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Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

so good

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 7

i love howhe can be so sweet and so scary at the same time! 

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

love love love

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5

perfect amount of sexy and sweet

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Sweet baby Jesus !! Mom that was so freaking hot

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Omg James is a bastered but poor Edward doesn't know what's up from down

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

omg yes yes yes! love it

Reviewer: TwiSagaLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2016 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

omg yay! i am loving it so far mom! i cant wait to read more

Reviewer: wolfpack15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

loved it 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

Interesting storyline 

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

Humm Bella's Mom Renee?

Reviewer: Parasite Goddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Omg!!! I'm so in love with this fic.

Reviewer: eileenapr Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2016 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love This story

Reviewer: bran Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 30

i loved this

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yeah!  Bella has been collared.  The wedding has taken place.  The Don's stepped down and introduced the new Don and Donna, and the alliance.  Aro freaked out.  James is dead but Aro doesn't know.  AND the sequel is next!!

Thank you, Clo!  :)

(Kimberly B)

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ding dong the witch (spawn, in this case) is dead!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

The diamond collar is gorgeous!  I can only imagine what that beauty cost.

And Mike Newton...what a dog!  A dead one at that, too.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Apr 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

The wedding is August 8th.  Michael's car is to be at the garage on the 1st for servicing and to be tampered with so Michael is killed.  So, I wonder if the car is still being serviced on that date or has it changed?  I don't want James or Aro at the wedding, but then they wouldn't know about the two families being combined, nor about Bella becoming the Donna.  I so want to see their faces and reactions when that happens!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

I'm glad Edward is okay and Waylon, the traitor, has been taken care of.  And now they have even more proof of James' plans.

LMAO at Edward in the last part of this chapter!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

Damn...the first try to take out Edward.  It's beginning!  And what the hell was Jasper's problem?!  He deserved what Edward did just so he remembers who is boss, even as severe as it might seem.  Now, who shot Edward?  James or one of his men?

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella is slowly getting a feel for the business, and slowly gaining strength and confidence.  One day she will be far scarier and feared than Edward!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 18

Whew...with E&B putting out the hit on James this is going to be war.  It's starting to build!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2016 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

Aro and James are Spawn I & II, horribly evil and cold individuals.  I just hope Edward and Bella's wedding takes place before they do away with Michael.  Man, they are going to be so pissed off when they find out about Bella.

I love the plum dress and antique earrings Bella wore to Mass.

 

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

I love the pics of DeNiro as Michael Volturi!

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2016 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

The two families merging is a great idea but will be met with such hatred and evil by James and Aro...Jasper and Emmett will be very busy.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 10

Shit!  I knew it.  Bella is a Volturi.  And as I stated a few chapters back Jimmy, aka James Volturi, is the one who stole the firearms from the Cullens and torched their club. This is gonna get uuuuuglyyyyyy.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh, crap...was that Renee Sarto Bella's mom?  Is Bella really a Volturi?!  YIKES!!

 

I think Bella is now fully embedded into the Cullen family, even though she has yet to marry Edward.  Carlisle is definitely smitten with her, in a good way, as his future daughter-in-law and business partner.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

I don't know where you find your jpg's and gif's but OMFG they are steaming!!  *fans self*

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

Since Bella finally proved herself she has now been given the nod by The Don. 

Someone is targeting the Cullen businesses, and will be dealt with.  I take it this Jimmy person is the forever evil James...

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 6

Within 24 hours Bella gained then lost her job at the club, she was moved out of her apartment and into Edward's home, their relationship has been established and contracts signed, multiple orgasmns have been had by both, her wardrobe has been purchased, she's met his parents, his business takes a front seat, and he will be announcing their impending marriage...although she isn't yet aware of this!  Edward doesn't waste time!  

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wowza!  And this is only the beginning of their relationship?!  And the picture above of the guy double-fisting and still length left over?  OMG.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Edward finally caved and took Bella for himself...and James is a dead man.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Holy Sh+t!!  I love this story!!  I can't believe how excited I was when Edward walked in the office because I wanted to see his expression when he first saw Bella.  It was great!  And her work outfit is gorgeous and so damned sexy!!

 

I forgot to mention how gorgeous the collars are for Esme and Alice.

Reviewer: SanguineTaurean Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2016 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I can't believe that I have yet to read this story!  I saw the third installment rec'd on fb tonight so I came over to read it, and absolutely love it already!  Maybe by the time I finish the first two the third one will be well enough along that I can continue...I rarely read WiP's since I can't ever remember to either go back and look for updates or I get the stories mixed up!  lol

 

Thank you for posting here.  :)

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 30

Awesome!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it! Go Bella!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 23

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 22

Great!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 21

Poor Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2016 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 19

Aro is crazy!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is amazing!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 17

Aro and James are psychotic!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 13

What will Edward and Bella decide?

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9

Uh-oh!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

They're perfect together!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter 

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2016 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

Loved it!

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 30

Im sure I will enjoy the sequel, but it will take some time as I don't like too many stories of te same genre at the same time - but I'll be back for sure ;)

This was a great plot and I had a lot of fun staying with them, so thanks for sharing it

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

It might be a shock to some, that after this first kill Bella didn't really fell into one herself. But I think her  reaction to it was kind of a shock, just not the typical one. 

