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Reviewer: Cheesecake567 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2018 2:44 PM Title: The Temptations of the City Part I

xh41

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2017 8:19 AM Title: Epilogue III

You did a very good job in writing this, especially getting to the heart of the addiction.

Thank you for sharing the story.

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2017 4:00 PM Title: Epilogue III

Wow just wow, this was epic. I read it nearly straight thru another amazing story from a equally amazing author. I will someday completely read your entire catalogue of stories. Thank you for continuing to bless us all in the fandom with your talent.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2017 3:18 PM Title: Epilogue III

They have come a long way to get their happiness. 

Reviewer: Ck0200 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2017 12:41 AM Title: The Call

I loved this story and anxiously awaited updates. Thank you for sharing your talent and imagination. I am sorry to see THE END but enjoyed the end. Again, thank you

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2017 3:41 PM Title: Epilogue III

OMG!!! I love this story!! I love that you ended it with babies and Alec! ;) Fantastic!!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 9:22 PM Title: Epilogue III

I finally read this. It came 4 days ago and just sat in my inbox because I couldn't conceive of reading it. That would mean the end. I had mixed feelings about it ending. This story owned me for a long time. I think, if you remember my reviews as you were posting it, that you understand that. I felt every single emotion held within these pages. I related in a personal way to a lot of it. You read my rambling reviews and commented on each one. Thank you so much for expressing your wonderful talent in this story. I don't get out much anymore and live to read a good story. This one feels personal and I love it and you for writing it. Thanks are insuficient words to describe my state of mind while reading this story. Bless you.

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2017 7:01 PM Title: Epilogue III

Good story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 5:34 PM Title: Epilogue III

:) :) 

Reviewer: Frogie48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2017 6:30 AM Title: Epilogue III

A beautiful ending to a great story. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:55 PM Title: Epilogue Two

Absolutely fantastic!! I love this story! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 6:06 PM Title: Epilogue One

Absolutely fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 12:14 AM Title: Epilogue Two

:) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2017 12:10 AM Title: Epilogue One

:) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2017 8:42 PM Title: Epilogue Two

Oops. I got so excited seeing you in my inbox this morning, I neglected to see that there was only one new chapter, not three. I read this on FFn and gave a raving, over the top, review that I must now shrink back from. I see that only one chapter is new and it gives us a bit of a cliffie and not the end. That's perfectly OK. It's a wonderful wedding chapter with what looks like the possibility of a pregnancy at the end and I love it. Silly me. Please forgive my over-enthusiasm. 

Reviewer: nello1418 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2016 8:03 PM Title: The Learning Curve

Beautiful story, i enjoyed every bit of it. Thank you for sharing. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 May 2016 2:34 AM Title: The Learning Curve

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! I really love this story and these characters!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 May 2016 8:58 AM Title: The Learning Curve

:)  loved this story.  Definitely going to miss it 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2016 5:00 PM Title: You and I Part II

I'm so happy for them. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 7:46 PM Title: You and I Part II

oh this is just lovely! it has been a long, slow burn for these two. this has been a LONG time coming and was well worth the wait. this must be my favorite of all your stories, but then it's hard to tell, really, when they are all so intense and wonderful. thank you so much for persevering and for giving me so many hours of lost-to-the-world pleasure.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 3:43 PM Title: You and I Part II

WOW! Just WOW! This is a fantastic chapter!! *fans self* I love these two! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jan 2016 11:05 AM Title: You and I Part II

:) 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2015 6:23 PM Title: You and I - Part One

I'm so proud of how far Edward has come. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2015 10:47 PM Title: You and I - Part One

I. ABSOLUTELY. LOVE. THIS!!!! :)=)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2015 6:49 PM Title: You and I - Part One

This is currently  my favorite story of yours. That changes, I think, when a story becomes complete and my attention is diverted elsewhere. For me, I love that you told a realistic story about the struggle with alcoholism/addiction. I haven't always agreed with what you wrote about the treatment of it, but have come to see that what worked for me isn't the ONLY way to solve the problem. And, it helps to keep in mind that this is just a story. Sometimes I get so involved in a story that I lose sight of that...for a time. I loved this chapter and will have mixed feelngs when this story ends. Thanks for all you give us!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2015 1:26 PM Title: You and I - Part One

:)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2015 5:04 PM Title: That Night

It's going to take a while to heal. Hopefully soon they can start a more normal relationship.  They both need to be healthy and strong. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 6:45 PM Title: That Night

1I'm glad she finally got that out, and to the 3 people she loves and trusts most in the world. I can't imagine how terrifying that must have been for her. I have loved this story, above most, for the entire time you have been writing it and, while I have mixed feelings to see it end, I'm going to be glad for the closure!  This is one story I for sure want to save for mine.  I love all the stories you write, but this one is a favorite. Bring on those lemons! I can't wait for the lovin' to start!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2015 4:42 PM Title: That Night

This is so fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2015 7:46 PM Title: That Night

Poor Bella 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2015 1:16 PM Title: The Way Home

Great chapter.  Don't worry about the delay.  I just chalked it to us needing get a break to feel some of the waiting that Edward and Bella felt.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 7:24 PM Title: The Way Home

