Date: 15 Nov 2014 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
something small and less complicated.. :-)
Date: 15 Nov 2014 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Glad she is enjoying maui
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2014 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
:)
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Thanks for the reviews honey xx
Date: 14 Nov 2014 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
He'll probably buy her a house there.
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Thanks for the reviews honey xx
That would be nice x x
Date: 14 Nov 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 22
Edward really does want to be with her.
Date: 14 Nov 2014 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
She is liking who he is but she just can't trust him
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Date: 14 Nov 2014 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 23
=)
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Date: 14 Nov 2014 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oooo wonder if emmette will kill his dad. If their dad is royce then I am guessing royce raped emmettes wife and caused this change in loyalty.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the reviews honey xx
Psst! Remember that game where someone was trying to find something you had and you would shout hot or cold ... Well your hot ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2014 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 21
Edward better watch out she is a smart one
Date: 13 Nov 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
It is what it is.
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Date: 13 Nov 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 22
I hope you feel better soon. Edward is trying
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter!
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Thanks for the reviews honey xx
Date: 13 Nov 2014 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 22
Can't blame her for being pissed at everyone hiding crap from her.
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Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love that Edward has a true honor code. Emmett may be Bella's brother but he won't endanger someone who genuinely is watching out for his own. Hawaii and time could be good for these two! Loved it!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love it! In a weird way I almost feel sorry for Garrett! So,etching tells me Edward will find a personal shopper rather than let Bella shop on her own. But a micro?! Too, too funny! Wonderful work!
Date: 13 Nov 2014 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loving the story. Can't wait for what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2014 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 21
Love it, PRICELESS. B-1, E-0, LOL
Date: 13 Nov 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
I love bella, shes kick ass
Date: 13 Nov 2014 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 21
I knew it.. Men picking up clothes for a woman in the tropics.. Bikinis..
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2014 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Yeah......she won alright! BUT.......
Date: 12 Nov 2014 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
This just makes me laugh! Bella is just a little hell raiser!
Date: 12 Nov 2014 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Muhahaha. Get 'em Bella
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 20
Hope she keeps her snarkyness and no one beats it out of her or anything.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
It looks like they are going to get along just fine!
Date: 11 Nov 2014 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
I hope he is ready for her fire ;)
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
Sigh. She gives in too easy but ah well. at least they can say the marriage was consumated even if she doesn't remember the ceremony. Still think Jasper needs to be taken down a few rungs as well.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
noooooo Don't give in so easy B. He's gonna try and knock you up to force you to stay before you are ready.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 17
E needs to be knocked down a few pegs on the ego ladder.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
They all need to watch their balls, esp Jasper.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 15
oooh Bella is so going to kick some ass after they drugged her.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Ok so now I'm back to not liking Em at all. Too many people hiding shit from her. Probably going to plan the whole wedding and just drag her to it kickin and screaming.
Date: 11 Nov 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Sigh. Bella needs to think a little first. Wait till bro comes out and confront him then. Sigh. Daddy aint gonna like this.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
hmmm sucks that everyone is hiding crap from her. Surprised she doesn't just run or something
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ugh her father is a real piece of work.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
ugh who is her sperm donor trying to sell her too now?
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'd want to know more as well.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Can't blame B for being jaded.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
Uh oh. They gonna try to marry B off to the Witch's brother? ewww.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 6
hmmm not sure if Em's convo is about B or Rose and him. hmmm
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Time for Daddy to lose a hand or something. And Jae needs a muzzle.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm feel a little better about Em but only a smidge.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hmmm does B have anyone in her life that gives a crap? Wonder if Jasper ratted her out to Em.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 2
Ah Sleezy dad and Evil Stepmother. Lovely life B has.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sounds like Daddy needs put in his place as well.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
well what a change we have here.. They did her a favor, marriage to Aro?? Yuk
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think he may have trouble doing that right now..
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well B is not a little girl she is a mafia princess (ha on that) and she can kill just as easy as those men do.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
yep like I told someone recently.. Down right now but when I get up you better run like hell.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
poor B they are selling her off like cattle.
Date: 10 Nov 2014 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
You are such a tease!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Things are going great for them :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Nov 2014 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
"Give me a chance to prove I'm nothing like him … I promise I'll never stray. If you accept me as your husband, there will only ever be you."...How could a girl resist him when he says this? The hot sex is icing on the cake!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
WOW! I thought this was exciting before, this just jumped to hot, steamy, & exhilarating!
Date: 09 Nov 2014 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was some kind of for play wow.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Just found this story via FACEBOOK. Awesome, how many chapters will there be?
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, he recovered pretty quckly from the ball crush!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
"I didn't want that night to end. I planned on taking you home and making love to you in my bed." Swoon!
He is right-she only thinks Edward is her enemy because her father told her so. I think her real enemy is her FATHER! He is the one marrying her off to horrible men, all for his own agenda. I don't see any fatherly affection there.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hope Bella gets some type of vengeance. On Emmett for being a douch brother and going behind her back, he should always have her best interest and keep her informed not this shit about women not knowing anything. On Jasper for drugging her she should shot him a couple of times that was wrong and on Edward for marrying her with out consent. They might be attracted to one another and eventually she might love him but it's time they see she's not some little girl to be walked on. And her dad just needs to be killed along with Jane. If she could kill her bff someone she love then she can kill her dad someone she despises. Please update more soon.
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cat & mouse games are my absolute favorite!
Date: 08 Nov 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wherever he has taken her must be somewhere she can't really escape easily bc he surely wouldn't untie her otherwise. Maybe it's a private island?
Date: 08 Nov 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 17
She is very stuborn
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 16
At least she was attracted to Edward before all this happened.
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you very much for all your reviews. I really appreicate them <3
Yes! LOL She was attracted to him before x x
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 15
Well, isn't Edwrd better than Aro?
Date: 07 Nov 2014 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 16
Shock she is going to bet someone's ass
Date: 07 Nov 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
wonder how that will go :)
Date: 07 Nov 2014 11:15 AM Title: Chapter 15
I was thinking she was about to be drugged when she took the second drink. Crap! It looks like Bella is about to be married again.
Date: 07 Nov 2014 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
are they going to keep her??
[Report This]Date: 07 Nov 2014 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 15
Marrying Edward is definitely the better option
Date: 06 Nov 2014 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wonderful piece of work. I love how passionate Bella is here and how impassionate her father and others expect her to be and remain. I'd be irritated too if I were put in the same category as a poker chip! I.e. Let's use her life to bargain with! That should do it! Expecting her to go along again is a lot I think;yet I know things work this way. I look forward to more! Thank you,
Date: 06 Nov 2014 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 14
Are they arranging a marriage between Bella and Edard?
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2014 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett wasn't a very good brother there
Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
Bella is such a hell raiser! All I can do is chuckle at her. That poor guard is going to be hurting later I bet!
Date: 06 Nov 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
I dont think Edward like Emmett hurting Bella. I want more please ;)
Date: 06 Nov 2014 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
She is a fisty little thing ;)
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2014 9:17 AM Title: Chapter 12
:) congratulations on your nominations
Date: 05 Nov 2014 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is going to try to get to the bottom of things