[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
Wow, I want to marry a Cullen. Just for the presents. Oh and the black credit card. :D
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
ROFLMAO. Only those three would end up in cow shit.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
Beautiful update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
HOLY SHIT!!! WTF????? Who the hell is it?
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party
Aw shit!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
Okay, I'm thinking Royce King is the culprit. And Bella did not open the package.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Aw shit, a cliffie. Hm, wondering if all three Cullen boys have made a discovery.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
*sighs* Finally!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time
Hm, planning without letting her in on it, could be a bit sticky.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
Wow, just wow. Everything from Jake and Leah taking the house, to the apartment, to Edward waiting for her to accept. Wow.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
Still can't believe they haven't met in person. Come on Edward.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On
Where are Rose and Alice? I was surprised that none of the Cullen boys or the girls came to the funeral.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
Aw hell. Lost that smile. :(
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
I swear, I am reading these chapters with a huge smile on my face. :D See?
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
Men, so afraid to show their vulnerable side. *smh*
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
OMG, you could not have picked a better picture. My Jamie and Claire/Edward and Bella. Wish I could hug you!!!!!!! I will just say a prayer to Anael for you!!! :D
Author's Response:
I am happy you enjoyed it...I hope you will like the rest of the chapters just as much
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
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Date: 10 Mar 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
All this time reading these stories and I have no idea how to put this on alert. I do read on Fan Fiction too but I came back here to make sure about my last review.
Author's Response:
MaryMary don't feel bad, I didn't know either until a few months ago. When you get to the bottom of the story, and where you see the block to write your review, just about it is where you can click to follow the author or story or both. Thanks for reading and hope you continue to do so. I just recently started a new story and don't if you would like it but it call Bound to the Family. Also I also have a facebook page, where all the photos for my stories are. I am also on FFN, but I worry because they have a habit of pulling stories. If you would like to join my page it is https://www.facebook.com/groups/heartforwtilight/. Until next time.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Love this story!
Author's Response:
Thank you... I love writing it.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Sexy, sexy chapter... Thanks for doing the honeymoon outakes. I understand your focus but I hope you the others as well. You've wriiten how close the girls the guys are so it would seem weird to exclude them.
Author's Response:
I promise more of the other couples in the coming chapters.. But I will do just in the outtakes for the honeymoon scenes between the other coouples
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
: ) SWEET!
Author's Response:
Thanks....I have a sweet tooth...haha
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
So beautiful! I love all the pictures! I would like to read more inyo the swan castle.....maybe in an outtake.
Great chapter!
Kortney
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2015 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
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Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
Wonderful start to their married life. awww that was wonderful gift for Mrs Cope. The castle for B was s nice touch
Author's Response:
I Edward and Bella are a couple who is filled with so much love that it flows out of them to others.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time
I love this!! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks, I hope you will continue to enjoy it.
Date: 08 Mar 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Loved it and great job!
Date: 07 Mar 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
So great! Loved the details!
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
Awwwwwww!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.....
Date: 03 Mar 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Loved it
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
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[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2015 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
oooh yummy first time. Happy lemon dance.
hmm you make it almost think that the mystery POV is Aro, but I don't think it will be that easy. hmmmm
Author's Response:
I have enjoyed your review very much today. My phone would ping with a new email and I opened to find your reviews. Thank you. I hope you will continue to watch out for my updates and see more of the honeymoon and what is going to happen with the mystery guy. This is my first story and I have been really happy that so many like yourself have left me such wonderful reviews. Until next time.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Esme is such a dear as well as the other ladies helping out as well as Carlisle and his brothers. Wonderful ceremony. Aww what a cute little boy. food sounds yummy.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
glad they let E at least text B. lol for the Sex talks. the tracing device I'm afraid will be needed at some point.
Poor Sam having to be the delivery guy. But safety first. Nice that B can accept gift graciously. Holy cow, Cars?!?!
naughty girls with the pics.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
aww sweet invite.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
Don't really want her to quit, at least not yet, but if it has to be it has to be. Em is such a trip. Glad Edward has Ms Cope to help out. I can't wait to see what the men have planned for the boys.
