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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 25

:)

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter, Clo. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 25

I thought Edward was going to shot grump gramps!! What a jerk!

 

Loved Bella's dress, very impressive.

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

Perfect pictures to go with the story. Loved grumpy grandpa. Three such dangerous men but they were all so funny together.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

Sooooo excited for the party!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 24

James is evil

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 24

I am really enjoying your story; please please update its been like 2 weeks.



Author's Response:

Chapter 25 is at the Beta who is out of town.  It will be posted early part of next week.  You will be meeting a new character and I think you will enjoy them.

Reviewer: ness2013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter please update soon!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter! Cant wait for Aro and James to find out about who Bella really is to them... I'm sure that they're reaction will be priceless. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

Hmm so what the wedding date? Will they marry before Michaels assination?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

I always love the pictures you put in each chapter!

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love it

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm sorry you were suffering from writers block but I'm glad you were able to post this chapter. I just hate reaching the end but I'm sure you'll post soon. I was surprised that Alice spoke to Edward in the manner that she did being an experienced submissove.  Tsk Tsk ! READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great update

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

I Love this soo much.   THANK YOU AND LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 24

Enjoying this story very much!  Looking forward to the next chapter!

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 24

OMG! No worries about the delay! This chapter is well worth the wait!! I love this! I am so excited and dying for more all at the same time! lol LOVE THIS!! :)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter. I liked how you portrayed Edwards dilemma. 

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

The mounting excitement!!! Love it! 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love your playroom scene and your pictures are amazing. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh lawd so much coming up!  Can't wait!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

Fucking fabulous.  And the pics and gifs really help with the visuals in my head.  Loved it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 24

Sorry you had writer's block.  But you did a great job with this chapter.  I understand why Edward is having problems with Bella's  outfit for the Munch but it sounds like that she is basically going to be naked anyway when he does his rope dimension. So what is the difference? I stop everything I am doing when I get your update  notice and read. 

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapter..

 

Who was the last picture of??  Is that Pero?

 

Looking forward to more:)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 24

Please don't kill off Michael? He's the only decent family she has.

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 24

IT IS A GREAT STORY PLEASE DON'T GET BLOCKED OFTEN

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 24

OOH, I hope the wedding and ceremony are before the first of August. :-)

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 24

Sounds like Sean will be an intregal part of the story at some point.   Loved Bella tearing into Alice like that.   Yummy play time as well.

Ugh  james is such a sleeze.  Can't wait for him to be dead.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 24

:) 

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 24

damn writers block :P love it

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2015 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Alice was way of of line but that was taken care of easily by Bella. That torture scene was brutal. Remind me to never get on your bad side. I hope Michael is saved somehow.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love it can not for more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

I loved Esme teaching Bella to shoot. I laughed at Esme saying Bella was probably a better shot than Edward. Those girls have to stick together!! It looks like things are going to get very ugly between the Cullens and Aro and James. Fun times ahead!! Thanks for another great chapter.

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 23

Good chapter!  Love goofy Edward

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Aro and James need to disappear.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 23

Who would have thought that Edward could be so silly on meds. XOXO,Cheri

 

 

 

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 23

Excellent chapter, as always. I particularly like the spanking scene. Thank you for the update.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loving your story, I couldn't stop reading once I started! Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hot damn, another shining gem to add to the collection that is Bound.  Great job.

Reviewer: kikigarcia17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

loved the chapter and how bella is turning into a badass but still submissive to edward and loving how funny edward has been these past few chapters i hope to see more of him like that through out the story 😄 

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved this as usual Clo!😘

Reviewer: Oona4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loving this story, gets better and better...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

Love that Bella is not let Edward  run over her. Glad she is standing her ground.  James and Aro worry me.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 23

:)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 23

; )

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 23

more story and less pics would be better

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 23

It's been a while I hope everything is good. Those pictures sure do wonders for the mind. (lol)  Please update soon It's hard to wait but... wait I do with a  : /   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it!! hated for it to be over. lol, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

i love esme in this story :)

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter, Clo. I think you're really laying out the foundations well. Can't wait for the next chapter. :-)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 23

Edward is to cute all loopy. Bella is a bad ass

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 23

Bella is doing so well in all parts of her life.  Aro and James really need to go down soon.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 23

This is fantastic!!! :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved the last chapters pic with guns stuffed in Edwards underware.  Then the pic of him in the chair asleep.. Too cute!!

