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Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2018 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 52

I love it

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 38

God, this edward has to be the most

patient guy for a mob i have ever read. this bella

is the most frustrating crazy girl. surprised she

is even still pregnant with everything she is

purposely putting herself through...very foolish.

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2018 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 28

ahhh, this bella is so damn annoying sometimes.

she obviously is way too impulsive... does she even

care about her pregnancy? i get that she is pissed and

want to rescue her brother but her behavior is without

thought... love your story but wish bella had some

smarts instead of being so rash and careless.

she'a lucky edward loves her and has guys protecting her.

she would have been dead a long time ago.

Reviewer: PuepleRain27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2018 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 52

Again just loved it.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2017 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 50

Love it

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2016 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 52

AWESOME!!! sequel thanks for sharing ;D

Reviewer: polyanna Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 52

THANKS

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 52

Great story:) Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Apr 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 52

Loved it. 



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 52

Thank you I have enjoyed your story.



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 52

; )



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: LBD Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 52

I love the way you ended it with B & E having four children and Emmett finding love having Izzy.

I have enjoyed every chapter and I grateful for your dedication to your posting schedule. You also recognize your Beta's contributions.

Sherry Rocks but in my humble opinion YOU ROCK, MORE!!!!

Loved it and thanks.

Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 52

thank you I loved ths story!!!well done!!



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 52

Thank you for two terrific "updates"!  Seeing into the future for this family is a real treat, and I'm so glad Emmett found someone to love him for himself!  Yeah to having ESME in the birthing room too, by the way!  That was a nice tie of loose ends!  Her family always was what came first.  Thank you for two amazing fictions that were more than a pleasure to inhale!!!!  



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 52

good



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 52

:):)

Reviewer: Pox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 52

Well done.



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 52

Realy the end I think there is more lol.  Love it thanks so much



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 52

I loved it!! Thank you!!



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 51

I think this is the first chapter where Bella finally has happiness.  I love the baby name. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 51

That was a fast birth she is tough.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 51

:) loved this story

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2015 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 51

good

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 50

Wonderful!!  Thank you for two stories filled with excitement, passion and thrills.  I loved them both and look forward to your epilogues!  Bella's a tough lady with smarts and quick wits.  I have to love her.  She loves unflinchingly.  Thank you for all the hard work and all the great reading!!  I look forward to your next works!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 50

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 49

:)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 50

I look forward to the epi!  This was a perfect spot to end it and finally E & B are in a good spot!



Author's Response:

I just want to say a HUGE thank you for all your reviews and for supporting me on this journey. I've hoped you've enjoyed 'Betrayal' and 'Revenge' as much as I have. Until next time.

Kara x

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 49

In the neck and she just kept stabbing!  I love it!!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 50

I will miss her and her protecter

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 49

She is amazing

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 50

good

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 49

good

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 48

Love it can not wait for more with bad ass Bella .

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 48

I hope she sticks it right into his juggler!  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 48

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 48

She is my hero she will never give up or let him get the best of her.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 48

good

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 47

Superb chapters!!  You really keep the action and tension high while always remembering the personal relationships within the story that make it so special!  Thank you for that!  Right now we really CARE about Bella and her baby.  We care a lot!  Right now I'm hoping they missed Bella's knife!!  Loved it!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 47

; )

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 47

good

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 47

Hurry Edward!  Hurry!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 47

Let's hope Edward is on his way

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 47

OMFG not Aro. Edward better hurry up and find her NOW!!!!!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 46

Crap!!!! When she finally does the right thing for her & the baby everything goes to hell!

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 46

Yikes!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 46

poor Bella

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 46

Edward is freaking out right about now

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2015 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 46

good

Reviewer: maggiegurle Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 45

Oh chit!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 45

:) :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 45

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 45

So happy they found him but what's the problem just kill him

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 44

I love chapters where Edward & Bella are snugly!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 43

I'm so glad Emmett finished her off!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 44

That is so sad poor Emmett he needs help

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 44

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 44

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 43

I am so glad he ended Rose and he has went to Bella

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 43

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 43

good

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

Whoa, Rosalie is pregnant!

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 42

I'm really confused regarding Bella's change of heart and attitude. I think she's been an awesome sister fighting for Emmett's life. I don't want anything to happen to Em's child. I hope I understand better soon. Awesome story whether I'm confused or not

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 42

Crap!  Roselie is pregnant.  

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 42

Good for Edward!  Never take chances.  Not when you're pregnant!  ESME might be the one to understand and help Bella come to terms with being pregnant.  Her family is her life.  Great chapter!  Aro's escape certainly came as a surprise!  Nice one!!!  Thanks for all the hard work you put in - it always shows!

 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 42

; )

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 42

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 42

Poor girl she is going to blame herself for everything 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 42

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 41

Now she is not going to feel bad about Rose just keep her alive long enough to get the baby.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 41

Uh oh!  Nice twist here.  I was sure if she was pregnant, it wouldn't be Emmett's!  Somehow I can't see Emmett getting mad at his sister for doing what she did.  He knows her.  Which means he should also know she wouldn't give up on him!  Great chapter with a heck of a twist!  Thank you!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 41

yikes

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 41

Why didn't Rosalie say anything?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 40

sigh

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 40

I'm sad she's so distressed and I hope she wakes up understands she's really loves this child and undestands it might be bad timing. It will work ut for the best and she'll will be a nuturing ad d loving Mom!

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 40

Something tells me that impending motherhood just hit Bella's brain.  She knew it logically, but now she is weighing the implications and the fact tha the'so had no mothering as a guide.  Edward better tred gently here!  Great work!  Thank you!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 40

It is all catching up to her now

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 40

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 40

good

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 39

Sorry to have missed several reviews!  RL is fascinating sometimes!  Why do I have the feeling that Edward knows something about Emmett that he isn't sharing?  I love the fact that no one can stop Sunday dinner!  I understand it.  But between attacks, explosions, etc.  you would think Edward's Mom could slow it down.  Gotta love her though.  Those dinners ARE life to her.  Like firefighters who see too much death, there's a learning to appreciate the things that really matter - and that's familglia!  I loved the chapters!  They solved some things and brought more questions to the forefront!  Thank you for being so consistently amazing!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 39

he is so patient with her.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 39

:)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 39

Yes yes yes! 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 39

He knows what she need :)  I think they both need that.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 39

good

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 38

ugh.. you could have put that in this chapter.. sigh

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 38

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 38

She needs to know something poor girl

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2015 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 38

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 37

loving this

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 37

Someone just give the poor girl what she needs lol

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 37

good

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Mar 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 36

; )

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 36

I love this Bella's determination,spunk, ability to confront Edward or anyone else except maybe Esme and her passion in caring about the ones she loves. It was an wonderful chapter and I so happy Emmett is going to be okay physically. I dread his process for dealing with his feelings regarding Rose.

Thanks.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 36

She is just so worried about him and them Edward is so worried about her.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 36

Men, they need to be hurt in private.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 35

Bella is far from being the meek & obedient mob wife. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 36

good

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 36

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 35

:):)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Mar 2015 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 35

Of course you brought him back. I just knew he was out there some where. :-) thanks

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