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Reviewer: kneon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

Great beginning can't wait to see what will happen.

Reviewer: TwiAggie94 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 5:21 PM Title: Epilogue

So very swee. Loved it all!!! Thank you for sharing your words. Meg

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  I really enjoyed writing it.  The One and Only has been nominated for the Top Ten Fics for the month of April.  If would like to, I would appreciate a vote.  The voting is held on this site.  http://twifanfictionrecs.com/2015/05/01/vote-for-your-top-ten-completed-fics-april-2015/.  I hope you will follow me and read other stories that I am working on.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 12:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Thank you. I enjoyed this.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

How authentic was the ceremony?



Author's Response:

I did a lot of research for the ceremony and I think it was very close to authentic.  When I began to start writing (which this is my first story) I wanted the events and places to be close to real as possible.  I truly believe that if you have a base of reality in your story it makes the story come alive.  This week The One and Only was nominated for the Top Ten Recs for the month of April.  I would appreciate your vote.  The voting can be made at http://twifanfictionrecs.com/2015/05/01/vote-for-your-top-ten-completed-fics-april-2015. Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives

Did Bella ever read the letter from her parents?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

I didn't think it was him. He's all talk and no action.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

What happened to the box she found in front of her door?

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 May 2015 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

A+

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 1:11 AM Title: Epilogue

Sad to see it end...

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.  I have been sad but excited since pushing the complete button.  If you didn't realize this was my first attempt at writing and I have had a wonderful time connecting with my readers.  I am currently writing another story with another story line in the works.  The One and Only has been nominated for Top 10 Fics in April and I would appreciate at vote.  The web site is http://twifanfictionrecs.com/top-10-poll-whos-who/.

Again thank you for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: momma2fan Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 2:58 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful!! Loved it!!

Reviewer: mirveil Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

sweet and lovely story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:04 AM Title: Epilogue

sweet ending.  Ty for writing and sharing with us.

ty

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Date: 30 Apr 2015 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

awww sweet way to tell him about the baby

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

Absolutely awonderful story!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

bravo

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

The idol threat that Bella received in writing on her car, did that have anything to do with being connected to Edward?
Will Edward tell his family about the threats over the years?
Triple wedding!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen

All the Cullen men found their One and Only on the same day! WooHoo!
Mass pandamonium will insue. Haha

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen

How will Rose admit to Bella that the house she was designing was for Edward?
Did Esme think Edward had already met his one and only therefore building his house to her specifications?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time

I'm sure he won't have to wait long for Bella's response.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

Awe, Esme and Carlisle now know that their surrogate daughter and eldest son have a connection. A very strong connection!
The renovations are amazing. What is Bella going to do with the few pices of furniture from her parents home that is currently in storage?
Glad Jake and Leah are able to rent out the Bella's childhood home.
Can't wait to read Edward's first verbal responses to Bella's physical image on Skype!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue

Justice for the Swans!And others that suffered at the hands of a crooked logging company business man.
When do the questions become more personal?
when was Bella born? She is how many years younger than Edward?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On

I'm curious as to why Edward thought that they should keep their texting a secret from his parents? At Bella's discretion of course.
She is independently wealthy, wow. I hope the family colors are a source of comfort to her now.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:52 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

Oh man, that was brutal.
I wonder if Bella keeps the house in Forks? She will never have her father walk her down the isle! So sad.
Their family history is all in Bella's hands now.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella

I hope Alice and Rosalie are welcomed in the same manner.
maybe this can be a girls hang out until the boys make their way back to Washington,

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:35 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

I just adore the fact that their heritage was something that really did mean something to them. Not just a fable handed down from generation to generation!
The pictures of the boys during their childhood was a delightful treat!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

I think I'm going to thoroughly enjoy this journey of love gifted to The One and Only through the eyes of Lord Edward Cullen!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:34 AM Title: Epilogue

That was amazing so sweet

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Date: 29 Apr 2015 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

Such a great story sad it is almost over.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 6:05 AM Title: Epilogue

That was an adorable name for their precious little girl! Happy ever after, I love it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

A wonderful way to wrap up this story!

