[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bad ass Edward is so sexy, I'm glad his father approves of Bella. I'm wondering if there will be more about her family in Italy, like if they have any power or anything like that. Great story, excited for more!!
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah, I liked your tough guy Edward. Wonder what happened to Waylon.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Can't wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
fantastic
a perfect mix of love passion and crime
well done
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
i can't wait for more i love it all
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, what a chapter. Wonderfully written. it was so long. and I loved it.
Date: 27 Mar 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Like this story very much. Good job!
Date: 27 Mar 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 6
I really love your story and hope for an update soon
Date: 26 Mar 2015 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Good Lord girl this is fantastic!🙌
Date: 26 Mar 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Love it! Can't wait to see how Bella reacts when she finds out how soon Edward needs to be married. Can't wait for more, hope you can update again soon.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Love this story. Can't wait for more
Date: 26 Mar 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
d84;a039;💙💛💗 this chapter, and eagerly look forward to each & every update. Thank you soooooooooo much for sharing! XxX
~ Helen
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 6
Omg ,love your story can not wait for more to come.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love how they are so well matched. I am really enjoying the intensity of their feelings for one another.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
That was wonderful getting to know each other. I bet Royce had something to do with that mess.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella's childhood is sad. I wonder what she and Esma will talk about?
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved this chapter. How does Edward know that Bella is from Italian blood?
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really good. I was waiting for this all week
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!
I look for updates often, they can't come soon enough.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love that she has Esme as a mother figure.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm liking that they will be both boyfriend & girlfriend and D&S. I think they'll be stronger.
Date: 26 Mar 2015 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 6
Really enjoying this story, can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Still squirming in my seat at the thought of rope burns from her dream. Excellent update, great visuals. Does this Billy have any connection to Charlie? When Edward said he would be making an announcement, did that mean he was going to announce Bella as his fiance?
Enquiring minds want to know. :D
Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this was a long chapter!! I loved it!! :D
The sign the contract and have enter into a boyfriend, girlfriend relationship. I am so glad.
Carlisle is worried. But he wouldnt be where he is if he didnt. And thats ok.
I am so happy the way this story is heading. I know they will have bumps and bolders ahead. But can not wait for all of them!!
Cant wait for the next chapter! :D
Date: 25 Mar 2015 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
Please update like now!! Great stop looking forward for more
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
THANK YOU!! THANK YOU!!!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!! You bring such life into this story with your words and oh my! Those pictures!!! truly worth the wait although waiting is not one of my better qualities (lol) It's good to see Edward giving Bella the benefit of the doubt that his father has. The longer chapter was very much appreciated. READ YOU SOON....... SOONER WOULD BE BETTER!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loving this story!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
wowsers. Wonder which parent is going to show up to stick their nose in her business. Glad he talked to her about a contract and limits and all. Wish I was 20 years younger with the knowledge I have now.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well shit, things just got real! I hope Carlisle gives her a chance....
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 6
Amazing chapter!!! I hope Carlisle trusts her soon!!!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 6
So loving this story. I have not had any complaints - concerning how the relationships play - between family and dom-sub. Any complaint may have been from someone who does nto understand the true nature of the relationship. Keep writing !!!!
Author's Response:
Oh I am. I just can't get over some people. I mean I'm not having Edward and Bella doing a scene with Carlisle and Esme. Thanks for kind words and I be posting soon.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
loved this chapter seeing them grow closer
looking forward to more well done
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind review and I hope you will continue to read my story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
well looks like Edward and Bella met their match!
Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
I did like the chapter. Glad you are adding some drama with the mob and as always I adore the pictures.
Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
hmmmm very interesting indeed!
Author's Response:
Thanks Karencullen. I hate it when someone reads a story, but skips over very important details...like I just got a review from a guest who didn't read the part where the list was her hard limits...
Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Loved this chapter !! And the order to whisper in his ear when she is wet. Fabulous !!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was FANTASTIC!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ce est vraiment très chaud.
Date: 23 Mar 2015 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
cold shower and a cig was needed after that. (i dont smoke)
Wonderful more please
charlotte
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yes a shower is vary needed this girl is in need of relief awesome chapter great picture as always
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well, um. Yeah. I am looking forward to more of the same.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5
great update
very hot hot
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, I need a cigg from just reading this! Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
With that we ALL need col showers! You have to promise to take this story to the end because it is wonderful! You are an excellent writer!!! I won't be surprised if you have published wok already or soon will be published!
Author's Response:
Thanks for your kind review. This is only my second story I have ever written and I have never thought of myself as a writer. I have always been creative with my hands (crochet, knitting, scrapbooking, photography, etc.), but due to health issue I have had to give that up. I had my first story plot roll around in my head for months before I decided to write it. I have gotten so much support from readers like yourself, that I plan to writer more in the future. Thanks again.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
Holly hell that was hot. love the pics Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review and I hope this helps.....
