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Reviewer: aelita48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

good beginning :)

 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 4:56 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for this story.

I can't find your rec for lizhobbs1974.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 19

At least Bella wants to learn. One big thing is to never tell a child you're going to do/get them something w/o talking to the parent(s) before and not in front of the child(ren).

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward sounds more like a mobster than Aro does.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm confused. In the 1st chapter, didn't it inform that Bella knew her daddy was in the Mafia? 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 2

Interesting.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 10:03 PM Title: Epilogue

Never a dull moment, that's for sure! This was a fun, fast read and a really good story!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 23/Epilogue Part One

What a darling picture that conjures up, a baby on each hip! His gorls sound like real individuals, too, with very different personalities!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 22

My word, Bella really did have anger issues , especially with her father! That was pretty brutal, considering she was a woman in labor! Hope all this turns out well for mama and babies!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 21

Boy, does this family know how to throw a baby shower, or what? The guys must not have been very upset with their "makeovers" sinc the girls didn't get in trouble. All the cute sayings on everything were just darling!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 20

The nurseries are wonderful and the babie's names are perfect!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

I am in awe of Alice and her brood!  I'll bet Bella was too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 18

The contrasts between Bella and Edward's childhood are rather stark. She sure got the short end of the stick, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great to have Esme as grandmother and nursery designer! Having no budget doesn't hurt, either!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

Why do men worry about raising girls? Could it be guilt from their younger days? LOL!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 15

The gender reveal party sounds like fun, though I hadn't heard of it before now, but then I am old!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 14

Can't help but feel sorry for Bella, she's a young girl with a lot on her plate! I hope she won't be in anymore danger, but won't hold my breath!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Looks like police work is not his only source of income! That's a big house, seven bedrooms, six and a half baths, tem acres, wow!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 12

I really didn't mind him killing the man who was going tokill his babies. Just defense of family in my book! Aro is absolute evil planning to do that to his own child! I'm so glad the brothers put a stop to that!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 11

Riding to the rescue and just in the nick of time, too!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

He better not do any such thing, not only would Edward kill him, Bella would never forgive him!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 9

What are the odds? First, his mom gives him a bad time about a wife and kids and Bella shows up pregnant with his twins! She just naturally gravitates to his family, I guess!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 8

These two need to communicate a little better it seems!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 7

So she's pregnant, that was quick and a bit unexpected. Makes me wonder if it was an accident, or deliberate?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 6

I would guess this will not endear him to Bella! I wonder if she has any idea what he does for a living?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 5

Now I have to wonder if Edward knows who he's dating, and who her father is!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4

Storm clouds on the horizon, she's a mob bosses daughter and he's a cop!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3

So far, Bella sounds kind of like a bit of a spoiled brat, thinking only of herself!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 2

Triplets, looking like cousins? That sure is different for a change! Poor Edward, always the last one to find love!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2016 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Typical teen rebellion, perhaps? With special circumstances from the sound of their background.

Reviewer: debb8 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just read this all the way through.  At the end of the epilogue you mention a story by Lizhobbs1974 I can't find it. This story was wonderful 



Author's Response:

She has not written it yet, at least I don't think she has.  My story, Lead Me Not Into Temptation, has been written, with 10 chapters posted so far.  So glad you liked it.  Hope you'll check out my story 😃

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2015 5:58 PM Title: Epilogue

cool little story ;) thanks for sharing it on here for us ;D

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 4:13 PM Title: Epilogue

:) loved this story 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 6:22 PM Title: Epilogue

Loved it

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2015 2:36 AM Title: Epilogue

; )

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 9:33 AM Title: Epilogue

Absolutely wonderful story and amazing Epilogue. I have thoroughly enjoyed it.

I loved Landon's cake fiasco, Bella taking out eight mob guys and Aro. Classic.

Every chapter has been a ten+

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words!  We're so happy you enjoyed it!  We hope you'll read our new stories once they start posting :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Mar 2015 7:03 AM Title: Epilogue

Such a great honeymoon wow. sad it is over great story Thanks so much. I am looking forward to what you guys do next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Yes, Bella and Edward still have it after almost 10 years together!  I cannot wait to see what you think of the new stories once they post!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2015 3:08 AM Title: Epilogue

The story you recommended I can not find. Love & A Broken Heart. I looked on here and also ff. No luck. 

 

Cute ending to this story. 



Author's Response:

Both "Love & A Broken Heart" and "Lead Me Not Into Temptation" haven't been written yet.  They're coming soon from us ;)  So glad you liked this ending!  Keep us on alert so you know when the stories come out!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 23/Epilogue Part One

He is such a great dad

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2015 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 23/Epilogue Part One

Where is Bella, did she die

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 23/Epilogue Part One

So did Bella die??



