Date: 17 Dec 2016 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another great story idea. Thank you for writing and sharing. I enjoyed reading it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 22
Such a fantastic story! Beautifully written, well put together. I really enjoyed it. Nice job. Thank you for all of your hard work. It clearly shows!
Date: 18 Nov 2015 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward handled her having a boyfriend a lot better than I thought he would. Lol. I have really enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love love love this chapter.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
I hope Royce suffers something horrible. Because I am pretty sure that Bella was not the only one he ever raped. Love the letter and the DVD that Mike left.
Date: 18 Nov 2015 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am glad that Mike told Edward the whole story. That was so sad. I am worried about how Sasha is going to take the news. Oh, I have been meaning to ask, why does Edward call her Firefly?
Date: 18 Nov 2015 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMGosh! I love little Sasha. She just tickles me.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 17
Perfect! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Date: 17 Nov 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
I am dying to know who Mike's ex girlfriend is. Hope we find out soon.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thanks for the information on Mike and some on Bella.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMGosh! ! ! ! ! ! ! That was so moving. Loved it!!!!
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh crap. Is Royce Sasha's dad??? WOW just WOW. So glad I do not have to wait for an update. Offor to read the next chapter.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Wow, glad Bella was there for Alice.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow, Jane is Sasha's dr. Small world. Glad she is trusting Edward. I just hope he doesn't do anything to screw it up.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Lol!!!!! Lover her turning his laundry pink.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward has got it bad. I am guessing that the bruise Edward saw last was from Sasha and not from Mike.
Date: 17 Nov 2015 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lol. Love Edward here at the end.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved this! !!!!
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Glad Bella is better. Poor Edward, he is just fucking up everytime he turns around. Ok, my theory is Sasha's may be Mike's but not Bella's. Maybe Bella's sister who died from drugs or alcohol?????
Date: 16 Nov 2015 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
I am just wondering if Bella and Mike are pretty have ever been involved with a high other. Something is just telling me NO. Can't wait to find out more about Bella and Sasha. I am not even convinced that Bella is Sasha's mom because Sasha calls her Beebee not mom.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 4
Is Mike abusing Bella? I do not trust Mike. I am wondering if Mike is also working for Royce.
Date: 16 Nov 2015 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Is Bella Sasha's Beebee? Is Mike her dad? What special needs does Sasha and Bella have?
Date: 16 Nov 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
What is the deal with Mike and Bella? Did Mike steal money from Edward?
Date: 16 Nov 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Ok, how did Bella know to call Emmett and Jasper?
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2015 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it even thoug you made me cry.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wonderful story.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
Loved this chapter.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh man, you're killing my feels, but it's so good. I can hardly wait to read on to Edward getting his hands on Royce.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
Ahh... this chapter killed my feels.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2015 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 18
Man, it doesn't seem like that can catch a break. I guess I was wrong about who Sasha's mother is, wouldn't have suspected it to be Angela.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
They're blending families so well.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
At least Mike is taking precautions. I'm wondering if Maria isn't Sasha's mother, Bella did have quite the reaction to her at the club.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 15
Bella and Mike have had a hell of a life. Is Sasha Mike's ex-girlfriend's kid?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Tears filling my eyes with this chatper.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella. Royce needs to die. Poor Sasha, what surgery does she need?
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Damn, Bella is a badass when she needs to be. I like seeing her growing closer to Edward.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love this side Edward is showing Bella. I can hardly wait to read on to find out what Bella is hiding.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
I bet Edward has Bella so confused as to who he is. Looks like she has declard 'war' so to speak.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Edward is changing so quickly. I'm curious as to what the deal is with Mike and Bella. I don't think Bella is Sasha's mom.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2015 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sasha has Edward wrapped around her fingers.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 7
Looks like battles of the wills is on the way.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
Ahh, Bella give him a break, he's trying to do right by you and Sasha.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
He's making progress.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love how Edward is claiming Bella and Sasha as his girls. I'm wondering if Mike is trying to presser Bella into doing something she doesn't want to do.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm guessing Bella is Sasha's BeeBee, Mike is her daddy, and Edward is her Teddy. I'm looking forward to all this information to come out. Bella's new job is gonna be interesting.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'm so hooked.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2015 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Such a great start. I'm looking forward to reading on.
Sherry
Date: 13 Jun 2015 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
i really loved this. i want to know what happened to royce and his father. what about angela???
Date: 09 Jun 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 22
I don't know how much more of this I can handle from that Bitch, Tanya! Man Edward needs to grow a pair and put her out permenantly! Can't he tell how it is suppose to be? He sees it right in his face with Bella and Elizabeth and now Charlie... just wait until Charlie calls her momma!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2015 8:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh I loved it so sweet and heartbreaking too but I loved it all Thank you
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2015 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
This was a really great story. I loved the character development. Your sub plots. You dealt with some very powerful and delicate subjects with great style & grace.