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMG, I can not wait for next chapter and more of this great story love love it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review..I am working hard on the next chapter...
Date: 22 Mar 2015 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
A great first night together
Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Cold shower? Yeah...me too! Beautifully done! They have a lot to talk about though, don't they? Edward doesn't know how she feels about her truck, she doesn't know he plans to marry her.... This is excellent! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I decided to send the cold shower to those who needed yet......
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my... I just decided to forgo panties as I read... save must he trouble... Hahaha... Awesome update, can't wait for more.
Krazi
xoxo
Author's Response:
Well at least its one pair that you won't have to wash...haha
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMFG that was sooooooo hot....thanks for ruining me for any other man Hahahaha
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
has me super hot great work
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Dame another HOT steamy chapter SO can't wait for the next one!! Loving the pics & gif as well!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
You are awesome at bringing your words to life but a picture paints a thousand words. The pictures truly bring life to your story. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
i love this story
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 5
don't want to be rude, just an observation in this paragraph
"Bella, I know there is something you are NOT telling me, but I won't push you right now. Soon, though, you will have to tell me every thought and concern you have. As your Dominant, it is my responsibility to take care of every aspect of your life."
THANKS FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
whew! so hot! :D
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
great chapter, cant wait to reade more! its off to shower and dry panties! lol
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 5
oooh yummy yummy.
Glad Carlisle and Esme are being supportive.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow! that was fantastic and the pics were perfect
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my I need a cold shower now too!!!! That was hot
Author's Response:
I have been sending out cold showers to my readers.....
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Steamy hot!! I'm kind of hoping they will have E & B time and develop a relationship that was as well as the D & S. I think they'll be so much stronger that way. I'd like to get to know a strong Bella.
lovin it so far, thanks so much for sharing your talent!
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
WOW! great story.. I wonder what her collar will look like.. I hope we get to see the independent, strong side of Bella too
Date: 22 Mar 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 5
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!! Love the conversation between Carlisle and Esme. Loving this story. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5
HOLY SHIT!!!! I need a Cold Shower, a Cigarette, and a fucking drink. And I don't drink. :D
Damn girl.....I am going to rename you Miss Lemonade. :D
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think alot of showers are going to be running very soon!!
HOT!! doesnt even cover it!!
Looking forward to there talk! Interested to know more about Bella an her past.
Loving this! Thank you for the update :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was fantastic. It's just a little far fetched, but I am totally willing to suspend my disbelief for this story. There is nothing like a little good escapism.
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my. Great with the pictures as always. Can't wait until he lets her know he intends to marry her.
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
More please
[Report This]Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 5
omg i love it keep up thr great great job
Date: 21 Mar 2015 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I think he entered her way to fast even though she had climaxed I think he should have went slow until she was stretch out by him not just his fingers. I love the story but I dont think a mafia (almost boss) would be spilling the beans and telling her he does ilegal things on the first day they meet. But I am glad that they are together and I love the bracelt idea.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Things are well between them!
Edward does not have to hesitate for a long time, Bella belongs to him.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2015 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
I like.
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Je aime beaucoup les photos.
Le bon début.
Merci.
Date: 20 Mar 2015 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
what a great update - thanks
Date: 20 Mar 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I love your Edward
Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Absolutely luscious and oh so hot! I almost came reading it! Thank you...and on behalf of my husband - thank you as well! We'll be having a marvelous night tonight!! I love this fiction and this chapter was stunningly great! I look forward to much more!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2015 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love it can't wait for the next chapter I hope Edward kills James the ass that he is!! Do hope they marry soon if she is the one!! Thanks Sandy
Date: 19 Mar 2015 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
This is just dam hot. I can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2015 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I sm so ready for the next chapter these two are perfect together i await with baited breath the next update soon i hope
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love it
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
It is really good I hope you update soon!
Date: 19 Mar 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Fucking awesome. Keep it going lady.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2015 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Wow!!! Lots of sexy times and lemons.
Loved it.
Date: 18 Mar 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Really loving your story!!! Also enjoying the pictures that go along with it ;)
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2015 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
You have managed to combine my two favorite genres of Twific, BDSM and Mafia. Thank you. :-)
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Wow... I loved it! Their first time together was amazing and super hot! Can't wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2015 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
This story is sexy as shit! Love it!
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
I'm ready for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks I will be posting again soon.
Date: 17 Mar 2015 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Oh my goodness the pics were so freaking hot I love that's she's so innocent. Can hardly wait for the next chapter I hope he's into the dirty talk
Author's Response:
I would say that is a good chance.....
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Love love love this Edward. Love this story. Can't wait to read more and see what you have planned for this couple.
Author's Response:
He is my favorite Edward. I believe Bella will be everything and maybe more for him.