Date: 25 Jun 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 24 Jun 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 4
Just plain loving this story. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 23 Jun 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
good step for all of them. But it is good to be slow when you have a little child involved.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Great great story. Very smart little Lucy
Date: 23 Jun 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story. Awesome job writing. I hope Bella mentions to Edward her worry about Lucy being hurt or targeted. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 4
So cute that her and Mrs. Cope entered the contest.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love Lucy, she is so cute. So sad they had to leave. I love this story
Date: 22 Jun 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome. Loved it
Date: 22 Jun 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 4
still loving the story. With you last lines you left it open for media/Lucy drama..
Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Gotta love little Lulu!, and this story! :o)~
Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter I hope we get to see what Rose does to Tanya
Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
I really enjoy reading the stories you write. They are always a treat. You always finish, never leave me hanging. You write on a variety of topics, always with a HEA, which I love and require in stories I read. There is a sweetness to this one and most others of yours. Some that aren't so sweet have other good qualities. Thanks so much for all you give us. Since my RL is not so sweet and doesn't yet have a HEA, I live for reading about it for others....sounds kind of pathetic, I know, but it is true of me today. I read many different kinds of stories. Some I like better than others, but all have the power to transport me away from my everyday pains and troubles. Thanks for all you give me!
Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think that was so cute Lucy I love her she reminds me of my little one she loves her momma :)
Date: 22 Jun 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I loved it so sweet and cute too I can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jun 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww Rose is such a sweetheart. Glad She's getting a new job that she likes. Can't wait for more
Date: 22 Jun 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 4
Will Rose really attempt to give Tanya the warning to back off?
I worry that someone, like Tanya will supply the media with the information about Lucy, thinking she will get them out of the was so she can be with Edward?
I wonder if Mrs. Cope will still help take care of Lucy once they move in with Edward?
Will Bella get the chance to finish her degree?
Date: 21 Jun 2015 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 3
great post as always. Looking forward to finding out the answers to the mystery of how this all came to be for Bella and Lucy. She must have a fairy godmother somewhere looking out for her.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Ah Ha~ your a/n pretty much confirmed what I thought... it had been a fleeting thought about her not even enetering a contest~ now I see I was right... the only one who seemed to know Anything was Rose his sister... Bella Knows his parents from when her mother was ill, so that would tend to make me think that maybe just maybe They had always thought Bella would be perfect for their son... and put a little matchmaking into play with the radio station~ Rose~! Emmy seemed to have a little more knowledge than anyone else, and he did say Rose loved Bella!! How does she know Bella~! Cannot wait to read the next chapter...
Edward is already crazy about the two of them... I think he fell in love with Lucy the night of the concert!! Right along with Bella!!
Date: 21 Jun 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
THat was so cute that Emmett did let anyone tell him that the contestants were Bella and Lucy... I could just imagine his face when he figured it out... and I floved when he took Lucy up on the stage to sing with him not knowing that was her birthday or her birthday wish to sing with him ... I bet the vido on youtube went viral of them... it would have melted anyone's heart... as always I freakin' love your two's writing!!
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love this... it is so playful~! And I think there is more to this "contest" than meets the eye~ and it seems Rose is a part of it...
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 20 Jun 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 3
Love it.kinda hate it's going to be so short. My guess as to how or. Why's he won? Devine intervention:)
Date: 20 Jun 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
i am loving this story wow i love lucy and cant wait for more much love to you both
Date: 20 Jun 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying it & trusting you
Date: 20 Jun 2015 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 3
Five weeks will fill like Five years so sad for all of them. I think it was from heaven Charlie and Renee.
Date: 20 Jun 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
Just plain loving this story! Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 20 Jun 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking since they both come from Forks that maybe Esme or Carlisle may have been behind Bellas winning the contest and all the extra perks......matchmaking for Bella and Edward.....
Date: 20 Jun 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
: ( Monday seems to long to wait but wait I will do with a : ( smile. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 20 Jun 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward is so good with Lucy. He backs up Bella's concerns and finds way to teach Lucy lesson that will keep her safe.
The nickname LuLu is adorable. She has wrapped herself around his heart. The tattoo conversation was hilarious. There are very few if any secrets in a house that has a very talkative five tear old. I've personally experienced the over sharing of information by my child. They divulge your secrets with a smile on their face! Haha
Date: 20 Jun 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
Glad they are spending time getting to know each other. 5 weeks will seem like forever.
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
So glad you are including Lucy in the actual storyline and not just a mention here and there. I can't wait to find out how she won the trip. I have been wornesting about that.
Date: 20 Jun 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 3
I loved it how sweet and wonderful it all but the goodbye but how will their time apart go and I think his parents had a little something to do with it
Date: 20 Jun 2015 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 3
My guess is Doctor Carlisle and Esme....
Date: 19 Jun 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Just five weeks...
Date: 19 Jun 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is a sweet story and fits quite nicely into my rotation of things I read. I have no clue how they won this contest. No mention was made before that she never entered any such contest, so someone must have entered for her. Isn't he the gentleman, to not do anything but kiss her so far...it's a rarity these days!
