Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm in love with this story. Reading it does things to me. you guys are the best!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 7
Another fab chapter
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awwww Daddy is so sweet!!!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Love love love
Date: 13 Feb 2015 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Such a great story! I love the power of their love for each other and the passion...oh god the passion. Well written and well said! Love it!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 7
I just love this story. You write the hottest
& steamiest lemons in fan fiction.
Aloha, Jane
Date: 13 Feb 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I think I need to change my panties !!! that was super hot !!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
fuck yes... FINALLY... LOVED IT
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love that they are stuck together..
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
How's. After a long build up, that happened fast. Edward just blurted it all out there. Hot!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'm a puddle of goo...I think Edward/Daddy pounded the thoughts right out of my head, and I'm okay with that ;) Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 6
Absolutely loved this. I want more!!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Holy Moly!...........
Date: 13 Feb 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, they went from 0 to 60 in a blink!!
Date: 13 Feb 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 6
Holy smokin sex daddy...
Date: 13 Feb 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 6
The lead up was great as always can't wait for more
Date: 13 Feb 2015 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well that escalated quickly! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Fanning self!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
I've been reading this nonstop all day and at the end of this chapter all I can think about is how they didn't change the sheets. Ew. LOL
That was a hot lemon, a bit precipitated, but seems like Edward was done holding back. Bless his kinky heart.
Looking forwad to reading more!
xoxo Mina
PS. I keep wondering if Edward's going to get Bella mouse ear and a tail...make her act like a little mouse and all.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well that escalated quickly but damn that was hot!!! Loved it and can't wait for the next chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
I found your story this morning and have been reading it all day between errands. Love, love it!
When Edward said "Well I wasn't thinking candy" in reference to Bella saying she liked to suck lollipops I had to laugh. Your strong, whipped Edwards are the best!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, wowza! That came on fast and furiously! I loved everthing that happened in this chapter! From the getting-to-know-you part that came verbally, to the really getting to know you part that came physically, I loved ever single thing!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Finally, they both have what they wanted. It was very hot to read. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well that was abruptly unexpected. Hot and wild too, but definately unexpected. I can only imagine the conversation that follows. I do love a possessive Edward.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! Guess Edward couldn't stand not loving Bella any longer! It was kind of like a dam giving way and flooding the place! Emmett and Jasper, Rose and Alice, are all gouing to be so happy their trickery worked!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow! Way to go Edward! =D
Date: 12 Feb 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 6
That was all sorts of hot!
~Z~
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow, perfect fir. I mean they are a perfect fit.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well that was hawt!!!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Alice is so smart lol. Edward couldnt hold out any more about time
Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Heatwave...no that was a walk in fire, getting too close to lava or magma! OK I need a cold shower! Whew ladies ladies ladies!!!!!! Combusting in 5,4,3,2.....
Thanks!😆
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 6
Holy snap damn I so didn't see the yummy kink coming but damn did I love it more please
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 6
yeah, so im thinking they like each other !! (ha ha ) Nice one
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Damn that was so hot I can't wait for more and I'm hoping Bella doesn't have her birth control pills on her so maybe they can make a valentines baby :)
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Hot damn! This was hot! So i doubt alice brought the bc pills so bella wont be taking any this weekend.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
One word "HOT"
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
Gahhhhhhhhhhhhh, I love this story so much! I squeal whenever I see an update. Can't wait for the next one :D
Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
For a full-on sex fest, this was kind of sweet.
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 6
what do I think...ummm...WOW! that took a turn alot quicker than expected. LOVE IT. Can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'd say the getting to know you part went rather well! Haha
Did they both figure out it was a set up before Bella chose something to wear from Alice's gift bag? Or did the babydoll nightie trigger all the building desires?
Their needs have been shaped in a similar fashion. Abandonment issues being a large part of who they are and how they respond to separation.
How will they approach their future?
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Boy that was kind of quick. Edward did not waste anytime. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
They make a great couple.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more 😍
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great! He finally admitted it!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 6
Naughty little Alice knew what would get him going. I am happy they shared some of their lives with each other. He is what she needs in a man. That was hottttt her undressing him him taking control and making her feel desired. And they have all weekend of what fun. Alice and the boys will be so smug on Monday knowing they got them together.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 6
WOW! First let me sayTHANK YOU! You didn't make us wait forever and Edward is a freak in the sheets! I so loved how he was playing sweet at dinner and one look at a nightie & he basically lost his shit! LOVE IT!
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 6
This is so far my favorite chapter! I loved it all. I cannot wait for more.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well Dayum. Didn't take him long to attack her (in a good way) LOL
Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I like a Bella with a little fire.
Date: 12 Feb 2015 12:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Like seeing from Edward's POV. They both are all lost though huh?! Lol! Doesn't Edward see that it was a set up?! Guess he just seeing it as a blessing! Ready for the heat wave ladies!!!
Thanks!😊
Date: 12 Feb 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward the cave man...I like!! :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 5
Edward has turned into a chocolate cake baking stalker. Haha
He now knows about her two messed up attempts at the relationship game. Will he offer up any of his past failures? Then let her know that it feels different when you find the one you're ment to be with for the long haul.
Will we hear any more from Paul or Jacob?
Ready for more!
Date: 12 Feb 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love it love it I check throughout the day seeing if you posted an when I see that you have I have to hurry an read cause I just can't wait😊
[Report This]Date: 12 Feb 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy he thinks he just has a crush hahahahahahah yeah right he is in deep
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Big loves. Fantastic story. I'm not really into daddy kink but am loving this story.
XoxoxoxoxoX
Ashmerlin
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
When u say heating up I hope you are not talking about the a/c heating unit going bad! Haha!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 5
Thanks so much for Edward's point of view of all the happenings, I've been wondering what was going through his mind! Now I just hope he takes advantage of this opportunity provided by his brothers!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
He is always taking care of her
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love reading Edward's POV. He really does have it bad for Bella. Loving this story.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
Love, love, love this story.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
She still has no clue how he feels, does she? This story has me wanting more!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Cant wait for the daddy kink :)
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 5
Um....it's tomorrow in Australia so can we have the update today?? Pretty please??
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
AWE! He's so sweet!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
So amazing! Can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Sneaky trick the men pulled with the door. Awww for them looking after the girls in the club though
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Wow he is so sweet and adorable. I love how protective he is of Bella. Now maybe he will face his feeling for her.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 5
Good to have his side of things. I love that he made the cake himself.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Mouse? When I pic a mouse i see a fur ball with beady red eyes and a tail. If it works for Edward.
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
LUVIN THIS STORY, but i am GREEDY, i want all of it now, and not have to wait for it. boo hooo!!! thank you for sharing your talent with us, U ROCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
His desire to protect his little Mouse is rather endearing. But unfortunately his gruff approach has him standing in the shadows pining for someone he thinks could never be his.
Date: 11 Feb 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Good look into Edwards mind! Funny how he thinks he's perverted for wanting Bella to call him Daddy, n she wants to!
Thanks!😆
[Report This]Date: 11 Feb 2015 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 4
awww.. I hope he tells bella the mouse story
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love daddy kink......cant wait till both get what the want
Date: 11 Feb 2015 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh Edward
Date: 11 Feb 2015 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Edward is so sweet and he loves her so much cant wait for more