Date: 18 Feb 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hate that it's going to be over I'm not ready but if it has to be I hope u write another daddy kink story. Because I loved this one
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hot damn! Love it
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it too short
Date: 18 Feb 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
this story should be a little bit longer...
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
I love this little story. Please keep it going. Dont stop yet.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 9
i think the Rose, Alice, Emmett and Jasper got off easy!
Great story!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
They had some hard time at their job, but it was over quickly, thanks for that.
They are a hot couple.
I enjoy this chapter very much. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
this was a very eventful chapter! the payback to Alice and Jasper, Emmett and Rosalie, the trashing of Bella's apartment, Victoria's stupid, spiteful antics, and last but not least, some kinks loving....I'm very happy with this story and thank you guys loads for writing it!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
It was inevitable that Victoria would cause as much trouble as she could. It probably bugged hell out of her that Bella was so much better a worker than Jessica was! The proposal was clever as well as romantic and the dinner date was just plain hot! See you tomorrow!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
I lol'd at Victoria being 66!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
Victoria is damn lucky she was allowed to retire. her and her lazy ass daughter should have both been fired.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
loved it
amazing as always
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
Victoria is a real beotch! I'm glad that was straightened out. I'm bummed it's almost over.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh I loved it the pranks were awesome but will Paul get his pay back and Victoria got off too easily but damn they are perfect for each other yummy
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
The pranks suit each couple. Glad she's said the "L" word as well.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 9
Feel the same way about valentines as bella
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
How we can't all have fun weekends like this?? ;). The pranks...hahaha!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
Such a great chapter so into the daddy kink
Date: 17 Feb 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 8
That is one of the hottest things I have ever read. I love the idea of Emmett screwing up and everything packed up that I could see him doing. Them acting mad at being locked up there and not blissfully happy will be so funny. Alice thinking for sure that she was right. Can't wait for more.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 8
Feel kind of bad bout the prank on Rose and Emmett, but paybacks a !!!!! Only because they can't commemorate their engagement! Lol
Another scorcher ladies, thank you!😆
Date: 17 Feb 2015 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 8
Fantasy-filled weekend they are having
Date: 17 Feb 2015 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think the pranks are perfect but I almost feel sorry for Emmett because Rose is going to kick his ass lol. That was some fun hot times together wow I would like someone to play daddy with me lol.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Hot damn...love daddy/ little girl time....cant wait till edward takes her butt hole either. Love the pranks and love this story
Date: 17 Feb 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
I see why they feel the need for payback, but it's not like they hated being locked up together after all! It just gave a push in the right direction, towards what they both wanted anyway! These two were made for each other!
Date: 17 Feb 2015 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loving this hot story!! :)
Date: 17 Feb 2015 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 8
Every word was perfect. Those ball out balls are going to be great!
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow, Alice's toy choices were put to use in a very creative and mutually rewarding way!
They are finding that their desires for kink are quite similar. They play so well together.
Bella finally figured out that she is already in love with Edward. Glad she verbalized it.
Will Rose initially blame Emmett for the disaster that is to be their home together? Both couples will think twice before pulling another stunt like locking Edward in his office ever again.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Fantastic!! I love the pranks! I am excited for more!! :)
Date: 17 Feb 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love their dirty kink...
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think Alice needs a reward, not a prank. Glad Bella broke through her fear of saying 'I love you'.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
So glad that they both are on the same page with their feelings.
Bell accepting and admitting her true feelings
was beautiful. Can't wait for their pranks on the others.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thanks good chapter
Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 8
I think the return plan will be fun. However, I do hope that there will be some instances of his overprotectiveness and also an in-your-face confrontation with Victoria and her daughter. Perferably one where she is wearing Edward's ring but they do not know it is his yet. That would be awesome.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 8
very nice, sexy kinky chapter! I loved it! I wonder if the prank may backfire in some way....
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 8
Those pranks are freaking awesome I was laughing at the idea of the plans I can see it in my head
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 8
I love this story and it's characters!
Thank you for sharing. I am already looking forward to tomorrows chapter.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
I'm loving this and super sad that there's only this with like one more chappie 😢 I love this Bella and Edward
Date: 17 Feb 2015 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Love what they have planned for Emmett/Rose and Jasper/Alice. Glad that she realized that she loves him already.
Date: 17 Feb 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter for a great story.
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2015 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh wow I love their plan for the others he hehehehehehehe and hot damn they are made for each other
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter.
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
love what they are going to do :-D
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 8
This was one of my fav chapters and I love the pranks. I can't wait to see their reactions
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
So, what is stopping Emmett, Rose, Alice and Jasper from recording Edward and Bellas time together?? I mean they did it once????
Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
WOW, it was VERY hot and wet in here, and I enjoy this chapter immensely. Thank you for sharing. Their Daddy/Mouse relationship is amazing.
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
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[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yeah, discounted Valentine's Day sweet treats!
I worry that Edward's controlling nature may make it difficult for Bella to determine when they are role playing versus Edward and Bella time.
Date: 16 Feb 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7
Yum yum...are two delicious or what!
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it all. This side of Edward is awesome!
Date: 15 Feb 2015 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh my. I should expect nothing less from your works of art. Hot, sexy, erotic all with a meaningful plot. Splendid an so enjoyable to read.
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 7
*Sigh* They're perfect for each other. I love Daddy and Mouse. Edward is amazing!
Thank goodness for well-meaning (meddling), smarty-pants friends and brothers!
Thank you for such a sweet story. Looking forward to your updates! ...and discounted chocolate. Love ya lots:) -RoseE. x
Date: 15 Feb 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was AMAZING!! I really loved this one! I knew at least Alice and Rose were involved in this! ;) Cannot wait for the next one!
Date: 15 Feb 2015 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it. Can't wait for more!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very enjoyable chapter, I like their both sides as Edward and Bella, and as Mouse and Daddy. Thank you for sharing.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 1
Poor little Mouse. Think Edward needs to take her under his wing and show her how good she is. Another great story from the two of you. Love this. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 14 Feb 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
He is just so perfect just what she needs. Alice had it all planned out. Can't wait to see the plan to get them back.
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for the Valentine. I always love your stories. This was a great chapter.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
Cant wait to see the revenge they get. Awww for getting the car fixed.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hot damn...though edward switched from being edward to Daddy with no warning to get his way on the car...sneaky man
Date: 14 Feb 2015 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so sweet to her. Can't wait to see what the office thinks of their romance. I am sad to hear that this wonderful story will be over in 3 chapters.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
🌷🌹🌼💠😊
Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Sexy times sexy times! And set up real good by the siblings! Like the payback thoughts Bella is plotting!
Thanks!😆
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Bella has got to be getting a bit raw! Thank goodness for fanfiction!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Happy Valentines Day to you!!!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
I loved it wow Edward can turn up the heat and make me melt yummy
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
i could he him keeping her prego..
Date: 14 Feb 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Holy shit! This is great!!! :)=)
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thanks good chapter
Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 7
Good Lord girls I could read this story forever and still want more! Happy V Day!
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well she will never have a reason to doubt this Edward! Great update!
Date: 14 Feb 2015 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 7
Love this! Both hurt, both can heal each other.