Date: 25 Nov 2014 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 37
hmmm . . . wonder if he is still working with em
Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 37
I love this story. I hate stories where I always know the outcome and the same 4 couples are the good guys.. Mix it up make it interesting.. Yippie a story I can not guess it out.
thank you
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 37
I hope Jasper hasn't betrayed them
Date: 25 Nov 2014 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ouch! We can only hope that Jasper is pulling a double cross on Bella's father while working with Emmett. (Fingers crossed!). Amazing story and each update is like a marvelous gift! I adore it!
Date: 25 Nov 2014 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
It's almost painful reading this Bella's thoughts & actions::)) For someone who grew up around her sperm donor, she doesn't have a clue.
[Report This]Date: 25 Nov 2014 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
"What was he doing, looking for bombs … Tampering? Didn't they think they were going a little overboard?" Bella's a little on the naïve side.
Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 36
Maybe now she will have an ally.
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Date: 24 Nov 2014 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wonder what e is gonna do when he finds out barbie restitched her.
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Date: 24 Nov 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 36
good
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[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2014 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
:):)
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Date: 24 Nov 2014 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 36
Barbie is a good guy and likes Bella
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Date: 24 Nov 2014 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
Well, she is not giving in.
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Date: 24 Nov 2014 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 35
; )
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Thank you very much for all your reviews. I really apprecaite them. I love hearing your thoughts on each chapter x x
Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
Bella has some crap to make up for with Barbie. An extra nice Christmas bonus from the bosses wife might be in order!
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Date: 23 Nov 2014 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 35
I feel sorry for Barbie poor guy lol. I feel sorry for you to sick husband I know it is never good at my house when my hubby is sick lol.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm really surprised he didn't tie her to the bed. She makes him so crazy it is funny!
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 34
Seeing him get this upset I know is for her own good but part of me really wants her to push him to see what he would do.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 35
awww poor barbie.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 34
Well would he choke her into submission?
Date: 23 Nov 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 34
Can't blame her for trying.
Date: 23 Nov 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 34
Oh edward bella will try again. Shes not gonna do what you tell her to do unless she agrees with it
Date: 23 Nov 2014 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 34
Edward knows her better than she thought lol
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 34
Thank you for all the updates today!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love Bella's sassy comeback! " Do you really want me to answer that?" Love the story! Thanks so much!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
Good story, keep on writing
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 33
Bad move on her part!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Poor Barbie. Can't blame B for wanting to end it.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 33
Edward is going to be pissed
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 32
oh wow. Hope Em is okand just hiding somewhere.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 31
at least she remembered who the guy was
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 30
Like E said, who else except Charlie, except maybe Aro
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh Bella this is such a bad decision!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2014 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 33
Edward is going to be angry
Date: 22 Nov 2014 12:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
Whoa. Love that plot.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 32
And now Bella will be ready to kill Royce too, but will Edward let her?
Date: 22 Nov 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 32
Her father is Royce what a sick bastard but where is Emmett and Rose. Bella is freaking out
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 31
Finally all it took was a bullet wound or her to become a bit needy. :)
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 30
Thanks for this quick update!
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 31
Aro wants her well he cant have her.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 30
That is a hard pill to swallow knowing your dad wants you dead or at least want you to think he does.
Date: 22 Nov 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
He is so worried about her and she is not making it easy for him to take care of her. How can her dad want her dead
Date: 22 Nov 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 29
she knows better..
Date: 22 Nov 2014 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 29
Ouch, poor bella
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 29
She is always so difficult. I love it that she is so worried about him.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
It looks as if daddy does want her killed!
Date: 21 Nov 2014 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 29
She needs to quit being so fucking stupid and grow the hell up.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh Bella...you are being an idiot
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 28
Nicely handled! And so-o-o...Edward! We're worried about her so let's yell at her for half the trip. It's something to do. I love it! Being shot, even in the arm, ought to bring Bella down to Earth a bit. Her father has nothing to lose now! Wonderful! Thanks for the update and the hard work. I'll keep your husband in my thoughts and prayers. Hopefully, all will be well now....or at least slow to a dull roar! Take care of yourself as well!!
Joanie
Date: 21 Nov 2014 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
I hope your husband is home safe and sound from his op. Bella dont understand someone looking out for her.
Date: 21 Nov 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 28
Cliffhangers!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2014 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thank you for updating. I hope your hubby is okay
Date: 21 Nov 2014 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ack she's been shot. She is a bit on the impulsive side
Date: 19 Nov 2014 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
I FREAKING LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE PLZ!! LOVE YA
Date: 18 Nov 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 27
This is so scary!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh wow. Bella is gonna have a breakdown once they are in the air I bet
Date: 18 Nov 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
Congratulations! This chapter - another winner, by the way! You really know how to keep the heat on! Your cliffhangers are always excellent! Looking forward to more!
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2014 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 27
My oh my....more soon please!!! LOVE IT!!!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 27
She isn't ready to lose Edward! =D
Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 27
Ooooooo cliffy..... you know me,I am greedy so with that said, I want more :)
Date: 18 Nov 2014 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 27
my how her feeling have changed and who is after them
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH,THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON PLZ!
Date: 16 Nov 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 26
I have a very giddy feeling that when things calm down Edward and Bella will need to take care of some lemony aggression. ;)
Date: 16 Nov 2014 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 26
Edward must know who he is???
Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 26
Excellent! I keep putting myself in Bella's position, and I know the uncertainty would scare me to death! I must say, I'm looking forward to finding out who the guy Bella recognized works for. So many pissed off at them, so little time! Thanks for another great update. Good luck with your writing tomorrow!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oooooooooo love it
Date: 15 Nov 2014 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 26
who is or was the man?
Date: 15 Nov 2014 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor room service kid.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 25
E's got a temper
Date: 15 Nov 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Uh oh sucks that someone found where she is
Date: 15 Nov 2014 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 25
Marvelous cliffhanger!! It's interesting how much more she trusts Edward than her own father. Fitting, perhaps. Wonderful work! Loving the story a lot. Thank you so much for all your work. I hope you're feeling better soon! I hate colds that keep running on and on! Been there, done that.....several times!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Have they found them I have to know lol. Who is them cant wait to find out
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can't get enough of the heat between these two.
Date: 15 Nov 2014 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 24
It makes me so happy that she is trusting him so much already. I hope you feel better very soon!
Date: 15 Nov 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
She knows the best place to be is in Edward arms :)