Date: 25 May 2015 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
OH!! Thank you for not one but TWO chapters today!! :)
I am a happy camper!
It seems that Bella is going to be a dominate before long. LOL!!
Loving this and wanting more :D
Date: 25 May 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
now that's how you take care of a bitch. :D
Date: 25 May 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
OH SH!T :O
Date: 24 May 2015 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved how Bella handled Irene. Uh oh Aro's smirk is not a good thing.
Date: 24 May 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm Jake better watch himself if he wants to live.
Can't blame bella for being leery of Michael.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella sait comment prendre des décisions.
Merci pour ce bon chapitre.
Date: 24 May 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this chapter too. Bella needs to control her jealousy though, she is engaged to one very sexy man
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Reaching the end of a chapter is always difficult for me because I always want MORE! That obviously means your doing your magic RIGHT! READ YOU SOON ♥
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 19
omg wait intill he figer it out omg you have to update soon pleasde please
Date: 24 May 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love how Bella asked her Dom for what she needed. Also, love how she handled Edward in the boutique . Lol. Aro and James scare me. Can't wait to find out their reaction to Bella taking over.
Date: 24 May 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm hoping James will get taken out before Michael does
Date: 24 May 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really liked Bella in this chapter. She showed her heritage and took care of the Irina problem herself.
Date: 24 May 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my!! I love this! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
I wonder if Aro's smart enough to put 2 & 2 together.
I had a feeling Aro & James would be up to no good.
Date: 24 May 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
You are too good to us! 2 chapters in as many days? Fantastic!😘
Date: 24 May 2015 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 19
But if they take out Edward, they will still have to deal with the head of the volturie family which happens to be Bella not smart aro.
Date: 24 May 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
loved it! thank you for the update so fast after the other one, cant wait for more
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Ahhh cant wait for more good job Bella
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
Looks like that DNA is surging to the fore front. Excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love Donna. She's a beast!
Date: 24 May 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter I can't wait for the next update!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hi
I think Bella is doing great in every way, in business as an entrepreneur she has taken to create the new complex, as submissive, future wife of Don and Donna. Edward threw what he saw and hit the he did not see, lol. Bella has no emotional ties with his half brother James and father Aro, worse for them because she will eradicate both this life.
Bella and Edward has to take the Volturi before the takeover James and Aro. Michael has announced the highest ranking member of the Volturi family and be protected by their trusted security because high ranking can turn supporting to son Michael and grandson for not wanting an unknown woman in charge and the son of another mafia family opposite to them. Bella will win the trust and support of high members of the Volturi family ranking so they know she. XO.
Date: 24 May 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, so fucking hot. I love this Edward and Bella. Thank you Clo.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2015 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
The hit on James is a good call. I have a bad feeling when the merger is announced though. I'm sure an attempt will be made on both of them but I'm concerned for Michael and Claudia also. I'm getting attached to them.
Date: 24 May 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
FANFRIGGENTASTIC!!! :)
Date: 24 May 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 23 May 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love this story
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
Well done my Dear. Well done. Love the pics. Great choices. So proud of you.
Date: 23 May 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok, I get it, but really, how calm is someone knowing their grandson idea that has been ordered? Or are they glad they didn't have to do it? It would've nice to see some regret, or maybe Michael and Claudia are as brutal and cold as their son & grandson?
enjoying the ride.
Date: 23 May 2015 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this chapter! Thank you for the update! Bella is going to make a strong Donna! She might even give Edward a run for HIS money ;). Lol.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 18
i flove you i flove you :) :):):):)
Date: 23 May 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it!! I can't wait to see where this story will go. Im looking forward to your next update.
Date: 23 May 2015 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 18
Hey I just got caught up! Go Bella!!! I love it when there is a strong female coming out of sweet little Bella Swan. :D So looking forward to MORE of this.
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 23 May 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving the ride! Theses two are one of the all time great power couples. They just get each other on an almost molecular level. Also, I love the characters that surround them! Emmett, while new to the story, is a great asset almost reading Bella's mind. I feel like Jacob is going to be big trouble for them somewhere down the road - but not if Emmett has anything to say about it! Jasper, Carlisle and Esme, Michael and Claudia - they are all standout backups here! Kudos and thank you for a sexy yet intelligent fiction! Ican't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Your review brought tears to my eyes. Thank so much. I enjoy not only writing about Edward and Bella, but all those who are around them. The last word in the title is the most important one....Family. Emmett, Jasper, Carlisle, Esme, Michael and Claudia all are family and their stories are as much apart of this as Edward and Bella. I am so glad that you get it, which means I must be doing okay. Thank you again and hold on tight the next chapter will show the inner Donna coming out and damn she doesn't take any prisoners.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
I love this story. Keep it coming! Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
SWEETIE. ..I look forward to a VERY long, long ride. As for Bella she's amazing isn't she??? and Edward stunning as always! They will be unstoppable. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 23 May 2015 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Michael and Claudia are very clam for just basically signing James death warrant. Glad they are supporting Edward and Bella. Can't wait for more.
