[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love your story can't wait for more .going to vote now.
Date: 03 Nov 2014 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
I dont like her dad. She is a smart girl
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
The deal is being made?
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Alice was not to give away that they have been talking to Emmett oops
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yes he wants to have baby's with her
Date: 02 Nov 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 7
Emmett is stressing out and not very nice but he is trying
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett is trying to find her next husband
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 4
He love his sister and just wants to protect her
Date: 02 Nov 2014 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Emmett means what he says wow
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2
She makes a good impression.
Date: 02 Nov 2014 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not a good idea to mess with her
Date: 01 Nov 2014 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
Is Bella going to be made to marry Edward?
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
I am not an Alice fan.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
marry her off to Jane's brother Alec.. I bet.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 5
You know right here she needs to speak calmly and tell him she was done with this. If he is not happy with her then shoot her and be done with it because this is her life now.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 4
what is wrong with Edward?
Date: 31 Oct 2014 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Well that did not go well.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am in. Please update often, please.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella has a horrible father. He needs to go away. Emmett isn't acting like himself. It sounds like there hasn't been happiness in their lives for a long time.
Date: 31 Oct 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
So much drama happening behind the scenes. I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 31 Oct 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh im thinking edwards an undercover fbi or a rival mobster
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2014 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh boy I can't wait to find out what's up with Edward and Em. So there dad is not Charlie? Only ask because Jane called him Roy
Date: 28 Oct 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh my, nasty, gross Roy is her dad! Shit just got real!
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2014 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love it so far can't wait to read more,love Bella when she bad ass!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4
So Edward must be a real bad boy if Emmet doesn't want her around him. Your author note was hilarious at the beginning of chapter one! I love your mafia stories. I'm looking forward to your next update.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
So i wonder how deep is Edward into the mafia? Is he just an errand boy?
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2
Mr. Cullen already turning on the charm.
Date: 28 Oct 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1
This is starting out exciting! I wasn't expecting Bella to be a bad ass!
Date: 28 Oct 2014 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
Im guessing carlisle as bellas dad, maybe aro
Date: 27 Oct 2014 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh i hope edwards not an undercover fed
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh, this is going to be awesome! I can alreasy feel it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2014 9:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is good! Really enjoying what you have so far! Love the complexity of Bella having more emotion over shooting her childhood best friend than by killing her cheating good for nothing spouse!