Date: 02 Nov 2020 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 45
I have so enjoyed both your stories. Hope you keep writing. Thank you.
Date: 02 Nov 2020 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 43
Finally. Just wished Alice would have gotten her head out of her ass. Loved the surprised wedding.
Date: 02 Nov 2020 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 43
Finally. Just wished Alice would have gotten her head out of her ass. Loved the surprised wedding.
Date: 02 Nov 2020 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 32
Edward always does shit and thinks "I'm sorry" justified it!!! It's getting really old Edward.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 24
A little to late Carlisle. You put yourself ahead of your son.
Date: 01 Nov 2020 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13
That poor child. First grandma and now Charlie.
Date: 19 Oct 2017 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 45
Mwah! Loved it. It broke my heart several times. It made me cheer and made me happy. Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reading this until the end I really appreciate it. Many people haven't and got really nasty about it. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. xx
Date: 16 Oct 2017 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 45
You can't see me, but I'm pouting right now because this story has ended. I loved the ending. I liked the way you wrapped up every part of the story and it's characters. I'm gonna miss them. I hope you have time to write another one. Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria
Thank you for taking the time to read the story.
I will admit I was a little nervous about the end chapter. But it has been recieved well.
I've been asked if I will be writing any thing about all there children, especailly Kim. I'm not sure if it would be received that well.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2017 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 45
Great story
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read it, and for leaving a review. I'm glad you liked the story.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2017 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 45
Wow has it really been two and a half years of following your great story. You have accomplished so much and are an inspiration for all of us. Thank you for sharing your time and talents. I appreciate your work so much. Best Wishes in the future. -Ajfflady-Beth
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for sticking with me until the end. I will admit it has been hard to write it. But I've had some amazing people helping me.
With me been 56 years old things are so much diffrent in my time than now, especailly with been from England. I'm also a Grandma I look after my 2 granddaughters twice a week while my daughter and her hubby work full time.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 45
:) loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and taking the time to review the story. I really appreciated your support.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 45
Thank you. I really enjoyed it
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing the story. I appreciate your support through out the story.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 45
Great story. I loved reading it.
Author's Response:
Thank you for supporting me through this story, I appreciate you reading it and reviewing.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 31
Her security net is being dismantled. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
She has a long way to go, but she always has someone by her side.
Date: 09 Oct 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter. Thanks
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Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 08 Oct 2017 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 08 Oct 2017 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
The beginning of communication. At last. I think it's hey made the right decision to postpone their marriage. Good chapter. Thank you
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
One thing Carlisle was right about and that is they have to learn to fight for each other. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for still reading and reviewing.
Date: 07 Oct 2017 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
Wow. Complicated. Good read. Thanks
Author's Response:
At least Carlisle/Peter has come clean, although he should have done it a long time ago.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Stressful. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 22
Sweet. I wonder if the 'opposition' is laying in wait to spoil/stop the wedding. Good read thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you, at least it wasn't Tanya or Carlisle, so it will be easier to explain to Bella.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh No. Not the Hair!!! Really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks
Date: 06 Oct 2017 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh No. Not the Hair!!! Really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
The hair in this chapter is based on my wedding day. When I married my hubby 32 years ago, he decided to go out with his friends the night before the wedding. As a joke when he was drunk they dyed his hair blonde, and put a perm solution on it. So instead of brown hair it had gone yellow and his hair looked like the strawman from the wizard of oz.
As I walked down the aisle I couldn't work out what he had on his head until I got next to him. They had to wait 10 minutes for me to stop laughing at him. I wish I could show you a picture.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 20
So pleased all is back on track. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 06 Oct 2017 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 19
Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and review the chapter.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
Rose is overreacting but thank goodness for the blood test.
Author's Response:
In a later chapter you will learn why she reacts like she does.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Gee. You weren't wrong about it being tough. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for your thoughts. I hope it didn't upset you to much.