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 5:39 AM Title: Epilogue

Oh so wonderful. Thank you so much for sharing.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Thank heaven for timely interventio9n! It was just what was needed, for him to bring the gun, and her to know what to do with it! Wait until they find out about the baby!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Who knew Royce had a brother? At least he's not assaulted Bella, yet! Let Sam and his guys find her, for heaven sake!

Reviewer: bba628 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:31 AM Title: Epilogue

So great thank you for such a wonderful story. I am also reading Bound and will follow you as one of my favorite authors.  I look forward to your new work you are a excellent addition to this fandom.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing my story.  I loved writing it and was sad to see it come to a end.  I will be working hard on Bound and have a new story in a few weeks.  The One and Only has been nominated for Top 10 Fics for the month of April and I would appricated a vote.  The site is at http://twifanfictionrecs.com/top-10-poll-whos-who/.

 

Thanks again

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 23 Please Don't Let It Be So

What in the hell is going on here? Is Tanya part of this whole mess, or just a slut looking to get lucky? Now I have to chew my nails until Edward and Sam can rescue Bella! I really hate this!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 Back to Work

I think it's very mean of you to have someone that sick and evil planning to hurt Bella! Not to mention how it will kill Edward to have anything happen to his love!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 Coming Back to Reality

Now that they are back home, we can start worrying about the stalker, who is obviously a sick, twisted person!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 20 Making Up For Lost time

It would be fun to read about Em and Rose, and Jasper and Alice on their respective honeymoons, but I'm sure they won't hold a candle  to Edward and Bella's!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 To Begin Living as One

Truly a lovely and loving wedding night. I'm afraid now of what the mystery person will do to hurt Bella and Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 A Beautiful Day Part 3

I could not have imagined a more perfect wedding for these couples, it was wonderful!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 A Beautiful Day Part 2

I'm in awe of these Cullen men! What gifts for their brides! The gifts they got in turn wasn't too shabby, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 16 A Beautiful Day for a Wedding

A very nice touch, I thought!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 15 One Day Until the Rest of Our Lives

The last couple of paragraphs were hilarious! I laughed until I had tears in my eyes at the picture of those men tipping the cow and falling in the cowshit! No wonder Bella wouldn't let Edward close until he cleaned up!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 14 What if the Storms Ends?

This all wonderful, if only they didn't have this cloud hanging over them! I hope Sam and his men find the monster who threatens Bella, through her, all the Cullens!

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 11:10 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 Unlucky #13

Well, I'll be damned! I thought for sure it was Hunter that was stalking Bella! Who was that orderly, maybe he's mixed up in this?Man, am I glad Edward has Wolfe Security!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 12 Planning, Planning, Party

I knew there would be evil from James Hunter, I'll bet! What awful thing has he sent to Bella? This was a terrible end to a lovely evening, Carlisle's toast especially!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 11 Our Love Runneth Over

Esme is such a smart lady and Bella was wise to take her advice! Edward really is going to love all the sexy lingerie! I'm glad Edward has security, because I have a bad feeling about Dr. Hunter stalking Bella. This is a really magical story, practically a fairytale!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 10 You Never Know What Could Happen

How could this get any better? The guys are all meeting their one and onlys on the same day! Esme and Carlisle must be ecstatic!

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:59 PM Title: Epilogue

Sheds a tear for the closing of this your first story!!!!  Wonderful job.

