them LOL. That is a great song.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
i love this s tory. i watch dancing with the stars all the time and its starting again next week. good timing with this story. i saw that on ff you have 25 chapters but with diff dates. how often do you plan on updating this one on this website. cant wait til they actually admiyt to liking each other to each other. sexual tension rising!!!!
Author's Response:
I started the story at the end of 2008. That is why on FF there are different dates. I decided to change the dates here since it's already 2010.
Here I update this story twice a day. Normally at midnight and then again during the afternoon.
Thanks for your comment.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hope they have the talksoon.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 11
I liked that she expressed how she was feeling about how he looked he was perfect at telling her she was wrong. Did Edward see someone he use to see???
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
I like this chapter there was a lot of forplay for the dance on the dance floor and off LOL.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
on the cheeck....she should have gone for it! i hope edward takes control soon!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 10
What a sweet story! I am really enjoying the flow. The flashback would be confusing except for the italics. That is tricky to do and you are doing a great job!
Cannot wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
I thought it was a great chapter. Finally realizing their feelings for each other. Things are moving along nicely.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well he cant be perfect in every thing I guess. I love that she asked him that word vomit will get you every time. LOL
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Edward! Poor baby!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Things are going really well, warming up!
Date: 17 Mar 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
I left for two days and there were several chapters when I got back, that was awesome, I loved catching up on the chapters. This story is great!!!! Cannot wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
Fantastic story. I like the concept, it's original and interesting. Plus, a dancing Bella is so funny to think of... I can't imagine her being graceful.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
These two are just too cute.
Date: 17 Mar 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
thanks for the update.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
edward and bella are getting so comfortable together and it is a beautiful thing to see! can't wait for more!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 8
Love the fun banter they have and there determinaion to get it right. During this time has Edward been hooking up with any one?
Author's Response:
No, he's not hooking up with anyone. Rehearsals are keeping him busy.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 8
I can't wait to see how the jive turns out. I can imagine that will be tough for him.
Author's Response:
Yeah, the Jive is tough. I learned to dance that a couple years ago... it was very difficult to stay on the beat.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think that the fact that he is a sportsman helps him, he used to practising. Thank you!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 7
Calling him a mountain lion better than an elephant, I guess. I am dying to know what his family was thinking. Thank you!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
I can't wait for more! I can't for more action! :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
another great chapter
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
another great chapter
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
the kiss was so innocent and sweet I inwardly awwed. :)
~Flynnstones
Author's Response:
Yeah, baby steps first. They aren't about to make out and stuff.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
OH you are not getting rid of me I am loving it. Nothing better that a big happy trully happy family. Love the hug and kiss on the cheek good night.
Author's Response:
Glad you're here for the rest of the story. I think the progression will go smoothly.
Things between E/B are innocent right now, as it should be. Thanks for reading.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love the way things are progressing. Not too quickly.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE THIS STORY...CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
I like that things are moving slowly. Things don't always have to happen overnight. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I'm glad that you like the pace. Slow is good sometimes!
Date: 15 Mar 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was very sweet and I liked the act like you want me that was not hard for him HARD no pun intended LOL.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well, well, I think that others at the party had something to look at with those two dancing. Sweet!
Author's Response:
Yeah, they did lol.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can only imagine what Emmett will be like out in the audience.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 5
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Thanks.
Date: 14 Mar 2010 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, it is such a great story. Very different and original and so interesting, you know a lot about dancing. I really cannot wait for more. Thank you for sharing and for the opporutnity to read it.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Lol, I do know a thing or two about dancing. I love it-but I'm not that talented. :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
Good song how is she keepin it together? Need his POV
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
They make a cute couple already! and its great they dont know much about each other's past they they dont judge each other! It would look bad for poor Edward if so! Hes just lucky Bella is not judgemental :-) thanks for the update!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 4
I think it is cute that they are just feeling each other out.
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love this story! Update again soon!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Really enjoying this story.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Look forward to the next chapter. I think Bella is going to give Edward a run for his money.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Nice sedate first meeting :-) thanks for the update :-)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ok so they haven't meet yet must be the next chapter ;-)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great chapter cant wait to read more ;-)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love it!! It's a great concept. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Mar 2010 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
i cant wait until bella and edward meets
Date: 11 Mar 2010 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm excited to find out how they'll get along when the show starts... Great chapter :)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oops! I totally review the wrong story! Somehow I ended up in your other fic and was totally confused by the second chapter! I'll have to read the first chapter of that one too! I really like this idea and can't wait for more!
Sarah