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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart

loving this



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Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter-12: A Beating Heart

Interesting twist at the end. :)



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Hahaha. Thanks. :D

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

Edward is confused,  just like everyone is who is in love. He won't believe how happy he is.



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He'll come around ... in time ... maybe? ;)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2015 8:40 PM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

; )



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:D

Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

I love when you bring Emmet into the story he just makes me laugh



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*Grins* I can't help but channel my inner clown through him at times. ;)

Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: AdminKelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2015 2:30 AM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

Em is always such a goober,  but a sweet one. 



Author's Response:

Yeah ... I love writing Em. :D

Thanks. :)

Thank you for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

It's fun to watch as they slowly draw closer to each other, sometimes against his better judgement! There seems to be some major adjustment to Edward's thinking going on here!



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2015 5:40 PM Title: Chapter-11: Ready or Not

:)



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:D

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 1:01 PM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

Edward needs to relax and enjoy the ride. 



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Well ... the ride's just starting though ... ;)

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Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 4:24 AM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

; )



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:D

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 2:35 AM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

I just LOVE your Edward. He's snarky and rude and his inner voice is completely confused when it comes to Bella, but he's so adorable. And he recognises that Bella is different and special. He'll soon see she's brave and loyal, too. 

Can't wait to see how their "!date" goes;)

Thank you for your update! Love it. -RoseE. x 



Author's Response:

*Giggles* Thank you! He's kind of growing on me too. ;)

You're welcome, hon.

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

Like how she gets him all in a frenzy



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

Poor Edward, drawn like a moth to a flame! I felt kind of bad for Mr. Smart Mouth, hearing it's his first date in 114 years! Bella sure has him confused! Her reactions are nothing like he expects, considering his opinion of what he he thinks he is! Have a safe trip and update when you can!



Author's Response:

Thanks, hon. My trip was great. :)

And yeah, poor guy indeed. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

:)



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:D

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2015 4:29 PM Title: Chapter-10: Peek-A-Book

LOL Love how she keep challenging his way of thinking.



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Thank you! *Grins widely*

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 10:41 PM Title: Chapter-9: Not A Magical World

I, too am curious as to what he will comeup with to answer her question!



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LOL. Hope his answer didn't disappoint you. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 10:33 PM Title: Chapter-8: The Lion’s Roar

See, Edward, you should always listen to your psychic sister!



Author's Response:

I know! If only the boy would listen! *sighs dramatically*

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 10:25 PM Title: Chapter-7: A Hallucination?

How nice of Leah to help Bella find a job, especially one she will love! The girl does seem to love books!



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Yes, she does. :)

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 10:02 PM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

Sounds like Leah is more Bella's speed than Rachel. Edward is still against his father helping his attitude. So, same as yesterday, in other words.



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Yeah ... sounds like it, doesn't it? ;)

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter-5: Empty Playground

One question came to mind, why wasn't the house cleaned before Bella got there? Alice really irritates Edward because she's usually right about what she sees!



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That question will be answered in due time. Till then, have patience and enjoy vampward. :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 8:21 PM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

Welcome to Alice's vision of the future, Edward! That was a confusing encounter for Bella, even more so for him!



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 8:12 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

Some welcome to Forks for Bella. The real puzzle was who was manipulating her return and is spying on her? Sounds to me like she may need the assistance of a supernatural friend!



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You might be right about the assistance. ;)

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:58 PM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

I have no trouble empathizing with Bella, I would want to know where I came from, too!



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:23 PM Title: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

I hope TPL won something, it was a really good story! This Edward is kind of a hardass, I think. He seems to even be a bit of a blackmailer, holding some sin over Alice's head.



Author's Response:

Hardass, smartass, pain in the ass, take your pick. He's all that. ;)

Thanks for your love for TPL. It didn't win anything, but even nominations are kind of a big deal. So ... I'm happy. :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 7:08 PM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

It is mildly surprising that Edward feels any guilt at his actions. He's usually depicted as fairly arrogant, kind of a take it or leave it type. Must come from the ability to read thoughts, I would guess.



Author's Response:

He's very much OOC in this fic, and that includes other ff vampwards as well.

I promise you'll love him. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Mar 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter-9: Not A Magical World

😱



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;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:40 PM Title: Chapter-9: Not A Magical World

:)



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:D

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Mar 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter-9: Not A Magical World

muhaha for the Dobby lesson.  I cried when he died.



Author's Response:

*sighs* I cry every time I watch that scene ... or read about it. :(

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Mar 2015 4:44 PM Title: Chapter-8: The Lion’s Roar

That nimrod Jake! Why would he even need Bella's help to begin with?? Was that his lame way of flirting? Jake's entire family is so strange. I mean, Leah is the normal one! (I got her HS dig about skanks going after your boyfriend, etc. Emily and Sam, right? LOL!) 

At least Bella hasn't felt compelled to be overtly 'nice' to anyone other than who she's supposed to be considerate of, like Edward (a supposed "victim") and Mrs. Goff (her elderly boss). She's not a doormat. Thanks for that! 