Date: 06 Oct 2017 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I wonder if he'll be drug tested? Lightweight yes, but he's behaviour was really extreme
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for explaining some of the motivations.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. That chapter had a lot of discussions with my beta, pre-reader and friends. We all tried to work out where to put it in the story.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
A good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continuing support.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh! Most unexpected. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, and sticking with the story.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow what a turn around. Good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
It's great now they have Esme on their side.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 11
Really enjoyed this chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continuing support.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 10
Are his family on drugs? Unbelievable. Hood chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
You know what they say, you can chose your friends but not your family.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am disappointed in bella's reaction to Tanya. How about her standing up for her man? How much proof does she need. Words do not equal actions. However, good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for your continuing support, Tanya is really desperate, all will be revealed soon.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Regardless of how hurt Bella was she should have given him the chance to speak. She knew Jessica was malicious in her disclosure of the article. She has known Edward for months, yes she has a history of being duped and hurt, but to completely wipe him like that... shows a lack of trust and maturity. Nothing wrong with saying 'I can't talk to you just now I'm too upset. Allow me time to calm...' Also, love is just the feel good emotion in a relationship. Trust, respect, loyalty and friendship create the concrete that holds a relationship together. Understandable reaction from Bella. Disappointing too. However, good chapter. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for continuing to read. I hope you don't get to frustated.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I don't understand Esme. Carlisle I can believe. Thank goodness I've never come in contact with someone like her
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I hope you stick it out, some people accused me of writing anguish for the sake of it. They stopped reading. It does serve a purpose as you follow two late bloomers.
Date: 05 Oct 2017 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 6
I was raised by my grandmother and that can be a special kind of love. Still miss her 42 years later. Thank you for bringing forth some of those memories.
Author's Response:
Me too. I loved both of my Grandparents. But I think my soft spot was my Granddad, he was so funny.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2017 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved the innocence of their relationship. Now Emmett!? All good intentions aside he seriously needs a reality check. Thank for writing
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for leaving a review. Poor Emmett is clueless lol.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2017 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
This chapter was wonderful to read. Is it the quiet before the storm? Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. Your in for a bumpy ride.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2017 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol. How terrible. How painful. When it's happening to someone else...lol! Thank you. I am still gaping like a goldfish!
Author's Response:
Thank you for continuing to read this.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Good read. Thank you
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Oct 2017 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
An good start. Different. Unusual. Draws the reader in. Thanks
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you enjoyed the first chapter. I hope you stay for the ride.
Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 44
I waited forever fo read this amazing story! Thanks for such a great adventure
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading the story. It has been a long time writing it. One last chapter as soon as my beta finishes with it.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2017 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 44
:)
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Thank you for reading and leaving a review.
Date: 15 Aug 2017 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 43
I loved the surprise wedding! So awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the wedding. The next chapter is with the beta. I'm writing the last chapter now.
Date: 11 Aug 2017 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 43
Finally.
Author's Response:
Glad you like the chapter. It was a nice wedding :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 43
Awesome
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Thank you for leaving a review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.
Date: 06 Aug 2017 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 43
I did enjoy it. His father is still a bit off. Alice hasn't changed. Loved the happiness.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving me a review. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the wedding. Bella is really a forgiving person, I don't know how many people would have invited Peter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2017 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 43
:)
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Thank you for leaving me a review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2017 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 43
That was a great surprise! I wasn't expecting a wedding and planned by Bella no less. I was shocked that Peter was invited and showed up even. If that doesn't scream what a tollerent person Bella is, then nothing does. After everything he did to Esme, Edward and Bella, him getting an invite is amazing. I just love this stoy and it makes my day when it gets updated. Thank you, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria, I'm so glad you liked the wedding. I thought a surprise wedding would stop Edward over thinking things. I love Bella she is a really strong person, and is forgiving. A better person than me. Although that was a little bit of my wedding day.
Date: 05 Aug 2017 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 43
Perfect wedding. Glad Peter had enough sense to keep Alice away
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving me a review. The wedding was a nice, and personal. Peter can be a really decent person. He must feel bad about hurting Edward and Bella.
Date: 03 Jul 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 42
OMG!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!! I stumbled on urbane have read it straight through over the last several days reading every free minute. I've definitely got this on alert. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for this review. I've had so much negative feedback that I have stopped writing a couple of times. So I'm so grateful for these kind words.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 42
The chapter was perfect. Love the emotions you make me feel.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving me a review.
Date: 29 Jun 2017 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 41
So good. Heartbreaking though.
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Thank you for leaving me your thoughts.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2017 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 42
:)
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Thank you for continuing to read this story.
