Date: 18 Mar 2020 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
This was one of the best always looked forward to your post. I have been away for a time now Im back and trying to catch up. Thanks so much
Date: 09 Mar 2020 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
Loved loved loved this story. Would Def love to see a futuretake/epilogue. Ty for writing and sharing.
Date: 09 Mar 2020 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
Sounds like she's got a huge new family to add to her current ones.
Date: 04 Mar 2020 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
Love it
Date: 03 Mar 2020 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
This story was on my favorite list for the longest time i am beyond thrilled you completed. Bee and Fancy were such beloved characters. Bees personality and perseverance was so endearing.
You ever consider continuing your Agent Swan UssSpam story? It had an mysterious plot. -Ajfflady
Date: 01 Mar 2020 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
Thank you for a lovely story (:
Date: 23 Feb 2020 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
:) loved this story
Date: 23 Feb 2020 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
I absolutely love this!! I do hope that there will be future takes. I will never not want to read about them! ;)
Date: 23 Feb 2020 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Belonging
:}
Date: 28 Nov 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Busy Bee
Miss this story!
Date: 28 Nov 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Busy Bee
Miss this story!
Date: 28 Nov 2019 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Busy Bee
Miss this story!
Date: 05 Jul 2019 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
I hope this story continues to update!
Date: 21 Mar 2018 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
They are too cute. I love Italy.
Date: 13 Mar 2018 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
Glad B can see past the pain of her past to her wonderful future. The plane scene was too funny. Aww for her now having even more family
Date: 07 Mar 2018 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
Love it update soon
Date: 01 Mar 2018 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
Its a whole new world for her and family every where she looks.
Date: 26 Feb 2018 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
I'm glad this is still updating. Sweet intro chapter.
Date: 25 Feb 2018 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
I am married to an Itallian. He makes very delicious food which is all good. He even made eggplant taste good.
Date: 25 Feb 2018 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 26 Homecoming
I am glad you finally updated, almost had to re read the story. Update again soon please
Date: 21 Apr 2017 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
I'm glad Aro realized that Isabella is a Cullen and he has to accept them all. He can't just come in and take over.
Date: 19 Apr 2017 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
Thank you...lovely chapter.
Xx T
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
Oh. Missed the updates on this one. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Apr 2017 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
Oh. Missed the updates on this one. Great chapter.
Date: 15 Apr 2017 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
She is so smart they should of known that they could not fool her. What a cool place.
Date: 15 Apr 2017 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
Nope, you can't fool Bee! She is a very smart girl! ;) I love this story! These characters are so wonderful!! ;)
Date: 14 Apr 2017 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
I just love that you made Aro and Ciaus good guys in this story. It's rarely done. I like Aro as a dotting grandfather. He truly loved his Siobhan, didn't he. I can't wait to read about their trip to Italy. I know you said one more chapter and maybe an epi, but I really hope you do an epi. I like seeing a little glimpse of the future. To me, that is the true end of a story. So I'm going to say right here and right now, PLEASE WRITE AN EPI?
:) thanks, Maria
Date: 14 Apr 2017 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
I Love It!!!!!!!! Please update soon!!
Date: 14 Apr 2017 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
Can't fool B for long. Glad Aro is bieng so accepting of what B wants and where
Date: 14 Apr 2017 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 25 - No secrets in New York
:)
Date: 24 Feb 2017 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
I'm glad Bella isn't throwing away her Cullen family. They love her so much. Aro is a little pushy thinking he could just take Bella away.
Date: 23 Jan 2017 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
Not sure who was going to piss on Bella first I am so glad it didnt come to that.
Date: 22 Jan 2017 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
Thanks for the update! I have missed these two!
Date: 17 Jan 2017 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
wow He invited them all to Italy. Wonder how that will go.
Date: 16 Jan 2017 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE THEM!! ;)
Date: 16 Jan 2017 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
:)
Date: 16 Jan 2017 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 24 - the best is yet to come
Great chapter! Love how everyone got on team Bella.
XoxoxoxoX
Alia
Date: 18 Dec 2016 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
great story, keep on writing
Date: 06 Dec 2016 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
The love story of Siobhan and Aro was heartbreaking. What a travesty... And Aro not forgiving Marcus was understandable. It left me feeling melancholy for them all. They lost so much. Poor Charles never knew his father:(
I hope that Bella PLUS Edward and the Cullens will be able to visit Italy! That would be really nice. Bella will get to know her grandmother's back story from Aro and also meet her remaining family members.
I really enjoy reading these sweet characters so much. Regardless of the amount of their wealth or despite their suffering and loss, they're still kind and giving to others.
Excellent chapter. Looking forward to your next update! ~RoseE. x
Date: 04 Dec 2016 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Busy Bee
Interesting storyline
Date: 03 Dec 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
Edward is not going to let her go to Italy without a fight or without him. So sad for Aro and his lose
Date: 29 Nov 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
WOW!! I am excited to find out how Aro's request will go. I don't think anyone will be happy about it! ;)
Date: 29 Nov 2016 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
Loved most of it. Don't think Bella or Edward is going to take the move news well.
