Date: 16 May 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
I look forward to her ruffling his feathers!
Date: 16 May 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hello.
Thanks for sharing this with us!
Can I make a wee suggestion? Not sure if you have a beta on this...but some of you word use is a bit off, and it might be helpful to have it checked over? It's a great story and the mistakes detract from it.
Looking forward to the next chapter! T
Date: 15 May 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
I've been waiting for this! Can't wait to find out what her headstone is all about.
Date: 15 May 2015 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 8
It all started with Her and now Bella has more ?
Date: 15 May 2015 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ooookay! Bella did great with the girls and also with her speech to Edward :D Now he will have to divulge some information to her, because he simply can't negate the fact that her name is on the graveyeard. Is it one of Bella's ancestors or is this stuited for her? Or was it before Carlisle negotiated the peace???
Please update soon, this gets more mysterious every chapter ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 8
This story has me hanging on edge. Always lioking for more! Thankyou for sharing.
Date: 14 May 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
What in the world
Date: 14 May 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh yeah! Finding your name on a headstone after something like that would put a good scare into you! Wonderful chapter - frustrating, but wonderful! I look forward to discovering why Master Cullen is so eager to keep Isabella out of the cemetery and why he doesn't want her to know she has family buried there. Here, I kept picturing her imagining he had her name carved upon it for burying her in! Thank you! I adore mysteries!
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Ugh. Heavy stuff, there. Edward and his staff are very backward in the times. (Jerks, too!!) You might see a gentleman act similarly toward his children/staff upward into "vampire" Edward's era. So why is everyone acting as if they were living in a previous century? Also, I'm not quite sure what to make of the headstone. Is it an ancestor, or a placeholder? 'Cause they way he's been pushing her, it might just end up the latter. So intriguing. Thanks for sharing! :-)
Date: 14 May 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
What a fabulousely, mysteriously, intriguing story. I love it.
Date: 14 May 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward makes me so mad. That was wrong to consider that the girls grades were wrong.
The town is cursed. Theyes seem to lose their loved one to death. How did the town become cursed???
The tomb stone that Bella is seeing is it her grandmother's maybe. As always, I can not wait for the next update.
Date: 14 May 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter, cannot wait for more.
Date: 14 May 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! That interview turn upside down quick! And the gravestone, what the heck?! I look forward to Bella making him come clean... Soon.
Date: 13 May 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
I'm really hoping that's an ancestor & not a placeholder for her
Date: 13 May 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is the one who deserved the beating with the ruler, and to break the ruler on his head, his skull is so thick, LOL ! I wonder if he has some kind of disease, like schizophrénia, or something like that. What a terrible way of treating people, adults as much as children. But I like this story very much, and I would like to think that somewhere, there is hope for all of the characters of this fiction, including Mrs Cope and Mr Whitlock.
Date: 13 May 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 8
Excellent chpater!!!
Date: 13 May 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Uh Oh, I think it´s time for some big explanation
Date: 11 May 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Damn I am so sick of seeing Master Cullen Bella needs to tell him to go fuck him self and keep to Mr Cullen she has that right.
Date: 11 May 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
This Edward is all kinds of fucked up Bela needs to run.
Date: 11 May 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
I thought they were to discuss the stupid contract he wants her to abide by. And she should go stay with Angela. She wouldn't let her be homeless.
Date: 11 May 2015 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yea this guideline is just something he has created for Bella since Whitlock talks to him any way he wants. Sh needs to demand to leave.
Date: 11 May 2015 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Ok I'm confused what year is this? Master Cullen that sounds like the 1700's but they have cars, they are in New York and she wears pants. He talks like he is prehistoric.
Date: 11 May 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
Damn she needs to go to the cops and press charges ass, he also needs those kids taken away for physical abuse.
Date: 11 May 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
I would hav walked out of that house and called DHR.
Date: 08 May 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Time to get a phone and call the FBI false imprisonment. He acts as ofc he owns her. She's can't leave eat, do, or have anything without his permission.
Date: 07 May 2015 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
MasterCullen should worry more about his staff than Isabella.
Date: 07 May 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Very interesting. Curious to learn the history.
Date: 07 May 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Crazy chapter I loved it can't wait for her to be told this secret I am so lost at what it could be and I love that
Date: 06 May 2015 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 7
But she's still hungry!!!!
Date: 06 May 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
What is the night of assessment? My theory is the curse has something to with losing the one you love. But what does that have to do with Bella and her family?
Date: 06 May 2015 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
She's gonna go crazy in that place! Good chapter!!!
Date: 06 May 2015 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
She is a spitfire! I would be so frustrated if I was her... Not able to make a call or go into town... What the heck is going on!????
Date: 06 May 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
What the hell is going on this poor girl is lost
Date: 06 May 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
If I was her I would be screaming like a crazy person shit has to change in this place them poor girls.
Date: 06 May 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'd love to get a good look at that cemetery! Bella is drawn to it and Master Cullen is terrified she will find something there that helps her put 2+2 together. Mrs. Cope needs a takedown! This is one of the most fascinating fictions I have ever read. I keep trying to put the puzzle piece together. Thank you!!
Date: 05 May 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Every one is so sad in this story. Hopefully Bella can bring some happiness into this dismal place.
Date: 03 May 2015 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really love this story.
