Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Yay! They got rid of the wicket witch and can get a break from the drama, at least for a while they should be able to enjoy their new life; )
Because I have a feeling we won't hear from Tanya before he will be a toddler, there's going to be thrown their way:(
Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
It's about damn time!!!!!!!! Tanya has absolutely no feeling for her son. That is so sad. I really feel sorry for people like that.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Great chapter. Glad Tanya is gone for now.
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
As sad as it is, Charlie hating Tanya eventually is inevitable. How can a child ever understand that his mother doesn't want him? I just hope Edward and Bella will be great parents so he won't have to wish for anything.
Date: 22 Oct 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Yay, no more Tanya! Ding dong, the witch is gone!
Date: 22 Oct 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Damn she left pretty quick!
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2015 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I really can't stand Tanya, glad she's out of Charlie's life.
Sherry
Date: 22 Oct 2015 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
That went smoothly .... now I hope Tanya and James can abide by the agreement and let Edward and Bella be the parents that Charlie deserves. (That aspect of the story makes my heart happy.) Looking forward to the relationship that will blossom for E/B and the family unit they will make. :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2015 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Good riddance!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
She has no shame she is an evil witch and I hope her life goes to hell is that to harsh lol
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Get Tanya and James signiture and then kick them out.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Yes yes yes.... ((((Doing a happy dance)))).
Date: 21 Oct 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I guess she never really Loved edward or Charlie if she could give up so easily
Date: 21 Oct 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Clear and definitive, that's good for everybody.
Great part, THX.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Yes!!!!!!! I'm so hold she's gone. I hope you stays away.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Goodbye Tanya and thank goodness you're gone.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Good riddance! Hopefully, the public will form their own opinion and she'll no longer be "american's sweetheart".
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Bye tanya!!!!
E/k
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS!!! :)=)
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Hell yes, this was so great!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Very very good
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Perfect..
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Perfect... Say it and mean it. Give them no time to think have it ready to sign and Jasper ready to call a press confrence.. Mean it.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I loved it hell yeah Tanya is going and not ever coming back and Charlie is safe and staying with Edward and Bella
Date: 21 Oct 2015 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Amazing!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Ya he got her to sign. 1st
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I am glad that Tanya and James are no fighting Edward but I wish that her reputation would some how be ruined in the public eye and she would lose her fame.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
I'm so relieved Tanya accepted. Now, does that mean the story's almost over since we're past the drama or is this just the calm before the real storm? I just hope Edward and Bella can give into their feelings now.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Great chapter!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Buh Bye Skankya
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Didn't see it going like that but I'm glad it did.
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Edward should have taken the ring and sold it. Putting the money into an account for Charlie.
Tanya is getting away without any reprocussions for her actions. I hope the paps go after her. Stating how little time it took to move past Edward to her agent James. Causing speculation that she was already cheating on Edward long before the breakup. Will Charlie's paternity then become fodder for the paps?
Edward needs to remove Tanya's name from all documents that could cause problems in a court of law.
Jasper is very efficient. I'm sure he will have everything in order by the following day.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Yay! Kicked to the curb like the trash she is!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Thank goodness they are not making problems. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Oct 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 4
Loving this!
Date: 21 Oct 2015 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Take the deal tayna....edward get her to sign the dotted line
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Take the deal & get out!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I do love the new, hard- *ss Edward! He's had enough and drawn his line in the sand. Wonderfully handled! Thank you for such commitment to your work!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I have a feeling James is going to want money.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Great update
Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
James is just as nasty as Tanya. They deserve each other.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
Love your new story.
what is Edward up to.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
What's James going to do to spin this situation his way? Tanya is going to be his yesterday's news by tomorrow. The excitement of the forbidden will vanish.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Please kick James ASS Edward!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
That nasty bitch will take it
Date: 20 Oct 2015 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Oh does she take it? ? I need to know.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Hmmm I wonder what James is actually going to get her to ask for
Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
Tanya is such a batch.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I would not have been so nice for her i would have hung her out to dry as a cheater or if she did not want that printed then she gave up charlie to me
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Oh man please say this works!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 17 Part 13
Poor Edward... Makes me hate Tanya even more.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 112
Spun it... Oh she is summer than I thought.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 17 Part 11
Oh didn't see that coming. Great twist.