Date: 28 Nov 2016 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 23 forever yours
:)
Date: 18 Jul 2016 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
He may be her grandfather, but Bella is still a Cullen.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
I'm all caight up and completely hooked on this story!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews, i have read and enjoyed each one.
cheers,
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
The person who felt it unrealistic must not have children. My husband and i always say we might kill someone if they hurt our son, the only joking matter is my husband isn't the best planner so i would be the one to dispose of the body. Protective mothers are called momma bears for nothing.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Ding dong the stupid jerk is dead!! Thanks for making it a short angsty moment & not dragging it out.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
I was really hoping James was gone. Guess not!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Edward's Love
I hope she wears her gift from posey!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 16 - My Dearest Isabella
Love the quote!!
Date: 12 Jul 2016 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 15 - the greatest gift
Rosie posey, that is so cute! Then posey as a nickname it just really sweet! I like Rose now just for her nickname.
Date: 12 Jul 2016 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Big News!
I knew someone was going to end up preggers!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 13 - the talk
I knew she was going to spill the beans. Nowcarlisle & esme can have a good laugh privately too! This was very funny!
Date: 11 Jul 2016 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Phenomenal
Phenomenal!!!!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 7: no need for tears
Unbelievably SWEEEET!
Date: 10 Jul 2016 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - she be but little
The nerd duel was perfect for them! Jacob needs to be buried alive. You really caught me off guard with that.
Date: 10 Jul 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 5 - midnight confessions
I am finally getting to read this story and it is so cute how clueless they both are!!
Date: 09 Jul 2016 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
I love it she needs that more family that will truly love her. Edward was wanting to get his freak on lol
Date: 08 Jul 2016 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
Oh. So happy for Bella right now. She deserves to have some loving from relatives
Date: 08 Jul 2016 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
WOW!! I love it!! :)
Date: 07 Jul 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Confession
Poor Aro and Siobhan. Evil father.
Date: 10 May 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
such an amazing story
Date: 28 Apr 2016 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Glad they are being so supportive.
Date: 28 Apr 2016 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
I love Emmett! He's such an adorable nut! Yay! James is dead! And Bee is seeing that she's safe. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Loved loved loved it so much!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2016 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
She is stronger than she realizes.
Date: 05 Apr 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Oh Bee is going to be just fine!!
Date: 05 Apr 2016 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Great chapter, I don'tthink she will get over this quickly.
Date: 04 Apr 2016 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
This is really great!! I am really glad that they are all talking about what happened and asking what they can do to help make things better. That's a lot of love!! :)
Date: 04 Apr 2016 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Got to love Emmett lol. Bella has a lot to work on but she is off to a great start
Date: 03 Apr 2016 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 aftermath
Love, love, crazy love Esme! I was crying when Edward and Esme were talking to Bee and laughing at Emmett's antics. That's how my husband found me, laughing and crying. He shook his head and left the office. Men just don't get it. ;) Great chapter, even greater story.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 02 Apr 2016 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Fabulous chapter! Esme was amazing. I wanted to cry. I'm sure we'll hear how James found her, likely through the newspaper feature. Love this story and your excellent mr. fancy pants:P
Date: 17 Mar 2016 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Esme is one cool momma. Yeah James is dead and can't hurt Bella again. Bella needs some birth control, so she and Edward can fulfill their dreams without worrying about pregnancy. They have plenty of time for babies later.
Date: 17 Mar 2016 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Esme is a beast!!! Don't mess with her babies!! Bella pretty tough herself. Loving the girl power!!
bye james
Date: 15 Mar 2016 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Great chapter. Loved the hot coffee trick. Only saw one "oops," when Esme was talking to police, she never told them her location...
Keep up the great work!
Date: 14 Mar 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Go Esme. So brave. Glad Demetri shot the jerk.
Date: 14 Mar 2016 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Esme is amazing and she is a hero but most people know you dont get between a momma bear and her cub love her
Date: 13 Mar 2016 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Loved this chapter. Esme was so brave.
Date: 13 Mar 2016 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Mama Bear's are awesome!! I love how you let Esme save the day and not be a weak, crying mess at the wrong time!!! I look forward to your updates!! Thank you for sharing your work!!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Holy fantasticness!!! Esme is s super hero!!! :)
Date: 13 Mar 2016 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Esme
Way to go mama Esme! Take that you asshole! Well I for one am glad that James is gone. Permently. Thanks for not dragging it out. That chapter had just enough nail biting drama in it, without it dragging on and on. Just perfect.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 09 Mar 2016 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
thank you for the update.....well done..they have to find her
Date: 07 Mar 2016 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
ACK guessing he threated kids or something to get her to go with him. smart thing with the note
Date: 07 Mar 2016 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
HOLYSHIT!!! WTF JUST HAPPENED!?! OMFNG!!
He is going to be so upset with himself for being late if anything happens to her. I'm crying! :'(
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
OMG find her now Edward is going to lose his shit
Date: 07 Mar 2016 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - the morning after
Poor Bee. I hope she is alright
Date: 07 Feb 2016 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
This is a great story. I look forward to reading more. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Date: 28 Jan 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
Such a magical night.
Date: 27 Jan 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
Oh, don't stop now!! I am loving this story. This Edward is just divine, sexy, romantic and all man and Bee is such a beautiful soul, is other half. Please update again soon, like really soon. xxoo
Date: 27 Jan 2016 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
What a party she should be so proud. Emmett is a good brother.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
Thank you for the update....well done..The party was very nice...Emmentt words of wisdom priceless!!! I'm sure fancy pants and busy bee will be just fine
Date: 26 Jan 2016 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
Sweet party.
Date: 26 Jan 2016 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
:)
Date: 26 Jan 2016 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Great Expectations
This is great!