Thank you for sharing.
Date: 04 May 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it. Thanks.
Date: 01 May 2015 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
Another hit! What more is there to say but thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Sweet ending. TY for letting us along for the ride
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they are all getting therapy. Yey for Rose getting a house and a job too. awww for baby news
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow glad that he just killed Phil and not actually raped someone. Angela needs to take a long walk off a very short pier right into shark infested waters.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story! Thank you for sharing.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 22
Again you girls have written a wonderful story! It wasn't all sweetness and light, for sure, but it was a great story and a really good read! Lots of good information about FAS and diabetes so I'm more informed, which surely can't hurt!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad that life is smoothing out for everyone, therapy sure does help. It's great that Bella is pregnant and they will marry, and I'm sure this baby won't be anymore their's than Sasha already is!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 20
Just as I suspected, Edward is no monster, just a dangerous man with a sad past. Bella is smart enough to know he's more good than bad! The real monsters in this are Royce and Angela!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 19
My lord that is so sad, Bella is just crushed that Mike would leave her and Sasha! Edward is going to have his hands full for a while.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 18
Nothing like a diabetic coma to scare hell out of everyone! Edward still hasn't figured it all out but hopefully he will soon!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 17
This is all wonderful for Christmas and all, but he still needs to tell her about his biological father, and why he thinks himself a monster!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 16
The only trouble I can think of that would mess this up would be if Mike were to die and Sasha's birth mother tries to take her.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
Another piece of the Bella puzzle, but Mike isn't spilling it all. That was pretty dicey, with Mike pulling out the bullet and stitching Edwad up.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm having very bad feelings over this thing he's doing out of love for his girls!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now I want to kill Royce and his father, both! That was digusting to hear what those two did to an innocent little girl! I hope Edward does take them out to avenge his Bella! Poor little Sasha, hope she's going to be okay!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 12
He must be so proud of Bella, sticking up for Alice like that! I wonder what will happen to Maria for badmouthing Alice?
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 11
I now wonder what's the deal between Aro and Jane is? It's some coincidence about her being Sasha's doctor! Encouraging that Bella is voluntarily kissing Edward. Now if he can earn her trust, maybe we will hear her story.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
I forgot there for a minute that she is only nineteen, so I guess she's still a kid in some ways. Too bad about the burned shirts and pink tees. I wonder what that kiss meant to her?
Date: 30 Apr 2015 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
So, Sasha has a puppy and Rose Hale is a stripper with a degree in early childhood education. Bella is getting under Edward's skin a little more each day.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
She is seeng another side of him, but he still has lots to learn about her, I'm sure! The insulin injection was kind of sweet, I thought and the decision to get a dog was priceless!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 7
I cannot wait to see how the cooking of the lobster goes! That trip through the grocery aisles was fun, but the fight over coupons was a hoot!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
I'll just bet Edward feels lower than a snake's belly over the way he misjudged Bella! As for her, I'll bet she can't believe how he's caring for her and Sasha!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh Edward, you poor deluded fool! You should think back to what your mother told you, about making assumptions and past deeds coming back to haunt you!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
What the heck is going on between Mike and Bella? The thought occurs to me that Bella is not Sasha's biological mother. There is some connection, but not that one.
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 3
I would bet those drugs are not for Bella's personal use! There is some mystery going on here and I'm interested to find out what!
Date: 30 Apr 2015 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
After reading about the time drawing with Sasha, I think Edward might need to reevaluate that monster stuff! Anyone that can be so sweet with that child is no monster.
Date: 29 Apr 2015 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
While he may not be a monster, Edward seems to be a badass, for sure!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2015 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
I loved it, it was an awesome story I hate to see end & always look forward to updates. The Epi was awesome & some p[arts teary. I loved Sasha's POV & am so glad she found her HEA, just like everyone else.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
I enjoyed this fic so much! I even had to give my 14 year old daughter the pg13 version because she was wondering why in the world I was crying while reading it one day.😊
Date: 28 Apr 2015 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it!
Date: 28 Apr 2015 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Ive thoroughly enjoyed this story from beginning to end. Thank You
Date: 28 Apr 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
Have I told you
how much I love your stories, no. Well now you know.
Date: 28 Apr 2015 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great ending to a great story Thanks so much
Date: 27 Apr 2015 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great story. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
:) loved this story
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2015 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
thank you for a wonderful story!
Date: 27 Apr 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great ending. What a tear jerker! I will look forward to reading your next story.
Date: 24 Apr 2015 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 21
I am so happy so many changes for the good a baby so happy.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 20
Heck yes! Beat his ass!
Date: 21 Apr 2015 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
How could he think she would leave him because of that? She loves him for who he is not what he has done. So much pain between them. I love Mike I am so sad he is gone but he will live on in them.
Date: 21 Apr 2015 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it can't wait for more 😉