[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
james is not going to like it
Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG, this was a brilliant chapter. I love how detailed you are in your descriptions of everything, it is wonderfully helpful to picture it. I really love this story and look forward to each and every chapter update...thank you for sharing with us
~Helen xxx
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 13
Referee, this is so exciting, love love love, it
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
LOVE IT!!! Cant wait for more.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
OHHHHHH Boy I never expected that to happen.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
: ) Thank you for my pics. ( he he he ) wow!!! That was... erotic, enlightening, informative and exciting! Oooooo! the possibilities are tempting to say the least. PLEASE! Update ASAP!!! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
I knew it!!!!! Lived the chapter Bella's reaction what what I was hoping for. You've done it again. I love how you draw me into each chapter loving the story more.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think that shocked everyone wow she is good
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
can't wait
Date: 21 Apr 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Really enjoying this story.
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
Absolutely love this story. Best storyline I have read yet, and I read a lot. Pls keep writing. Not very good at reviewing or suggesting what y shld write. I just love to read and enjoy. regards, Pamela
pamjhanley@gmail.com
Author's Response:
Pamela,
Thank you for your kind words. It means a lot to know that people enjoy my storyline and that I am doing a good job. I am new to writing and still feel nervous with every post. If you are on Facebook please join my group and see what I am thinking about doing next and the fun pictures group memeber post...https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/
Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well glad the proposal worked out...they could still merge families...
Date: 20 Apr 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
I enjoy this chapter very much. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter gave me chills.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Omg, please update again soon.. I cannot wait to read what happens next
Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it! Can't wait to read more....
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bravo. Bravo. Well done Clo. Well done. Now settles in and gets ready to PLAY. Drool bucket...check.
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
The end of the chapter gave me goosebumps. I love when that happens. :-)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love this story so much. Thank you and can not wait for the next chap. Just love your characters.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
love it!! more please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
DONT STOP THERE NEED MORE SOOON PLEASE :)
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
so I dont leave reviews but I just love this story and can't wait for more.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13
OMG you are brilliant! I never saw that coming!!!
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 13
I have a feeling that James is NOT going to be happy about the merger. I can't wait for some hot playroom fun.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loving this..That went better than I expected....I wonder what James and Alec will say..
Date: 20 Apr 2015 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
oooh interesting twist. Aro and James will be out to kill her though. Wonder who's going to get to Renee first.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really like this fic but you've put the characters too nice
they're a mob family, they should be more ruthless
Date: 20 Apr 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good thing edward agreed to veing a dom on weekends only, oh edward will love having a powerful donna at his feet on weekends. Love it
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 13
I didnt think Micheal would offer that. But can you imagaine Aro and James reaction to this revalation?
Mercy!!
Looking forward to more!
Oh I love her ring! I have to say I love the pictures you include with this story. They bring your story to life!! :D
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Absolutely loved it
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Somehow I don't think Aro and James are going to take this news very well.
Date: 20 Apr 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
Excellent story line! I am anxiously waiting for the next chapter. Good work and I do so enjoy your writing.
Date: 18 Apr 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great story! Please update soon!
Date: 15 Apr 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 12
As always great chapter full of surprises
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 12
love it, cant wait to see how bella reacts when she finds all this out
Date: 14 Apr 2015 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
Michael better realize that joining the families is the best idea. Edward is not giving up Bella and I hope Bella is too smart to give up Edward.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Omg, I can't wait for more love your story.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
OMG love both u r stories, but this was a shocker...lulled into thinking it was a cool ass fluffy yet kinky mob ward it's turned into so much more! I can't wait for Bella to find out renee only loved aro!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
Stunningly good story! Your characters are complex and well thought out and you make me care what happens to them! Bella 's in for a rude awakening when. She did de out Aro is her father, but then that's one of the things that makes me love this so-o much! Thank you for the hard work you put into your fiction - it really shows! (Also, loving your gifs). 😉
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 12
No pictures!!! : ( Very enlightening chapter. Short but to the point. : ) READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
So sorry for the lack of pictures, but guess what the next chapter is..............................................................
First time in Edward's Playroom soooooo...................I will make up for it in spades.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 12
Renee was just wrong in treating Bella like she did. It was not Bella's fault that Renee got pregnant. You would have thought that since Bella was the only thing that Renee had that was part of Aro, the love of her life, that she would have cherished her. Loving this story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 11
Perfect chapter. Perfect date. Just perfect. When Bella finds out who she really is I think she will not want anything to do with her real family. Loving the pictures.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you! Really enjoying the route this is taking. T
Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Renee was a sick person for blaming Bella for what happened to her. Edward will not let her go.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
I want this edward all for myself!!! Can't wait! Please update soon!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
Like this story very much, even though I am not usually a fan of mob stories. Very good work. Like your use of pictures i n this version.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh boy, the next chapter is going to be a doozy!!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
oh man!! what a conundrum, cant wait to read more
Date: 13 Apr 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
Never thought I'd say this, but Renee deserved what she got. hope Michael doesn't try to kidnap B.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's not fair to blame an innocent child for the circumstance of their birth. My grandmother, who I loved and looked up to, was not fond of me. My father was a horrible man, that is a fact. But he was abusive to me along with the rest of my family and my mother. Still, my cousin was her favorite and I was the red-headed stepchild, so to speak. Like it was my fault. *big sigh* I guess that's why this story has struck a nerve (the way Renee felt about poor Bella). People are just weird.
