Date: 12 Jan 2016 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Edward's Love
I loved the new chapter. You make me smile when I read this story so thank you. Poor Alice makes me feel bad for her morning sickness. Looking forward to the party and the Jessica and Mike drama.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella
A tissue warning would have been nice :)........ You just made me cry. Love it. I hope she goes and find Aro. I hope he's still alive so that we can hear his side of the story.
I know how you feel. Nanna Swan was a lovely lady and her story was so full of love. she didn't sound bitter though, i think she was more regretful that she never confronted Aro.
Ah well. thanks for your lovely comment and thanks for reading my story.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella
Loving it! Bless Nana Swan. I think Isabella should find Around and see what occurred from his point of view.
i loved writing Nanna Swan. I have a soft spot for Siobhan. Perhaps we will hear Aro's story, one way or another....
thanks for reading and thanks for your review.
Date: 01 Nov 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella
Grandma put a lot in that letter wow. I dont think the mean letter came from Aro I think it was his dad. I hope Bella finds him. Cant wait for more
the letter was very full, i can understand Edward wanting to just sleep on it and discuss it on the morrow. perhaps we'll hear Aro's side of things, one way or another.
thanks for supporting my story.
Date: 08 Oct 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift
Alice and Jasper are clueless. Who is taking care of the baby when they are at school and studying? It would be better to put the baby up for adoption than have it shuffled from babysitter to babysitter while they live the dream.
Date: 06 Oct 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 Shake it off
I really feel that Bee is over reacting, and being overly a sensitive for a person that generally doesn't care what people say. Not to mention that he wasn't necessarily blaming her but admitting thatvshe gets under his skin.
Date: 05 Oct 2015 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift
I am so disappointed in Alice and Jasper. What a selfish choice they made. I am so proud of Bella for standing up and pointing out what an idiotic reason for them to conceive a child. I hope that they smarten up before the child enters the world. >:(
I really do love this story and I am very excited for Edward to read Nanna Swan's Letter! :)
Date: 09 May 2015 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 11- a long day
Who could her grandfather be?? The suspense and buildup of Bee's backstory and lineage really makes for a compelling read! The Gaelic was a clue, yeah? Maybe.
Did the coach know Jacob was using steroids as well? Unforgivable. It's horrible that no one came forward to complain about Jacob's behaviour previous to his assault on Bee. But we all know this happens in real life. Athletes and their success come before coeds being sexually/physically abused by prize jocks. It happens.
I loved the part in the judge's chambers where Esme realizes what a treasure Bee really is and how Edward sees it and has come to love her; how perfect they are for one another in that sense. That was a wonderful scene.
I really like Rosalie and think that she will be a loyal friend and protector to Bee. If James knows what's good for him, he'll have given up on finding her...right?
Thank you for such sweet characters. I really enjoy your updates! -RoseE. x
Date: 03 May 2015 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 11- a long day
LOL for E not knowing how to do laundry. My kids all know how to do theirs. I'm guilty about the cooking part though.... although I really wasn't taught. I was so busy with sports and working part/full time through highschool I never found time to learn.
Wonder what the story is with her grandfather. Will be interesting to find out though.
Date: 19 Mar 2015 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 6 - she be but little
Substitutes get the lessons the moment They walk into class. Perhaps just moments before the students. It is a signment left by their regular teacher. We do not "teach" perse in the high school grades only in elementary school. I sub all we in Algebra 1 I have not taken that class in 54 years. I have had very little use of algebra in my adult life. So there is No way in the current method of teaching I could explain the problems to the students. -
Well in schools today. That would be a call to the police. He has attacked her kissing is sexual and so therefore he might be in juvie court now.
Hello, I am loving reading your reviews. i know what you mean about substitute teaching - my brother has been a subsittute teacher for the past 10 years and he is often thrown in with very little notice and no lesson plans to pick up on. especially when it is on ly for a few days. personally i think this teacher copes rather well trying to keep them busy and on subject (though i think she finds it difficult to know what to do with fancy pants and busy bee - a couple of bright sparks).
thanks for reviewing i love reading them.
Date: 31 Jan 2015 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - she be but little
Bullies need to be called on their behaviour and made to pay. No matter the reasons, no matter the psychology behind the sociopathic anger that drives them. Bullies have to be punished. Period.
I can't wait to see what the Cullens do about it!
Also enjoyed the witty banter between E+B.
Thank you. Great chapter. -RoseE. x