Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Okay, so Bella is the oldest Grandchild.
Make scene.
Looking forward to read what you have planned.
Date: 29 Dec 2023 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
There are some twists and turns.
So James and Bella are half siblings...
And Aro and James are cruel and vicious people.
I hope Michael will live a little longer; Aro and James die so that Alex - who is like Michael - can be the next Don. Both families will be united through blood relationship.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
One question, Edward is the next Don but where are his bodyguards? There has to be at least on person. He can't have his own back.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
And here is some drama and a promise from James that more drama will follow!
Great writing style.
Let's see if Emmet and Rose will also make an appearance in the next chapters.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
It gets better and better π€©
I hope there will also a lot of drama coming.
Date: 28 Dec 2023 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi,
by coincidence I found your story here.
I already read trust & obey on FF.net (and I'm wondering why you didn't posted these stories there).
I very excited to see where this story is going.
And I saw there is also a second and third installment π
Bye!
By the way I love it that you included pictures!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love high Edward! Too funny!
Date: 11 Jun 2023 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love high Edward! Too funny!
Date: 04 May 2023 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Loved it
Date: 04 May 2023 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 2 The Meeting
Loved it
Date: 02 Dec 2022 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hi Clo, I don't know if it just me but almost all of the photo's are not showing, so I am letting you know. I love it anyway, not my first time reading it. lol Deb
Date: 02 Dec 2022 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 10
Hi Clo, I don't know if it just me but almost all of the photo's are not showing, so I am letting you know. I love it anyway, not my first time reading it. lol Deb
Date: 14 Mar 2022 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
The pictures are not showing. Thus sucks lol
Date: 14 Mar 2022 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 5
Most of the pictures are gone π
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 07 Jun 2019 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 12
I've been reading this again. I started on ffn. I was unhappy you left.
I always had bad luck with coffeeshop. I just recently tried again and
Its working so far. So happy to be able to read this series!ππ’
Date: 28 Oct 2018 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey.....It's my one of the fevourite series though I just read 2 of the 3.I love all of your work but this one I like the most.U gotta love badass edward and bella. I cant wait to read 3rd book.
Date: 20 Jul 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Ooohhhh. I lobe the pictures! But im peeved that some are missing. I wanna know what they were of!
I lobe that you have taken the time to add them to the text. It adds so much depth to know what your describing.
Also, thank you for writing, and sharing the story with us.
Date: 15 Jul 2018 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 30
I love rereading your story over and over. Have you ever thought crossing Bella with other twilight guys or other shows like soa
Date: 04 Mar 2018 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love this story but please fix the pictures.
Date: 22 Jan 2018 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
i love the story, butmost of the pictures were not showing up.
Date: 28 Dec 2017 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 30
No matter how many times I read this story, its still as great as the frist time. Just and FYI your Photobucket account needs updating, so that your pictures will show.
Date: 28 Nov 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 30
Oh my gosh. Loved it. I'm so excited that there is going to be a sequel!! I love these two. Can't wait to read what happens next
Date: 02 Sep 2017 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow! thats a crazy amount! Maybe the photos are too raunchy for the site lol i thought it might have been my account which i why i asked.
Anyway loving the story, cant wait to read to the end and all your others too as the summaries seems to great.
Date: 30 Aug 2017 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loving this story so far and cant wait to carry on reading this and the other parts.
I have one question though...is there a reason why there are so many boxes of the pictues that say "please update your account for third party hosting" or is this the settings of the site?
Author's Response:
I had images with each chapter and Photobucket wants me to pay $500.00 to keep them. I am trying to find time to move them to another site so I can repost them.
Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 30
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it! Go Bella!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
Go Bella!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 29 Aug 2017 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Bella is amazing! Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
I don't like Aro and James! They're horrible people!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Renee is horrible! Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it!
Date: 28 Aug 2017 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it!
Date: 27 Aug 2017 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
They're so cute together! Loved it!
Date: 27 Aug 2017 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 Taking Control
Loved it!