Date: 09 Apr 2019 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
I really hate all this jealousy that Edward is experincing ...
I'm worried that these two will end up seperated from it :(
He's going to say something in the heat of the moment and then probably take off with James and Tyler ..
I just hope this doesn't happen to them, they've come so far together both a people and as a couple ..
I have missed this story !
Cannot wait for more X
Date: 24 Apr 2018 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 19
Let's hope that Edward has gotten rid of his shithead behaviour and acts like a proper husband should ..
They both need to keep communicating ..
You always make me cry when I read your characters pain on the screen...
Well done !
Lookng forward to more X
Date: 07 Mar 2018 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hopefully getting help will be a turning point for everyone. I think they all need it, as what happened affected everyone. Perhaps not Esme, Emmett and Rosalie quite so much, but the two younger couples as well as Carlisle do. After all, he's being blamed for what happened to Alice by the younger ones, but he's not that old himself, and it isn't too long ago that he was cutting.
Thanks for the update, and will be looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, Charlie's awake again! Maybe this time, it will last.
All the best with your surgery. I'll be recuperating with you as I'm having surgery in 2 wks.
My surgery is two weeks from today!
Date: 28 Nov 2017 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wasn't expecting that ending. Wonder how much Charlie heard. Sounds like it will be awhile before Bella forgives Edward, and also quite awhile before Edward forgives Carlisle, although I do feel he is being rather hard on him. He isn't their parent, and it isn't so long since he was suicidal himself.
Hope your surgery goes well, and will be looking forward to whatever story is next updated when you feel up to writing again.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Sorry for the late review, but I never got around to reading this chapter until I got the notification for the next.
Sounds like Edward is having a real breakdown. Lets hope he doesn't hurt himself, and that they can recover from this.
Thanks for the update, and I'm off right now to read the next chapter.
Date: 19 Oct 2017 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Oh, my. Someone has gone over the edge. Though, I'm not really surprised Edward snapped a bit. I am surprised he said that about Bella's parents' accident. That was really cruel. But, he's drunk.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I can imagine how emotionally draining this is for you. It's such a difficult storyline now, dealing with Alice's suicide attempt. But, I did love Jasper's response to Bella asking him what he wanted to do. At this point, I think they all need some pretty intensive therapy in order to cope with everything they have all had to deal with 'cause I don't think any of them is coping very well.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 14
They have all suffered, just differently. They are all a mess. They need some serious family therapy. Alice needs to go into the hospital for the next few months then join the rest in therapy. These wounds need to heal. The situation right now is so toxic.
Date: 13 Feb 2017 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks for the update. I think they're all being a little hard on Carlisle and Esme, personally. I know they were all left without their parents, and as the eldest they had to step up to the plate, but the truth is that they lost their parents too, and are really just young adults not much older than the others themselves attempting to find their own way while trying to keep the families together. Dealing with younger siblings with health issues can't have been easy either. Carlisle in particular struggled, and they're probably lucky they didn't lose him. Anyways, it will be interesting to see how things go with Alice's recovery.
Date: 09 Feb 2017 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 13
The Could've, should've and would've is going to tear them apart. They made a mistake, time to dela with the consequences and mend some bridges...that is those bridges are willing to be mend.
THANKS FOR THE UPDATE, BB. Can't wait for the next one.
Date: 09 Feb 2017 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well it was nice to see a update. I enjoyed it. I have to tell you I smiled when I saw it in my am box cause like oh yeah I wonder how that Edward and Bella are doing and how is that Alice? Wish it were more. But I enjoyed it.
Date: 06 Dec 2016 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
At least she woke up. I know it has been hard on all of them, but I think Edward is being just a little hard on Carlisle. Carlisle has had his own mental health issues to deal with, including, if I recall correctly, self harming, with not much support because the rest of the family had too much on their own plates. That being said, he could have called and said he was trying to get to Chicago. Thanks for the update, and I will be looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Date: 06 Dec 2016 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
There is so much hurt in this family. This better be a huge wake-up call for all of them. They're all they've got. They need to fix this. At the end, Edward and Carlisle both had very valid arguments. I do wonder how much of that Alice heard.
Date: 14 Oct 2016 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Bella did the right thing, and I was already thinking Edward was suffering from anxiety. Glad it's only that and not something worse. And Bella telling Esme off was awesome, can't believe the bunch of them! UGH!
I hope Alice gets better. PLEASE DON'T BREAK MY HEART!!!
Date: 13 Oct 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 11
I'm totally pulling for Alice to be okay. Well, as okay as she can be after trying to kill herself. But, she has people around her to help her. She's going to need them!
Glad Edward's issue is only stress--he can learn to manage that. He NEEDS to learn!
Date: 13 Oct 2016 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 11
Thanks for the update. When I saw your Facebook note, I was convinced you had killed off Alice. I know she's not out of the woods yet, though. It will be interesting to see what happens when Carlisle and the rest of them finally get there. Will be looking forward to the next update.
Date: 04 Oct 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Eeek - what a cliffie. Wonder if she will be ok, or whether this will have been too much for her to recover from. Have to wait and see, I guess. Will be looking forward to the next update, and thank you for this one.
Date: 27 Sep 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for the update. Hopefully they will get to Alice before she does something stupid. Not sure what is stopping the others from being available, at least by phone. Wonder if they have a good excuse or not. Will be looking forward to the next chapter.