[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2017 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
Lol love your stories
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2016 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wonderful! A definite favorite. I did not want this one to end.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it it was so sweet than scary and sad but it went right back to sweet thank you
Date: 13 Sep 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
i love charlie.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this perfect ending to this story! You guys do such a great job of telling these stories!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was simply too funny!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Her meltdown must have scared hell out of both Edward and Charlie! I guess it shouldn't be too surprising there were residual effects from that awful experience!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Boy, they hurt Bella worse than I thought but at least nothing beyond broken bones! I don't blame her for wanting to be at home instead of in the hospital!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
I never thought he was bad, just kind of stupid! I'm just relieved that Phil is dead and they rescued Bella! Hopefully Edward isn't hurt too bad!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Po0or Edward, and yes, Charlie, too. They both have to be going crazy, despite having to stay cool to rescue their girl!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Bless Sam for being Edward's friend! I figured Bella was passing a clue somehow, smart girl that she is!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank the good lord both her dad and boyfriend are cops!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Son-of-a-bitch! That was scary and out of left field!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
This is just as great as I thought it would be, you guys rock!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 15
I'm really liking the relationship between Edward and Charlie. Plus, his background makes a lot more sense now!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
I suppose that having a relationship of his own has something to do with his more relaxed attitude towards his daughter's !
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
I have a sneaking suspicion that this little outing isn't what Charlie probably had in mind!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
I don't have a problem with the speed of this; been there, done that and it worked out just fine, we celebrate fifty-five years next March! I'm looking forward to Alice and Jasper's wedding!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
I really love that they sang to each other!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
It sure would be more interesting if he plans on sharing that room with her! It sounds to me like they have had a very nice day!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
I will admit to being slightly surprised at Charlie's attitude concerning Edward dating his daughter. Perhaps they have an "understanding"?
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh yes, it's getting serious when he gives her a bicycle helmet to keep her safe! The whole asking out deak was really cute!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Okay, I love that he was worried enough about her to come looking for her! I'll just bet her dad was pissed about those guys assaulting his baby girl!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 6
What is it about Port Angeles and Bella that seems to draw bad guys ? I'm really glad that Edward showed up when he did!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
It has to rouse her curiosity when her dad acts that way. Maybe Edward will satisfy that curiosity?
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
It looks to me as if her fascination with him is reciprocated! He seems to be only mildly concerned about the age difference and her parentage! Should be funny when his old friends find out the truth of his activities.
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
I would bet that Bella might have something to say about Jessica's birthday wish!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
That's what comes of assuming nothing ever changes! A van gets in your way and you fall off your bike! It's kind of nice they sort of know each other. This might be pretty interesting!
Date: 11 Sep 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
I must sympathize with Bella, her dad is kind of taking all the fun out of this, bless his heart!
Date: 01 Jul 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
oh just priceless. just loved this story.
thank you lol
Date: 24 May 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the story
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 25
Fun sweet story. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it! Last chapter was perfect!
Date: 05 May 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this story,.
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 25
wonderful story! I really enjoyed it.
Date: 03 May 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I don't know how you do it but, once again another good read from start to finish.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awe, Charlie gets another chance to be a great father.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks ladies for another entertaining story. Loved your Charlie!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
Alice's reaction was awesome and the old bet was priceless!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 23
I was wondering when all the mental trauma Bella experienced would rear it's ugly head.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
Holy Shit! That was great! I can't believe that is the end. I am greedy and I want more of them! They will be missed! :(
This is such a fantastic story! Thanks for sharing! :)=)
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 24
That was freakin awesome!!! LMAO!!! :)
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sweet end to this lovely fiction. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
That was great. Yayyy!!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
hi, beautiful story, a little too "fast" but a Charlie perfect, the best l've read
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 25
THIS IS AWESOME STORY ..:D SO U SAID A NEW STORY NEXT MONTH LIKE MAY RIGHT
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks good chapters awesome story
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great story,thanks :)
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great ending. Loved it. Thanks a zillion once again. Love you two.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 24
LOL they got him poor Charlie
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 23
Charlie only wants what is best for Bella and Edward is the best for her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Fantastic story.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
I love this charlie ; )
Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
thanks! it was good.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
cute! first Bella gets him, then Edward does! way to shock a pop!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awwweeee!
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
What a lovely HEA!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh what a perfect ending. Charlie was a little show there not getting the hints lol. Loved it.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
:) Loved this story
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh that was funny. Edward would love to see her pregnant
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
That is to bad she is suffering. Dumbass kids. I am glad she is staying with Edward. She needs some fun. Maybe California is what she needs.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 23
WOW!! I love it!!! :)
Date: 29 Apr 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my goodness! Group hugs needed!
I love this story!! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
PTSD for sure!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
so many things happened here. so much time passed in just this one chapter. i love your story, please don't get me wrong, but i wish you had added more detail here and broken it up into more chapters.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
when is Edward going to get his wound treated? I don't agree she's ready to go home, with those injuries. She should have stayed and Edward should be looked at and then stay with her....kudos to him for telling Jessica to treat her normally!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Nice. It's good to see a friendly Jessica for a change
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope Bella listens and stays in bed. I am sure Edward would happily keep her there.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 21
I was not sure if he was just a dickhead or if he was a bad guy guess not. Glad Phil is dead but was hoping Edward would get to beat him a little more
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
That detective is a dick and he is lucky Edward did not kick his ass yet. He did what needed to be done. Woohoo love edward.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
That was sweet of Jessica.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
so glad they found Bella before it was too late.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
Phil should have found out that Bella was rescued efore he died! Thanks
Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 21
I hope snagging this Stefan guy busts a huge trafficking ring. That would be poetic justice.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad that bastard, Phil, is dead. It's good that Edward got there early!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
PHEW! OMG!! I almost didn't make it through this chapter. It is kind of hard to when you almost pass out from holding your breathe! I made it through to the end of the chapter!! ;)