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 Part 10
Love it...
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Absolutely love it!! More please!
Date: 20 Oct 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I think Edward is giving Tanya a very good deal. What was James going to say before he noticed Bella at the door? Loving this story.
Date: 19 Oct 2015 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I love this Edward!!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2015 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Oh my gosh I wish this was a movie!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I love this new determined Edward. He wants his son and isn't afraid to play dirty to get him.
Sherry
Date: 19 Oct 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I like what Edward did there. Tanya better agree it's actually in her best interest to do so.
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Oh post soon, love this story
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
She better.....or prepare to go down in flames!!! Frankly, I hope she gets both!!
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Go edward go
Brenda
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
More tonight ?
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Edward grew a pair!
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Damn, this cliffie is so cruel! Please give us one more today, im beggjng you, on my knees
I'm so glad Edward was very much controlled while talking to Tanya. Hell, I expected him to punch James after his glaring at Bella and that comment... But it was very good he didn't; )
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I really hope James advised her to take it and that they make provisions so James won't have any rights
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Excellent part, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Oh please let her take the deal bitch be gone
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
That went better then i thought. I'll be gettin "Island Captives" Tonight ;-)
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Take the deal bitch! ;)
I LOVE THIS STORY!! I AM SOOOO FREAKIN HAPPY THAT EDWARD IS STANDING UP FOR HIS SON!! :)
Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
Go Edward and Bella
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 part 3
I hope Tanya will take the deal, or better yet, sign away her parental rights. Then Bella could adopt Charlie eventually.
Date: 19 Oct 2015 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
First reaction - Let the Games Begin. Of course the game already started.
Bella's brief admission of how she loves Charlie was pretty much what Edward needed to hear in or to set his dissolve into motion. It's kinda neat, really. Together they make a united unit in fighting for the little one. What does Tanya have other than a few feeble attempts to exploit her son for her gain. I have no idea what Bella will hear but I certainly look forward to reading about it. :)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
I'm in agreement with Alice, Tanya doesn't deserve the gesture that Edward is offering.
Will Tanya sign away her rights to Charlie?
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 1
Was Jasper withholding information from Edward about what he suspected?
Alice is so adorable in her attempt to not offend Jasper's ego.
Rose is being very helpful considering the circumstances.
Date: 19 Oct 2015 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
oh god..plz, you cannot allow tanya to come out of this looking like an angel...i realize edward wants full custody of charlie.i want him to get it (an iron clad one) but without having to spin anything. somehow show the judge and the whole world what a dispicable, worthless, selfish bitch of a human being she is who care naught for charlie or anyone else. come on, how long are you going to allow tanya to call the shots here. i am getting rather sick and tired of this whole stupid drama...just have someone secretly film her around charlie and how she treats him and others for a day or a few days to showher true self... idk, i am just kind of fed up since this will somehow keep her in the picture even though this deal should not (hopefully). she will somehow turn this around to her advantage..."poor tanya, she was forced to give up her lovely baby b/c of threats from edward..." i just know it...
deal with the devil, indeed! at least have it on paper and film to make sure it doesn't somehow backfire on them... plus to cover all bases, make sure james sign something too b/c if the baby is jame's, he can always come back later and say, he was never told and take charlie away since he is the real father, blah blah...
Date: 19 Oct 2015 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
Congrats on the publication.....oooo i wonder what the convo is btwn ed and tay
Date: 19 Oct 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
I knew he would make a deal with Tanya. He needs to find outof Charlie is his first.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2015 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
I hope the trade works!
Date: 18 Oct 2015 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
I love Edward even more . So excited for you congragulations
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2015 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
I hope he doesn't suggest to go on faking their relationship. The best way to spin Tanya's indiscretion, in my eyes, is to tell the press they haven't been together in a while but tried to keep up appearances for the baby. That would mean Tanya wasn't cheating and he'd be free to form a family with Bella. I still hope Charlie will turn out to be Edward's biological son, though.
Date: 18 Oct 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
Love Edward so much. Love that he would take Charlie even if he wasn't his own. <3
Date: 18 Oct 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 2
Best spin is right! I'd have gone with blackmail - either give me complete custody or I tell all. Looking forward to seeing what Jasper came up with!