Date: 07 Apr 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh boy can't wait for your next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2015 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Damn! You have to hurry and update again soon. This is getting too good. Good job with this chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh my... this can't be good! You've got me oñ the edge of my seat...
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
...and the plot thickens. :D
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 10
Dun, dun, dunnnnnnnnn. Now for the final round of Jeopardy. Family for $500.00 Alex. Family for $500.00, She is the Grandaughter of one of the Dons of Seattle.
*theme playing in background*
Buzzer
Who is Isabella Swan?
*Alex, we have a winner* :)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
well i guess the family is going to be passed on to bella!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh My!! Poor Bella!
Her and Edward will be sharing the I Love You's soon I think :)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
I love the work done on genealogy here. Very nice! Also, loving the portrait you created. So, technically, Isabella is a Volturi! Interesting! Also, for Aro and James possibly job endangering? How better to put an end to issues between families than to pass them along to Bella and Edward?! Although we all know life is never that neat in the land of FF! Wonderful story with characters you really CARE about! Kudos for that! I look forward to your updates!
Date: 06 Apr 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looks like micheal will go the goving the reins to bella since shes the 1st grandchild and better option than james.....so did renee know michaels moms names was isabella and thats why she named her daughter isabella? I guessed right bella is a product of rape, thats going to tear her up when she finds out
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
So rightfully Bella should be the Don of the Volturi
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh no! cant wait to read more!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Wow. Great twist. Can't wait to find out more. So she would be the first born grandchild, not James. When James finds this out, he'll definitely be going after her, huh? Ewwww, he wanted to fuck his sister!!!! LOL
Date: 06 Apr 2015 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
She is his granddaughter this will connect them as family omg can't wait for more
Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
PLEASE BE REASONABLE. UPDATE ASAP ! DON'T LEAVE US HANGING! READ YOU SOON.
Date: 06 Apr 2015 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh this changes things a bit....I hope Edward and Carlisle find out soon
Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
OMGosh! Please tell me that Bella is not Micheal's granddaughter. If so she is his 1st born grandchild. This could get very very interesting. I want more and more.
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Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Got to get rid of Aro and James and let Alex take over.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 10
Cant wait for more
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[Report This]Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
:O cant wait to read more :)
Date: 06 Apr 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
OOOOOh, wow!!!!! the Shit is going to hit the fan very soon, I like the drama!!!!!
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[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella va certainement dire oui.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Which luck, Bella is of Italian origin.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Je aime ce chapitre.
Merci
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Whoa... wasn't expecting that ending. You've got a few tricks up your sleeve don't you? Well I can't wait to see what they are! Awesome chapter!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 05 Apr 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ohhhhhhh
no more words
Date: 04 Apr 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 9
You truly have my attention now!....Did not expect this. Grandaughter?? Looking forward to the possibilities.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 9
So Bella is Michael Volturi's granddaughter? ?
Date: 04 Apr 2015 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nice job Bella. And creepy Michael and Aro Volturi. Aro I suspect is Bella's bio father. This will be interesting to watch unfold.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
First, I love the story! Second, I also love the photos you added, especially the photos of the offices! So, Bella might really be an illegitimate Volturi?! At least Renee was smart and kept her mouth shut! It may come back to hurt her daughter though! I do love the relationships you've built - oh! And by the way, Carlisle's line about Edward being dropped on his head as a baby...? Hilarious! Thanks for all your hard work!
Date: 04 Apr 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
It's very hot here, and wet... LOL ! Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
guess there is volturi and Sarto blood in Bella
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
awesome to find a new BDSM story do not live the life but it is my fantasy
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2015 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great! Is Bella related In some way???????
Date: 04 Apr 2015 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
UGH! I am loving this story - everything about it is perfectly balanced and so captivating. One more word.... MOOORRREEE!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Apr 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awwww I can't believe you left I there!!! Thank you for the update...hope more is coming our way VERY soon. Happy Easter xxx
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella is so impressive. She is Aro's daughter?????
Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is Bella Renne Sarto's daughter?
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope they search the real reason why michael is so interested in Bella and they make the volturi family pay. I hope to see more of bella bonding with edward's family.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my goodness how will this play out can't wait as always great chapter
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great presentation. Yummy office time. Oh my, is Charlie not her real father? That would explain his attitude when she moved in
Date: 03 Apr 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow what a good story... Now the cliff hanger...
Date: 03 Apr 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Excellent start, I just want to continue reading. Thank you for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just fucking great.....Bella Swan is Michael Volturi's grandaughter, and Aro's daughter. This will wreck havoc on Edward and Bella's relationship.
Nice twist Sweetie. Did not see that one coming.
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Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wow! That is an exciting twist.
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Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
So Bella is a Volturi? Wow!!....
What a intresting plot twist! This is really gonna mess with Bella.
Looking forward to more!! :D
Thank you for the update!
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Date: 03 Apr 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
Aro is her father? Love the pictures so much. Never realized how visually unimaginative I was until now. They add so much to the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for wonderful review. I hope you like the possible twist to the story. More will be brought to light in future chapters and I hope I can keep your interest. I love adding the photos to the story, because like you I believe they add so much to the story and bring the words to life.
Date: 03 Apr 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Brilliant twist!
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[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2015 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
:)
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Date: 03 Apr 2015 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9
Loved Bella's idea for the club. Glad she was brave enough to voice her idea. Let me guess, the Renee that Aro was basically raping was Bella's mom. Things are going to get interesting. Can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
More please
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[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved the ring. Very good lemons Sweetie.
