Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Interesting :) :) :) A friend recc'd me this fic when I was searching for a Mobward fic. Never had I imagined a complete BDSM mixed into a mobward fic :D I usually don't read straight up BDSM fics but this one has been intriguing so far! Jasper was very sexy when he was in dom mode with Bella btw!:)
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
This was a fantastic story! The inclusion of the pictures helped to enhance your writing and was a visual feast for eyes. Thank you so much!
Date: 31 Jan 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am hooked. Cannot wait to finish.
Date: 07 Dec 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18
I'm really loving this story. Sometimes the wording is off but who cares it's not like I speak perfectly anyway! Keep up the great work
Date: 04 Nov 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
enjoyed reading love all the pictures :)
Date: 09 Oct 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great story. I love the mix of BDSM & Mobward.
Date: 30 Sep 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1
The manips are amazing and I'm totally pulled into the story. I'm off to check out your Facebook group (I think I'm a member) to see other manips and sneak peeks into your stories! Hugs and thank you!
Date: 30 Sep 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
I have to say that I love the addition of the pictures to the story. Well-written, too! Off to read the next chapter. Thank you for writing! :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your very kind review. I have to say I am a huge fan of yours and for you to be reading my story is very exciting for me. I love applying pictures with each of the chapters and I even make the manips that you see. I hope you like the rest of the story and I am doing a sequel and have seven chapters posted.
https://www.facebook.com/groups/1454493104853834/
This is my production group where a lot of my manips and banners are posted.
Date: 27 Sep 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awesome story!!! I look forward to reading the sequel when it is finished. Thank you for posting this for everyone to read and enjoy.
Date: 22 Aug 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Hot Damn This just keeps getting better and better! He is hooked with one look and so is she! I must say Alice with long hair is hard to get use too! I know Ashley has long hair but I still see her as a short hair kind of girl! The same with Nikki Reed, long brown hair! The first time I saw Nikki and Ashley I did not recognize them! In the movies I liked the second Victoria so much better, she had the hair that the books discribe so much more than the first Victoria! Love love, love this story!
Date: 22 Aug 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God! I love this! I just started reading it and I love the pictures! Esp., the one with the side views of Edward and Jasper! I hardly recognized Jasper! I also love Edward's WTF look! He is not ready to get married but I think that all will change when he meets Alice roommate! No one but Bella could stand to live with Alice! Rosealie would shoot her, esp., if she is still the pixi that everyone calls her! On to chapter two and Edward's first look at Bella. I think Bella is not going to be too impressed with Mr. macho Man who all the girls throw themselves at! And God help any men who look at Bella the wrong way!
Date: 22 Aug 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
I loved it can't wait for the sequel!
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
uau Estou apaixonada, que escrita maravilhosa, parabéns pelo trabalho.
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
EXCELLENT! I will be following the next one too. I am excited about it. Thanks for all the hard work you have put into this story. I will be watching for the next one too. Thanks!!!!!
Date: 16 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
I am so glad that there is a sequel. There has been so much intrigue and from the looks of it there will be more to come. Absolutely riveting.
Date: 16 Aug 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
These last chapters have been amazing! Thank you so very much - and thank you for a sequal!!! I'm starting that now. Thank you for giving us a heroine who, while shy, is made strong by love, while staring as an outsider, has become the center of this new family! Your Bella is wonderful! I adored Edward's little attack of nerves before the wedding. It was touching and a true testament to the man. I loved that you used " Jesu, Joy of Man's Desiring"!! It was the processional at my wedding as well! Thank you!
Date: 15 Aug 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
Hooray for sequels!! Awesome story.
Date: 13 Aug 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 30
I was a little late to the prty but read the whole thing and enjoyed it. Looking forward to the sequel!
Date: 10 Aug 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 30
i cant wait for the sequel, i usually dont like reading 3rd person POV but this was so well done thank you for sharing an excellent story.
Melissa
Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 30
So happy that will get more to the story
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 30
Amazing wedding!! Can't wait to enjoy sequel!
Date: 09 Aug 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 30
fantastic, glad there will be a sequel
Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great ending and looking forward to the sequel.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved this story and can't wait for the sequel. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 30
Great Story! Can't wait to read the sequel!
Hard Hugs
Dinia/Carol
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 30
Guessing that Aro and Jacob are going to be issues in the sequel. Can't wait. TY for writing and sharing with us all
Date: 09 Aug 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
I am thrilled that you are continuing this story.
Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 30
Loved this story so glad to hear you are doing a sequel 😁
Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30
Hi
I loved the end of this first part and the second will only read and comment here.
Aro has to be stopped and while there, we will have in the sequel, lol. Thanks for the update. XO
Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that there will be a sequel! I was not ready for this story to end. Can't wait for tomorrow!
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
enjoyed reading this story
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 30
I really enjoyed this story, you are talented with words, thank you for sharing your talent with us. Now, I will follow the sequel with the same pleasure, I'm sure.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 30
You sneaky little thing you! I was sad to think you were ending it here knowing there was so much more that needed to be told. I truly look forward to the sequel or should I say SERIES. You do magic with your words and I look forward to reading more. READ YOU SOON ♥♥♥♥♥♥
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 30
oh thank god for sequals!!! lmao.... cant wait to read more
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30
Beautifully done. The next installment will be thrilling.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30
looking forward to the next chapter in their lives
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 30
Good chapter, looking forward to the new story!
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 30
excellent!!! can't wait for the sequel! :D
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
Great ending love d84; it
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
I have so enjoyed this. I truly hope that means Bound and Dangerous is the sequel. I so can't wait. So excited. Oh yeah, let's not forget the honeymoon. Bet he has some spectacular plans for it.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 30
:D yay i cant wait clo :D mobward daddy :P
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
Bravo you are so fantastic. Thank you for sharing your talent. I will be waiting for tomorrow!!!--(screams like the fan girl I am)--I adore your writing and the visuals are perfect they make your stories so enjoyable. You are awesome!!!!
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 30
:) loved this story. Looking forward to reading the sequel
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it! Ready for the sequel
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 30
Omg. I am so excited. I didn't want it to end. Great job. Beautiful wedding.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 30
Beautiful wedding! Looks like Aro got away for now.
You outdid yourself on the pictures this time. Very, very nice.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
That was excellent. The pictures were stunning. I can't wait to see what happens in the next story with Aro and Jacob still in the picture.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 30
LOVED THE STORY, CAN NOT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 30
Perfect wedding! !!!!!! Perfect chapter! !!!!!!! I am so happy that you are writing a sequel.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 30
Cannot wait for the sequel loved this story
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope you will love the sequel just as much.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 30
I know I didn't review at all, so, I am now. Great writing, wonderful story. Looking forward to the sequel very much!!!
Author's Response:
Well thank you, I feel very blessed that you did. I can't wait to see what you think of the sequel.
Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
YES!!! I was SO hoping there would be more. Thank you. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response:
I am glad you are excited, because I know that I am. Thanks for all you kind reviews.
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love it can not wait for more.
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 29
That was some plan!
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Nice set up what happened to Pedro ?? I am glad Bella did it she proved herself and that bastard needed to die. I am sad this is almost over
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
I love this story
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
I dont want it to be over what a ceramony WOW
Date: 05 Aug 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great Chapter!! Go Bella! Can't wait for the two cermonies coming up!
Hard Hugs & Love
Carol
Date: 05 Aug 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 29
Fantastic chapter
Date: 04 Aug 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 29
That soundproof room sure came in handy! Go Bella.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 29
mercy... she shot him in the dick!! LMAO!!
Looking forward to more :D
Date: 04 Aug 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
can't wait for more
Date: 04 Aug 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 29
OMG, that was fantastic. Wow.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
I'm glad that James is dead, but how did they know that he would choose Bella out of the line up? Was there a plan B if she wasn't chosen?
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
yes i love it one bad ass bella
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 29
Excellent chapter, and James is out of the landscape. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 29
It seemed rushed but.... Oh Well. READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 04 Aug 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved how they set up the hit
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Bella was badass in that chapter. Great job.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 29
Attagirl, Bella! :D
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
HELLL YES WAY TO GO BELLA :) THAT A GIRL :D :D
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 29
That was awesome!! I can't wait for the wedding! ;)
Date: 04 Aug 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
Glad she shot him in his sick after all the pain he had caused other women.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 29
Hate to see this story end!
Brenda
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 29
Yay, the rat bastard is gone!!! Hooray for the wedding!!! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 29
Ahhh cant wait for more
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 29
yey Ding Dong the Dick is Dead!!!!
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 02 Aug 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 28
sad there is only two ...will there be a sequel?
Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 28
WOAWWWWWW It's very hot here. Thank you for this great chapter. I'm glad you use the roses (red and white) for the ceremony.
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 28
Well, this sure is very lovely! ;) Micheal Newton is a hunk of shit! I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
Oh my gosh so hot
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 28
What??????? Only 2 more chapters! !!!! Nnnnnooooo!!!!!
I was so afraid that James wad going to try something while they were at the spa. Edward will kill Mike when he finds out that he has betrayed him.
Beautiful ceremony !!!!! Prefect playroom scene.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love it can not wait for more.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter. Now, on to the wedding, right?
Date: 31 Jul 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you had time to read this before work...great start to the day!
T
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
: ) READ YOU SOON ♥
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 28
loved it, cant wait to read more
Date: 31 Jul 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
Enjoyed this a great deal Clo.
Looking forward to more soon.
xo
Dinia/Carol
Date: 31 Jul 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28
love the story can't wait for more!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 28
Hot stuff! Congratulations to them both.
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 28
I can't wait for the wedding!! And the pix!!