OMG you are too funny. Cow tipping??? muhahaha.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
Gotta love that everyone has contacts for different things. Like the idea of the girls picking out the watches. The blackening sounds hilarious.
Esme's dress is really pretty. yummmmm mousse. oh wow Carlisle's gift takes the cake.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
Glad Sam was closeby. eww someone has pic inside the apt too??? That is not good. oooh so Sam knows Jacob. or is this a different Jacob than who is renting her house? hmm so James is dead. the orderly maybe???
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party
Em is such a goober but ya gotta love him. Ms Cope seems like a sweet lady. Glad Rose had a great connection. Alice is amazing. If I only were young and had a body to pull those off. LOL. lol for the little trick the ladies pulled. eww James is a real creepo. eeek what was in the box?!?!?! evil cliffy. Glad there is another chaper waiting.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
aww for the boys being smitten. Glad Alice already made the dresses. hmm Wonder if Seth knows Jacob? lol for sexy lingerie and E's imagination.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Guessing rule #1 doesn't apply to Mom. hee hee.
C&E are going to be over the moon I bet. Cool that Father P is on board. aww for the rest of the girls and guys meeting TRIPLE WEDDING!!!
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
Bella is such a sweet and generous friend. aww for Rose helping E build the house.
Ugh Hunter. That sucks. hmm the note makes me want to think of James, but I don't think you are that obvious.
Glad Bella can stand up for herself with Alice. Too many doormat B's out there. Glad Esme gave her a little warning.....but we know it won't be needed. hee hee.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time
aww for shy E. I know you have your reasons, but it seems so odd that they haven't met in person yet. But thats just me. LOL
lol for Esme not understanding why he wanted the house the way he did. Ms cope seems really nice
Date: 02 Mar 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
Sounds like the boys are all doing well. Em's sounds like the best to me though (I've got a thing for helping kids).
Glad the girls went with her to Forks. aww for her helping out jake. Good timing. cool that the girls are looking for places together.
the new house sounds beautiful. aww for the Edward surprise
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
ROFL for them picking on Em. oh wow for the company. Sadly its not an isolated incident. Good on Bella for helping other families get justice too
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On
Glad they are all supporting her. Poor B. aww for E texting her and encouraging her. They are too cute with the texts. Edward is so sweet. So glad Charlie and Renee had updaed their wills. To often people put that off until its too late.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:22 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
Glad she has Carlisle as a mentor. Its also an nice change that she has normal parents. Sweet making cookies for the kids.
Oh no, poor Bella.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
Glad Charlie and Renee are looking after all the girls. Wow Beautiful kitchen.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
Cute little boys. ROFL for the skirt comment and Em with he Man comment esp since he's the youngest.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
aww sweet start. Wonder how many generations it will keep for :-)
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
:) Love this! The pictures are wonderful!
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
ut oh. and who could that be? The imposter Dr Hunter?
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing all my chapters. I will posting again this week, but it is the first of the month and work is really busy at that time. I hope you put me on alert so you will get notice when it is up.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Wow.. that must have been a lot of work. Lovely wedding.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
lol nice touch
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
ahh they went Cow Tippin. LOL I live on a ranch in North Texas.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
I did not have a computer for several day. I so enjoyed catching up to this chapter. It is such a wonderful and amazing story. I do hope you are doing
Jasper and Alice's wedding night as well as Emmett's and Rose's night, too.
This story brings so much pleasure and remind's me of many beautiful times.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
I read that Maroon 5 broke into some private weddings and performed for them. How very nice to make a contribution to someone that could never afford them.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
that guy in the hospital is an imposter..
Date: 01 Mar 2015 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Wedding for 6 anyone?? LOL
Date: 01 Mar 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
how sweet, only in Twilight Fan Fiction. :-)
Date: 01 Mar 2015 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time
soon they meet in person.. Then count down to 4..
Date: 01 Mar 2015 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
sweet.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
We all loose family it is that moment for her life she will never forget.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
lovely! :D
Date: 01 Mar 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
lots of pictures.. She can not meet Edward yet or they are a no go. Can not marry yet..
