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Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11

Okay, so Bella is the oldest Grandchild.

Make scene. 

Looking forward to read what you have planned. 

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10

There are some twists and turns.

So James and Bella are half siblings...

And Aro and James are cruel and vicious people.

I hope Michael will live a little longer; Aro and James die so that Alex - who is like Michael - can be the next Don. Both families will be united through blood relationship. 

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 6

One question, Edward is the next Don but where are his bodyguards? There has to be at least on person. He can't have his own back.

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

And here is some drama and a promise from James that more drama will follow!

Great writing style.

Let's see if Emmet and Rose will also make an appearance in the next chapters. 

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

It gets better and better 🀩

I hope there will also a lot of drama coming. 

 

Reviewer: Elysetta89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hi,

by coincidence I found your story here.

I already read trust & obey on FF.net (and I'm wondering why you didn't posted these stories there).

I very excited to see where this story is going. 

And I saw there is also a second and third installment 😍

Bye!

By the way I love it that you included pictures!

Reviewer: PotterRathboneGreyFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love high Edward! Too funny!

Reviewer: PotterRathboneGreyFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22

I love high Edward! Too funny!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2023 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it 

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Date: 05 May 2023 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Date: 05 May 2023 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Date: 05 May 2023 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Date: 05 May 2023 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Date: 05 May 2023 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Date: 05 May 2023 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 05 May 2023 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 05 May 2023 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 05 May 2023 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 05 May 2023 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 05 May 2023 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 04 May 2023 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 04 May 2023 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 04 May 2023 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 04 May 2023 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 04 May 2023 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 04 May 2023 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 04 May 2023 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 04 May 2023 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 04 May 2023 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 9

Loved it!

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Date: 04 May 2023 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 04 May 2023 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 04 May 2023 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 04 May 2023 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 04 May 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

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Date: 04 May 2023 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 May 2023 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 04 May 2023 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting

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Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2023 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it 

Reviewer: dmr2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2022 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hi Clo, I don't know if it just me but almost all of the photo's are not showing, so I am letting you know. I love it anyway, not my first time reading it.   lol      Deb

Reviewer: dmr2002 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2022 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hi Clo, I don't know if it just me but almost all of the photo's are not showing, so I am letting you know. I love it anyway, not my first time reading it.   lol      Deb

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2022 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

The pictures are not showing. Thus sucks lol

Reviewer: L-Anne Cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2022 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Most of the pictures are gone πŸ™

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Trace6119 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12

I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left. 

I always had bad luck with  coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and

Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!πŸ˜€πŸ’›

Reviewer: Shelly7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2019 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love it!!!!

Reviewer: Ed-Bella Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hey.....It's my one of the fevourite series though I just read 2 of the 3.I love all of your work but this one I like the most.U gotta love badass edward and bella. I cant wait to read 3rd book.

Reviewer: Wraithe Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Ooohhhh. I lobe the pictures! But im peeved that some are missing. I wanna know what they were of! 

I lobe that you have taken the time to add them to the text. It adds so much depth to know what your describing. 

Also, thank you for writing, and sharing the story with us. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 30

I love rereading your story over and over. Have you ever thought crossing Bella with other twilight guys or other shows like soa

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2018 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 30

Love it 

Reviewer: mariepretty12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

I love this story but please fix the pictures.

Reviewer: Silence1111 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30

i love the story, butmost of the pictures were not showing up.

Reviewer: Blackbutterbly97 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 30

No matter how many times I read this story, its still as great as the frist time. Just and FYI your Photobucket account needs updating, so that your pictures will show.

Reviewer: Redgirl2018 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Dec 2017 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Love it 

Reviewer: Princeselisa Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh my gosh. Loved it. I'm so excited that there is going to be a sequel!! I love these two. Can't wait to read what happens next

Reviewer: loves2read205 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oh wow! thats a crazy amount! Maybe the photos are too raunchy for the site lol i thought it might have been my account which i why i asked.

 

Anyway loving the story, cant wait to read to the end and all your others too as the summaries seems to great.

Reviewer: loves2read205 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loving this story so far and cant wait to carry on reading this and the other parts.

I have one question though...is there a reason why there are so many boxes of the pictues that say "please update your account for third party hosting" or is this the settings of the site?



Author's Response:

I had images with each chapter and Photobucket wants me to pay $500.00 to keep them.  I am trying to find time to move them to another site so I can repost them.

 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it!  Go Bella! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 26

Go Bella! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 22

Loved it! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!  Poor Bella! 

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Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18

Bella is amazing!  Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 17

I don't like Aro and James!  They're horrible people! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 12

Renee is horrible!  Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

Great chapter!  Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 9

Uh-oh! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it! 

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Date: 28 Aug 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it! 

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Date: 27 Aug 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 5

They're so cute together!  Loved it! 

Reviewer: Starlightfairy27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control

Loved it! 

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