Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
Thx, I've been looking for a good ddlg story!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
He loves her!!
Time to make your move!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward has it bad for his Mouse! He really ought to get over that being too old for her, though. The kleast he could do is ask her how she feels about it, and not just decide for them both! Must be why Jasper and Emmett cooked up this whole scheme to strand them together for the weekend.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait for the update. Now that I know he liked her I wonder why he gave he a hard time about her truck and his shirt.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 4
; ) weelllll i think i cant wait for more lol ; )
Date: 11 Feb 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
Enjoying it so far!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
I loved it! I cannot wait to see bella and edward finally "together being naughty". Please update soon
Date: 11 Feb 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really like this story and look forward to the next chapter. Cant wait to see what happens in the building all weekend.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love Edward's POV. So he has had a crush on Bella for a long time. I am so loving this story. Can't wait for the next update. Hope it is soon.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol. Love Emmett. You know Emmett, Rose, Alice and Jasper ALL planned tjis. Lol. I meant to say this earlier. ....I am assuming that Bella has a Daddy fetish. Since she has made sone Daddy comments. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4
Very entertaining!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow he is so far gone for her he is in too deep will she find out this weekend
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
My best friend and I call valentine's day SAD.. Single Awareness Day. we both are over 40 and have one cat each. Yup Sad fits.0
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
They completely tricked him!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
I just know that Edward beat up Paul. Edward was at the club....right? Loved what Bella said at the meeting. Glad Edward backed her. Loving this story
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
So the truth comes out...just as I suspected. ;)
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
What a huge setup! I knew they had one thing planned but I didn't expect this! Alice was in on it too!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Victoria got shut down & Paul got a beat down from daddyward!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Lobed it!!! More, more more... I'm such a greedy h00r! Lol
Date: 11 Feb 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
Loved getting Edwards point of view on Bella an that he wants to be called daddy. I like that you have everyone working to get Bella an Edward alone an more then a few minutes. So glad you posted so soon I'm hooked
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh it's all so much clearer now, knowing Edward's thoughts! Thank you! Love the daddy stuff.....
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hi! just want to say i am a massive fanfiction fan! even though i dont write anything. and so you know this is my first review i have ever writen in my 3 years of reading fanfiction.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
since i have started reading this story i have checked the website for updates everyday! sometimes twice a day.
anyway i just wanted to let you know even though you have probabaly already been told, you are an execelent writer and i am loving the storyline of Hallmark Holiday.
so i am really hopeing this ego strocking review gets you to write maybe a bit faster cos i really really want to know where the story is going!
anyway LOVE LOVE LOVE your work!
from bapplebee
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad to see a little of E's backstory. His Sperm Donor was a piece of work
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I knew he liked her but wow he has it bad for her. I like how he decided on mouse that is cute. Maybe he will get her this weekend.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 4
I want to know what Allie, Jazz and Em say about this behind their backs because it is sure to be funny. And I wonder if her actually did send the cake to Bella or if that was a planted suggestion.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love it, Edward's dad was an ASS
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love love love
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bwahhaha... that damn Emmett and the gang. Always have a plan. I loved it. Can't wait to see how their little weekend goes. Secretly, I know Edward is enjoying this, because Emmett and Rose didn't leave diwn, so he could have easily called him. ;-) Awesome job, Ladies!!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
Those sneaky crazy people. They better hope this works because otherwise they will all surely die a slow and painfull death. On the upside, I think these two are so cute together. But I really cannot wait for Edward to find out that the truck is hers.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 3
How not surprised am I? Very! I smell a plot to get Bella and Edward together, no doubt hatched by Emmett, Jasper, Rose and Alice! Thus, they are locked in until Monday. Can't wait to see how this goes!
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 2
Uh oh... Victoria and Jessica are now going to be gunning for Bella. FYI... I love that he calls her Mouse... it's so sweet... l I Ving this ladies!!!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 3
Lol great gift from Alice!!! Lockdown is making Valentine's day look might FINE!
Ugh Edward is right, Bella exes are pigs! Wtf was up with Jake! Really told a woman she was getting fat?!
Looking forward to Edwards POV! Thanks ladies!😊
Would like to send my well wishes and prayers out to AWayWithWords.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh boy hahahahahahah everyone planned this and what will happen on there locked down weekend hmmmmmmmmmmm
Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying it so far! I call set up! :)
Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Well that doesn't sound bad at all, being stuck in with Edward
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to EPOV!
Are Bella's bad choices in men going to affect her job or the boss she works for or just give her boss more incentive to take care of her properly. I really can't believe Jacob tracked Bella down to her current place of employment.
Emmett is in trouble deep. All of them are for that matter! What shape will payback take?
Date: 10 Feb 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
don't think e or b are going to kill em/jas. can't wait to get epov and see their weekend =)
Date: 10 Feb 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
oooh sneaky, naughty friends.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it can't wait for more a86;a039;
Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
Now I wouldn't mind a lock down weekend like that!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is an amazing story. I love how snarky Bella is. I can't wait for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 3
I really like this story. Sneaky sneaky Alice, Jasper, Emmett and Rose. But I wonder could Edward be in on it too. Is it going to be the start of something awesome with Bella and Edward? I hope so.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think being lock up together for the weekend is the best thing that could have happened to these two!!! ohhhhhh I cant wait to see what happens!!! lol
Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
So great to have to chapters of your story can't wait to see where the weekend takes them please post soon
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3
this story is just perfection. i am loving it. please continue.
