Date: 25 Jun 2015 10:59 PM Title: CHAPTER 21 THE WONDER THAT IS BELLA SWAN
It breaks my heart to see Bella struggle so much worrying about the baby. You are spot on with her worries. I love that Logan has embraced it and is looking forward to being a daddy. I can totally see him being like that :)
So glad Bella set Scott straight. Time to man up and get over the women he can't have. Find him a new woman that is right for him and will cherish him.
I was crying for Rogue. It sucks to have her powers. I keep waiting for Hank to come up with something so she can have some type of normal interaction with a boyfriend. If anyone can do it, Hank can.
Oh damn, I forgot about Jasper and Emmett not knowing about Edward and Alice. This could go good or bad. So glad I don't have to wait for an update. I just love seeing the next button :)
Date: 25 Jun 2015 8:48 PM Title: CHAPTER 20 UNFINISHED BUSINESS
Jean with the brotherhood cannot be good. Definitely a big war coming.
You're killing me! First Logsn sniffing her all up to see if she's pregnant and then Hank's wise crack about educational videos. Love it!
Date: 24 Jun 2015 10:51 PM Title: CHAPTER 19 THE WOLVERINE AND HIS BOMBSHELL
What an epic battle. Seeing the Wolverine come out was terrifying and awesome.
I love how you write your battle scenes. They are easy to follow and I can picture them in my mind.
I loved that Logan got his revenge on Edward.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 9:04 PM Title: CHAPTER 16 BEAR NECESSITIES
I bet Jean went to Magneto.
I loved the bit with the bear.
when the soldiers appeared my first thought was WTF is Jean up but even that didn't seem right. Then I remembered Stryker. This next chapter should be interesting.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:49 AM Title: CHAPTER 11 WORLD’S APART
I knew the Volturi would be no match for the X-Men. That was a great battle :)
it was awesome that Bella got to take out Edward and Alice.
Why do I have a feeling we haven't seen the last of Jean.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 10:44 PM Title: CHAPTER 8 THE TRUTH
I teared up a bit for Rosalie.
Edward and Alice are going to suffer in their deaths. I don't think Bella will settle for anything less.
I love Jasper and Emmett and I love that you've got them on Bella's side.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 9:28 PM Title: CHAPTER 6 BELLA’S TERRITORY
Husband gave me some crazy looks when I busted out laughing at Bella getting lost in the moment and not seeing the occupants of the room.
Damn, that was cold what Jean did. Something has definitely snapped in her. I've just been waiting for Professor X to step in on the games she's been playing.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:47 PM Title: CHAPTER 4 TRAINING WOLVERINE’S WAY
It seems jealousy brings out the Pheonix in Jean. It was awesome how all the X-Men put her in her place and reminded her about who they are and what they do.
I'm ready for a Volturi ass kicking :)
Date: 21 Jun 2015 7:10 PM Title: CHAPTER 3 WITHIN THE SHADOWS OF WOLVERINE
Edward is such a douce in this. I can't wait to see him and the Volturi get what's coming to them.
It's nice to see a man standing up for Bella but letting her still have her indepence.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:38 PM Title: CHAPTER 2 GINGER WITH ISSUES
Wow, talk about jealous bitch. I knew that lesson would not end well.
Nice twist there bringing Aro into this and the deal from New Moon. I have to wonder if Aro even knows what he's getting into.
Date: 21 Jun 2015 6:18 PM Title: CHAPTER 1 REVELATIONS
I like the idea of Bella being a mutant. It explains so much about her and how she can block people and vamps from her head.
I wanted to slap Jean when she finally decided to dump Scott for Logan and thought Logan would just jump for joy.
Oh, I have a feeling school is about to get much more interesting.