Date: 12 Oct 2016 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 5
I find the story fascinating. I was just wondering has it been abandoned or is it currently still being worked on? I love the plot and I am fascinated with the characters. Both Edward and Bella are complex and I love the sweet innocence of Bella juxtaposed to the rather compromising position she now finds herself in.
Date: 22 Oct 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh I do hope you finish this story. I love it.
Date: 06 Jun 2015 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
Hi, it's been so long since u updated. Could u please update this. Thanks
Date: 19 Feb 2015 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
wow <3
Date: 15 Feb 2015 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Update please
Date: 14 Jan 2015 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more 😊
Date: 13 Jan 2015 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 5
Poor Edward. He needs love and loyalty. I hope Bella gives him both.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2015 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my....what does that mean? Hope to find out soon!!! Love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jan 2015 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Well well well now we know why Edward is the way he is but we can see he still has a Heart how will Bella bring it out of him
Date: 11 Jan 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5
So she ia already softening him and his mother sees it.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 11 Jan 2015 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 5
more more more please
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 5
More please
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, its good to get more insight into Edward's past.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wonderfully told from Esme's point of view. Not taking sides will not always work in life and Esme knows this well apparently. Edward's actions though seem to tell her all she needs to know. He is protective of this new young woman. I love the family dynamic that you are building here. It is far from cookie - cutter and that makes it fascinatingly. Thanks for all your hard work!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 5
My goodness, Edward has had his share of heartbreak. No wonder he's the way he seems. How much can one man take, before he closes off all emotions? The gestures he gives toward Bella are very telling. Looking forward to more soon, please.
Sherry
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow some back story you've given us.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 5
loved it cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow that was some backstory into Edwards past, no wonder he is how he is, but I´m glad that they do end up loving each other eventually, I hope Bella does not take any crap from Alice nor Rosalie, and if this tells me anything about Esme, she is a very loving and caring mother, can´t wait for another chapter :)
Date: 11 Jan 2015 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 5
i like the history lesson. short and right to the point. just enough for the readers to know the score but not too elaborate to bore to sleep.
....and Protectiveward is back! :D
great chapter.
Date: 11 Jan 2015 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Always happy to see an update. Good to see the background on Edward. Can't wait for more
Date: 11 Jan 2015 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
I love those small gestures that speak volumes. I hope number 6 is not far behind this one.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
He has been through so much pain but he has a heart
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it cant wait for more
Date: 07 Jan 2015 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Update please :)
Date: 05 Jan 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
I hope Bella really gives this relationship a chance.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2015 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4
; ) interesting start
Date: 27 Dec 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4
I'm hoping you continue this story. I see so much potential for a beautiful love story full of angst.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh this is so good. Update soon please.
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh boy.....wonder how this will play out!!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Rosalie is really horrible. Why did she want Bella shot at? Did she want the kids back? I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for writing,
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 10 Dec 2014 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 4
LOVING IT,THANK YOU!
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 4
I hope Esme treats Bella good.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 4
I want more. Who was the shooter? What was his intention? What is Edwards true intention? Hurry back!
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 4
Nice work here! Action, new personal relationships, intrigue.... I'm interested to see how Bella is accepted by Edward's family. (We already know how much she means to her own sisters!). I have a feeling that Edward's children will love her. Thanks for the update!
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
should they tell the parents the truth? can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Date: 10 Dec 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Damn!!! Take that Esme.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wow Go Edward. Sounds like Rose is going to have to answer for even more now. Wowsers
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh boy what Edward did made him look a tiny bit better in everyone's eyes but how will his family take in Bella and the boys and will Bella give her sisters a taste of their own medicin
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to see how that's going to all go over.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
it was a nice ch
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to reading on and seeing what is going on.
Sherry
Date: 10 Dec 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 4
Wonder if she an Edward will have strong words
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward leaves littel room for failure, he's worked everything out to the smallest detail. Didn't see him moving so fast though. Poor Bella she's damned if she does and damned if she doesn't.
Sherry
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ahhh need more
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 4
Rosalie certainly needs an arse kicking. I do hope she gets one. Is Emse going to be a pain? Awesome chapter.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh I wonder if mama Esme is going to be pissed that he got married with no family?
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
I'm intrigued.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 4
Okay, I am officially confused. :)
Oh yeah. that's why I don't read WIPS much. Is Edward the good guy or bad guy. Sigh. Not that it matters. I will still love him anyway.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. I cant wait for Bella to soften him up.
Date: 10 Dec 2014 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
Oh now how is Esme going to react? I'm now going to catch up on the new chapter of dance with the devil! I'm so excited!
Date: 08 Dec 2014 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wow..can't wait to see what hapens next....