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, those guys are wicked and obvious! Not sure E&B realize it yet tho. Hehe!
Date: 10 Feb 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ooo loving this story!!! Cant wait to see how it plays out! Locked in over the weekend should be interesting!
xxxxxxx
Date: 09 Feb 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
I have never laughed so hard at work!! This will surely be a weekend to remember!! Yesssss!!!!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 3
Not bad......not bad at all to be locked up like that. ;o) Great chapter. Thx!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for the next chappie!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
So this is the gift Alice talked about lol this is so good. Jacob is lucky Edward didn't knock the Shit out of him
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Is it me or does it seem like Edward was not only at the club, but gave Paul a beat down?! Interesting....hmm. Who is the giver of Bella's chocolate gifts?
As always ladies, thank you!!!!😄
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 3
I knew they were up to something trying to play matchmaker. They can tell Edward likes her he just could not admit it. Hehe oh the fun to be had. I hope all is well send best wishes and positive thoughts.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh wow! A whole weekend locked in together! I wonder what will happen?!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for the EPOV. I bet it will get hot in that apartment/office. lol
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Clever wonder who set this up!!! hehehehe
Date: 09 Feb 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 3
This was totally on purpose..
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 3
YESSS, I truly appreciated this chapter, you make me LOL. Thank you.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love that they all set this up! Alice, Jasper, Rose and Emmett fixed it so that Bella and Edward would be locked in together all weekend, didn't they?? I know they did! I'm swooning....
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am just living this. Excited for epov
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Cant wait for epov...so being locked in was alices suprise for her?
Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think that Edward is the admirer that Emmett alluded to when he place all those chocolate things on Bella's desk! I fervently hope we get to see some daddy kink between Bella and Edward in this story. I love the way he stood up for her, both with the detectives and at the staff meeting!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lockdown is good. What would be even better is an update in say....now??
epovs are the best!
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 3
Omg I loved it! I hope they begin their relationship now. Please update soon
Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
This sounds very interesting. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story can't wait to see where you take it. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 2
I really like having the opportunity to read each chapter twice as it is being posted! New things come to light and create questions I'm sure you will not be able to answer due to spoiling the storyline. haha
It's obvious that Edward beat up Paul. His knuckles were damaged, his calming presence for his mouse was felt as the night club, he's been watching her for over a year.....that bit of information is very interesting. Is there a Connection Between Esme and the Cullen men? Aunt perhaps?
Victoria will be out for her job now that her daughter Jessica was thrown under the bus. I wonder if other Personal Assistants within the organization will be angry about the new standard or pleased that Jessica has finally been exposed?
I hope Rose, Alice, Emmett and Jasper have Bella's back where her job is concerned.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Glad Rose was there to help B. I have a tazer and pepper spray in my purpose. I also have a concealed weapon permit, just need to pick out my guns.
Date: 09 Feb 2015 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 1
LMAO!! I LOVE THIS ALREADY!!! :D
Date: 09 Feb 2015 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
A lot of stuff happened already in Bella's short life. She is what 20 now? Like the hardness to her personality! And the gap between her and Edward?!!!! Interesting!
Came over from fan fiction site, because want the story how its intended, not edited down to please the righteous! Thanks ladies!😊
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooooohhh, Jessica will be pissed! I am sure she deserves it, however, I do think that Edward should have directed those changes to Jessica and not her Mother. My biggest pet peeve when I was managing was when high schoolers had their parents call in sick for them. If they are old enough to work they are old enough to deal with work issues on their own. I always clearly stated to the parents (after confirming they did not lose their voice) that if I do not speak with them myself they will be given a final written warning for being a no show. Many were fired for this. So I do believe that although paying creedence to what Victoria had to say, he should have spoke directly to Jessica.
Other than that I am loving this story as I do all your stories. Your guys are amazing!
Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward beat the Shit out of the dirt bag? He is a great boss I love him
Date: 09 Feb 2015 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh wow that was a fun end to the chapter indeed. Bella now has a target on her back. Loved it, looking forward to more :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 1
Bella makes a great Girl Friday!
I'll bet Edward is fantasizing about Little Mouse calling him Daddy as he teaches her all about being a good little girl! Haha
Just wondering if Bella ever continues her secondary education?
Date: 09 Feb 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving it so far :)
Date: 09 Feb 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait for them to get together!
Brenda
Date: 09 Feb 2015 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sip amazing! I think I love this Edward, even if he's acting like a slight jerk at times.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow Oh wow well I think Edward was the one who beat up Paul and is the one who sent the chocolate now I think things are changing update soon
Date: 09 Feb 2015 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
Omg...I so love this story! Can't wait for the next update
Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
So Edward beat Paul. Interesting. I like his protective nature.
Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think Victoria will be out for Bella's blood now. 😕
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2015 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 2
Omg I'm loving where this is going. Please update soon.