Author's Response:

U shall see soon my dear glad u liked it :)

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 22

Great update 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 22

; )

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 21

I know when I had an emergency c-section my boyfriend at the time came in the room, maybe because he is 6'5" and 250lbs, but he was with me. maybe some states are different, they lost the heart beat of my daughter and the cord was wrapped around her neck twice.

Author's Response:

Hospital policy states that : 'If the c-section is planned and you're going to be awake during the surgery, most hospitals will allow your partner to stay with you, although you should be sure to discuss this with your caregiver ahead of time. If you have an emergency c-section, your medical team will need to keep distractions to a minimum, so he'll be asked to wait outside the operating room.' This was an emergency c-section. The babies were in danger, and Bella may have been in trouble, too, so they had to get them out NOW without Edward in the OR.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 22

WAM, BAM, Thank you Mame!!! I didn't have a clue Bella was such an innovative and skilled assassin!!! I really don't have a clue how any of your readers will react. After Aro's attempt to kill Ellie and Emma, I couldn't help but believe he had signed his own death warrant. However, I thought it would be Edward who executed him, law or no law. It's hard to wrap my head around how Bella killed him a his men in labor. Wow!!!!! There is only one thing I wish she'd done slightly different. I wish she'd used the switch blade to cut off his balls and then shoved them down his throat before she'd set him on fire!!!! I apologize for being blood thirsty. I simply have very strong feelings in regard to his treatment of Bella. He was a hard hearted man with zero compassion and to me he deserved everything she did and more. Thanks for sharing this story with us your readers. I'm looking forward to the Epilogue.

Author's Response:

Thank so much for your review!  It doesn't make you blood thirsty at all!  In fact, we are glad our readers disliked Aro, too!  As much fun as it would have been to write that about Aro, I don't think Bella could have easily done that with a 9 month pregnant with twins belly.  Nor do I think she could have done it while in labor ;)  We hope you like the Epilogue...it's being written as we type!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

They can not stop him from going into the operating room, I know when I had a emergency c-section they tried to keep my fiancee out, but he came in anyway...The women need representation while under the knife, It used to be the father could not go in know they are allowed in just encase something happens.

Author's Response:

Hospital policy states that : 'If the c-section is planned and you're going to be awake during the surgery, most hospitals will allow your partner to stay with you, although you should be sure to discuss this with your caregiver ahead of time. If you have an emergency c-section, your medical team will need to keep distractions to a minimum, so he'll be asked to wait outside the operating room.' This was an emergency c-section. The babies were in danger, and Bella may have been in trouble, too, so they had to get them out NOW without Edward in the OR.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella is a bad ass love her.  I hope she comes through the birth ok and still be able to have more kids later.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support!  We shall see with the epilogue :)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 22

Wow...

No messing with prego Bella! LOL



Author's Response:

Seriously!  She's got a temper on her.  Just because she was pregnant didn't mean it was going to go away...if anything, it increased ;)

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 16

This is really a cute story, an  a great way to reveal what the baby is! :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you'll continue reading and reviewing :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 21

Cool party love the men makeup lol



Author's Response:

Thank you!  The men getting "madeover" was all Liz's idea.  I hope you liked it all :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 20

Love the rooms love the names so sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Reviewer: heartfortwilight Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Mar 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Lovely story.  Will be watching for your next update.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope that, if you feel so inclined, you'll review the other chapters.  If not, that's okay, too.  We appreciate you reading it :)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2015 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

; )



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: beckey Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 19

NEED SOME LEMON SOON PLZ



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Edward isn't available for lemons.  I don't know if you've read all the other chapters, but he's busy with work right now.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love your story glad you. Can not wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Just one question, did you mean to write something after the word "you"?  ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2015 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 19

Bella has a lot to learn but she will get it :)



Author's Response:

Of course she will :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

It is good she is getting to know the family she is part of now but it must be so hard not having Edward around.



Author's Response:

Yes, it is...on both sides.  She misses Edward, and I think these family meetings are helping a little in distracting her from that.

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2015 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 18

; )



Author's Response:

Hope that means you liked it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 17

Things are moving right along lol



Author's Response:

Yep :)

Reviewer: pughtwins Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2015 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 16

; )



Author's Response:

Hope you liked it :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 16

YEA Girls..

Author's Response:

Girl power ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2015 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 16

That is the coolest way to find out loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I (RAH07890) loved seeing that idea on Pinterest, and thought it would be perfect for these two!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 15

Cute idea for the gender reveal! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I (RAH07890) saw it on Pinterest and fell in love with the idea :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 15

Nice long chapter thanks.  Good they are getting to know each other I am excited for there lives together.  When are we going to hear from Aro again?



Author's Response:

You're welcome!  I hope you liked what they revealed to each other.  We won't be hearing from Aro for a while (at least six chapters).  We thought Bella needed some good times in her life after her father kidnapped her and tried to kill her babies.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 14

Where did he get the money for this house? 



