Date: 31 May 2015 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 50
Thank you for all the recent updates. I promise myself I'll save several chapters up before reading so I can enjoy the story without wondering what the next chapter will bring but I just can't resist ... they're so engaging!
Keep up the great writing.
Date: 31 May 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 50
Much wiser. Counsel given and taken. Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 50
At least she listened to Jasper
Date: 31 May 2015 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 50
I knew he wasn't trustworthy! Really happy Bella listened to Jasper although unhappily. Love the chapter as always and I am very excited for more, I wanna know what happened to Edward.
Date: 31 May 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 49
Love the chapter! Bella is so stubborn into getting what she wants :D Excited for the next chapter I wonder what will happen next.
Date: 31 May 2015 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 49
She is a smart girl but she needs to see Edward
Date: 30 May 2015 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 48
I think it's a trick
Date: 30 May 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 48
hmmmm. not sure what to believe
Date: 30 May 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 48
Let us hope Garrett is not a bad guy.
Date: 30 May 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 48
She should not trust him! I feel that he is suspicuious...I hope Jasper convinces her to stay or something and I hope Edward is ok. love the chapter as always.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2015 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 48
I hope she listens to Jasper
Date: 30 May 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 48
Something is not right I think Edward would of told the guard to talk to Jasper or tell her that she needs to do what Edward told her.
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 47
Your so bad lol, but love the Clift your leaving us to hang on.
Date: 28 May 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 47
Oh No! Please tell me Edward will be ok!
Date: 28 May 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 47
Wow that many traitors? I thought maybe a few but not half the guards! Love it and excited for more.
Date: 28 May 2015 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 47
That's a hard blow!
Date: 28 May 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 46
Edward has never been in love before how sweet he is. I wish for him to return to her fast but she will be strong to all but Tiffany she has found a good friend in her
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 47
Oh no!!! This is not good.
Date: 26 May 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 45
They're in love. They might not realize it yet. I would worry also. She is all alone now. She needs to find something to keep her busy while he's gone.
Date: 22 May 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 45
Very touching moment when she gave him something before he left. Love the chapter!
Date: 22 May 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 45
Awwwwwww, such a tender heart~~
Date: 22 May 2015 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 45
Agh......not a good feeling at all! Stay safe Edward!
Date: 22 May 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 45
She is the women he never new he needed
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 45
That is so romantic.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 32
Both Emmett and Jasper have been in positions that found Isabella less than safe. Their Laird will be furious once he finds out. I wonder if this person that attacked Isabella is the traitor to Edward?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 31
Oh great! Just what Edward feared. Isabella would find trouble where ever she went.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hm, I'm intrigued by Carlise and his daughter. Motive? Possible but unlikely.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
This changes the lay of the land.
I wonder what price was paid to give up Edwards name and the arbitrary agreement between the Baron and the Graham clan?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
If that last statement didn't start the fight I'm not see what would.
Is Edward a jealous man or overly protective? Possibly both.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 27
They are of similar minds, yet unable to bridge the communication gap.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm laughing at the male psyche as it tries to decipher the female mind. You have created the most pleasant kind of confusion between these two lovers.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
Their sparks will be creating an intense heat when they finally figure out how to communicate with each other!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
Temper, temper. Your Laird will be paddling that sweet behind if you push to hard for answers, Isabella.
Jasper must be snickering behind his facade.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
At least Tiffany knows she was a virgin bride. Also that she had no instruction as to what was going to happen on her wedding night.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward is very lucky to have a responsive wife!
They only have a few days before the English descend upon the land.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
Her head was over ruled by her body! Hehehe. Persuasive thing, those hormones and feelings!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
She had no female confidants prior to this night so it's understandable that she is terrified. The English kept their daughter's very sheltered.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Trust. Hm, it has to be earned Edward.
Lady of the house......she wields more power now than she imagined, with the exception of her husband.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm not sure their wedding will be recognized by the English. Though, the wedding night will definitely be an issue for the Barron.
The obey issue will always be a point of contention between Isabella and Edward until they learn to love and respect each other.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 17
But will Edward's men fight to protect an English women? I hope Tiffany can help ease Isabella's fears somewhat.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Who has the most shocked look on their face, Emmett or Isabella? Lol
Edward didn't even ask! Will she accept him when she knows the strife she will cause his household.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 15
Well, if heads don't roll they will definitely be in trouble for the mistreatment of their Laird's guest.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
Has Jasper informed Edward of Isabella's treatment so far within the castle.
Does he know she hasn't eaten all day?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good thing Jasper values his life and the duties assigned him by his Laird.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 12
The Lady is naive and just asking for trouble. Will father Brennen walk her back to the castle?
I have a feeling Edward will be escorting her personally.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
They burgeoning attraction is definitely mutual.
Alister is creepy.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
I hope for Isabella's sake that Tiffany will become the confidant she is so desperately needing.
You have not mentioned if Lady Swan's mother is still alive.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
I wonder if Isabella will loose her way in the castle trying to find the dining hall?
Wouldn't it be interesting to be a fly on the wall of that kitchen listening to the scuttlebutt about the English stranger in their midst.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, that introduction could have gone better. At least Isabella's worst fears weren't realized. It would appear that Edward's family is wealthy and provides for several families.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 7
They seem to be of the same mind in regard to the clan receiving her in his home.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is going to be a painstaking ride for Edward. What will he do to make it more enjoyable for him and his men?
Where were they headed when they crossed paths with Lady Swan in distress?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
Do any of the other men with Edward speak English? Or is Gaelic their language of choice?
Has Edward been educated outside of his home?
He can be a bit smug when she is mesmerized by his eyes. Haha She is in more trouble than she can even imagine.
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 4
What is the age difference between them?
Edward said the clan wouldn't accept her as his Lady. Does that mean his is head if the clan or in line to take over?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 3
It's been a long day of excitement for Lady Swan. I wonder if she will eventually fall asleep in Edward's arms?
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
Bella has found herself in a new predicament!
This ride is going to get very interesting!
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Careful what you wish for Lady Swan!
A beast of a man you say, just what she needs!
I wish I could remember where this recommendation came from in order to give credit where credit is due. Alas my memory fails me.
Date: 21 May 2015 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 44
good
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Date: 21 May 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 44
Sweet moments
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Date: 20 May 2015 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 44
She needed that
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Date: 20 May 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 44
Bella needs to take care of herself. How does she expect to fight in her weakened state?
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Date: 20 May 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 44
Love how he reassures her and comforts her! Love the chapter as always.
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[Report This]Date: 20 May 2015 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 44
:)
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Date: 20 May 2015 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 43
he is so worried about her
Date: 20 May 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 43
Love seeing the notification that this story has updated. You have me hooked. XOXO,Cheri
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[Report This]Date: 20 May 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 43
Poor Isabella it would be hard not to know what to do in that situation.
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Date: 19 May 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 43
Love the chapter as always
Date: 15 May 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Bella should know how evil some people can be when they don't get their way. She only needs to look at her father and that old English man
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 42
; )
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Date: 14 May 2015 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 42
He is going to make sure she is safe
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 42
I can understand why Isabella was concerned. She is attacked, she sees this dead body, then Edward shows her this secret passage & gives her a weapon.
I also can understand that Edward wants to protect Isabella.
Love this story so much.
Date: 13 May 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loving this story! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 12 May 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 41
I love this story!!
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[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 41
Loving your story so much.
Date: 12 May 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 41
Excited to read more!
Date: 12 May 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
He is so worried about her
Date: 11 May 2015 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 40
Love this chapter! I am excited for more!
Date: 11 May 2015 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 40
Edward is not happy and losing control someone will pay for this.
Date: 10 May 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 39
Surprised Edward didn't think to hold Tiffany and let the real assailant believe he stopped looking.
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