Date: 28 Jun 2017 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 42
:) :) <3
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, we are almost there. I hope you will enjoy the next two chapters. Xx
Date: 28 Jun 2017 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 42
Glad to see them moving forward and getting settled in their lives
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I hope you will like the next two chapters.q
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2017 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 41
OMG, I found this story and could not put it down this entire weekend. You write a mean story. The expected did not always happen which made this story so unique. I love not being able to anticipate the outcome of the different situaltions. This is one of the best stories on E&B that I've read. That in-itself is of the chart awesom and I have truly read alot of stores. Your story put many writters to shame.
Author's Response:
Wow... thank you so much for this amazing review. I'm a 55 mother of 5 and a grandma of 2 amazing grandchildren. I wrote this story to prove someone with dyslexia can actually write. Iv'e had a couple of amazing beta (even though one got frustrated and asked me to get another beta).
I also can almost tick it from my bucket list. I've had a lot of negative reviews, which actually had me in tears. So I'm really grateful for your kind words. It has help me want to finish this story. So thnak you. xx
Date: 18 May 2017 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 41
Bella says she is scared. Edward is more scared. She needs to think of him sometimes. She is still selfish.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review. I think they are both nervous about there decision they are making. Bella was hurt when Edward was so reckless when they where both in Chicago.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2017 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 41
You can't see me, but I'm doing the "Snoopy" dance. That's my version of the happy dance. Finally they are together. Rose will probably say she gave in too soon, but I don't think she did. What's her deal anyway? Sure she was there for Bella when she left Edward, but I'm sure Bella was there for her when Emmett left her to follow his dream. And she took him back immediately and married him even. She's just gonna have to get over it. I was shocked too when Katie called Edward daddy. Thanks for the update.
Maria
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2017 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
You can't see me, but I'm doing the "Snoopy" dance. That's my version of the happy dance. Finally they are together. Rose will probably say she gave in too soon, but I don't think she did. What's her deal anyway? Sure she was there for Bella when she left Edward, but I'm sure Bella was there for her when Emmett left her to follow his dream. And she took him back immediately and married him even. She's just gonna have to get over it. I was shocked too when Katie called Edward daddy. Thanks for the update.
Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria, A few people joined you in a happy dance ;) Sometimes people get caught up in the moment, I'm sure that is what Rose and Emmett did. I got caught up in the moment 32 years ago when I married a guy I had only knew for 3 days. But surprise we are still together, with 5 children, but I suppose I was lucky it could of gone wrong.
Katie had heard her friends in daycare call there dad's daddy and she has just done the same. Like Garrett did with Bella. One of my daughters is a school teacher, and she told me that a few of the children in her class have called her mom. She said they say it without thinking lol.
Date: 12 May 2017 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 41
Huge chapter. Huge. Rose needs to realize how wrong she was. Emmett needs some manners. Loved Bella and Edward this chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to leave a review. It was a bit of a long chapter. I did think about putting into two, but decided not to. Most people have been disappointed with Rose, she will try and fix her mistakes I'm sure. Bella and Edward are getting along, about time ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2017 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 41
:)
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Thank you as always for leaving a review.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
You go Bella! Our Bella has become a lean, mean, ass-kicking, momma machine. I like it. Rose and Emmett marrying, didn't see that coming. That was a shocker. And loving Nana Esme and Grandpa Alistair. You can always count on Esme. I hope all is well with you. Thanks for the update, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria I haven't had a laptop the old one died on me so I wasn't able to respond to reviews. Thank you as always. I'm glad you still like the story and the new improved Bella.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2017 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
You go Bella! Our Bella has become a lean, mean, ass-kicking, momma machine. I like it. Rose and Emmett marrying, didn't see that coming. That was a shocker. And loving Nana Esme and Grandpa Alistair. You can always count on Esme. I hope all is well with you. Thanks for the update, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria, thank you for leaving a review. Forst I have to tell you, I went to the hosptial today and they told me I'm in remission. I couldn't believe it.
As for Bella I love the new stronger Bella, she keeps shocking poor Edward. Let's just see how momma bear she gets on Rose and Emmett once she get's back home.