And as crazy as it might sound, I agree it was HER kill ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2016 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 26

Things are turning bsd and quick it seems... 

Yeah, even if Bella didnt get to kick his nuts, it was already enough for them to get away. I just hope James and Aro werent able to put even more moles into Edwards trusted employees

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 21

Enjoyig this chapter? Not so much, seeing what dangers were in it...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 20

Once again things are turning in an even better direction, not only for Edward and Bella but their inner circle as well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 19

I'm worried about Aro's interest in Bella too

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2016 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

So mny timgs to consider but shes doing very, very well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

As well as things are coming together between the still reigning Dons as bad is this coup Aro and James are having planned...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 16

It was very good to read about these two loving couples, and its interesting how similar they are in their ways

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 15

Damn, they are perfect for each other;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 14

Amazing, I still have a too dry mouth ;)

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

This talk went to much better than I hoped for, Michael Volturi as a very smartman .Acceptingnot only the choice Bella made for her life, but still offering the reign of the Volturi family only shows that he does love her, already too.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm not sure if I should be happy about the real story behind it or not, the only person I feel was just as betrayed as Bella was Charlie...

The joining of both families sounds like a good idea, but I doubt either Aro or James will be taking that news well

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

Whatever will have to happen now, they have this to remember! 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh shit... I really hoped I was wrong with them being related

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2016 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9

We knew already that Bella has Italian blood, but is she a "product" of rape? It would explain why her mother had trouble loving her, even Charlies bad behavior had he known about it as well...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 8

Sorry I skipped through some reviews, but I was just too curious to see what happened next... its something that happens if I get to read a really good completed story, so I ask for forgiveness in advance if I might do it again;)

I love the images you put not only in my headcwhile writing this, but the pictures you choose to share with it as well - its oobvious how compassionate you felt about this gem, while writing it! FFN surely doesnt know what it does by not having this option and even worse for loosing you as an active writer on their page...



Author's Response:

I understand the problem of getting excited about a story.  I do it also.  Thank you for your kind words.  I love writing this story and FFN was nothing but a pain in my side from the first post.  I love being on TWCS, Fiction Pad and my blog.  If you are on facebook you are more than welcome to join the group and our conversations.

https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/

 

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

I can only agree with the last sentence of this chapter; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

What a breathtaking moment...

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2016 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

I guess its safe to say, they're both intrigued; )

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for replying me on FFN, I saw your message there and added you on my favorites list here right away;)

I'm sure its going to be an awesome story as I love mafia wards and BDSM theme's:)

Reviewer: CarinaCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2016 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

I can't get enough of this story!  I've been out of fanfic for a little while now and coming back to your story has been a great re-entry. I can't wait to continue, but just wanted you to know you have a new fan.  

Thanks for sharing your gift!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for those lovely words.  I hope you will continue to enjoy the story and it's sequel.  I have only three more chapters to it and it will be complete.  If you are on facebook I will you to my group. 

https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/ 

or to my banner/manip production group.  

https://www.facebook.com/groups/1454493104853834/

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3

Looks like James is going to be trouble as usual,and Edward finally figured out what he wante in just the nick of time.

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

I knew he would be stunned stupid when he saw her.Most excellent.

Reviewer: angelahayes-mitchell Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2016 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

HOLY SHIT SHE'S A VOLTURI

Reviewer: kaylade22 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Mar 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

I AM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS FUCKING  STORY.....I CAN HARDLY WAIT TO GET TO THE NEXT CHAPTER.

THANK HEAVEN IT IS FINISHED.

 

THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR STORY WITH ME.

I AM HOPING TO MAKE THIS A PDF FILE SO I CAN REREAD IT AT ANY TIME.

IF NOT I MAY BE GETTING IN TOUCH TO GET ONE.

 

THANKS AGAIN.....

JDCM0630@YAHOO.COM

Reviewer: Blackbutterbly97 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh, is there a second part to this story? If not I really hope that you are going to write soon.



Author's Response:

Bound and Dangerous is the second part of this story.  It has 19 chapters currently posted with 4 more to complete it.

 

Reviewer: debjeanwalsh Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Feb 2016 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

I love this story so far it is great you write so good my friend.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2016 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved loved loved the story! I only put it down when I was working and doing  mommy duty!

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

I wish this fic was on ff.net so that I could read it on my android phone...I tried reading stuff from TWCS many times on my phone but it's so difficult to read :( That's why I avoid reading fics here but since there's only 1 chapter of this fic avail on ffn, I try reading as much as I can while I'm on my PC. Pleeeeease post all your chapters on ffn, pleeeease?



Author's Response:

I will not be posting again in FFN.  Sorry.  But if you having issue reading in TWCS, maybe you can try reading in my blog in wordpress.  I will be posting each chapter there as well.   It is heartfortwilight.wordpress.com

Reviewer: elenalena Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 12

Aside from grammatical errors and some typos, I'm really enjoying this fic :) 

Reviewer: Signed -K Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 6

<3 <3 <3

Reviewer: Signed -K Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Me too, Bella. Me too. :P -K

Reviewer: Signed -K Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

Squee!! -K

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