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Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Interesting :) :) :)  A friend recc'd me this fic when I was searching for a Mobward fic. Never had I imagined a complete BDSM mixed into a mobward fic :D I usually don't read straight up BDSM fics but this one has been intriguing so far! Jasper was very sexy when he was in dom mode with Bella btw!:)

Reviewer: nep51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2016 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 30

This was a fantastic story! The inclusion of the pictures helped to enhance your writing and was a visual feast for eyes. Thank you so much!

Reviewer: nep51 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am hooked. Cannot wait to finish.

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 30

Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: 0912Toxicangel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18

I'm really loving this story. Sometimes the wording is off but who cares it's not like I speak perfectly anyway! Keep up the great work 

Reviewer: mommabear0206 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Nov 2015 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

enjoyed reading love all the pictures :)

Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2015 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great story. I love the mix of BDSM & Mobward. 

Reviewer: tufano79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

The manips are amazing and I'm totally pulled into the story. I'm off to check out your Facebook group (I think I'm a member) to see other manips and sneak peeks into your stories! Hugs and thank you!  

Reviewer: tufano79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 3

I have to say that I love the addition of the pictures to the story. Well-written, too! Off to read the next chapter. Thank you for writing! :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your very kind review.  I have to say I am a huge fan of yours and for you to be reading my story is very exciting for me.  I love applying pictures with each of the chapters and I even make the manips that you see.  I hope you like the rest of the story and I am doing a sequel and have seven chapters posted. 

https://www.facebook.com/groups/1454493104853834/

This is my production group where a lot of my manips and banners are posted.

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2015 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome story!!! I look forward to reading the sequel when it is finished. Thank you for posting this for everyone to read and enjoy. 

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Hot Damn This just keeps getting better and better! He is hooked with one look and so is she! I must say Alice with long hair is hard to get use too! I know Ashley has long hair but I still see her as a short hair kind of girl! The same with Nikki Reed, long brown hair! The first time I saw Nikki and Ashley I did not recognize them! In the movies I liked the second Victoria so much better, she had the hair that the books discribe so much more than the first Victoria! Love love, love this story!

 

Reviewer: Mitzi1958 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh my God! I love this! I just started reading it and I love the pictures! Esp., the one with the side views of Edward and Jasper! I hardly recognized Jasper! I also love Edward's WTF look! He is not ready to get married but I think that all will change when he meets Alice roommate! No one but Bella could stand to live with Alice! Rosealie would shoot her, esp., if she is still the pixi that everyone calls her! On to chapter two and Edward's first look at Bella. I think Bella is not going to be too impressed with Mr. macho Man who all the girls throw themselves at! And God help any men who look at Bella the wrong way!

 

Reviewer: Bella Scissom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2015 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

I loved it can't wait for the sequel!

Reviewer: Angela Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

uau Estou apaixonada, que escrita maravilhosa, parabéns pelo trabalho.

Reviewer: ruthiet1953 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2015 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

EXCELLENT!  I will be following the next one too.  I am excited about it.  Thanks for all the hard work you have put into this story.  I will be watching for the next one too.   Thanks!!!!!

Reviewer: Intsu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

I am so glad that there is a sequel.  There has been so much intrigue and from the looks of it there will be more to come.  Absolutely riveting.  

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

These last chapters have been amazing!  Thank you so very much - and thank you for a sequal!!! I'm starting that now.  Thank you for giving us a heroine who, while shy, is made strong by love, while staring as an outsider, has become the center of this new family!  Your Bella is wonderful!  I adored Edward's little attack of nerves before the wedding.  It was touching and a true testament to the man.  I loved that you used " Jesu, Joy of Man's Desiring"!!  It was the processional at my wedding as well!  Thank you!

Reviewer: Belighted Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2015 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hooray for sequels!! Awesome story.

Reviewer: Ktmcllln Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 30

I was a little late to the prty but read the whole thing and enjoyed it. Looking forward to the sequel!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 30

Perfect!!! :)=)

Reviewer: hannaha11104 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 30

i cant wait for the sequel, i usually dont like reading 3rd person POV but this was so well done thank you for sharing an excellent story.

Melissa

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

So happy that will get more to the story

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 30

Amazing wedding!! Can't wait to enjoy sequel!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 30

fantastic, glad there will be a sequel

Reviewer: robin5589 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Great ending and looking forward to the sequel. 

Reviewer: bearygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved this story and can't wait for the sequel. Thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great Story!  Can't wait to read the sequel!  

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 30

Guessing that Aro and Jacob are going to be issues in the sequel.  Can't wait.  TY for writing and sharing with us all

ty

Reviewer: Debbi84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 30

I am thrilled that you are continuing this story.

Reviewer: bboteler0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved this story so glad to hear you are doing a sequel  😁

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 30

Hi

I loved the end of this first part and the second will only read and comment here.

Aro has to be stopped and while there, we will have in the sequel, lol. Thanks for the update. XO

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so happy that there will be a sequel! I was not ready for this story to end. Can't wait for tomorrow!

Reviewer: Geminiroyalty Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

enjoyed reading this story

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 30

I really enjoyed this story, you are talented with words, thank you for sharing your talent with us.  Now, I will follow the sequel with the same pleasure, I'm sure.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 30

You sneaky little thing you!   I was sad to think you were ending it here knowing there was so much more that needed to be told. I truly look forward to the sequel or should I say SERIES. You do magic with your words and I look forward to reading  more. READ YOU SOON ♥♥♥♥♥♥

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 30

oh thank god for sequals!!! lmao.... cant wait to read more

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30

Beautifully done.  The next installment will be thrilling.

Reviewer: roxy34145 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 30

looking forward to the next chapter in their lives

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 30

Good chapter, looking forward to the new story!

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 30

excellent!!!  can't wait for the sequel!  :D

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 30

Great ending love d84; it

Reviewer: EdwardsGuardianAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

I have so enjoyed this. I truly hope that means Bound and Dangerous is the sequel. I so can't wait. So excited. Oh yeah, let's not forget the honeymoon. Bet he has some spectacular plans for it.

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 30

:D yay i cant wait clo :D mobward daddy :P

Reviewer: bba628 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 30

Bravo you are so fantastic. Thank you for sharing your talent. I will be waiting for tomorrow!!!--(screams like the fan girl I am)--I adore your writing and the visuals are perfect they make your stories so enjoyable. You are awesome!!!!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 30

:) loved this story.  Looking forward to reading the sequel 

Reviewer: angelskiss Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! Ready for the sequel 

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 30

Omg. I am so excited. I didn't want it to end. Great job. Beautiful wedding. 

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 30

Beautiful wedding! Looks like Aro got away for now.

You outdid yourself on the pictures this time. Very, very nice.

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

That was excellent. The pictures were stunning. I can't wait to see what happens in the next story with Aro and Jacob still in the picture.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 30

LOVED THE STORY, CAN NOT WAIT TO READ THE SEQUEL

Reviewer: hazeleyesmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 30

Perfect wedding! !!!!!! Perfect chapter! !!!!!!! I am so happy that you are writing a sequel.  

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 30

Cannot wait for the sequel loved this story



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I hope you will love the sequel just as much.

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 30

I know I didn't review at all, so, I am now. Great writing, wonderful story. Looking forward to the sequel very much!!!



Author's Response:

Well thank you, I feel very blessed that you did.  I can't wait to see what you think of the sequel.

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2015 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

YES!!! I was SO hoping there would be more. Thank you. :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.



Author's Response:

I am glad you are excited, because I know that I am.  Thanks for all you kind reviews.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2015 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love it can not  wait for more.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 29

That was some plan!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

Nice set up what happened to Pedro ??  I am glad Bella did it she proved herself and that bastard needed to die.  I am sad this is almost over

Reviewer: jagbatty Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 29

I love this story

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 29

Bad ass Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

I dont want it to be over what a ceramony WOW

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great Chapter!!  Go Bella!  Can't wait for the two cermonies coming up!

Hard Hugs & Love

Carol

Reviewer: aussieKayz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 29

Fantastic chapter

Reviewer: dpennell007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 29

That soundproof room sure came in handy! Go Bella.

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 29

mercy... she shot him in the dick!! LMAO!!

 

Looking forward to more :D

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 29

can't wait for more

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 29

OMG, that was fantastic.  Wow.

Reviewer: Rosiemama Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm glad that James is dead,  but how did they know that he would choose Bella out of the line up?  Was there a plan B if she wasn't chosen?

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 29

yes i love it one bad ass bella

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

Excellent chapter, and James is out of the landscape. Thank you for sharing.

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 29

It seemed rushed but.... Oh Well.   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved how they set up the hit

Reviewer: dap Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella was badass in that chapter. Great job.

Reviewer: galwidanatitud Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Attagirl, Bella!  :D

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 29

HELLL YES WAY TO GO BELLA :) THAT A GIRL :D :D

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 29

That was awesome!! I can't wait for the wedding! ;)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 29

Glad she shot him in his sick after all the pain he had caused other women.

Reviewer: bboteler0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 29

Hate to see this story end!

Brenda

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

Yay, the rat bastard is gone!!! Hooray for the wedding!!! :-) Thank you for sharing your talent.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 29

Ahhh cant wait for more

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 29

yey  Ding Dong the Dick is Dead!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more 😍 

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2015 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 28

sad there is only two ...will there be a sequel?

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

WOAWWWWWW It's very hot here. Thank you for this great chapter. I'm glad you use the roses (red and white) for the ceremony.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 28

Well, this sure is very lovely! ;) Micheal Newton is a hunk of shit! I am excited for more!! :)

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh my gosh so hot

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

What??????? Only 2 more chapters! !!!! Nnnnnooooo!!!!!

I was so afraid that James wad going to try something while they were at the spa.  Edward will kill Mike when he finds out that he has betrayed him. 

Beautiful ceremony !!!!! Prefect playroom scene.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 28

Love it can not wait for more.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: SarcasticBimbo Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 28

Great chapter. Now, on to the wedding, right?

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thank you had time to read this before work...great start to the day!

T

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

: )   READ YOU SOON ♥

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 28

loved it, cant wait to read more

Reviewer: Dinia Steel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 28

Enjoyed this a great deal Clo.

Looking forward to more soon.

xo

Dinia/Carol

Reviewer: tibbs8482 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

love the story can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

Hot stuff! Congratulations to them both. 

Reviewer: Oona4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 28

WOW

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 28

I can't wait for the wedding!! And the pix!!

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