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 12
Fantastic! I hope they get married quickly lol
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Okay, I think that merging the 2 families will be awesome, and that James is gonna raise a GIGANTIC stink about that little bit of news. Can't wait to see the fallout from all of the info in today's chapter.
Please update again soon. :-)
Date: 13 Apr 2015 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Wow,i for sure thought renee was raped....why didnt aro ever go to renee after? Im thinking micharl likes the idea of joining the two families
Date: 13 Apr 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
I need more please
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
This is getting so juicy! Thanks for updating!
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great update
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, Renee was a fucking bitch till the end. Glad to see her gone. Yep, you got it Michael, you bouncing baby grandson was going to have sex with his half sister. EW! I'm voting to get rid of James and Aro, vote their asses off the island!! Let Edward and Bella get married, and merge the families. And wrap a huge bow around Liam and send him to ME!!!!!! *drooling over Liam*
That is all. :)
Author's Response:
As always I can count on you to tell me like it is. And yes Liam has a red bow around his neck and is on a FED EX truck for a quick deliever to the East Coast by 10am in the morning...
Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Michael seems to be a smart person, thinking to a bunch of possibiities regarding Bella and the futur of his family. He is not blind about James and Aro. Thank you for the update, great chapter.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am hooked on this story, and look forward to what you have planned.
I just hope the news to Bella won't derail her relationship with Edward too much.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Good riddance to Renee. Sorry to talk ill of the dead but this is fiction. lol.
Michael would be smart to let E & E rule the families together. But, James will go ballistic.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 12
can't wait for more i love this story
Date: 12 Apr 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
I can't decide if Michael wants Bella and Edward together or not. It will be interesting to find out what happens.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
soooooooooooo f=ing good
Author's Response:
Date: 12 Apr 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was an amazing date wow. I think she will be happy with what is happening cant wait to find out.
Date: 12 Apr 2015 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Awww sweet date. Guessing James are gonna wanna take out B to hold his place.
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2015 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! I can't wait for more! This story just keeps getting better and better!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
At Bella's insistance I'd like to see them married privately by the end of the next chapter with Esme planning a huge wedding for show. That's just my thoughts. (he he he) That would be an in your face scenario for the Volturi's.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 11
please do not ruin this for them i want her to be edwards wife and submissive and i want her to tell him she does not trust or want to be with that other family please please please otherwise i wont be able to enjoy or read this story anymore
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow!What a chapter! I think it had everything in it and was crazy romantic and hot.
Date: 11 Apr 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
E & B, Very sweet.
I think this will answer many questions for Bella. Why her father, Charlie, ignored her. Why her mother did the same. I'm hoping she will connect with her mother and learn she was a product of rape but that her mother loved her enough not to abort but was trying to protect her. What is still a mystery is why Renee didn't pay attention. I suspect there are reasons we don't know, maybe the same for Charlie as well.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
um i NEED a cold bath now :O lol
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
Your writing is awesome Clo! I love this story! I can't wait to see what happens next!😘
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
WOW excellent chapter, I like it. And to know that James and Bella are siblings ???
And that Bella could possibly be the head of the Volturi family ???
I hope she will be okay after the revelations of who is her real father.
Thank you so much for sharing.
The photos are fantastic.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Based on how well she took the fact that HE is in the Mafia, and in fact, will be the Don, I doubt that she will be upset by that fact. However, I think she will be REALLY upset that she had actual family that may have treated her well during her growing up years, but Renee didn't see fit to let her know. Now THAT I can see her being upset over.
Great chapter, can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Apr 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
I think Bella will choose to remain with Edward. Great pictures as always.
Date: 11 Apr 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY!!! This story combined two of my favorite types of fanfiction mafia and BDSM.
Date: 10 Apr 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 10
My guess was right!
Date: 09 Apr 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
Sounds like Marcus should have shot him in the nuts to start. Glad B will get to use her education.
Date: 08 Apr 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
This can't be good. They can't have her. She is a soon to be Cullen. I love this story.
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10
Omg I hope Aro have good intentions with Isabella and Carlisle can gind out about her origins. Please update soon
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh shit is going to hit the fan and I really hope Bella wants nothing to do with this family!!! Great story!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
some of the manips are terrible but the story is good
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well crap! She is his granddaughter. Well at least he can't try to marry her off to James. But he can try to get her to take over his family seeings how she is 1 month older than James. Can't wait for the next update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 07 Apr 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
Dun dun dun! The plot thickens. Methinks Michael needs to... hem, clean house so to speak. Namely get rid of Aro and James. He really really really needs to talk with Bella, Edward, Carlisle and Esme.