[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2015 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter, so happy Bella stood up for Alice!
Date: 06 Feb 2015 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved this chapter. Especially the ending
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2015 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love this story
Date: 06 Feb 2015 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 06 Feb 2015 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is my hero and Alice's I am so impressed with Bella as should edward he is so in love with her. Can't wait for next week
Date: 05 Feb 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
Glad B is being more comfortable. I was cheering with her standing up for Alice
Date: 05 Feb 2015 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome! they are so sweet together
Date: 31 Jan 2015 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ooh Jane knows bella and sash. Can't wait till all the secrets come out. And for rose and em. I get the feeling Royse isn't going to play nice at the event.
Date: 31 Jan 2015 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Really wanna know bella's true story. Rofl about the shirts
Date: 31 Jan 2015 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Well sounds like they are getting along better.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2015 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 11
Next week can't cum fast enough. (lol) READ YOU SOON.
Date: 30 Jan 2015 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can't wait till she tells him about her and how she is in mikes life. She wants Edward
Date: 30 Jan 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait to see how date night goes.
Date: 29 Jan 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Walls are coming down
Date: 29 Jan 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am really dying to know what Bella's secrets are. & I really hope Mike comes back safely. Great Chapter.
Date: 25 Jan 2015 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love this story. I'm hooked and cant wait to read more soon!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2015 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 10
Please update soon! I was enjoying reading the last 10 chapters and was disappointed to reach the end.
Date: 25 Jan 2015 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just picked up this story. I love it, can't wait for more.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
I love that sweet moment when Edward goes to look in. On sashes but u how he has to touch Bella even if it's small you bring his feelings across the page
Date: 23 Jan 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am soooo loving this story! Can't wait for more! Thanks. Do you post in FF?
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2015 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it, can't wait til next chappie.
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 10
She is just what he needs a women with fire
Date: 23 Jan 2015 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
As always, love your stories but don't get what Bella is trying to prove/say with the pink shirts & iron burns. Power struggle?
Date: 23 Jan 2015 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well played well played. Hahaha loved the last paragraph
Date: 22 Jan 2015 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 9
I am loving this story.
Date: 20 Jan 2015 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
The family meal was a great read but Edward referring to rose as stripper Rose was rather funny.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
When is she going to tell him she is not Sasha mom
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2015 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love it, but Sasha did a whammy on Bella, now Edward has to eventually know it wasn't Mike at all.
Date: 19 Jan 2015 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2015 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
I loved this chapter and your story funny shit at the end.Love it. Can not wait for next chapter.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 8
They really need to have a long talk about the Mike thing and the FAS. Thinking that Sasha really isn't Bella and Mikes, but some other situation.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
That is just too cute. So different from the man everyone comes into contact with.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 8
More soon please!!! I can't wait to find out more of Bella's past!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
When is Bella going to tell him she is not Sasha's mom???
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 8
Is Bella's Sasha mom? if so then Mike was Bella's boyfriend? or is her boyfriend?
[Report This]Date: 30 Dec 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
loved it, I love this Edward & Bella. Hope Mike will be OK & hope Edward changes & wins Bella's heart.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
oh goodness i am still dying to know the bak story between bella and mike
something is a miss
well seems edward and bella will be getting closer
lok forward to more
love it
Date: 26 Dec 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hopefully Bella's attitude will get better. Think we need to hear the whole story soon.
Date: 25 Dec 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
She is going to teach him lots of things
Date: 25 Dec 2014 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like Teddy....
Date: 25 Dec 2014 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 7
WHY IS BELLA SO UNGRATEFUL, IM CONFUSED. I LOVE THE STORY THANK YOU!
Date: 25 Dec 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
To to funny
Date: 24 Dec 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 7
I have a feeling bella doesn't want Carlisle to look at her medical records because it'll show she isn't Sasha's bio mom.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Poor Bella just trying to get by meds to expencive . Edward is kicking him self in the ass for that one. Bella is not Sasha's mom is she aunt?
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh my edward
i am trying to figure this out. is bella the mother of sasha. sasha called mike her dad so what is bella to her. mike says that he and bella weren't together
confused
thank god edward was able to come thru for bella. being diabectic and missing your medicine is nothing to full around with
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well it is coming together. Now I still think Sasha is her Sister.. I think
Date: 19 Dec 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 5
what did I say?? Sasha is related to Bella. I am still not sure she is her child. She could be her.. Sister. we all know Renee is loose in the morals.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am thinking he has not hurt either Bella or Sasha. Well we shall see.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh wow. Think James is gonna pay for not telling B what he was supposed too. Glad Sasha was there with her. Poor B.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 3
She is related to that child. I am waiting for that shoe to drop.
Date: 19 Dec 2014 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 6
I LOVE IT BUT CONFUSED AS ALWAYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOVE YA
Date: 19 Dec 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
of course I am in. You write, I read that is our deal..
Date: 18 Dec 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 6
Overreact much
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loving all their conversations.
Date: 12 Dec 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
He has a plan lol. Is Bella Sasha's sister and Mike is just helping them or is he a relitive also.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
oh edward lying to bella will not go over well
he has a good heart and he has alot to learn still and we really need to know what is bella's story
something is not right here. mike and bella fight to much for her to be so protective of him. it doesn't seem like they are a couple just like they are in on a secret and they have a pact to stay together
look forward to seeing where you go with this
thnk you
Date: 12 Dec 2014 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love the story. Can't wait for you to update soon.
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
so it seems bella is a mommy of sasha
seems she also might have health issues
look forward to more
love it
Date: 12 Dec 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 5
hmm I really wanna know what Mikes part in Bella and Sasha really is.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 1
hooked
look forward to more
Date: 09 Dec 2014 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 3
Please up date soon. I'm enjoying this story. Edward is bad ass in love with a 19 yr old Bella. I'm just wanting to know how the kid fits in the picture. I hope you continue with this story cuz its really good. I will b waiting for your update :)
Date: 05 Dec 2014 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 4
What is going on with Bella and Mike? Mike is so screwed for laying a hand on her. Edward is so gone but he can't figure out what is going on
Date: 05 Dec 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh my, Lovin this story so far.
See you next week
Date: 05 Dec 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm guessing Mike screwed B's mom or older sister maybe? at least I hope so.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am guessing that Bella & Mike are step sibs & Sasha is their half sib. The drugs from James are probably needed for a medical reason & they don't have the money to go through a doctor for a scrip
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2014 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ew Bella and mike having a kid, that should never happen. Not to mention that if he was 19 and she was 14 thats against the law so he should have been arrested for that. Plus its obvious that she was with him after she had Sasha. But I have a feeling shes covering up who Sasha's real mom is because I can't see Bella drinking alcohol while pregnant. So there's obviously more to the story. Glad mike is gone though he seems like hes a douche.
Date: 04 Dec 2014 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Post soon
Date: 04 Dec 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
He can say My Girls without flinching but yet he needs to go to see a Psych when he knows he is attracted to someone emotionally? I know that it the point but he is a little screwed up. HA!
Date: 04 Dec 2014 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
Sasha is bella/ Mike kid?
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm hook. Love this chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like this story