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Date: 17 Aug 2023 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 08 Jun 2023 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 08 Jun 2023 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 08 Jun 2023 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 08 Jun 2023 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 08 Jun 2023 6:19 PM Title: The Body

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Date: 16 Oct 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

The best romantic erotica ever.

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Date: 16 Oct 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

The best romantic erotica ever.

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Date: 16 Oct 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 16 Oct 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Date: 16 Oct 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 57

The best romantic erotica ever.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2021 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Date: 21 Apr 2021 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

have read this so many times and it still a favorite

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Date: 21 Apr 2021 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

read several times already but has always been a favorite

Reviewer: Llamas05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2020 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 57

Hot. Honestly, I was super unsure about this going in but OMFG! Yes. Please. 

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Date: 29 Jan 2020 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 57

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Reviewer: Ezzy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2019 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 57

This Story was most certainly different to anything else i have read, but pleasently so. Thank you for writing this.

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Date: 21 Oct 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

having been in HR for years a comment about him possibly being gay would never be documented in a personnel file-it would be illegal

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Date: 21 Oct 2018 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 50

having been in HR for years a comment about him possibly being gay would never be documented in a personnel file-it would be illegal

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: shopperlm Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2018 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

You are so cruel! Omg. Came across this little gem of a story tonight. How do I get the word out, this is the hot stuff. Really well written and like the story too.

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for not ending the story with a "oh! i'm pregnant! I always wanted a kid! You too? Oh! yes me too! Let's get married. THE END" Thank you so much! I find so sad when a writer need to end the story with a surprise kid so the story ends happy without realising no kids is a happy ending too. 

Reviewer: Laia_222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you for not ending the story with a "oh! i'm pregnant! I always wanted a kid! You too? Oh! yes me too! Let's get married. THE END" Thank you so much! I find so sad when a writer need to end the story with a surprise kid so the story ends happy without realising no kids is a happy ending too. 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2018 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: Redgirl2018 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 2:55 PM Title: The Body

Love it 

Reviewer: sue1zide Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2017 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 57

Outtakes?

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 57

He finally got what he wanted, his fantasy fulfilled. And she made it enjoyable for him. The spanking with the plug, the larger dildo with the ridges, and finally the pegging-it was ecstasy. But what made it the best was when he wanted to fuck himself and get her involved in the pleasure. It wasn't all about him anymore, but about the both of them reaching their climax together.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2017 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 56

The little incident with Aro really shook him up. She needs to get him back to his normal self and she has the right solution. His lust for the plug and the paddle hopefully will override his brain and let him give in to his desires.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2017 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 57

I have loved this couple from the one shot so long ago. Thank you for telling their tale and bringing both of them the love they wanted.

Reviewer: luckychris37 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 May 2017 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 57

I loved it, great ending. You said your going to do some outtakes. If I remember right, in the beginning Edward said he had tried to be with a man, but that wasn't his scene. Could you do an out take on that.

Reviewer: msliss8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 57

Thank you!! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 57

So I see this is already up here! I hope the outtakes and epi address what repercussions, if any, Aro got for trying to steal the company. This last chapter, however, was brilliant and satisfying. I did say in the last chapter's review that I could read it forever. I meant it, but will honor you as the writer to know when to end it. It has been 2 years and I have enjoyed every word! Thanks and I look forward to anything more you choose to give!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 May 2017 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 56

I do hope this story goes on forever, but also know that isn't realistic. It's one of the sexiest stories I've ever read and I love getting new chapters. I'm sad to see that this whole thing with Aro has thrown Edward into a place where he can't see to enjoy his kink. Maybe a good paddling and a good pegging will help him return to what he loves best. Thanks and I hope you post the next chapter here soon, as I see it's already up on FFn.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 15 May 2017 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 55

Yippy, Aro's out of the picture now.
Just wondering how Charlie is going to fix his Rocky relationship with not only his wife but also his daughter and most importantly Edward?

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2017 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 55

I'm so glad to read you on STARS. I was always worried your content would be removed on FF. I guess Aro didn't realize his work calls would be recorded. Shows how stupid he is. I'm glad Renee set Charlie straight. He should have listened to Bella before when she told him she and Edward were serious about each other. Now that Aro is gone Charlie and Renee can go back to running their company and training Bella to take over.

Reviewer: nel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2017 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 54

I hope it takes my review this time. Last two times I tried to leave a review for this chapter I got an error message. So frustrating! Aro is such a sleeze. What is he doing slinkling around behind Edward and Bella with a camera. Who would do that photographing two people having sex in a private bathroom? I can't believe Charlie wants to give in to his blackmail. Especially since he's lying about what he saw. Aro needs to show proof first. I'm glad Renee kept a sane head about this. Now they need to find a way to thwart his attempt.

Reviewer: mommymac0508 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 55

Oh wow I loved it and hell yeah they nailed Aro to the wall 

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Date: 13 May 2017 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 55

Oh wow I loved it and hell yeah they nailed Aro to the wall 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 55

Charlie's biggest concern about Edward, and the first question out of his mouth to him, was that he might be gay?  How very insulting to the gay community that, in this day and age, being gay is still such a scandal and that it would be something Charlie thought he could be blackmailed about by Aro. Ugh! That being said, it's almost laughable what those two men, Charlie and Aro, thought they had to hide. Renee and Bella handled this quickly and expertly. I also love Judy's efficency in gathering the data they needed.  How quickly Aro was arrested also thrilled me. Do I sense this story may be winding down? I knew it had to, one day, but will be very sad to see it end. I am also happy for you to have gained so many new readers from your Mob story. You deserve the accolade! Thanks for all you give us! I always read here at TWCS just in case FFn finds out about this story and dumps it. Their loss!!

Reviewer: Alison Actually Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 May 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 55

I haven't forgiven Charlie yet, he was willing to betray his company and his family rather than be honest with them. Renee though is nominated for a Superstar Mom award 😀

Glad Bella was able to talk Edward around before he imploded, she is on the Superstar podium with Renée. 

So long Aro !

 

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