Date: 01 Apr 2017 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
I love mama bell and contrite Edward. Crossing fingers here. Head knocks for rose and Emmett.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading the story and leaving a review. You haven't seen momma Bella in action yet, I wonder what Edward will think once he hears what she has to say to Rose ;)
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2017 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 40
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review I apprecaite it.
Date: 07 Mar 2017 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 39
Rose has been a problem from the very beginning. She feels she should control Bella. She is a bully.
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for reading and reviewing. You will be pleased to know that Rose will no longer be telling the new stronger Bella what to do. Bella has got very good at standing up for herself.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2017 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 39
I hope Edward doesn't turn down the job offer to Lakewood if he gets it just because Bella works there too. He was excited about before he found out, so I hope he doesn't let Bella ruin it. The guy has been through enough and has more than atoned for his mistakes. He deserves something to go his way. And Bella really needs to get control over her friends. Only she should decide if she wants to see Edward and hear him out. I know Chief George, Emily, Nessie and Rose are only looking out for her, but that is not their decision to make. and all I can say about Alice is "WOW"! How can someone go from loving and supporting you incredibly shy brother, to wishing he had died? Is she done in this story or will she make an appearance? Thanks for the update! I hope you are able to update again soon. I really enjoy this story. Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria Thank you for reading and reviewing. You will be pleased to know that you wont be seeing Alice again. I have plans for Edward and they are in Lakewood, so don't worry. You have to remember that they are telling their story to there Granddaughter, and her mother is called Siobhan, so they have had at least one child together :)
I am working on the next chapter, but my daughter is having another baby, and has high blood pressure so I've been having my granddaughter so she can rest. We don't call her hurricane Rosie for nothing. When her dad comes and picks her up I'm really tied. I only had another surgery 3 weeks ago.
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2017 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 39
Will they ever get back together?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. They will definatly get back together, they are telling this story to their Granddaughter :)
Date: 01 Mar 2017 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 39
Great update but why can't he take the job?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. With it been so close to him coming home he is still very jumpy. It hasn't even been a year since he was shout. I have written it so he will still go with her back to Lakewood but he will get one of his dreams when it comes to his career.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2017 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 22 Feb 2017 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 38
Bella is finally showing she has a heart. Edward needs her. She broke him and now needs to help him live again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Edward is definitely here to stay.
Date: 22 Feb 2017 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 37
Edward is still amazing. I hope Bella stops blaming him for all her problems.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you think Edward is amazing, as I do, but lots of readers don't like him.
Date: 15 Jan 2017 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 38
I am so happy they talked
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review. Its great they are talking.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yea! They finally meet again. I know it won't be easy, but I'm glad their finally at least in the same zip code. And no wonder Edward has PTSD. His story made me cry. I sure hope Katie is all right. Now to get Rose and Emmett back together. Or at least in the same zip code. Thanks for the update. Maria
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving me a review.
I'm so sorry I made you cry. In 1984 - 1985 I was with save the children in Ethiopia, although I never witness anything Edward did, but I helped care for thousands of children who where literally starving. It was heart breaking.
It's great that Edward and Bella are in the same zop code. But Rose and Emmett are closer than they realise.
Date: 14 Jan 2017 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thanks for updating. Glad they found each other again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review. I'm glad they have found each other as well.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 38
:) :) :)
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Thank you for leaving me a review.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 38
Thanks for updating. Glad they found each other again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving me a review. Let's hope it can get better.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 38
Well worth waiting for.
Author's Response:
Thank you as always for the review. Happy New Year.
Date: 13 Jan 2017 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
thanks very much for the update. Sorry for your problems. As always good story
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review, I'm so glad you enjoy the story.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2017 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 38
So sad.....
Author's Response:
Thanks as always for the review. Happy New Year.
Date: 06 Jan 2017 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 37
Pleaseupdate
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for leaving a review. I have been ill for the past 2 years, and I have been back in hospital and had another surgery, plus treatmet afterward. I have another surgery next month, which will hopefully be the last. The next chapter is with the beta, but she has the kids on holiday. As soon as she sends it back I will put it straight up. Sorry you've had to wait such a long time.
Date: 03 Dec 2016 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 37
Ahhhhhhh! That is a horrible place to leave this. I do love how competent Bella acts now with the kids.