Date: 02 May 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
She's got fire
Date: 01 May 2015 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 6
At thisoint it's hard to say who's more confused and upended - Master Cullen or Bella. He wants her gone yet he doesn't, he disapproves of her yet in some ways his very being inwardly approves. Quite the mystery you have set before us! I love it! Thank you for working so hard to make this so unique and so special!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 6
Excellent chapter!!!
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow. I can't wait to hear the story of the Swans
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
He really don't know what he want regarding Bella. I'm glad she stays if only for the girls. The other adults in this mansion are asses. Thank you for the great chapter.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
I knew it would not take Edward long to kiss her. I also knew he would be mad at himself. I would still like to know more about Edward and Charlie's relationship. Does Edward not eat breakfast with them? I am dying to know what he thinks of her dress.
Date: 23 Apr 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 5
He needs to be careful he is about to undo all he just did
Date: 22 Apr 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
She's going to have some good response that will throw him off
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
I just discovered your story (rec on Facebook), I AM HOOKED! More please.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am wondering what is going to happen in the heat of the moment when he reprimands her. Will there be a heated kiss? Thanks for a little more of the past.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yep he's still an ass!!! Good chapter!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
She sure knows how to upset the Master LOL!!!
Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 3
Excellent chapter!!!
Date: 17 Apr 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 4
I cant wait for the rest of the story
Date: 14 Apr 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
I enjoy this chapter very much. Thank you for sharing this very particular and mysterious story.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
She needs to tell him that they are her favorite designer jeans.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't catch a break
Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 4
I cant wait for the rest of the story what is it with the Swan's and what stick is up Mr. Whitlocks ass????? She has made Alice happy love that
Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love how she helped little Alice. I wonder what "Master" Edward will think of it. Lol. Can not wait to find out about Bella's family past. Hope you update soon.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
T his is a hard story to read. It is so sad.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can not wait to find out what the history is with the Sawns.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella's got some work to do
Date: 10 Apr 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
A very unique and fascinating idea for a storyline! It's wonderful! Also, the push/pull between these two is quite interesting. There are so many hidden secrets! I keep thinking of it set in Edwardian England for some reason. It would fit almost as well there because the writing is so good. I look forward to discovering who ultimately wins out in this tornament. Also, the secrets of the Cemetary interest me as well. Kudos on three chapters well done!
Date: 09 Apr 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loving it she full of fire and he needs that
Date: 09 Apr 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow what a place I can't wait to find out more
Date: 09 Apr 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
She has a lot to teach him because he is a total tool asshole.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2015 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it, but I'm so confused abouth this town and the history of the Swans.
Date: 08 Apr 2015 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hehe, Bella has found her eagerness and confidence again! :) She will be successful in helping the girls, I'm sure, and I'm glad that she knows that it will be difficult to change her master's habits! But I'm also sure that if she is persistent enough, he will come up with the background behing his actions and maybe both will understand each other better.
Yes, it's a mystery what happened to both of their families and why Edward knew her father. But I hope that you will not keep us waiting for too long ;)
See you soon!
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2015 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love this story.
Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is going to be a great read can't wait for chapter three
Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 2
Very very interesting. What is the deal about the Swans? What is the history behind that. What has happened to Edward that has left him so cold hearted? Can't wait for you to write more.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story so far. Master Cullen is such an ass. I love that Bella isn't putting up with his crap.
Date: 02 Apr 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Excellent chapter, I so like it. Thank you, thank you, thank you.
Date: 02 Apr 2015 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
I assume that it will take a while for us to learn why Edward acts the way does, but this is truly horrible! No matter what happened before, but he can't be serious in treating his children like this! I hope that Bella will soon break his spell and show him that being correct and cold as ice is not the solution to everything...
I'm curious for Bella's adventures in town and eager to see how the inhabitants react to her!
See you yoon :)
Date: 02 Apr 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! I'm loving this already. I wonder about the curse Edward talks about and the fued with the Swan's.
I had to laugh at Bella not eating the broccoli. She was really dumb for leaving her purse and everything she owns in her room. I hope if she sees someone, like an officer, she climbs a tree or finds a place to hide. Then again, if it is an officer, would the officer know of Charlie and show Bella respect for her fathers service by helping her and not throwing her in jail? Looking forward to more!
Date: 02 Apr 2015 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH, this is going to be fun!! I don't know who is going to be the most frustrated, Master Cullen or Isabella. I shrieked and fist-pumped my way through this chapter. I can't wait to see what that last clause reads. Great chapter!
Date: 02 Apr 2015 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Definitly medieval and an ass LOL - good chapter!!!
Date: 02 Apr 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting start to a story! You already have me hooked!! I'm assuming that this takes place in modern times, due to the fact that Isabella has school loans. However, it reminds me of old English mysteries that I used to love. I'm excited to read more of your wonderful story.
Date: 02 Apr 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can not wait to read more. This sounds very interesting.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
Well, damn. I think Isabella will be a good influence in the Cullen house. Though I'm fearful that she might be on the business end of that temper of his before she saves the children from his wrathful behavior.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1
:) looking forward to reading this
Date: 24 Mar 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am really curious what this is going to be like... In what time or age does the story take place? I assume it's our time, but the while setting seems really mysterious!
I'm definitely on board here ;)
Date: 24 Mar 2015 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Uh, hmm. Intriguing........ :o)
Date: 24 Mar 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very intriguing start. I am interested in how this will go.