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

Bravo, bravo, bravo.  Wonderful job, as expected.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 9 Miracles Do Happen

Unintentionally breaking Bella's heart with the story of the Cullen gift, Esme would have been so sorry, except Edward was right there to mend that heart! Can't wait for Bella to see the home he's built for them to share.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 8 Face Time

I have my fingers crossed that after all this moving and building and planning, Edward finds Bella is his one and only!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 7 Getting Help from Your Friends

You just have to love Esme after all she did in designing the aprtment for the girls. Not to mention  how she found out about the texting between Edward and Bella. I figured it would make her happy.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 6 Edward to the Rescue

It's great that Bella got justice, not only for her parents, but for six other families! It was so nice that Edward pursued the bad guy for his friend!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 Saying Goodbyes and Moving On

The last couple of chapters were very touching, very moving, even. Bella would not have been so strong without the love and support of Carlisle, Esme and Edward. It must have been such a comfort to have friends like that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:45 PM Title: Chapter #4 Losing What You Love

What a heartbreaking development for Bella, losing both her parents so suddenly! Thank heaven she has Carlisle and Esme to help her in her sorrow!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 Meeting Bella

What are the odds of Bella being both Carlisle's mentee as well as Esme's new friend? Now we just have to wait for Edward to meet her somewhere down the line, and for Bella's friends to meet the other Cullen sons!

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:35 PM Title: Epilogue

: ( sequel?????? : ) 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:29 PM Title: Epilogue

Lovelove love it!  I am sad that this story is ending.  I have truly enjoyed reading your story.  Thank you for sharing it with us. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:26 PM Title: Chapter #2 Meeting the Clansmen

It's very sweet that all three Cullen sons decided to wait for their one and only!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

Perfect ending to this chapter.  Glad they were all ok. I Have to say I really loved Esme in this chapter.  Lol

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 7:08 PM Title: Epilogue

Oh my! That was so beautiful!! I love this story!! I am so happy to have read it!!! :)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

Wow! Not only a gift of such value, but it happened almost instantly! Now I'll bet we are going ahead seven hundred years!

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

So beautiful!! I love this!! :)=)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:34 PM Title: Epilogue

; )

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Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

; )

Reviewer: dckdck422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 4:43 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved It

 

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Date: 28 Apr 2015 4:17 PM Title: Epilogue

:) :) :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:58 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 Sunset

:)

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Date: 24 Apr 2015 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Really good

Reviewer: BOBBYSGIRL76 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

SSEQUEL   : )   READ YOU SOON. 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

So proud of the work you have done with this, your first story.  Excellent update.  And the accompanying pictures.....perfect.  Especially the one of Michael.  So damn good.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Mike got off easy.  Glad the kids are both ok

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

I hope you update soon, can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

WOW

Reviewer: hkimberly Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Loves it

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

WAy to go Bella!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

:O cant wait for more :)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

; )

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Go bells...so now we need to talk!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

Edward is such a hard head. But I don't blame him for going after Bella. Glad Mike can not hurt Bella or Edward any more. Can't wait to see if Bella is really pregnant and what Edward's reaction is going to be. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

I am so happy Mike is gone he was one crazy dude lol. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

:)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Apr 2015 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 25 Finding His Reason for Living

This is so freaking fantastic!! :)

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Love this story and cant wait to read more! Hope you can update soon.

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 History of the Gift

PPlease update. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Great update 

Reviewer: dckdck422 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

More Please

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2015 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Wow, I did not think about it being anything to do with Royce. Can't wait for your next update.   

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

more plzzzzzzzz.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

I feel so bad for Edward. 

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

; )

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

oooh I didnt guess right.  I'd be keeping Skankya around to see if this was all her doing or if the sleeze paid her off.  ACK!!!

Reviewer: canadiantwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

OHHH need more please :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Mike is going to die a painful death

Reviewer: Whitelilly Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

I love your stories. I hope Edward saves her in the next chapter. Please keep up the good work :)

 Whitelilly

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: dj071688 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

Wow, that is a lot of action.  Psycho Mike.  *smh*  Okay, Edward, get that white horse out of the stable, and get a move on.

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 Searching For Your Heart

But was Tanya working with Mike?

 

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