I''m so sorry you haven't felt well lately. You save your energy for yourself and write when it comes to you. This story is my favorite of all yours, or close to it. Favorite of the current ones, anyway, and close to my heart in that I relate to Edward's struggles. A lot. This chapter covered a lot of ground and felt like it wrapped up things nicely. I haven't checked to see if you marked this complete yet, but when you do, may I please save a copy for my personal library?  Thanks for all you give us!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 4:19 PM Title: The Way Home

I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!! I have been waiting for this and you did not disappoint! ;) I am so so freakin happy that everyone is alright! You had me so worried there a few times!! I am also incredibly excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2015 1:24 PM Title: The Way Home

:)

Reviewer: v3rut Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2015 10:45 PM Title: The Temptations of the City Part II

HEy! i love this story! when do you think you could update? i read it all in like two weeks... thanks for writting

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 6:14 PM Title: The Temptations of the City Part II

Great story, please update soon, town leave me or Edward hanging

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2015 1:45 AM Title: The Temptations of the City Part II

HOLY SMOKES!! I love this so much!! I am so freakin happy with this story! I can't wait for the next update!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 10:17 PM Title: The Temptations of the City Part I

WOW! I am so close to being caught up!! I love this story and these characters! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:29 AM Title: The Windy City Part II

We're good!! ;) LOVE!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:41 PM Title: The Windy City Part I

Absolutely love this!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 11:10 AM Title: The Family

So fanfriggentastic!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 12:22 AM Title: The State of Recovery

OMG! This is great!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 9:40 PM Title: The Only Option

Fanfriggentastic!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:08 PM Title: Only Human II

I wish he would just listen to her. I am so sad for them. :(
I love this story. :)

Reviewer: cindbear3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 3:19 AM Title: The Temptations of the City Part II

Love your story! You can feel the tension and love.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 2:21 AM Title: Only Human I

HOLY O.M.G.!! This is so fanfriggentastic!!! WOW!!! WOW!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 1:28 PM Title: The Escape

OH MY!!! WOW!!! OMG!!! This was HUGE!!! WOW!!! Can't wait to read more! ;)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 10:59 AM Title: Double-Edged Sword

Holy-motha-effin-shit!! OMG!! I am so thankful I can go on to read the next chapter.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 2:57 AM Title: The Adrenaline Rush

Holy Shit!!! OMG!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 1:04 AM Title: The Dive

I LOVE THIS! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 6:25 PM Title: The Motions

WOW!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:45 PM Title: The Photos

I love this chapter!! Progress! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:10 PM Title: The Truth Why

This story is so great! I am telling you are keeping me on the edge of my seat thinking that something is about to happen with Carlos! I am off to read more!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:39 PM Title: The Condensation on the Glass

Way to go Edward!Love this chapter! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:39 PM Title: The Point

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THIS! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:01 AM Title: El Rio

Oh no!! I love this chapter! This story! These characters!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 12:35 AM Title: The Brother

OMFNG!!! Crazy fantasticness!! lol I love this! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 11:15 PM Title: The Little Patient

OH SHIT! This is awesome!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 9:59 PM Title: The Guilt

WOW! Fantastic chapter!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 7:38 PM Title: The Water Level Rises

Love this story! I can't stop reading!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 5:32 PM Title: The Fine Line

This is so freakin great!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 3:43 PM Title: The Timer

I love this!! I can't stop reading!:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2015 2:57 AM Title: The Underground Tunnel

I abso-freakin-lutely love this!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 7:09 PM Title: The Morning After

Sounds good to me! lol I love this!! Off to read the next chapter!! :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:21 PM Title: The Bearing of Souls

Awww...they are so great for each other! I love this story and all the updates I just got!! Eeeeee!!!! I am so excited that I don't have to wait to read more!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 10:51 AM Title: The Voice

OMG! I absolutely love this!!!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 2:29 AM Title: The Seventh Circle

I absolutely love this and can't wait for more!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 1:26 AM Title: The Start of Hell

OMG! I love this story! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:58 AM Title: The Results

I am excited for more!!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 3:19 PM Title: The Talk

WOW! So much going on! I love this story!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:16 AM Title: The Lessons Learned

OMFNG!!! OMG!! OMG!!! WOW! I love this and I am so freaking excited for the next update!! :)=)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2015 1:45 AM Title: The Tour

LOVE! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2015 8:13 PM Title: The Voice Overhead

OMG! I can't wait for more!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2015 12:03 AM Title: The Reintroduction

And so it begins...again! I am really enjoying this! I can't wait for the next update!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2015 9:17 AM Title: The Target

This is fantastic! I am excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 10:27 PM Title: The Call

WOW! I am in! :)

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 2:49 PM Title: The Call

What a wonderful start, really looking forward to a strong Bella! Can't wait to see where you take our beloved characters from here, such a tough addiction to tackle, and I wish you the best in this story! I've been through some pretty rough recoveries with my ex-husband, and it's hard and heart wrenching to watch and be part off. Take care until next time, and thank you for the wonderful story so far!

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:49 AM Title: The Call

Looks interesting

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 2:35 AM Title: The Call

Cool set up love the I don't take carp Bella looking forward to reading more soon I hope 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 8:59 PM Title: The Call

what happened? I thought this was already posted here? was it removed from FFn?



Author's Response:

It's still posted on FFN, but I never posted it here. Sorry for the confusion. BTW I'll be updating on FFN this week :)

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