[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
James officially signed his death now. No saving him. Question will bella do it or edward.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 22
That last picture was hilarious!!!
Thank you for the update, I am glad that Assper and Edward worked out their issues.
They killer Waylon, I have a feeling he is the first of many coming to kill Bella and Edward...
Looking forward to more :D
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
lmfao at loopy edward hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha omg i need more of him :D
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love this!! LMAO!
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
Lol. A doped up Edward is to funny. Glad Edward was not seriously hurt. Whatis Bella going to think when she findsout that it easy James that sent Waylon to kill Edward.
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it! Can't wait to read more
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
LOL...loved the chapter
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Mob boss Carlisle was impressive but drugged out Edward stole the show.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Hilarious more please
Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
It is SO EASY to hate Aro and James. I can't believe they are plotting to kill their own father!! Such nasty boys!! I'm sure they have no idea what they are up against when they face Edward and Bella together. This story is getting even better. Love it!!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
Great chapter!! The thought of Daddy C and the things he does with pearls...very steamy!! I'm so glad you are giving us insight into Carlisle and Esme's d/s relationship, as well as Edward and Bella's. Thanks for the fun!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wonderful! From the tension between Jasper and edwardto Emmett's protectiveness, to Bella's despair, the emotions here run sharp, deep and true to life. Kudos!!
Date: 11 Jun 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 20
Excellent chapter! I especially enjoyed Rose and Emmett meeting! He is so cute! Made, but still cute! Thank you for a great piece of work!
Date: 09 Jun 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 21
when should we expect the next one????
Author's Response:
I am currently working on Chapter 22. I hope to be finished in the next couple of days then off to the pre-reader and then the Beta....so if everything goes smooth...Friday or Saturday.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Have I told you how much I love the pictures that you add to your story? It adds a whole new dimension to an already great story. Loved this chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you...I love posting the pictures with my story. I have always been a very visual person, so when I started writing I wanted to put pictures with what I see how the story is playing out. As I tell everyone, I have a very large smutbucket...I mean photobucket account. I am currently working on some manips to also go with the story. Thanks for reading and review...I love hearing from my readers.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Fun times in the playroom! It was perfect!! I'm not surprised that Edward is planning to kill James. I knew he couldn't let that terrible assault on Bella go unpunished.
Date: 08 Jun 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'll bet James won't be too pleased with this development!! Edward and Bella running the two families together is going to be so much fun... lots of ways for them to grow and get in trouble together!! I can't wait for the first time in the playroom. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 07 Jun 2015 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
Now you have me really worried. I don't think I'm going to like what Michael Volturi is planning for Edward and Bella. I know he won't hurt Bella, but I'm sure he has something nasty planned for Edward. Great chapter, lots of suspense.
Date: 07 Jun 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I loved their romantic date, especially the dancing. I can't wait to see what happens with the Volturis. Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oooh, things just got extremely more complicated, didn't they? I see more trouble ahead for Edward and Bella. This Volturi family is going to cause trouble, as usual, aren't they? Thanks for another great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 21
too short terrible cliffie can't wait for more
Date: 05 Jun 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 21
She needs to realize that Edward would want her safe. He has many people looking after him. She would be no help.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
love the way the story going can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 05 Jun 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 21
Amazing story and wonderful pictures. Hate cliffies but love your talent. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 05 Jun 2015 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
I liked Marcus ' s response to his sons behavior and punishment.
Date: 05 Jun 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
Love the building drama!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 21
Fantastic job as usual. Excellent choice in pics My Little Photoshop Queen.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Omg please let edward be ok and when they catch the scum hopefully bella will kill him as the donne dont let any of them get hurt edward jasper carlisle none of the whole cullen mafia
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh No You Didn't! Just leave me with my heart in my throat! !!!!! UPDATE! UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!! READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 04 Jun 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMGosh! I am thinking Bella's father or brother put a hit on Edward. Hope Jasper catches the person. Maybe that would help redeem him as Edward's Capo.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Oh yes, I enjoyed this great chapter. And the pictures are a real must. Thank you so much for sharing.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOVE THIS SO MUCH,THANK YOU!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
...another fabby one! Thank you! T
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
omg i bet it was aro or james that shot him update asap please
Date: 04 Jun 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it! Can't wait to see if Jasper catches the shooter and what Edward or Bella will do to him or her.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Holy Shit! What an amazing chapter!!! Jasper needs to get his shit straight before he really pisses Edward off. I hope he catches who ever it was that shot Edward and I think they should let Bella put an end to the sorry bastard who did it, to show everyone she can handle this life because you know she will want too once she finds out that Edward was hurt.
I absolutly love this story, as I read it I can clearly see it all play out in my mind like a movie. I can't wait to see what you come up with next! Your an amazing writer and I thank you for sharing your talent with us.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 21
AHHH your are killing me here :P :) cant wait for the next one :D
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
More please
Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wooee, ya got my heart rate up! I'm guessing we know who is attacking Edward...those damn inlaws, I mean, outlaws!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
That was really exciting. I was worried about Jasper there for a bit but he finally explained himself. Going to be hard to keep Bella in that safe room until she knows Edward is safe.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
Whoa...that's a lot of trouble!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Well done, Edward, you just harm one of your best. how can Jasper run with a broken nose???
just a typo mistake:
"Let me go!" Bella yelled, as she began punching at Emmett, trying to free herself from his restrictive arms.
