Lmao OMG We ragged on that Marine holding that damn umbrella so hard, and at the same time we were pissed. That was an embarrassment for the Corps. We are not umbrella holders. Eff Obummer. Lol thanks for a great story, but if you want it perfect, correct all that soldier BS woman!!!! Lol

Ok being a female Marine, I have to tell you, we are anal about how people write about us. We never call ourselves soldier, we don't salute indoors or with no covers on. We don't say fatigues, they are cammies. Charlie being a Lt. Colonel we call them Colonel. Lt. is the butter bar O1 and the 02. Lol we are crazy I know but it irks us to the point of insanity lol 

I love rereading your story 

I loved.great story 

awasome story and awasome writer

I tried to find my reviews of this story so I could review what I'd hadn't. I couldn't find them the I recalled you've reposted the entire story. I loved and enjoyed reading it the first time and this time around was just as wonderful!!!!

I'm so happy your Edward and Bella worked their way through their issues. I don't think Edward had much of choice since his feelings for Bella rendered him impotent. I was so happy to read she was going to seek Edward out to tell him she was moving to D.C. before he found her in the employ of the British PM. I loved how Edward managed the situation with Riley as he was 100% correct in calling in the Secret Service. Their reunion was amazing and it's so poetic Bella was the first woman he'd ever made love to in his life!!! I loved it!!!! Everything was so beautiful in the end. I'm so happy things worked out, he retired, bought a house married Bella and they had a beautiful little girl who's an adorable Tom Boy!!!1

I'm so happy and grateful you made it back to the world of Fan Fiction and you're healing and sound happy.

If you and LostinPA self publish this story, would you kindly send me a note on Fanfiction under the pen name Green Eyed Lana Lee as I would love to purchase it!!!

I look forward to reading any new or old stories you write, post or publish. I'm deeply grateful for having the opportunity to get to know you through you through your writing and comments. You're amazing!!!!

Wonderful, just wonderful, so glad you finished it. One of my favs.

Just finished reading it for the 4th time-- it just keeps getting better.  Love your writing.  I really hope you decide to post the outtake!

Love seeing Edward with his little girl. I love the teaser. Headed to your profile to find the outtake to read. Sounds like a lot of fun. Thank you for finishing this awesome story.  Thank you for sharing with us.  You are a great writer.

Love love love this chapter!!!!!!!

I don't remember all of this chapter from the last time I read it. I wonder why Edward just let her go. I know she safe worded RED. But he could have contacted her later. I also don't remember him opening her limo door. I thought they saw each other at the formal event. 

I can just imagine Edward's face when thee dr told him that.  Lol

Glad Bree is with Bella already. 

Edward is falling for her. Another hot chapter. 

Can't wait for the outtake!!!!! :)

I fear Anthony is going to be highly upset when he either finds out or guesses that Bella has chosen his brother over him.  I figure he already knows since Edward showed up at her graduation and the same restaurant afterwards.  I wonder how her dad will feel when he finds that she has chosen Edward over Anthony?

Welcome back! I'm so happy you finished this story. It was worth the wait. Thanks!

Well, I wonder what Anthony is going to think now.

Loving all these chapters with all these scenes. 

lol  I swear that boy is pure evil...in such a luscious way!

Oh, no!  Poor Anthony is going to be dumped by Bella so she can "play" with Edward.  Now I wonder who will be awarded the position on the President's Guard, and how that will affect the relationship with her.

I don't know if she is ready but I know I am ready for some playing. 

Where is Edward's phone? I have forgotten this part of the story.  

OMGosh,  that was so HOT and they did not even have sex.

Those two boys are going to be a handful for Bella!

Glad Edward was honest with Anthony.  

Loved this chapter. I am enjoying reading this story again. Can't wait to get tickets were I had last read and then find out what happened in the end. 

Love how she reacts to both of them. 

OMGosh! I did not realize that you had reposted this story and finished it. So excited to read this again and find out what happens in the end. Thank you. 

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This is such a cute chapter. Yes thank you to all the military families who have endured the time of their loved ones gone to protect us. I don't think they get told enough we appreciate them also. I know the families go through so much more than some of us know. 

Oh I loved it so sweet and so funny but that last picture was so beautiful I can't wait for that outtake heheheheheeh 

I am going to miss these guys.

So sad for it to end but can't wait for the out take. Looks delightful.

Squee! Fantastic epilogue. I'm looking forward to the outtake. 

Cant wait for outtake

I love them and I am definitely going to miss them!! This is such a great story!! :)

Love it thanks for sharing.

So I had to start from the beginning as it's been a while.

That wasn't a dig....

Ah what can I say except I'm soooooooooooo bloody chuffed you're back to writing Treacle.

Thank you. Xx

Fabulous, just Fabulous

Sigh... I want a marine Edward!

Pardon me... A DOMINANT marine Edward!

sniff... Can't believe it's over. Loved it!

Thank you so very much for all the new chapters on 3 different stories you have posted over the last few weeks!  When I kid you about leaving a cliffie, not here but in another story, it is only because I care so much!  I know you are working hard to finish all these stories! I appreciate this so much!  It's good to see you creating again. You have had a difficult couple of years and seem to be on the upswing now. Don't feel badly if you have setbacks, emotionally, this is only a normal human reaction.  I truly appreciate everything you give us, your faithful readers!  I will be overjoyed to buy anything you publish! 

Awesome story, thank you for finishing it.  It was definately worth the wait.   I'm glad to hear you're doing better too x

I'm so happy with this ending! After their "break up" I really didn't see any chance for them to get back together, especially with the way their careers were planned out...

So I can only thank you for proving to me, how much is possible in fiction once again;)

I'm really curious about the Epi and the outtake 

Xoxo 

Loved it!! He was so sweet!  I'm ready for some more chainward 

Awww! That was just perfect. So sweet I'm glad, though, we'll get back to the cave as well. I missed that a bit. I'm also very curious what Edward's going to do with his life now that he's retire.

Thanks you so much for this wonderful story. It was worth the wait.

Author's Response:

play with chains all day? laughs.....

Oh how I love a man in uniform.....too bad I was a Squid and married one!

Update soon

I'm over the moon happy at this moment - thank you for not giving up on these two, because I sure lost hope a time or two throughout this journey...

And the thought that Anthony and Bree found their way is so good, too:)