Date: 01 Mar 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
here I am a old gal with a Scottish grandfather. :-)
4 days young Edward.. in this day and time that might prove hard.
Author's Response:
MaryMary, I hope you continue reading my story and I can stay true to your Scottish roots. This is a pure love story (will get juicy). Please let me know what you think.
Date: 01 Mar 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
4 days.. get with it Edward.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
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Date: 01 Mar 2015 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
Dun Dun Dah! I am thinking the MPOV is the familiar face she recognizes but doesn't know. ;)
This is awesome! I am so excited for more!!! :)=) The Kilt just kills me! Oh the visions...*sigh*
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I was hoping when I wrote this chapter it wouldn't be to chessy. Please continue watching for my updates.
[Report This]Date: 01 Mar 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One
That was a fantastic chapter, and done very tastefully, romantic!
Date: 27 Feb 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
That was beautiful!! Well done and thanks for the pix!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2015 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
The wedding was magical. Thank you for inviting us. READ YOU SOON.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you could come to the wedding...did you have a piece of cake? haha... I hope you come back to see the honeymoon...don't cover your eyes, its the good part.
heartfortwilight
Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Loved this SO much! I want bagpipers at my own wedding some day :) I've PMd you on Fanfiction. If you wouldn't mind responding to it when you get a chance :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2015 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
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Date: 24 Feb 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
I LOVE THIS!!! :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you love it. I just started a group on facebook that I will posting all the pictures for the story on this page, over next few days. If you would like to join it is under heartfortwilight Book Group
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2015 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Im so happy they are married now, I hope she gets pregnant right away!!!!
Author's Response:
Let's just if I can't write the honeymoon to be able to conceive a baby...God I hope so.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
Great detail in the wedding chapter. I loved the reel!
Author's Response:
Thanks...I'm trying to get all the pictures loaded, so you may want to check back later to see all of them.
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3
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Date: 24 Feb 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
It's time!! It's time!! Oh, I notice I just received an update!!! I am so excited I caught up just in time to read more!!!! I must be lucky! :)=)
Date: 24 Feb 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
Absolutely fantastic!!! :)=)
Date: 24 Feb 2015 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
OH SHIT!! NO WAY!!! OMG!!! I DID NOT EXPECT THAT!!! WOW!!! :)=)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party
OMG!! This story is fantastic!!! :)
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
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Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over
I wonder what was in the package for Bella.I love this story!! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen
Love is in the air at the Cullen home! lol:)=)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen
*wipes happy tears* This is so beautiful!! Well, not the part with Dr. James. He is a douchebag!Off to read more because I just can't stop!!! :)=)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends
This is awesome!! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue
I can't wait to find out more too! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On
I am so happy Bella has the Cullen's! I love this. Big hug for Bella. :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 12:23 AM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love
OMFNG!! I DID NOT SEE THAT HAPPENING!! Poor Bella! She was doing so well. I know that Esme and Carlisle will take care of that sweet girl. :(
I am hooked on this story! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella
I want the damn kitchen! :P
This is so great! Esme and Carlisle are so sweet. :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen
The boys are very cute!! I love this! :)
Date: 23 Feb 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift
I am in!! This is so sweet! I always knew those Cullen's were something special! Can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 22 Feb 2015 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
Wonderful!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
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[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
:)
Date: 22 Feb 2015 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2
That was wonderful! I want a man like Edward! One tiny thing, the word "mute point." doesn't exist; it's actually "moot point" :) Just so you know :) I am part Scottish, so this story is really great!
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review, and thank you for the wonderful corrections you have informed me. Writing is not my strong suit, but I wanted to tell this tale. I will be going back and making the corrections that you found. Thanks so much.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding
Amazing :)
Date: 22 Feb 2015 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives
Amazing! Loved it! Poor cow ;)
Date: 22 Feb 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?
That was really lovely! I cannot wait for more :)
Date: 22 Feb 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13
That was amazing! I got cut off of my review before I could finish it! It's actually "HIPAA" (my bad), and also, the words "she replied" and "he replied" don't need to be in the quotation marks in this part of the last chapter ""I'm good she replied, and yourself?" Bella asked.
"I'm also good, but I need a huge favor he replied. "