[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2015 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
thank you for the update..Why did Mike die? was something else wrong with him , we didn't know about? Please tell me nothing will happen to Sasha...We need to find Royce and torture him like he did Bella, tape it for the world to see
Date: 16 Apr 2015 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
you mademe cry !!! How the hell is Sasha gonna take this ?
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2015 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 19
"sobs" That is so sad that I want to shed water works. I had a feeling you all would kill off Mike, but I was hoping not.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
You made me cry. The first Mike I like and you kill huhim.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Omg so sad I really liked mike. Edward has to be strong for all of them
Date: 14 Apr 2015 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
This chapter was so sad.
Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
Whew......tear jerker!
Date: 14 Apr 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow Angela is a real piece of work. Snotty Skank. Hope E can keep Sasha safe from her and her family. Poor B
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hate this chapter! Reaching for a tissue. Ugh. It needed a warning.
[Report This]Date: 14 Apr 2015 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for more
Date: 07 Apr 2015 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 18
Bella gets to dramatic. Edward needed time to think. He didn't understand why they still thought he would hurt Mike. He has been so sweet to them and they still see the monster. Bella hurting herself solves nothing. Did she want him to feel guilty. Sasha is the smartest one. She sees the big soft heart.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18
Great story can't wait to see what you have up next.
Date: 02 Apr 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow! What an emotional chapter.
Date: 01 Apr 2015 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 18
Good, emotional chapter!
Date: 01 Apr 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMG Bella has to be ok Edward knows how important family is and I love how simple Sasha made things.
Date: 01 Apr 2015 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Welcome back!!!
I hope Edward doesn't make any more harsh decisions... I understand his reasoning, but I still don't agree.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love this chapter, hope Edward doesn't pull a new moon & leave. This chapter just was sad. "sobs" Can't wait until the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Mike came clean. Bella not taking car of herself is so scary. Sasha is an amazing little girl with a huge heart.
Wonderful job. There should be a sequel!
Glad your back and see you next post.
Date: 31 Mar 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 18
ugh Angela is such a witch. Well at least E went to the gym and didn't take it out on B or M. Sasha is too sweet. oh my B is really sick huh?
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, that was a tear jerker! Little Sasha is precious.
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Thank you for the update....I really was wondering what happen..thank you for posting..Wow I didn't see Angela being the mother..until you post again
Date: 31 Mar 2015 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 29 Mar 2015 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 17
Hi
I can't seem to contact you for a PM so here goes.
You were posting about once a week and you've been gone almost two weeks.
Are you girls okay?
Have you changed your schedule?
Are you planning on continuing this story?
I really love this story and I've missed you ladies.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Thank you,
Lana
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2015 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 17
I freakin' love this story.
It absolutely is not the run-of-the-mill mafoa/gangster story.
The story has been just that much more addictive because all the facts about Bella & Mike were not revealed in the beginning.
I did guess Bella wasn't actually Sasha's mom earlier on, but there were still plaenty of surprises.
It's thoroughly entertaining.jansails/jan2
Date: 14 Mar 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving this side of Edward. So sweet to the girls and the way he is friends with Mike. Please keep story going to end. I still want HEA with everyone. Thanks for sharing your story. :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Mar 2015 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love it can not wait for more.
Date: 14 Mar 2015 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 13 Mar 2015 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
your story is wonderful. but i think i know that sasha mother must be angella. jane doesnt like her for a mistirious reason.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 17
I love how Edward is such a softie. He treats everyone so well, even with his tough exterior.
Date: 13 Mar 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 17
wonderful xmas. Although you have me VERY worried about the egg donor part (I refuse to say mother).
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Love this chapter. So, beautiful
Date: 12 Mar 2015 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait for more! :)
Date: 12 Mar 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
Can I have one of him please lol.
Date: 10 Mar 2015 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 16
I love how they are all changing for the better.
Date: 09 Mar 2015 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 16
You know there are very few stories out there that cast Mike as anything other than a villian, but I have to say that I really, really like this Mike. He's a great dad and friend. I hope nothing happens to him. I can't wait to see who Sasha's mom is and what happened to her. Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 07 Mar 2015 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
Now he knows so glad. Mike is a great guy and loves he baby he loves Bella to just not the way Edward does.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
Then hurry, so I an read it again! Wonderful chapter. I so glad she told Edward some of the story and Edward and Mike have come to a better understanding and place.