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for leaving me a review. I know I'm cruel leaving it in such a horrible place. Bella is certainly a stronger woman know. We just have to wonder can Edward met up the her new standards ;)
Date: 03 Dec 2016 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 37
What a way to reunite!. I'm curious about something the nurse said. Does Edward have a picture of Bella & Katie?
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for leaving a review. So glad you like this story. Yes Edward has a picture of Bella, but not Katie. He doesn't know anything about the children. Finding out Bella was Katie's guardian came as a shock to him. He already thinks she could have moved on.
Date: 03 Dec 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 37
Yeah! They finally see each other, but the situation sucks big ones. I hope little Katie is going to be ok. Edward seems like a very good doctor. I liked how he talked to Katie, telling her what was happening even though, I'm assuming, she was still unconscious. I was surprised about Emmett. After 7 years apart, I can't wait to see how they react to each other after they make sure Katie is going to be ok.
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Hi Maria, thank you for leaving a review. Everyone seems glad they have finally found each other. Edward is an excellent doctor how can Katie not get better. All we need now is for them to put there differences to the side and move on. Now all we need is a Rose and Emmett HEA ;)
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2016 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 37
I freaking knew it!!! I really love this story!!!
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for your review. How easy was it to guess the doctor was Edward? So glad you enjoy this story.
[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Katie. I hope she will be alright
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. Glad you enjoy reading this little story.
Date: 02 Dec 2016 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 37
So glad they finally get to meet again. Hope Katie is ok. Love this story.
Author's Response:
Hi thank you for leaving me a review. They both seemed surprised to met each other. Lets hope they can hash out their differences. How can Katie not get well with a great doctor as Edward ;)
Date: 23 Nov 2016 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 36
Well I wasn't expecting that, but that was a great little twist. Little Garrett just about broke my heart, the little cutie. Bella will make a great mom/big sister. Are we getting closer to an E&B reunion? I know you said that they would be apart for quit awhile, but it's been 4 years. Are we close? How is Alice still so mean? She was on Edward and Bella's side in the beginning but then she believed everything Jasper, her dad and others said about them and turned into an evil bitch. You would think that after everything that they said was proven to be utter bullshit, she would see the error of her ways, but I guess after last chapter she still hasn't. I hope it's Bella herself that knocks the hell out of her. Thanks, Maria
Date: 21 Nov 2016 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 36
Ok I kind of really like the twist with the kids. I wish she could have had a chance at romance though. I really do want a hea though.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and leaving a review. There is still time for her to get her romance back in her life. You are going to get your hea... promise.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 36
:)
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Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Date: 26 Oct 2016 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
good, i'm glad he is trying to atone and suffer...and you didnt make this
easily resolved & quickly after everything that went on.
i do wish however that the "takedown" or rejection of Renata was
a bit more than it was...wanted to see her really get what
she had coming to her for all that she did. brutal and vindictive?
hell, yes! oh, and i hope alice gets her just desserts too...
i have a feeling peter is being conned somehow.
Author's Response:
Thank you for leaving a review. I thought about Edward been more brutal with Renata, but my beta thought it would make Edward look more of a horrible person. We will see in a few chapter what has happened to both Peter and Alice.
Date: 25 Oct 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 35
Sorry to hear of your hospital stay. I hope that you're in good health now.
I like how you're handling their separation.
It seems that Alice takes after Peter in many ways. I wonder with Charlotte being from Texas if there is a connection with Jasper.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I have 2 more surgerys and hopefully all the cancer will be gone and they can repair the damage it has left behind. It's been a long 2 years. But my daughter is having another baby in April so I have something to look forward to.
I'm glad you liked the way the separation bit of this story. I just hope you like the next chapter will Bella. Both these chapters took me a while to write.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2016 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 35
Alice is a real bitch and I'd like to smack the smirk right off of her face. Great chapter, and I hope you're feeling better soon!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Your not the only one who wants to smack Alice, she has not learnt from what she has done to them both.
I have 2 more big surgerys and hopefully the cancer will all be gone. It's been a long 2 years.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2016 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
A sad chapter, I hope the next one will be a reunion
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Edward has come to terms with his mistakes and is trying to improve himself. We will learn how Bella has handled the separation in the next chapter, then who knows what can happen after that ;)