Date: 08 Dec 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love the premise of this story and your characters are wonderful. It should be interesting to see Edward as a father and Bella as mother to his children! Also, from the first chapter, Edward told Rosalie and Alice to let his brothers know the truth. Won't that be fascinating! Thank you for the hard work. I look forward to reading more, much, much more!
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh my now what
floored by all that is going on and look forward as to what happens next
thank you
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2014 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
wow poor bella
some much change but she saw a way to protect the ones she loves and did it
a mothers love. edward was right bella will love his kids
wow he is some person. wonder if it will bit him
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
wow blown away
what a twisted web
Date: 07 Dec 2014 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit who shot who. Cant wait for more
Date: 07 Dec 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh no! I hope Charlie didn't try to shoot him with theo in his arms.
Date: 07 Dec 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow that is a shock go in thinking she is just fighting for her two kids and come out with two more and a husband
Date: 06 Dec 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Love your story cant wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
PLEASE LET CHARLIE SHOOT EDWARD IN THE ASS
Date: 06 Dec 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well... That is something. This story is great.
Date: 06 Dec 2014 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Wow Rose and Alice are peices of work Edward shut them down quick.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh shit!!!! Hope he shot our dear old Eddie in the ass!!!! Please update again soon!!!! I SO NEED MORE!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2014 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
I am loving this story. I am ready for the next chapter now. Great style. It reads with an easy flow.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
love this story. pls keep writing it. I love the hard Edward. Will be reading your other storiealso. keep up the good work. I like your writing style, it ids easy to understaqnd and follow. thank you. Pamela Hanley
Date: 06 Dec 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh no big daddy swan is mad
Date: 06 Dec 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 3
I don't know if I like this Edward, there is no Love or Like between those two how will they make it work and what happens when Edward gets tired of Bella will he leave her for wife number 4 and take her kids
Date: 05 Dec 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor B E's gonna have to work hard to gain her love. Glad she wants to raise the kids and not a nanny. While I'm not against help, but you've seen too many kids left for long periods of time with just a nanny.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 3
I can't wait for more of this story. How often do you update?
I really hope no one got hurt with the gun fire. Thanks for writing.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to see who or what got shot
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 05 Dec 2014 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh ur a brat, stopping there!!!! Shame on u!!! Lmao can't wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2014 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my, Charlie didn't shoot Edward did he? Awesome chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2014 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh snap what a way to tell her parents and what shot who update soon
Date: 05 Dec 2014 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 3
This is such a good story, I look forward to the updates to see how it develops. The characters are fab and I cannot wait to see how they develop too.
Date: 05 Dec 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 3
Noooo Charlie wouldn't do that. Not with his grandson near by.
Date: 02 Dec 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
This is crazy. I hope they take time to learn about each other. The children will sense something is off.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can't wait to see more of Jerkward & assward!
Date: 20 Nov 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Wow OK I am adding this story to my favorites. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 2
Doesn't there have to be some sort of a ceremony officiated by someone to complete the marriage and certify it?
Date: 20 Nov 2014 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Please update! ! Love all your stories
Date: 20 Nov 2014 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay, how are they married, without going to a judge or a church. They have to go before a judge for any adoption process.
Date: 20 Nov 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Where It All Began
Great start!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2014 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story already. I hope you continue it and hopefully read the progress of the characters.
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Hilarious. I wish!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2014 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh my.....this ought to be interesting!!!! More soon please!!!! LOVE IT!!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward isn't looking too nice nor good right now. Even if "apparently " part of his plan is to benefit his children. He put Bella in an impossible situation, and yet, she'll make it through.
Date: 18 Nov 2014 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 2
Oh goody good goodness great job
Date: 18 Nov 2014 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 2
OH NO WEDDING OR RINGS LOL AND WHAT ABOUT CONSUMMATING THERE VOWELS ?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
Love it can not wait for more.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow! Poor Bella! Will she ever find love?
Date: 17 Nov 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wonderful! Edward may seem scheming and willfull, but at the heart of it all I do believe he is doing everything for his children - and Bella's by extension. Yes, he is hard and ruthless, no doubt, but in the longrun he is willing to sacrifice his own chance at a happy marriage for his family's welfare. He's just cold about how he achieves his ends. Watching Bella and Edward's relationship develop should be fascinating; also watching his relationship with all 4 children develop is going to be a treat. Bella is warm-hearted, and it should be eye opening to Edward to see her develop a relationship with his 2 children. What interests me most in many ways will be watching Bella's relationship with her sisters and new brothers-in-law develop. I look forward to this story a lot! It has tremendous potential and many facets to enrich it! Thank you for all your hard work!!