Author's Response:

Edward (along with his brothers) has lots of money from his grandfather Cullen.  Also, you have to remember that Carlisle is a renowned doctor, and Esme is a famous interior designer.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 14

What a house he just wants her to know that it is theres now she has to leave it not fare lol.  He is going to take care of the only way he knows how.



Author's Response:

Yes, exactly!  He wants her to know that it's going to be their house/home once this Aro mess is over.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 14

Well not as secure as I thought, atleast she will be with Mama Esme and Carlisle

Author's Response:

It's still very secure.  Edward just wants to make sure she is as safe as possible.  Bella would be all alone in that house (Edward would stay at his apartment in the city while working the case), and he doesn't want that to happen.  Also, since Aro knows Edward, he could have found his address and then, if Bella stayed, found Bella and the babies, and kidnap them all over again.  He doesn't know Carlisle and Esme, so she  is safe there (as well as the babies).

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 13

Sounds like a well secured home..

Author's Response:

Well, when you work for the NYPD, you want the best security money can buy :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 13

So she gets to see her new home I think she likes ;)



Author's Response:

You'll get to hear more about the house in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Feb 2015 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 13

Looks like Edward has a few more secrets to explain.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 12

It might be short but it made me smile!



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks :)  We really appreciate it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward will protect her and he shot the doctor wow



Author's Response:

Of course he will protect her :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 11

Edward is going to get his baby momma!



Author's Response:

Go Edward!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2015 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 11

They will be sorry they messed with Bella 



Author's Response:

Yes, they will!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2015 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh no he is not he just lost any loyalty Bella had for him. Where is edward 



Author's Response:

He's coming :D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2015 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh man twins!  And now Edward might be able to get a trace on Aro.



Author's Response:

:D

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

Now Aro is going to be realy pissed lol.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 8

The lemon was great!  The pregnancy is shocking!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2015 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

How did he finds out



Author's Response:

Some men are very preceptive.  :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2015 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

So your response to my question about would she care and you reminding me she was using her dad for his money was to help me not get anxious about when is she coming back to him.  I'll be waiting for your update. :)



Author's Response:

The next update will be on Wednesday.  I hope that the future chapters will answer your questions/ease any anxieties you may have.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

She has to be in shock. Do we get to hear from her?



Author's Response:

Yes, in fact, the next chapter will be Bella's POV from this chapter :)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2015 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 6

I wonder will she even care?  Will she want to help him? Will it matter if he is a cop? 



Author's Response:

You'll have to read chapter 7 to find out :)  Remember, Bella just used Aro's money to get his affection/love.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

I so need to know whatshe did 



Author's Response:

You'll have to read to find out more :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6

I really don't know if she will be pissed or not. At this stage Bella might rebel against her father and think it is OK, but if he is as big of a player then Edward could in trouble.

Author's Response:

You'll see soon enough :)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2015 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

This sounds so good. Does Edward know how young Bella is?



Author's Response:

He knows that she's younger than he is.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh oh



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5

Well she is 18 and graduated high school so she doesn't have to go home with Daddy

Author's Response:

Very true, but Aro is very protective of her.  Remember, even though she was technically "legal", he grounded her for sneaking out of the house.

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

Now bella in deep trouble with her dad.



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 5

It seems Edward has a death wish!



Author's Response:

Yeah, even though he's 35, he can still be kind of stupid about some things, just like most men :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

So Edward knows who she is and who her dad is now



Author's Response:

He knows that her father is protective of her.  Hope you liked it :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Does that case have something to do with Isabella

Author's Response:

It might, or it might not ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

So the boys are the law shit and he just had the best sex with the criminals daughter.



Author's Response:

The plot thickens ;)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Edward work for law enforcement and Bella is a mob bosses daughter. This two sure are going have a lot of trouble.



Author's Response:

;)  Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: britchick69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 2

I liked the idea of them being triplets.

Enjoying so far

xx



Author's Response:

I am so happy you are enjoying it!  Liz came up with the triplet idea :)

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 3

Love your story so far can not wait for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  We are so happy you love it!  Next chapter will be on Wednesday :)

Reviewer: vampireGIRL1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2015 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait for edward and bella to meet each other



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it!  They'll meet soon, I PROMISE :D

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 3

I'm so intrigued!  I look forward to the age difference!  Is Edward a cop I'm wondering?



Author's Response:

Thanks!  We both love an older Edward!  And you'll find out a hint in the next chapter :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

Wow she is crying out for attention from her father, and by chance do the boys own a club.......I am excited to read more

Author's Response:

Yes, she is crying out for attention, but it's all she's known.  You'll find out a hint as to the boys' occupation in the next chapter :)  So glad you like it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 3

How is she going to get away from Dave



Author's Response:

She'll figure out a way.  She's smarter than you think.  

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

He is the quite one of the three, what do they do for a living

Author's Response:

All will be revealed, don't worry :)

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