Edward is so clueless! He's already protecting Bella (like a mate). Wait til the real sh*t hits the fan. He'll get to play his "monster" card for her - I hope! *fingers crossed* because I'd LOVE to see this Edward get angry...

Great update! Thank you:) -RoseE. x



Author's Response:

Aww ... thanks for your sweet and encouraging words, hon.

 

Yep, that might have been about Emily and Sam ... we'll see ... ;)

 

I'm not a big fan of doormat Bella to be honest. There's sweet Bella and then there's pushover Bella. Being sweet doesn't necessarily mean that you have to be a pushover, right?

 

Well, I can promise you some monster-card in the future. :D

 

Thank you for reading.

 

Take care.

 

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter-8: The Lion’s Roar

; )



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 7:54 PM Title: Chapter-8: The Lion’s Roar

:)



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:D

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter-8: The Lion’s Roar

Ugh jake was a moron for trying to get her to help.  ROFL for E scaring the bejeesus out of him



Author's Response:

Bwahaha. I know. I actually spent half of the time laughing while writing this chapter. :P

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up on Friday.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter-7: A Hallucination?

; )



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:))

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 8:33 PM Title: Chapter-7: A Hallucination?

:)



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:D

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 6:18 PM Title: Chapter-7: A Hallucination?

Grouchy Edward is too funny



Author's Response:

Yeah ... he's a lot different from my usual AdorableWard, isn't he? ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

Edward is a little bit crabby I like it



Author's Response:

LOL. Tell you a secret? I like it too. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: RoseE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2015 2:05 PM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

I'm really enjoying this version if Vampward. Very compelling story!

Rachel worries me a bit. I mean, for a human, right? If I were Bella, alarms would be going off from the minute I landed. The situation is so vague all the way 'round. 

Maybe when Bella starts working at the bookstore there will be answers to the mystery of her parents and why she was abandoned or kidnapped or ???

SO looking forward to your update! Thank you. -RoseE. x

 



Author's Response:

THANK YOU!

I'm glad you're having fun with this snarky and less-broody version of VampWard. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

hmm sounds like Carlisle, Esme and Alice are a conspireing.   Liking Leah though.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I wanted to write a good Leah for a change. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter-5: Empty Playground

Glad Billy got the hint to let her be for awhile.



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Maybe ... ;)

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:14 PM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

Sneaky Alice. 



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Yeah. ;)

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

LOL for Alice and her manipulations.   Ack for the end..... James or one of the Volturi Kings???  hmmmm



Author's Response:

Hahaha. She can be quite crafty when needed. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 9:04 PM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

OMG  I just can't see Ang that way  ROFL.   Oooh so no Renee to make B have a crappy upbringing .



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LOL. I hope it's a good change. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:59 PM Title: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

hmmm so Alice had a little slip as well.   Aww Jazz wouldnt hold it against you.  Hee Hee for Frazled Edward at the end



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Lol. I'm glad you're having fun in here. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2015 8:50 PM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

hmm interesting start with Bad Boy Edward.



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Thank you! I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

; )



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:D

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:36 PM Title: Chapter-6: Just Another Beginning

:) :)



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:))

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 6:38 PM Title: Chapter-5: Empty Playground

:)



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:D

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

; )



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:D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann



Author's Response:

:D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: shea1223 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

Great update



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Thank you!

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 7:27 PM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

:)



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:))

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2015 7:20 PM Title: Chapter-4: A Touch of Innocence

Great meeting can't wait to see where you take us



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: olleyberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 4:11 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

I just love this stort. I'm so glad you updated.  I can't wait for Bella and Edward to meet!



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THANK YOU! :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

great chapter

fantastic story so far

this edward is very different but some of his remarks are very witty

wel don



Author's Response:

Aww ... thank you. :)

I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. :D

Thanks for reading.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

:)



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:))

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Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 5:55 PM Title: Chapter-3: Scheming Minds

; )



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:D

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Ann

Reviewer: olleyberry Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:58 PM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

Great story so far! I can't wait for Edward to meet Bella. 

 



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Thank you. :)

We're almost there. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

; )



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Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 10:11 PM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

:)



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:)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:22 PM Title: Chapter-2: Winds of Change

great chapter 

really enjoying reading this fict

well done



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few. :)

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

; )



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. :)

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

I like that your showing this side of Edward it was in Between the lines of the books but your showing more of his self loathing. I would love to see he an Bella have some great bantering that he walks away thinking what just happened here

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh you can count on it! I love writing a snarky-Bella. ;)

Thanks for reading. :)

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter-1: Intangible, Not Impossible

:)



Author's Response:

:))

Thanks for reading. :)

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 5:11 AM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Sounds like a very good start....can't wait for the next chapter. :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 4:46 AM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

; )



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 12:23 AM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Great start to the story 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 6:21 PM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

:) looking forward to reading this



Author's Response:

Thank you, hon. :*

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 5:37 PM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Interesting start. Looking forward to more 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 3:21 PM Title: Prologue: Freedom Is Hard To Come By

Oh yes! I love this Edward already. This should be a fun ride.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I hope you enjoy the ride. ;)

Thanks for reading.

The next chapter will be up in a few.

Take care.

Ann

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