Date: 23 May 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow that's an awful decision to make
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 18
omg you need to update soon please i love it
Date: 23 May 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 18
I am loving this, can not wait to read more
Date: 23 May 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loving this story. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2015 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
Absolutely loved it more please
Date: 23 May 2015 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great chapter. I am afraid Jacob will cause more problems in the future.
[Report This]Date: 20 May 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for this chapter.
Kisses
Date: 19 May 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 17
love this story a lot thank you for your time to write it
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 17
Any idea when the next update will be??????? I love and can't wait for more!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 17
OMG !I love your story I can not wait for more.
Date: 15 May 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 17
I know Carlisle and Edward are smart enough to have Aro and James watched. They will end them with or without Michael's blessing.
Date: 14 May 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 16
Once again amazing
[Report This]Date: 14 May 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 17
i say bella and edward take out aro and james before they get the chance
Date: 13 May 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter, thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah, me thinks James is planning to take out more than one Volturi in his claim to the top. Nicely done. Love the intro to the grandmother.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Age.....a state of mind. Well done.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 15
Fucking hot, hot, hot.
Date: 13 May 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 17
Aro and James are so sick. Love how strong Bella can be
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
I don't know how it happened but I missed this chapter : ( What can I say. .. crazy days. I am truly sorry. That being said ... I really wasn't into Esme and Carlisle's D/s activities. I'd rather read more about Bella and Edward. but that's just me.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
As always. .. a PLEASURE! READ YOU SOON : )
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 17
Omg I hope Edward disposes of James and Aro soon enough. I can't wait to see Donna Bella
Date: 13 May 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
I am a little worried about Bella. There is no telling what Aro and James are going to do when they find out about Bella and who she is.
Date: 13 May 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loving the pictures! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 13 May 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 17
Man they are evil....there goes my theory that aro will love bella when he finds out
Author's Response:
Sorry to foil your theory....But I hope you enjoy the chapter. The plot is thickening and it is a race to see if they make it to the wedding safely.
Date: 13 May 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Glad Edward is helpping her to find her strength. Wonder if Aro knows James is planning to take out him as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I am happy that Bella is drawing from her Blood Line.... And damn James is up to no good.
Date: 12 May 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hey ...I love the pics ..can u please tell me where u get them from ???
Author's Response:
I have a large selection that I download from everywhere. As I say, I a smut bucket, instead of a photobucket. If you need something look me up on facebook in my group and I will help you. https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight. I glad you like my story and I just love writing it.
Date: 12 May 2015 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Holy Shit! I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks NeNee for your wonderful review as always. I can't tell you how much I love writing this story.
Date: 12 May 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hopefully Edward has Aro and James taken care of before any harm comes to Michael.
Date: 12 May 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 17
James and Aro are truly evil characters.
Date: 12 May 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 12 May 2015 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
The older generation came out to play and had a nice time.
Author's Response:
Yep...I wanted to show that a Don and keep being a Dom years later.
Date: 12 May 2015 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 17
Wow! This is getting so tense and exciting. I eagerly await every update.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
His actions are anything but that of a true dominant. Aro just a sadistic fuck along with his son.
I hope their plans are foiled. I'm impressed with Michael and Claudia. I'd hate to see them harmed.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can't wait for more
Date: 12 May 2015 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
Aro and James are evil..
Loved Bella's dress.
Edward got in trouble with his mommy!! LOL :D
Date: 12 May 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
Hi, I've been out of town and off line so catching up now. Very hot chapter.
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 17
Awesomesauce!!! LOVED it!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 11 May 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 16
As much as I love Esme and Carlisle I don't want to see my arents doing the deed and that' what this felt like : I would rather for the most part to see Edward and Bella. If I want to read about Esme and Carlisle I would find one about them, but like I said it's like watching your parents. Other than that really enjoying the story. I see you corrected some of the shouting he done to Bella in their scene but still there should have been better after care. Also the mistakes seem to be getting better they were getting a little common for awhile.
[Report This]Date: 11 May 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great update
[Report This]Date: 10 May 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
can't wait for more
Date: 10 May 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
I loved the lemon....i cant wait for edward and bellas time
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I absolutely love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 09 May 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am loving this so far. Anxiously waiting for another chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
I was glad to get this update. I haven't received any since chapter 10.
I'm anxiously awaiting their wedding.
Author's Response:
So sorry. Thanks for keeping a look out for the chapters. I have opened the selection of the wedding dress to my group of facebook and they have selected a beautfiul one. And now they are voting for the cake. I hope to make this wedding some very special.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ewww! That makes James her half brother.
Date: 09 May 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
Love this my dear! Happy Mother's Day if you are celebrating!💖
Date: 09 May 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 16
Hot damn...weddings on!
Date: 09 May 2015 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
More omg more! Love the story and the pics are great.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Well that was definitely a different chapter than what I though I was gonna read, but loved it!! $
Date: 09 May 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
Michael is as much in love with his wife as Carlisle is with Esme. Both Edward and Bella have great examples to look at regarding to a long love life. Thank you for this excellent chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2015 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter, Clo. Thanks for sharing your talent. :-)
Date: 09 May 2015 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 16
Wow mom and dad know how to do it still lol. I am so happy that Claudia is so excited about Bella.