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Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

So tragically beautiful. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 10

Even when you are sick your imagination is brilliant!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 12

Awesome chapter.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 11

:)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 10

:)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

great ch

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 11

can't wait to see what happens

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 10

It's interesting seeing Bella watch things from the outside in so to speak.  What she knows is what they tell her and that's that.  Alice here, if I'm right, is not only a Druid, but an amazingly powerful person.  Loved it!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 10

ok now i don't know what's happening

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 10

I hope you feel better soon.  I cant wait for more what will Alice do.

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 10

good

hope you feel better soon

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 9

This is fascinating!  Sorry not to have reviewed for a bit, but I was away on vacation with my family.  The upside is that I got the treat of several chapters all at once!  Not only do I wonder where Bella is, but I find myself wondering WHEN Bella is.  If I'm right, the town that was deserted was Forks and the cliff, the bluffs near the reservation.  That second curse is a doozy!  Great work and thank you for all the wonderful mind-candy!

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jan 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9

Can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 9

Jasper is being honest with her?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 9

:):)

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2015 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, you just keep us guessing, don't you?  Nicely done

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

Ok so we now know for sure she has super human strength.....and that's about it.  Every chapter really ends with a cliffie bc one question gets answered but causes 20 more questions.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 8

loving this

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

well if she a vampier then why don't she drink blood ?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 8

can't wait to find out what is going on

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2015 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

OMG I cant wait to find out what is happening

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

groweled there is more to the curse??

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

So she must be a vampire and they were waiting for her to show it????  Still on the edge of my seat.

Reviewer: Team66fan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 7

Intriguing start,  I can't wait to read more soon! 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 7

hmm . . . seems to easy of an escape

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

well she can't be a vampier becuse she sleeps so why wood he let her go?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

This is so intriguing! One of those stories you aren't 100 % who the good guys are yet.  I'm excited about a relentless update soon too!  Your mob stories are some of the best!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

If she understands Edward's last word is to save her life.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

:) :)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jan 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 6

good

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

Why did they do this to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Dec 2014 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

How did that happen

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 5

Does she need a ssweet Edward kiss to make it all better?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4

Oh crap!  This is not what I was expecting....

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

You are soooo good at writing suspense!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 5

:)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

So Paul is a dirt bag....

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

=)

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2014 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 4

Now this is sounding more than a bit interesting!  Cursed?  By whom?!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

what the ? cursed?

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

cursed??

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Dec 2014 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 4

:)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

wow love this ch

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 3

so many questions :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

She is so confused

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 2

interesting she didn't ask any other questions

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Dec 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 2

What happened to her

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Sounds great will be looking forward to more.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Dec 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

And has me hooked!  I know you are going to deliver something good! 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow love how it starts

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

Now THAT is one heck of an opening!  Marvelous!  Anything and anyone, anyplace and anytime is possible.  You have my undivided attention!  I look forward to another journey with you and your muse!  Thank you!  I also hope this means you're feeling better!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1

:):)

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 1

=)

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