 

Aro and James are bad news,  but loving this.

 

Thank you for the update and looking forward to more :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 23

loved it and can not wait for more

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23

Cant wait for more loved it

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

I was curious about the reason Waylon betrayed the Cullens and now we know.

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 23

Edward does not do well on pain meds.  Loved it!

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 22

I loved this chapter can not wait to see Bella deal with high Edward.(LOL) . Your story great woderfully written .

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wonderful chapter!  Edward on painkillers should be taped!  So funny!  Bravo, Emmett!  Saying no to Bella was hard, but keeping her safe is his job and he handled it damn well - telling her just enough to settle her down and keeping back what she didn't need to know yet.   Now we know why Carlisle is so respected!  Loved it!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22

Can I share that I don't really like dopey hyper stupid sexual Ed? I prefer Domward...good luck bella!

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

Read this first on fanfiction but love rereading this with your pictures!  The lasr one was a riot!  Not usually a big fan of mob stories but this one is very good.  Keep up the great work.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

; )

Reviewer: calloram Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 22

Oh it was fun;).. The goof wins.. It would be fun if someone relays him everything after he s clear ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

Edward was so funny. 

Reviewer: bran Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2015 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

omg i am loving this and love the blinkies too  xant wait for you to update on this story

Reviewer: CFG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

great story! really ike it!

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved this! 

Reviewer: cjrich Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

Still rolling around the floor laughing. XOXO,Cheri

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is really tapping into her Donna side, isn't she?  I loved how she told Irina off. It's going to be fun to see Bella grow into her new role. And I love how turned on Edward gets seeing Bella that way.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 22

Love it

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

muhahaha   Eddie on drugs is hilarious.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18

You always give us just what we need in a chapter... some heat between Bella and Edward, some added intrigue like the introduction of Jacob Black, and the suspense of the decision to end James.  Great chapter!!!!

Reviewer: ness2013 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great chapter please update as soon as possible!

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

Merci pour le chapitre et des photos.

Edward est très drôle à la fin et il suit son idée, comme le dit Bella la nuit sera chaude.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

I was pretty sure that James was behind it.

I'm not sure how I feel about Bella's "quick" acceptance of her life.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 22

Really good

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 22

To funny lmaof I hope you care Edwards druggy state to the next chapter at least for the first part gotta hear Bella's take of this side of Edward great chapter all the way around

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

i can clearly imagine Edward high as a kite.  hilarious!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 22

You make me LOL with this chapter. Slurring Edward is hilarious and the picture also.

Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Edwards funny drugged...wonder if he will remember all that hes done while drugged lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh no....so whose a traitor that the gunman was able to get on the property? The gunman is either a crappy shot or he didnt want edward died

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 22

Hysterical girl.  Where do you come up with this shit?  roflmao

Reviewer: bellagirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 22

*shakes head while laughing my ass off* The last little bit was hilarious. Poor Bella, well at least she knows one thing, Edward's the lovable cuddly kind of drunk/high guy. She just needs to make sure to hide the weapons so he doesn't use them as props LOL.

Reviewer: kikigarcia17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

lol i was worried in the first part but then the rest of the chapter was so funny wish i could see edward like that more often 😂😂😂

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 22

LOL, nice, uh, guns. *smirk* I would think Waylon would have a different motivation for betraying the family, like somebody was threatening his Mama. Money and power? I guess but it would take more than that for me. Just sayin'.

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loving this story.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 22

This chapter is great! I laughed my ass off at Edward’s doped up performance. Keep up the good work! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 22

What a sight to see wow

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 22

I was going crazy all week waiting to find out if Edward was gonna be ok now! I have to wait another week : (   (lol) This chapter was informative but I was looking forward to some Bella and Edward lemony goodness (he he he) READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 22

i love the goffy edward love it

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

:)

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

Once again great chapter!!

Reviewer: kitty25478 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loopy Edward,!!!!! that was funny. I look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved the pics! This is one story I have to drop everything and read when it updates.

Reviewer: Bellaashes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

Still laughing!

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