"No can do." Emmett said, holding on to her, while she tried to break his grip.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ok time for Bella to start acking like a Donna she is but first she needs to lesen to Emmett. Jasper better get this guy.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love the excitement at the end!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 21
I freakin LOVE this!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loving this story from the start, the updates make my day, cannot wait for more.
Date: 04 Jun 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 21
what an evil cliffy....loving this and come back soon
Date: 04 Jun 2015 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
I have tears in my eyes... poor Bella, she has to be terrified!
I am glad that Edward knocked the shit out of Jasper... WTF was he thinking??
Looking forward to more :D
Update soon please!! :D I am begging. I want to know that Edward is ok!!
Date: 04 Jun 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
wow Jasper better watch his back. James or Aro I'm guessing? Most likely James I bet. Glad Em didn't let her out.
Date: 03 Jun 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
So excited for the party
Date: 02 Jun 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
Excellent full chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love the story. Keep it going.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
- Keep going with your plans. Excellent reading. I look forward to your next chapter. Thanks so much for your hard work.
Date: 01 Jun 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 20
Please keep it coming, love this story! XOXO,Cheri
Date: 31 May 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Having a hard time with Francis being the featured saint. I tend to think of caring for God's creatures when I think of him. I'd think the mob would go for a more martial saint
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review. And I wanted you to know that when I was doing my research for the ceremony it had that St. Francis picture was used. Though the ceremony varies from family to family, it usually involves the pricking of the trigger finger of the inductee, then dripping blood onto a picture of a Saint, typically St. Francis of Assisi or the Virgin Mary, which is then set alight in his hand and kept burning until the inductee has sworn the oath of loyalty to his new "family," e.g., "As this card burns, may my soul burn in Hell if I betray the oath of Omertà," or "As burns this saint, so will burn my soul. I enter alive and I will have to get out dead.
I hope this answers the question why I used St. Francis. I hope I get the Italian Wedding correct and please let me know it you have any other concerns.
Date: 31 May 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter, and the pictures are fantastic also. I always take pleasure to read a new chapter of yours. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
does not feel close to finished and I look forward to more
Date: 31 May 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 19
Seems edward likes too be bossed around every once in awhile...maybe hes a switch?
Date: 31 May 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Glad Rose was able to help E out. Aww for Rose and Em.
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
First and foremost MUCH LOVE TO YOU. As for this chapter you always leave me with my tongue on the floor. I came to the end and wanted MORE! so much more. No doubt about it this story can go on and on FOREVER. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 31 May 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 31 May 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 20
Fab. Loved Emmett and Rosie.
Date: 31 May 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
excellent!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
:) :) :FLOVE YOU :) <3
Date: 31 May 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love this story! :)
Date: 30 May 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
this is such a good story, make as many chapters as you want. I love it. update as soon as you can.
Date: 30 May 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please dont be in a hurry to end this story. I am loving these characters.
I can not wait to see what happens next. I want more :)
Glad that Rose and Emmett found each other.
Jasper, got just a little too cocky! Ouch!
Update soon!! :D I am hooked!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
As far as I am concerned this story can go on indefinitely. :-) I loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one.
Date: 30 May 2015 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
So happy you have brought Rose and Em together. Loved the chapter and of course the pictures. My favorite was the one of Jasper.
Date: 30 May 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love this chapter. Heck I love the whole story. Emmett was cute how he reacted to Rose. If Jasper doesn't what his mouth Edward is going to knock him out.
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
More please
Date: 27 May 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Question: Did they have tampons back in the day? Like, when Renee was pregnant with Bella? I'm just curious. I'm loving this story. It's so beautiful.
Date: 26 May 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hee hee! Loved it when Bella grabbed Edward cock yo teach him a lesson!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved this side of bella! I can't wait for more
Date: 26 May 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Aro Is just evil. Bella can turn on the attitude and the submissive side off very quickly.
Date: 26 May 2015 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love it!
Annie B
Date: 26 May 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Whoa bells...look out everyone!
Date: 25 May 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Love B going from Sub to Donna.com XOXO,Cheri
Date: 25 May 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love the Donna coming out in Bella
Date: 25 May 2015 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great story..keep it up! I hope to see Bella learn how to fight using cool tricks..like knife throwing or those acupuncture needle placement tricks...she could where a stylish bracelet that held them..a cute belt that is really a long whip...lol
Thanks for the story....
Date: 25 May 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great story! I love it! Please keep going can't wait for the next chapter! :)
Date: 25 May 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 25 May 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 19
Bella is a bad ass Edward knows when to back down . Aro is such a creep
Date: 25 May 2015 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
Wow dont mess with Bella she is the bomb and they are all so proud of her she is a natural.