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Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 32

OMG ! Love your story can't wait for the sequel 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2018 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 32

nice update

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2018 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 31

Awesome story.



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Thanks - I'm glad you like it. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 31

nice update



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Thanks! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my Edward is going to have a hard time explaining this one to B. Go Rose with her batting skills p



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Hiya. Again thank-you for your reviews (I'm going to reply to this one so you don't get bombarded). Skanya is such a good name (and it made me laugh). Rose is pretty badass and she'll do anything for Bella. Once again, thanks for reviewing! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

Sounds like Tanya has been running her mouth to someone ie the whole Chelsea thing. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ugh already hate Skankya.  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2018 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 7

Rose is going to give Em a run for his money. 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2018 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 30

Yay Aro has been dealt with.



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It's been a long time coming! 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2018 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Glad they are making a little headway in the case  



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Hi. Thought I would reply to this review so you didn't get several. Thank-you so much for your reviews. They really mean a lot; I'm glad you're enjoying the story. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2018 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Charlie. Em is too funny  This Skankya thing makes me nervous  

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2018 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

Sounds like Skankya is going to be trouble .Poor Charlie. 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2018 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 29

nice update

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2018 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

ah  Jessica is Em's progeny?!?!?  interesting twist. and they are brothers......yea the lie would piss me off too.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2018 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 2

It's neat having Rose and B both being mind readers.  Hopefully, you have Edward more like Eric in true blood because I really, really, really hate Scumbill.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2018 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

INteresting start.  Some differences from True Blood. 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2018 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can’t wait for more 



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Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2018 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2018 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

nice update

Reviewer: leinchen Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2018 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 1

HI,

I just wanted to let you know how much I enjoy reading this.

Although Bella experienced a very traumatic break of confidence with Ewards loosing control like this, but I hope, she'll forgive him when she's had some time to heal.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Greetings from Germany,

leinchen



Author's Response:

Hi, 

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you like this story and you're looking forward to the next chapter. 

Auf wiedersehen (I hope I got that right!) 

Princess Treacle 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2018 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 27

So sad for Edward and Bella, hope they are able to overcome this situation.  I hope Rose finally admits she really likes Em.



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You'll have to wait and see! Thanks for your review! 

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2018 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

Yes, the troops are there to rescue them.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 25

Oh man, Suplica is going to cause trouble and maybe her interferring is going to help them get out of there.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2018 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can’t wait for more!!!



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Thank-you for reviewing. The next chapter is coming! 

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2018 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2018 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 27

nice update



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Thank-you for reviewing. I've only just realised you can respond to reviews or I would have done so earlier! 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2018 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 26

nice update

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2018 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2018 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 25

nice update

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 24

I wish edward could just bite her so they could all kick aro's butt!! Hopefully esme can save them.



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I just wanted to say thank-you for your reviews to my story 'Out of the Coffin' - it really means a lot! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 23

I look forward to tanya being killed!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 22

Rose keeps denying emmett & she is going to have her world rocked when she finally invites him in.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

Esme needs a kiss really badly!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 20

They just can't get a break!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ding dong the maenade is dead!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 18

The doc is going to save the day!!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2018 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 17

Here we go!!!

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2018 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

nice update

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2018 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved it can’t wait for more 



Author's Response:

I just wanted to say thank-you for your review of my story 'Out of the Coffin' - it really means a lot! 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Really good . Embarrassing and scary. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Really good . Embarrassing and scary. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2018 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 20

Really good . Embarrassing and scary. Thanks

Reviewer: wolfmantff Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 23

nice story so far

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2018 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 23

Loved it can’t wait for more 

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2018 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

Well Are and Tanya together makes a mess. I say kill Tanya the only way to clear up that problem

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2018 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21

Oh hurry up Ed has been taken

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2018 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

Good chapter now will Esme and Carlisle make a family for her baby

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2018 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 23

I think Jake will be prepared.  Aro and Sulpicia are truly insane.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2018 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 22

Poor Edward, I hope they make Aro and the weres suffer for what they are doing to him.

Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

Loving this story. I’m glad that I’m now caught up to this chapter. 

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

Wonderful. Simply wonderful. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 18

Loved this chapter. Thank you for writing. Try to mix it up a bit 😉

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

Be well. Beat this thing. On another point I thought I'd reuse that over used word yet again...Brilliant. :P Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Surprised again. How do you do it. What a place your mind must be. Brilliant. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Wow. So well played out. Um...;D. Brilliant. Thanks. So pleased you're feeling better.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 14

Lol. Holy Snapping Duck S**t Batman! Here's an overused adjective...BRILLIANT!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 13

Thrilling m thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 12

LOL. Holy mackerel. Amazing.

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 11

The plot thickens. Wonderful twists and turns. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

I've been thinking it was Mike but I'm never right. Lol. Such a good read. Oh! And what a good Oops cliffhanger. ;P

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 9

No words. I'm completely flummoxed!

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Did not expect this. And I can't fathom Tanya's game plan. Brilliant chapter. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loved the game played by Emmett and Rosalie. Lol. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Brilliant. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 5

Thoroughly enjoyable. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2017 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 4

Intriguing. Unexpected. Brilliant. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 3

So interesting. So fresh. Loving this story. Thank you

Reviewer: BridieM Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2

Really enjoyable. I am also liking your characters. Thanks

Reviewer: BridieM Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 1

Interesting changes you've made. Grandpa was a surprise. Lol. An enjoyable read. Thank you

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2017 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19

Love your story can't wait to read more! Glad your feeling better.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

That's why chelsea was so interested in bella.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

Tanya went right for the juggler with that comment to bella.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 14

This gets crazier & crazier but i can't stop reading! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

Not sure i trust the depties. Did jessica tell breaking dawn?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 12

Emmet is having his way with her i'm sure. 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2017 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 11

I was hoping she would get some of emmet's blood.

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 10

Edward is sooooo busted!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 9

Is chealsea heidi or tanya?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8

So why did tanya make edward do it if she didn't want the girl?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

I love what a stake does to them! Was that a wolf in the woods staring at bella?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

Why can't edward stay in her room with the curtains & blinds shut?

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

What is she thinking going into the woods with only a robe on. You had me so scared she wouldn't make it to Edward. Thankfully she did! 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2017 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 4

I have never watched true blood but if it's anything like how edward fed from her, i think i have a new show to watch! 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2015 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 12

Great the boys are back

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2015 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

I absolutelt love this story  

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well Fan Fiction is down So I am here reading.. Jasper says there is a problem.. Okay

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2015 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

I can't wait for rose and Emmet to have some interaction with Edward and Bella 

Reviewer: OposKneg Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

Outside, it is the ground not the floor. Your story has great flow until it hit that bump... it takes me away from the story which I don't want to happen. You have a great story here and I enjoy finding a new chapter every time it comes up. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: errant diva Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 10

Well now, Bella is sure to get the wrong idea. Will she give Edward a chance to explain? Hmmmmmmmm.

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2015 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

Hating Tanya 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2015 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope you bring more of Emmet into the twist of the story

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

love the four of them 

Reviewer: 1PETRALOUISE Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2015 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love that you put the guys outtakes in an that there on a United front. Hope Jake takes out Tanya

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hope you post again soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Feb 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

well if you ask me Jessica implied Edward brings "honey's" in there from time to time.

 

Jessica.. ugh

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Love that you have reposted this story I hope to read more soon

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 2

The wolf should go along and stay outside. Just saying that they might need extra muscle.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I hope you will keep this going, updating often. That is what creats interest. :-)

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