Date: 15 Sep 2015 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 6
Cute short story :) Loved how you kept it nice and simple, only thing I wished you'd wrote was about the teacher's reaction to Rose. Was slightly disappointed when you didn't, but obviously whatever she said had an effect. :)
Date: 28 Jun 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
What a cute, wonderful, feel-good story. Been a while since my heart did a great big melt reading a story. Thank you for that.
Loved Lucy/Lulu. Good to see someone besides E&B leading the charge in a story. And let's not forget Emmy!! He's one of my favorite Twilight characters. He's one of the few that always plays the good part in stories.
I also enjoyed that there was a real story and not just a lot of fluffy lemons. Don't get me wrong, I love to read lemons, but this story just didn't need them.
Just thought -- this is the first story that I've read by you guys. Looked at your profile and looks to be a lot of good stuff coming my way. I'm sure they'll all be great - but - this story has set the bar high! :D
Thanks for writing for our fandom. I appreciate you and the great gift you've given us.
Elaine - sparkledamnu Elaine Sparkle Damnu Phillips on FB
Thank you for the wonderful review. Nicola Pitt and Kasi Maakestad is who we are on Facebook, and we have a group called: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction, feel free to join or add us. We're glad that we've gained another reader and we hope you like some of our other stories as well. Please keep in mind that our grammar is not always perfect, but we enjoy suppliing stories for people to read. Can't wait to hear what you think of such stories as my personal favorites of ours like: His Cimmerian View, Meeting Her Needs, Diamond Dolls Kitty Cave and so many more... forty stories in it is really hard to pick just a couple of my favorites. Thanks again from Nikky and me for the review, and welcome to reading WeeKittyAndTAT fan fiction. Kasi~
Date: 28 Jun 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love love love this story. I am sad to see it end. Boy when Bella started having babies she did not know when to quit. Lol. Love all the details you put in your story. Just wondering if you are going to write another. You are really a good writer.
We currently have 40 completed stories and we have no plans to stop writing together now. There are several stories yet to come this year, so watch for more, we have plenty to share.
Date: 28 Jun 2015 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Enjoyed your story so much. It had such a "feel good" aura. Your smell of Tanya's house reminded me of a joke/story years ago and I wondered if you had as well and that's where the idea came from.. in the origianl, the man and woman divorced after finding the husband had an affair. He was a real SOB and informed her that his mistress would be moving in with him. The wife was so hurt, the only thing she took with her were her clothes. She left all the contents of the house to him along with a pound or so of shrimp which she left in the hollow parts of curtain rods. Of course the smell became unbearable. Cleaning crews/exterminators etc were hired to find the cause of the offensive odor. He decided as a "good will gesture", the ex-wife could have the house while he & his new girl moved into a new place but took everything including curtain rods with them. it was said the girl left him after the 2nd or 3rd move..
The shrimp thing is exactly what I was thinking of when I wrote that piece... LOVED IT. Thanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 27 Jun 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 6
But a bit of confusion, you said thst he was holding a new baby girl, but he was in fact holding a new baby boy.
To short, dudnt want this to end. I loved it!
The news was reportign he had a baby girl, and in the same paragraph he reacted to that comment. After he turned off the news he looked down at his son and said "They'll never get all of it right, will they, Little Man?" It was a way of saying that not everything the news and rags post about celebrities is true and factual. Most of the gossip rags and shows get one part of a truthful story and when they don't have 100% of the facts they will fill in their on guesses to sell more copies. It was our way to wag our finger at the way things are reported about the stars. I mean really if we believed all we have ever read and everything reported in the tabloids, news shows, and print of all kinds, Elvis is alive and partying with, Jim Morrison who faked his death, and Amelia Earhart is their pilot who takes them everywhere. (Okay so that was an exaggeration, but I'm sure something like that has been reported in one of the wacko rags there are out there.) Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Jun 2015 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Mrs. Berry should know better than to force a child to do something while they are in an emotional family moment.
Edward is so very endearing as he takes card of Lucy.
The I love you's have finally found their mark.
I wish this adorable little story would continue for a few more chapters. But all good things must end!