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[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2015 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love it
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Date: 01 Apr 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wow just read this straight through, can not wait for more...
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[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yay... loved it! And I'm gonna need my beta back in about two weeks... lol
Krazi
xoxo
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Date: 01 Apr 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. It's well written. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 01 Apr 2015 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
That is a heavy load to spring on him
Date: 01 Apr 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Really good
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Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sweet sweet sweet an sexy
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[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story. Good job!
Date: 01 Apr 2015 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
The ring is spectacular!! The story feels like it's moving way too fast. Not sure that's a good thing or maybe there is much more after they commit to each other. Is their relationship the main story line or is it the mob? I love Bella's outbursts, I think this is her way to show her strength. I think that is part of what draws Edward to her. He's looking for a strong woman like his mother.
Thank you for sharing your incredible talent.
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Date: 01 Apr 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
I dont think she is going to have a problem with it at all. Bella is going to get in trouble for getting so upset about other girls.
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[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
This chapter covered a wide issues and emotions. There were also some very erotic scenes. Bella's jealousy was an interesting twist. Edward has got his work cut for him to convince her she's his one and only.
I liked it when they both realize they loved each other especially the where he knows he's going to marry her.
The ring was beautiful and I really like this characterization of Rose. It reminds me more of her sweetness and care for others in real life.
See you next post.
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
I have never heard of a submissives ring. This one is beautiful. Quick question, can she bend her finger. Or will it stay straight?
Edward sees the future in Bella, Bella see the future with him I think.
Loving this and looking forward to more :D
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Thanks for the review and most of these rings are designed for you to bend your finger, while some even a hinges in the knuckle area. I feel in love with this one and all the girls in my office now want one. I love writing this story, even though I do have my few people who don't like or think I am stealing from other stories. But I am not going to let me down and am currently writing Chapter 9.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
The sexual build up was amazing, I am not surprised she had an emotional meltdown afterwards - love the ring.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Sweetie.... Each chapter gets better and better. The visuals are mesmerizing. They add life to your words that captivate the mind. True PERFECTION! at it's best. Wow!!! Edward finally knows what his heart has known from the beginning and Bella is also opening up to accept that Edward wants her just as much as she wants him. (Sweetie go back and correct the word "loader" its spelled LOUDER... he he he) We can't have any imperfections now can we???? ABSOLUTELY NOT!!!!!!!!!! (lol) READ YOU SOON.
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Thanks for catching the mistake....fixed. Thanks also for the great review.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow love the ring
great chapter
submissive edward .....
nah rather have dom edward mmmm
well done
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
Gotta love the spitfire Bella is!!! Great chapter!!! Love it!!!
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[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
:)
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Hmmm They need to talk about what happened when she stormed off. Aww for B and R gonna be friends.
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it! Each of them were pushed to the limits here. I can't see Bella not agreeing to Edward's plans; after all she did tell him to take care of business - even knowing what his business is. Also, she has been treated better and with more caring and respect by his family than her own. Wonderful work!!
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter! Loved all the pictures. They finally realize that they love each other. As always, can't wait for more.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it
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Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
I especially loved the picture of them embracing on the floor. Just beautiful.
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[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
I really like this story. Please let me know if you are going to continue it. I want to read so much more about this new world of Bella n her walk to BDSM. This Mafia Edward sounds to hot. please up date soon. :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 7
This story just keeps getting better and better. I don't know where your getting those pictures but don't stop! I hate!!!! (lol) reaching the end of the chapter because I want more!!!!!!!!!! Please update ASAP. READ YOU SOON.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
I definitely loved badass Edward!
Date: 28 Mar 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 7
Glad she was open with Esme. Hope her egg and sperm donor don't cause too much trouble.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am happy that Carlisle has accepted Bella. I am truly enjoying this story! Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Action packed - loved the backstory conversation and to hear if Bella's lineage.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Cullen. Edward Cullen. You wrote it like a master. (pun not intended) Loved that Bella and Esme now have a relationship, and that Esme found out about the book. Isabella Cigno has passed inspection.
I think James is causing all of the havoc as revenge from the encounter at the club.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is a bad ass but he is so sweet with Bella and Bella has proved herself to his parent how could she not marry there son she is perfect.
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
I always love a badass Mobward. They're the most fun to read, I think. In control, pissed off, don't give a fuck, I'd as soon piss on you as talk to you, Edwards. Those are the Mobwards I love. You did great!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it! I cannot wiat to see their relationship blossom
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
ohhh cant wait for more :)
Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Bad Ass Edward, I loved it. I love how sweet he is to Bella.
Glad that Esme and Carlisle got to spend some time wth Bella.
Looking forward to more!! I am so hooked on this story :D
Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
i am loving your edward even more now
Date: 28 Mar 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awwww did you have to leave it there? I want to read more LOL Thanks for a quick update & hope another one is on the way very shortly. Until then, take care!
~Helen xxx
Date: 28 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Really enjoying reading this story.
Date: 28 Mar 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved Esme and Bella's conversation. Glad that Carlisle decided to accept Bella.
I was a little confused when Bella was talking about her grandparents. She said their marriage was arranged. But on vacation they fell in love and then we're expecting her. If it was her grandparents they would have been expecting her mother. Unless you were talking about her mother fell in love on vacation. I hope that made sense. Lol.
Loving this story. I was very excited to get this update. Thanks