Date: 19 Jun 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think rose and the rest of Edwards family had something to do with it. Although given how smart Lucy is, it's possible she entered the contest, maybe with some help.
And I think it's great that they both come from the same town. So they knew each other's parents, did they ever meet?
Date: 19 Jun 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am glad Lucy is all in. But it is hard for a child of 5 to grasp all of this. As Always you write I read. :-)
Date: 19 Jun 2015 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter looking forward to your next post again I hope this story goes on for awhile
Date: 19 Jun 2015 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
:( so sad can't wait to see them back together love little lucy :)
Date: 19 Jun 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
If I had to guess, I would say Carlisle or Esme fixed the contest so she would win. They knew her and thought she'd be good for Edward, so they played matchmaker. I hope the five weeks go by fast.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 3
A friend entered her in the contest, maybe Alice. It could have been Rose too. Maybe Rose ran into her or saw her and thought Bella deserves the tickets because she was a great mother. I have no idea how she won but I'm glad she did!! Bella definitely has a fairy godmother or godfather somewhere out there. The fact that she knows Esward's dad makes me think he could have done it as well. Carlisle got Rose to help, many be even Emmett helped get her to Edward. His family seems to love Bella and Lucy so much already. It's almost like they know them.
Date: 19 Jun 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
love love this story :)
Date: 18 Jun 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loving this so much!!
Date: 18 Jun 2015 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 17 Jun 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
much to find out yet about them both.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm dumbfounded that you can't find it in you to take this well into 100 plus chapters. Your words are pure magic and worth so much more than a few chapters but.....if it's all you have to give then I look forward to them with a smile. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 17 Jun 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok....This is a great summer story. I look forward to reading and smiling til the end.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
Gotta love little miss lucy..... :o)~
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
James is a good kind of bandmate to have. He pushes a little bit but never to the point of trouble. The storyline of Alice and Edward is an interesting cover. When will that be exposed to the public?
Lucy is so adorable! Edward's attraction to Bella is something new for him? Has he never had a romantic connection that he thought was forever? Or is that the pain he was referring to as he mentioned Bella's past?
Date: 16 Jun 2015 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
This seems a but out if character for you two; Haha, But I'm already loving it!
I can't wait for thus story to unfold.
I like the fact that Rosalie has put in a good word to the team that she is fond of the Swan ladies.
Is Tanya is going to be a recurring problem or just this night?
What an awesome fifth birthday present for Lucy!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
Love Lucy so much!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 2
They fell in love hard and fast
Date: 16 Jun 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 2
The story is great hope u go longer the the few chapters you have set
Date: 16 Jun 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Cavity-inducing! Let's see Lucy up on stage!!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful, just wonderful! Can't wait to hit the next button. I Love Lucy (YES I did say that) .XOXO,Cheri
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I went back to FB page and watched the video which insipired this.. You've done an excellent job of capturing that in words..
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love it! I am glad Emmett has been there for the girls, but I can't wait for them to meet Edward. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 16 Jun 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
awww Eddie is bitten by the love bug. How cute.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet. I loved the concert and glad that Lucy got her birthday wish.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm loving this story. It just grabs a piece of my heart
Date: 15 Jun 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
That last part where Bella said everyone leaves them was heartbreaking. I can't wait for more!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
I am really, really enjoying this chapter! Please keep them coming!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG I am loving this.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
really love it i cant wait for more
Date: 15 Jun 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 2
Falling quick and fast but it sounds like they are doing a good job of getting to know each other. And Lucy is awesome!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chaptrr. Love him witb Lucy
Date: 15 Jun 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
So sweet they are together.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
OMG... I love this! Can't wait for more!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loving this Lucy is so cute.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
So excited to get this update. Loving this story. Love how Edward had a pull to Bella and Lucy before he even met them. Glad Lucy got her birthday wish of singing with Edward. Can't wait for more.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 2
Aww, how sweet. Love it! Dont think i miss that ever after quote in there, it onky one of my favorite movies.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
I kept tears in my eyes since Lucky saw the tickets. I love this happy story!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
So, I first teared up when Lucy tries to read the tickets. LOVE!
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
loving this story was so happy when i saw chaper 2 in my inbox
Date: 15 Jun 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
awwwww :)
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 2
wow. only 5 chapters total? that's kind of stunning....this chapter is very cute and covers a lot of things without too many details, so I guess I can see how 3 more would do it. Thanks.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love it when you guys post a story because you collabrate so well. I am sad to know that there are only 5 chapters to this one. But the cuteness of Lucy is beyond adorable. I like that after so long he can possibly find his happy ever after too. It is sad to be alone in the world but it does make you more appreciative of those you do have.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I am so loving this story.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
That was too cute of Lucy singing on stage. It is nice to see them have some talking and some making out. I wonder how he will respond to finding out more about jacob. Update when you can but loving this story.
Date: 15 Jun 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
I loved it wow it was like bam for both of them now will it work out for them update soon
Date: 15 Jun 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
:) Sweet story so far. I love Lucy!