Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
What a nice cliffie!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
He's going to woo her...yay!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Hmmm...loving the impatient Edward...
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Who doesn't like butterfly kisses? I'm not one of them.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
I love it! *giggles* ;)
Date: 31 Oct 2015 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next! They're so cute together!
Date: 31 Oct 2015 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Good, thank you for sharing.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Good think, we already know that Rosalie is trustworthy, otherwise I would have been nervous about it;)
Edward comes knocking on her door?!
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2015 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Oh boy they can't help themselves hit damn hehehehe
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2015 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
What could he want? Did he change his mind?
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
That's a greeting a girl could get used to on a daily basis.
Date: 31 Oct 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
They are so into each other no one else matters but the kids of course :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2015 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
I'm looking forward to them getting closer.
Sherry
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Romance;-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2015 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Awe, sweet actions taken by one smitten man. Bella deserves the total package of a doting boyfriend.
How long before the press figures out Edward is with the Nanny?
Date: 29 Oct 2015 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Ahhhhhh I love it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
So glad they are finally getting together! I love it! Thanks for the update! ;~)
Date: 29 Oct 2015 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Loved it please update soon it's been very hard to wait for the next xhaptet
Date: 29 Oct 2015 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Yay an update. Love it!!
Date: 29 Oct 2015 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Now I think we are all ready for her bones to get jumped. ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Not the perfect solution but at least he didn't postpone the whole relationship for months. Now, I'm curious how long he's going to be able to hold out on the sex;)
Date: 29 Oct 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Love it! Do you know my Great-grandmother was in her 70s effort she received flowers for the first time?! My Mom told me she looked like a young girl again she was so excited! I do love the slow burn here. It really works well! Thank you!
Date: 29 Oct 2015 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Thank goodness were at this point. Now, how long until we get them in bed? Lol. But really, how long do you invision this story being?
Date: 29 Oct 2015 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Finally... I hated tanya she was a bitch. Wish alice and jasper would wake up. Lol. Great chapter . Love your story. I have both my sister hooked too.
Date: 29 Oct 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! ;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
About time you two!
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Maybe there's something to start dating in private;)
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
What a sweet chapter. At least he's trying to do things 'right' by her.
Sherry
Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
aww he is too sweet
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Thanks good chapter
Date: 28 Oct 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
OMGosh! I am so glad you updated. I thought TWCS was broke. I kept checking my email all day. Lol.
I am glad that they are taking things slow. Love them being flirty with each other.
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2015 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
It's Ok that is was late RL sometimes gets in the , I am not the type of reader of fanfic to worry about..untill it comes 4 years and no update even then i just get a little sad but then i move on to a new story... Anyhow I loved this chapter, So happy they can move on even if it is in privet X-D so exciteing!!! Woot Woot!! Hope that you have a great rest of the week and a safe and fun weekend. Untill next time (In the writen words of Edward from Twilight) Stay Safe ;-)
Date: 28 Oct 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 8
Worth the wait
Date: 28 Oct 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Edward is right. They need to slow down a bit and really talk about what they want. He does want a fuck. He wants the whole fairy tale. He needs to court her in public and in private.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Ugh, really.. please post soon like now. Want another chapter asap.
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2015 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
tease
Date: 27 Oct 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
We're getting there.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
I give him a week tops before he pushes her to the ground and has his way with her. Lol.
Date: 27 Oct 2015 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
👐👐👐👐
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Things were getting hot and heavy. Glad they cooled it off. They need to take things slow.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Loved it!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Finally! They're admitting their attraction to one another. I think by Edward putting everything on hold for now he really is showing how much he cares - loves Bella. He wants more for her! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
At least Edward had the sense to put the breaks on before both of their lives could be up ended by the paps.
Will Edward really attempt to date Bella like an ordinary suitor? Not sure the public or press will be ready for that.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
*ugh* this is frustrating, but i get they have to take caution and let this work out itself out so everyone stays safe in the end.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Thanks good chapter
Date: 26 Oct 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
At least they got to kiss - and boy was that fun
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
He is being a great guy. She deserves to be traeted like a lady.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 26 Oct 2015 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 (Part 5)
I decided to look up this story on this website because of the pictures you were talking about and I love them! From now on I think I will read this story from here instead of Fanfiction.net! I find this website doesn't put restrictions like the other one does and I like that! I can understand the need too, my young nieces read fanfiction but I try to guide that to only PG stories, so I am keeping this website a secret!
love, Love, LOVE this story and I will tell anyone to read this story but to the fans who look and read reviews, just not to confuse readers I have nicknamed Tanya! I only call her Twit Twat! Because she is a Twit for abandoning her child and Twat for thinking a piece of her is all a man wants, esp., Edward at the hotel! She deserves the nickname!
read this story everybody esp., if you love Daddyward! I sure do, I try to find any story where Edward has a baby or a cute talking toddler! I just love baby language!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Stolen kisses behind fortress walls. Luckily everything they need can be found there. It is hard to imagine living in a bubble like this but all things come to pass and when they do they will have the happiness they deserve. :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Edward sure has a lot of self control
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
How long will it be until he feels it's safe to take her on a date? It has to be at least months. And even then. the press probably won't be very forgiving. Is he aware he's going to torture Bella and himself for weeks on end? Is intentions may be noble but sadly I'm afraid they won't do much good.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
So sweet he wants to treat her right
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Ugh, I feel robbed, lol. I thought they were gonna seal the deal, but Edward's right. Tanya would play it to her favor and I definitely don't want her getting away with anything. Doing things the 'right' way will be better for everyone in the long run.
Sherry
Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
He is right. The paparazzi would mutilate her.
Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
And us three!!!!!
Too bad they can't go out on a date... But they could have a date in the house... Seems big enough, even with everyone living and constantly coming and going to and from it.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Hot damn that was hot for a moment but he is right she should be cherished
Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 6
Love!
Date: 26 Oct 2015 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Oh man...now is a good time
Date: 25 Oct 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Loved it. Bella is right some day Tanya will be back.
Date: 25 Oct 2015 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Wonderful! Things seem to be looking up for them - and for Charlie!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Bout damn time!!!! Now...what is Tanya cooking up in her mind?!?!?!
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Any kiss between them is so heated!
Date: 24 Oct 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Mercy;-)'
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
This chapter made me smile.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2015 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Thanks good chapter
Date: 24 Oct 2015 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
What, that's it?
Date: 24 Oct 2015 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Very very good
Not sure why but I had to go to TWCS site and pull the story up
Date: 23 Oct 2015 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
yippy yippy Tanya is gone for now
Date: 23 Oct 2015 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Be.Still.My.Heart. He is a free man and he is wasting no time jumping from the frying pan and into the fire. However, this is no ordinary fire. Nope. This is the fire of desire.
Also did you notice the lighter atmosphere of "HOME". Alice and Jasper in their musical moment created quite an image. Rosalie and Emmett rounded out the group as they ate with conversation and laughter ... a memory in the making.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Well Tanya is out, good riddance. Great part. Thanks.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Oct 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Tanya is reaping what she sewed.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
awwww for first kiss. Tanya is getting what she deserved
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
It's too soon for them to take this budding relationship further into the physical realm. Even though they both want and need it right now. The reasons for each of them needs to be talked out so they don't regret their actions or sabotage their future together.
Date: 23 Oct 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Yeah!!!!!!! Finally
Date: 23 Oct 2015 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Um, yasssss...
Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Goodby Tanya and hello love!
Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
LOVE THIS! :)
Date: 23 Oct 2015 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 18 Part 5
Finally!! Love it.