Date: 18 Apr 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh shit!!! Keep it coming great story
Date: 17 Apr 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
So much for the pepper spray.
Date: 17 Apr 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
will he growl at them? j/k and couldn't resist....unless he has his gun handy, the odds might be a bit much, even for Edward....I'll wait and see...
Date: 17 Apr 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Something sexy about a man coming to the rescue. ..even though I'm an independent woman!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
they will be sorry for messing with her Edward will not go easy on them he is my hero
Date: 16 Apr 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 5
I guess the fact that Edward was undercover while in jail is something that hasn't been revealed as yet to most. Good! It amazes me that Charlie doesn't seem to have a problem with Bella seeing Edward, despite the fact he is 10 years older than she is. Or maybe I'm wrong. We'll see. Enjoyable story so far!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
How funny is Charlie going to be when he figures out that Edward has the hots for Bella and Bella has the hots for Edward???
Date: 16 Apr 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sounds like a great dad!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love, love the creativity your writing holds. Just wish there was more of of the chapter. Too short.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh gosh Charlie is a goofball. I wonder what happened to Edward's parents. That was nice of Charlie to offer him a place to stay. Loving the story.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 4
Haha. ...enjoying it so far.
Date: 16 Apr 2015 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ohhhh I love your story!
Date: 16 Apr 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love, so looked forward to seeing if you posted another chapter today. Hopefully tomorrow?
Date: 15 Apr 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
I like that he declares himself right away, no BS. I like that he was undercover in jail, that he looks like a bad boy, but is actually on the good side.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
He is adorable. I think he will be good for her. Love the dirty dancing and the cuddling.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
So Edward is the bad good guy love that type ;) I wonder is Jess has figured out that she is not Edwards type?
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love it so far! I think this was a great chapter. It let know that Edward is serious.
Date: 15 Apr 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 3
When does Jessica not want Edward
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
I don't think Jess has a chance in hell he already has his sights set on her
Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
So is Edward undercover or something? Seems he fibbed a bit either to Bella about his rebellion being in youth only, or to Sam about spending 3 years in jail. What's really going on here....? I would bet that Jessica doesn't stand a chance.....
Date: 14 Apr 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 3
oohh drama, yeah. Look forward to the next chapter
Date: 14 Apr 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is his acting more the bad guy to fit in so maybe he can do some undercover stuff and the adults will share things with him.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Do not let Jessica Skank Stanley near Edward, or I swear.....there will be blood. Lots of blood. Belonging to the Skank.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh liking this bad boy turned cop. I like how he calls her doll.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
"Oh sweet Jesus, he's yummy." Love that line!
Date: 14 Apr 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
LLove that you posted so soon
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
Interesting, I like, looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
So Edward is about 10 years older than Bella? or maybe a little less? I like the way he talks....
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Her knight in shining armor or van lol. He is so sweet
Date: 13 Apr 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Got to say I'm intrigued
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Best email alert I have received all damn day. Glad to be reading one of your stories again. <3
Date: 12 Apr 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great start and can't wait to read more. A great way to start the summer.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I always love getting a new story from you 2. You always follow through, complete your stories, and deliver first class entertainment!
Date: 12 Apr 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love Charlie he is so funny.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
a different charlie. loking forward to more