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 16
Love it can not wait for more,great story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Mar 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 16
I really hope Mike will be OK., The reassurance he wanted Edward to give him got me worried. Love the chapter & glad everything is out in the open.
Date: 06 Mar 2015 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 16
that explained a lot thanx
Date: 06 Mar 2015 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 16
oooh so we got part fo the story at least. Now you have my mind going nuts wondering who Sasha's real mom is now.
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2015 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't exactly know why but I love this story. Great job!!! I wish you posted more than once a week.
Date: 03 Mar 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 15
Love the bonding between Mike an Edward
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2015 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am glad that Edward knows there wasn't anything between her & Mike & hope he knows never was & that Sasha is not her biological daughter. But hope Edward stays in Sasha's life as much as Bella's. Glad he & Mike are out & safe & hoipe to stay that way. great Chapter.
Date: 02 Mar 2015 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
Mike is a great guy him and Bella grew up in the system together? Bella is so worried about Edward
Date: 02 Mar 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 02 Mar 2015 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
Glad E was able to get mike out. ugh for him getting shot though. hmm Wonder what else B needs to tell E about.
Date: 24 Feb 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow this chapter was brutal but I loved it and can't wait for the next one
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love your story can not wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2015 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh, how I wish it wasn't going to be a week. You guys are amazing story tellers and writers. This story is so full of twists and turns. It has really kept me on edge. Take care and have a great week.
Date: 22 Feb 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh my God! I haven't had cried this hard in a while! Seriously my husband is wondering what's wrong with me LOL
Date: 21 Feb 2015 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
Again tears
Date: 21 Feb 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 21 Feb 2015 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, this chapter was very sad. I hope Edward can get Mike and get himself out too.
[Report This]Date: 21 Feb 2015 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
So heart breaking, I hope Edward & Mike come out alive & safe.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
Royce must die and Edward better hurry up and get back to his girls.
Date: 20 Feb 2015 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Ah more info about s. Mike is a donor. Wonder how they found that out. He's gonna get hurt
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
OH PLZ LET EDWARD COME OUT ALIVE
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow - so powerful. I didn't think Bella was Sasha's mom but did assume Mike was her dad.
great chapter!
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow what a chapter 100% tears loved this chapter, I hope Edward comes out of this ok he needs to make Bella and Sasha his family
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow! I totally did not expect to see Bella propose!
Date: 20 Feb 2015 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh sh**!!! It's about to on....
E/k
Date: 20 Feb 2015 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 14
oh f*ck, its kicking off !
Date: 19 Feb 2015 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter had me in tears great job
Date: 16 Feb 2015 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 13
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
[Report This]Date: 15 Feb 2015 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
You two seem to almost always leave me hanging and waiting for the shoe to drop. Suspense and thrillers are wonderful even if it happen every week. It is waiting a week to learn what happens is hard when I have wait a whole week. I've loved everything that you've written and done with the stories. It's just hard on my patience level. Bottom line the chapter was wonderful as per your usual. I'll be reading again next week. Thank you for the great story.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow So much information in this chapter. Sounds like Royce and Caius both need to be treated the way they treated Bella.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 13
Ooohhh my. Next week? I need a new chapter now.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my gosh, I am thiinking Sasha needs a transplant and Mike is the donor.
Date: 14 Feb 2015 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh wow! I totally did not expect that turn of events.
Date: 13 Feb 2015 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Royce is a dead man one way or the other so should Cauis. Is it Sasha's liver Edward needs to get Mike back NOW
Date: 13 Feb 2015 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
thanks for the update
Date: 13 Feb 2015 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Sorry, cant wait a week after that ! How 'bout a mid-week worry reviever ? Pleez
Date: 13 Feb 2015 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my god.. i thought it was somthing like that maight had happend to Bella.. I hope Edward takes chare of both Caius and Royce, and that Sasha will be alright. Cant wait for the next chapter. :)
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2015 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thank you for the update...........oh my....will they send Mike home now?..will Edward kill Royce..I sure hope so and make him suffer
[Report This]Date: 10 Feb 2015 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
See you!!! next week with another great chapter. READ YOU SOON.
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2015 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
Love your story kept me sitting on edge love it ,can not wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter.