Date: 26 Apr 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update.
Date: 26 Apr 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 13
Last two charles were great you could go so deep with them
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 14
I love these two! So sexy! Love how he dismissed Tanya. I like that Charlie is cool with things.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loving this story. Charlie is adorable. I would nap with him any day.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 14
when did they get married? or was that just something he said to Tanya to get her off his back...er, front....or whatever? I think the latter is it....I'm really enjoying this story and how quickly they connected...
Date: 25 Apr 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
I think they are just perfect. Love the wife thing and Tanya needs help
Date: 25 Apr 2015 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Take that Tanya!
Date: 25 Apr 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Charlie seems great but don't let him see that..
Date: 25 Apr 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
as long as Charlie is asleep all is well with the world.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
it is fast, I hope it lasts and that Tanya does not show up wanting her Man back.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
well they are not playing games. Right up front. How about that? hmm
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
well they have a very busy small town. Mine is 210 people. LOL we have more cows than people. LOL
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wouldn't that be the shit to have Charlie find them like that. So sad this hotness will end.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
FIre is what you are to holler.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie is a happier guy in this story.. Good
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
Charlie is realy permissive and not blind. He knows how it goes with teenagers. Bella is not an adult, Edward is the adult here and a cop nonetheless, he have to take his responsibilities with Bella. Thank you for the update.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good kid is what she is and that is fine. Sounds like Edward is not a rebel but a cop and that is all good
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
He is one of the most erotica ly romantic Edwards you have ever written. I love it.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 3
children over there adults over here. Wow.. way to kill the thoughts.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry it has taken me so long to get to reading this story. Forgive me!
Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
cute, so cute! i hope to get a man like that, you know? that change his plans for that! ;) haha
till tomorrow :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
lol :P charlie is home lol
Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😉
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 14
Did Bella not catch the reference Edward made to Tonya about being married to the girl he was dry humping while playing pool? Why would Tonya call Bella Alice and think Jasper would take care of her? Weird!
Once again their coupling was hot, fast and furious!
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks good chapter
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
I am really enjoying this!! I notice that Bella had nothing to say about his 'wife' comment. lol I can't wait for more! :)=)
Date: 25 Apr 2015 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
She is just following orders. I think she needs a little fun.
Date: 25 Apr 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
So glad to see Bella being corrupted in all the right ways with the right bad boy! Still loving Charlie! Kind of reminds me of my Mom, though not quite so much pushing me to do things, she never told me no, or that I had a curfew, but let me know that I was responsible for me and would have to get myself out of any trouble I got into. I know TMI about me and not the story. ... Can't wait to see what happens next.
peach
Date: 25 Apr 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I love this!!! :)
Date: 24 Apr 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
I think she is safe with Edward and Charlie knows it.
Date: 24 Apr 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
bad Edward! LOL! I love it. can she really pass for 25 at age 18? I guess so.
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Some how I wonder if Charlie isn't behind all these ideas of helping his daughter let a little bit of excitement create memories of a happy teenage life. As if they will help her stay closer to home. What will happen when she heads off to University?
[Report This]Date: 24 Apr 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks good chapter
Date: 23 Apr 2015 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
They make a great couple.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 12
I absolutely love that he calls her "doll". That just melts me! Is, or should I say was, she a virgin? Yeah, its fast, but sometimes you just know....
Date: 23 Apr 2015 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I think the timing is perfect. They are a perfect fit.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
another Cliffie :( loll
Date: 23 Apr 2015 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
So far its a sweet little story, I truly like it
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
Things are going the way it's suppose to be, I think it's sweet, they both felt a connection why fight it makes reading more interesting can't wait for another chapter
Date: 23 Apr 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fanfriggentastic!!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Edward's panic was warranted? You still haven't said if Bella was a virgin before they decided to not admit they were falling for each other faster than either one could prevent. Edward marked her.....Charlie might have something to say about that don't you think?
Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think it is perfect and that he fucking likes her lol
Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just right. And I don't see why FF would have their panties in a bunch about this, it was tastefully written and I just don't get their mindset. Big babies. *end of rant* I started out reading at FF, but I'm so glad I found TWCS~~a place where adults can read and write what they damn well please, tyvm. If you need some place to hold your hand and cover your eyes, you're too young to be there. Hmm, I guess my rant wasn't over with after all, heh heh! They should rename it Prude Central Clearing House. PCCH, has a nice ring to it, no?
Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think it is perfect for them. ...they've been fast with everything else.......sometimes it's just RIGHT! Ya know?
Date: 23 Apr 2015 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 11
Such a tease
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
That is a moment wow
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
My thoughts..... Please tell me there are more updates tonight
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
The thing I love most about this story is the ease in which these two are finding each other and beginning what looks to be a lovely, sweet romance. It warms my heart. I love his confidence, his humor. I love her innocent willingness to fall...
Date: 22 Apr 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh yeah I like where this is headed
Date: 21 Apr 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Ohhh, nice! Honest. Direct. I like it.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh he wants her badly! no doubt about it! the fishing ruse was cute, as was the splashing flirting. this is all going rather quickly, isn't it? not that i mind, but still....is there something else going on behind the scenes?
Date: 21 Apr 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 10
Musical edward oh this just get better. That is fun to get to know each other by fishing.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
ITS ABOUT TIME !!!! LOL
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
That sound like the perfect end to a perfect day
Date: 21 Apr 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Charlie is very trusting or just realy wants Edward and Bella together.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
This is so cute - but I guess they will not be going all the way this night. Just very heavy making out !!!
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Ugh!!!!! He sleeps naked kill me now.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Still blocking the first kiss. I think he is adorable. That is cute the ticket was to go out with. I think I would break the law more often.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder why Charlie is so casual about Bella spending the night away from home with Edward. Does he not know what is going on with them? Isn't there something going on with them? Maybe I'm misreading the situation, but if I were Charlie, I'd be concerned about my daughter going away overnight with a man she just met. I sound like I don't approve. That's wrong, I certainly do and am eager to see what happens. I'm just playing devil's advocate from Charlie's POV here.....
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 9
What's the age difference an bellas never had a boyfriend
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Very cute! Like this story so far.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was sweet
Date: 20 Apr 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was damn cute! post soon
Date: 19 Apr 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
It was a fun chapter to read too! And quite romantic! Officer tattooed Cullen!! What's not to like?
Date: 19 Apr 2015 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
I think that was very cute in the end but boy it was pissing her off first loved it.
Date: 19 Apr 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOL! But he has a point~
Date: 19 Apr 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
He is a hero and so glad he was stocking her lol.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love this ! very cute
Date: 18 Apr 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 7
I love it so far.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh no that is not good at least Edward is there to save the day.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
your mean lol
Date: 18 Apr 2015 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward to the rescue! Oh he is so besotted with her but I think he is struggling with maybe their age difference and the fact that her father is his boss. I don't think either of those will stop him once she lets him know his advances would be most welcome....thanks for another engaging story!